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12-29-2009, 04:00 AM
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#426 (permalink)
| Scheming Marauder Ghost
Join Date: Jul 2003
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| Serial Prankster • Troloholic • Like a BAWS • Brae the Lionheart & Lion Cub • AnDee & Melsse Quote:
Nicola looked like she had been informed that the menu for the night included a bunch of Mimbulus Mimbletonia.
!! HAHAHA! Quote:
Oh good, Sirius thought cheerfully. She lost her cool, and maybe now she will leave me in peace.
Oh God, Sirius! Quote:
She turned on her heels and stormed out of the room - and, to his immense relief, out of the house, too - her eyes ablaze with fury, her breathing quick and angry.
Awwwww, I kinda feel bad for Nicola. =/ He should've just taken her to the ball, dropped her off, and returned to his house. Though I doubt that would've been possible.
But C'MONNNN!!! Let's get to Andra hosting the ball!!! I'm dying of anticipation here! And I wanna see my precious Lucy, too…
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12-29-2009, 05:27 AM
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#427 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by DeeLeeLuffee !! HAHAHA! Does this ...
... mean that you enjoyed the postie?
=DD Quote:
Awwwww, I kinda feel bad for Nicola. =/ He should've just taken her to the ball, dropped her off, and returned to his house. Though I doubt that would've been possible. She isn't the nicest person in the world. Certainly not one of those characters that I can fall in love with. =/ Quote:
But C'MONNNN!!! Let's get to Andra hosting the ball!!! I'm dying of anticipation here! And I wanna see my precious Lucy, too… Lucius, who? |
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12-29-2009, 05:52 AM
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#428 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Nicola: HOW DARE YOU CALL ME A ... A ... BUG?
oh i dare call you a bug... but then Sirius isnt a great guy too is he? a player... anyways we all like you Sirius...you are better then Nic anyday...short skirts...ew...
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12-29-2009, 09:01 AM
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#429 (permalink)
| Scheming Marauder Ghost
Join Date: Jul 2003
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| Serial Prankster • Troloholic • Like a BAWS • Brae the Lionheart & Lion Cub • AnDee & Melsse Quote:
Does this ...
... mean that you enjoyed the postie?
=DD
When do I ever not enjoy one of your updates, Maxers? Okay, maybe when you neglect Lucy and Draco... Quote:
She isn't the nicest person in the world. Certainly not one of those characters that I can fall in love with. =/
I understand. Will we be seeing a lot of her often, though? I can see her like that character that's sneaking around causing trouble for the others... Quote:
Lucius, who? Don't do that to me, Maxerssss! D:
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12-29-2009, 10:13 AM
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#430 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by harita oh i dare call you a bug... but then Sirius isnt a great guy too is he? a player... anyways we all like you Sirius...you are better then Nic anyday...short skirts...ew... LOL.
But heyyy! Sirius is LOVE. <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by Gryffindoll Okay, maybe when you neglect Lucy and Draco... -poketh- Quote:
I understand. Will we be seeing a lot of her often, though? I can see her like that character that's sneaking around causing trouble for the others... She is ... kinda important to the story. Yeah, she makes for some *interesting* bits. Maybe not in the way you think, though.
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12-29-2009, 10:20 AM
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#431 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote:
The rather terrible cold would give her a ... well, a rather terrible cold.
Nice play of words! Quote:
“That’s the Blacks’ Annual Ball,” Sirius pointed out, cheerfully.
Hehhhhee. Quote:
She tore herself away from her thoughts, and realized Sirius was speaking. “Of course we can miss it,” he was saying, rather impatiently. “There’s nothing special about that ball, Nic. So why don’t you just stay over for the night, and we can do something fun like cook –”
COOK???!! LMAO! It's so clear he wants to drive her off!
But I'm interested in this Nicola nowww!!
Great post!!! PAMS!
Love,
~~Jay~~
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12-29-2009, 10:20 AM
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#432 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Thanks a bunch, JayMay.
... and YUS! Nicola is quite ... interesting. |
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12-29-2009, 10:25 AM
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#433 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Ooohzz ... I WANT MORE!!!!!!!
When will you update?
Seriously though ........ I miss Jenna now!
Love,
~~Jay~~
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12-29-2009, 10:26 AM
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#434 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Jenna = <3. I know I wrote her myself, but I can't help liking her.
=pp
Will update soon! |
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12-29-2009, 10:35 AM
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#435 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
“Good evening, Mrs. Malfoy.”
Mafilda Malfoy took her time to look up and see who had greeted her - she was, after all, a pretty important person, at least as far as her own line of thought was concerned, and others could wait. The old lady smoothed out a few creases in her dress, arranged her expressions, and then finally glanced up.
- and, of course, an evil sort of smile crossed her face, at once, as she saw [what she thought was] the rather powdered, fake-happy face of Andraviona Castle.
“The new hostess, aren’t you, Andra?” she asked sweetly. She would have her fun, with this. Cats always do when they know they have cornered the mouse. Not that Andra wouldn't have thrown ladylike-ness to the winds, and punched you smack in the face, if you had told her she was the mouse in this scene.
“Yes,” Andra replied briefly. She kept her answer short because she had decided, quite a while ago, not to try and start a conversation with – to use Varius’s words – the old hag, this night. Her object of interest was her son, and it was whom she now addressed. “Hey, Lucius. How are you?”
Lucius turned to give her a warm smile, glad that he was no longer alone with his mother - Mafilda really did come up with the most ridiculous ideas, when they were alone. “Charming,” he replied. “Let me congratulate you on having the honour of hosting this ball, Andra." Formal language and stuff - he was sure it was a requirement, on occasions like these. "You must be excited.”
“You’re wearing black, like Bellatrix,” Mafilda cut through, before Andra could so much as open her mouth to respond, and it was clear that she was not too happy at the warmth in Lucius's tones - not that that meant anything. “Did you copy her style?’
Andra raised an eyebrow. For someone like her, to be called a copy cat was a pretty big offence on the part of the person speaking to her – especially when it was not true; and she could not take it lightly. “I see you’re wearing purple, like mum," she said coolly. "Did you copy her?”
“My, my, what an unbalanced person you are, Andra,” Mafilda said sweetly. “... and I thought these Castle hostesses, they were known for being polite. Nice girls, or something like that.” I’ve ruined this. There was a rather sinking feeling in the pit of her stomach, but Andra managed to hold her head up high. “We do not tolerate impoliteness in our balls, Mafilda,” she said haughtily. “Lucius – would you like a walk?” – anything to get away from the old hag.
“Definitely –” Lucius began - he clearly wanted to get away from his mother, too - but Mafilda cut through again.
“How impolite, Lucius!” she chided softly, her eyes aglow in their usual, evil way. “You have not yet greeted half the people you are friends with, and you are going for a walk with the hostess? So what if she does not know that, for the moment, her duties involve greeting the people, and not taking walks with gentlemen? You, at least, should know your manners.”
Andra stormed off, one hand clenched around her wand. Stormed off in a way that could have matched the fire in a certain Nicola Miller's exit, not too long ago. |
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12-29-2009, 11:22 AM
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#436 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
tehe. xDD
Lucius & Anderzz!! <3
Ugh. How I hate that maniac; Mathilda Malfoy.
- She gets in everybody's way.
Oh but how I loved when Andra and Mathilda had that "battle" of sort about the clothes they were wearing.
Amazing chapters as always Maxerzz!
<333
Jess(:
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12-29-2009, 11:30 AM
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#437 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron tOh but how I loved when Andra and Mathilda had that "battle" of sort about the clothes they were wearing. Mafilda: She may have won the battle, but the war's not over yet! Quote:
Amazing chapters as always Maxerzz!
Thank you. <3 |
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12-29-2009, 02:02 PM
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#438 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009
Posts: 277
| loved the update : ) i also love your pic, Haley is blonde now
PAMS Shell |
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12-29-2009, 05:54 PM
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#439 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
:O!
Now now.. Your messing up Sirius's other date silly girl! Go back to France |
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12-29-2009, 06:02 PM
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#440 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by norenchen loved the update : ) i also love your pic, Haley is blonde now
PAMS Shell Thank youuu.
... and oooh, Hayley changes her hair a lot! I love it! Red looks the best on her, though. Only my opinion, of course. Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy :O!
Now now.. Your messing up Sirius's other date silly girl! Go back to France Nicola: MAKE ME. *glares*
Ahh, she's one touchy girl. =DD |
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12-29-2009, 06:13 PM
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#441 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
Oh My God! tha was awesome post Maxie...Mafilda...you are such a nutter woman...Mr.Donkey can you please command your donkey heard after this old hag and run her down the Castle's castle?
waiting for more...honestly Maxie...its fun reading your posts...i love the way you detail the emotions in your characters face and eyes... Quote:
“How impolite, Lucius!” she chided softly, her eyes aglow in their usual, evil way.
that was pure evil... ... Quote:
She would have her fun, with this. Cats always do when they know they have cornered the mouse. Not that Andra wouldn't have thrown ladylike-ness to the winds, and punched you smack in the face, if you had told her she was the mouse in this scene.
i liked this too...
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12-29-2009, 06:16 PM
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#442 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie [color=#ff0033][b][font=microsoft sans serif] Nicola: MAKE ME. *glares* OH! /Pulls up her sleeves and get's in a fighting stance
Can't wait for more, awesome job
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12-29-2009, 06:22 PM
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#443 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Originally Posted by Harita Oh My God! tha was awesome post Thankoooo. <3 Quote:
Maxie...Mafilda...you are such a nutter woman...Mr.Donkey can you please command your donkey heard after this old hag and run her down the Castle's castle?
Mr. Donkey: Aye, aye, Harita! *calls herd* Quote:
waiting for more...honestly Maxie...its fun reading your posts...i love the way you detail the emotions in your characters face and eyes...
I love having you here. <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy OH! /Pulls up her sleeves and get's in a fighting stance Nicola: SIRIUS! COME HELP ME! *runs away* |
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12-29-2009, 06:23 PM
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#444 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie ... and oooh, Hayley changes her hair a lot! I love it! Red looks the best on her, though. Only my opinion, of course. I had to look twice at her when the came on stage. She looks lovely blonde but i agree that red is the nicest |
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12-29-2009, 06:27 PM
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#445 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Originally Posted by norenchen I had to look twice at her when the came on stage. She looks lovely blonde but i agree that red is the nicest I read one of her interviews the other day, and question number one they asked her was, "What colour is your hair, today?"
I should update. |
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12-29-2009, 06:45 PM
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#446 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Thankoooo. <3 Mr. Donkey: Aye, aye, Harita! *calls herd* I love having you here. <3 Harita: thank you so much Mr. Donkey! thank you so much...i hope your donkeys have carried her away...in an Umbridge mannner... ...
God! i thought i would never sympathise with Lucius but i really am feeling sympathy for that guy for having such a mother like Mafilda... ...go Lucius go! you are free...like Dobbieee...you are free from the clucthces of your mother...Mr.Donkey has helped you here...go for a walk with Andra... |
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12-29-2009, 06:54 PM
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#447 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote:
Originally Posted by harita Harita: thank you so much Mr. Donkey! thank you so much...i hope your donkeys have carried her away...in an Umbridge mannner... ... Mr. Donkey: They carried her away, Mr. Donkey style.
xDD Quote:
God! i thought i would never sympathise with Lucius but i really am feeling sympathy for that guy for having such a mother like Mafilda... ...go Lucius go! you are free...like Dobbieee...you are free from the clucthces of your mother...Mr.Donkey has helped you here...go for a walk with Andra... LOL! That was awesome, Harita. Lucius thanks you. Isn't it ironic that Dobby was freed from LUCIUS?
=DD |
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12-29-2009, 06:55 PM
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#448 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Yes you should update!
Even though I still have to read the last post.
Love,
~~Jay~~
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12-29-2009, 06:56 PM
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#449 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] *poketh the Jay*
I think I will, in fact. =DD |
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12-29-2009, 06:57 PM
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#450 (permalink)
| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3
You know I can't waiiit!!!!!!!!!
Love,
~~Jay~~
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