This idea popped into my head early today, and I just couldnt take writing it here. This is my first story about Draco Malfoy, and as a matter of fact, my first charecter story ever! I may change events from the book, but nonetheless it will be practicly the same. Please tell me what you think!



I helped Potter.... Draco though, as he and Snape ran, Snapes shout of
'Avada Kedavra' ringing in his ears..... he knew, for some reason, that showing Dumbledore the dark mark would save Potter.. he had shielded Potter as the Death Eaters descended, a silent Disillusionment Charm, which could have broke...

"SNAPE!!! SNAPE!!! YOU TRAITOR!! YOU COWARD!!" Screamed the voice of Harry Potter....

"Run, Draco... run....." Draco shook his arm away. He began running, seeing Hagrids house burn, regret falling through his stomach.... he realized what he had become....He hid behind a bush, his wand in his hand.

I want the Dark Lord dead as much as Potter does.... He thought. The truth had just ran through his mind. Potter can only destroy Voldemort.... he will not allow Snape to get in Potters way of killing Voldemort. Then he saw Harry on the ground. Harry saw Draco, and stared.

"What, Potter, what? Crucio!" Snape said.

"NO! HE MUST BE ALIVE TO DESTROY VOLDEMORT! Sectumsempra!" Draco roared. Snapes wand gave out a feeble spark and broke in half. Snape screamed, running at Draco, his fist winded for a punch-

"Stupefy!" Harry yelled. Snape tried to grab Draco, but he was able to slip out of his grip, and Snape apparated without Draco.

"Malfoy- what... who...?" Harry said. Malfoy got up and helped Harry to his feet.

"I want the Dark Lord dead about as much as you do, Potter. You can only destroy him. This only means I have respect for you, Potter, not that we're friends." Then Draco apparated to the only place he thought of-

The Ministrys Hidden Room.

Tell me what you think!
Jeff

Chapter Two
Chapter Two part
Chapter Three
Chapter Three part two
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Five part two
Chapter Six
Chapter Six part two
Chapter Seven
Final Chapter

OMG! Wow! Draco helped Harry! Well, sort of. I guess they helped each other! I'm glad Draco's not all bad. Shows he's got a bit of good in him. I'm glad Draco respects Harry. The Ministry's Hidden Room. Hmmm... Interesting! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Thanks hermionesclone!

Chapter 2- The Hidden Room.

Draco landed and stumbled in a room so similar to the Room Of Hidden things, but instead of a huge cabinet and mountains of quills, parchements and discarded tables and chairs, it was a maze of compressed garbage. It smelled better than the Room Of Hidden Things in Hogwarts.
"HEY! What are you doing here!!" Yelled a voice. It was a Death Eater.
"Stupefy!" Draco yelled, backing away. The Death Eater waved his wand sideways, where the spell was blocked in a misty smoke.
"Avada Kedavra!" Draco backed away, the spell so near-
Then what appeared to be an old coach launched in front of him, bursting into flames then flying back to where ever it came.....
Then a comet of white smoke landed in front of him-
"Get back, Draco!" Yelled the voice of Mad Eye Moody.
"YOU SCUM!" Moody yelled at the Death Eater. Moody sent a hot air charm at the Death Eater, his hood blowing off, Draco recognizing him as Dolohov. Then Dolohov apparated.
"Malfoy, come with me." Moody grabbed Dracos hand, and then apparated. They were in the Room of Hidden Things.
"Draco, we have put protection up in here. Thet little place there," He pointed to an empty portrait.
"Slide that to get to The hogs Head. Hes willing to feed you food for protection on his store. Stay there, there a room for you. Off you go." And Draco went to the Hogs Head, to what would be a hectic year.

Ooh! Intense! Silly Dolohov! Never liked him! No offense if you do. I'm glad Draco has got protection! He would need it! And Moody came to help him! That is so nice! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Ok, so I decided to make 2 posts a day- 1 for Draco, 2 maybe if I'm bored, And 1 for The Death Eaters going on about Draco. Heres the first Death Eater one!


"Narcissa, if your son is dead, it is not my fault." Voldemort said, his eyes glinting behind the hood.
"I will spare you though."
Narcissa bowed in front of Voldemort.
"My Lord- Thank you, thank you, you are the best-"
"Enough, Cissa. Now Severus, You say he helped Potter?"
"Yes, sir. I was at the time bounding Potter in ropes, trying to be careful so you can inflict much pain upon him."
"Narcissa, you son, a Slytherin, saving the filth of Gryfindor?" Voldemort let out a slow, cold, tsk, tsk.
"Narcissa, since he even attempted I will keep him alive. Severus informs me that he was just starting the incantation before Potter disarmed him, not beleiving a word of Draco trying to help."

After the meeting, Narcissa cornered Snape.
"You did not break the Vow. But that story made no sens-"
"The Dark Lord beleives it does. We sent a Death Eater to track him."

I know its short, but I couldnt really think of anything else to write :b

this is really good!! I am eagerly wanting to know what will happen next.

Here it is! The third chapter..... Tada!

Draco woke up, the bright sun showing through the curtains. His dark mark burned for a second. He then remebered that Moody, Lupin and Shacelbolt were gonna attempt to do a ritual to get rid of his mark. Then his brain hurt for a second, and then Voldemort was in his mind.....
"You shouldnt have ran, Draco...." Said the high, cold voice. Then a vision passed through his head. Voldemorts wand was on Dracos forearm, pain visible in Dracos eyes.
"Morsmordre!" Voldemort cried, and Draco howled out in pain, and the point were Voldemorts wand was at his skin, black lines began to spread, inkily, on his arm..... then there was a skull.... and a snake..... Voldemort let go and walked off, and Draco fell..... the pain was to much......
"Occlumens! Occlumens!" Said a voice. Draco woke from his vision. Lupin was right in front of him his wand at Dracos head.
"Sorry, sir." Draco said.
"It wasnt your fault, Draco. He has full access to your mind when you have the Dark Mark. This shouldnt hurt." Lupin said. Shackelbolt, Moody and Lupin pointed there wands at Dracos Dark Mark, and muttered an odd incantation. The mark started changing colors rapidly. Moody took out a phial of some green liquid and dapped some on the mark.
"Lacarnum Inflamarae!" Yelled Moody. Draco expected unreal pain, but as the green liquid and the mark caught fire, he felt nothing. Then the fire dissapeared, and there was no mark.
"There you go, laddy." Moody, Lupin and Shackelbolt left. Draco got up to find a plate of bacon and waffles, with a cup of Relax-Drink. Draco, his stomach hurting slightly, laid back down and fell asleep, with a dream of black apparating smoke, and green flashes of light.

TBC!

This chapter just explained his losing of the dark mark and Voldemorts warning. I may post a second Draco chapter today, youl see.

OMG! Snape told Voldemort! There's soemthing wrong with that guy. Ugh! Yay! Draco lost the Dark Mark! So happy! I can't believe Voldemort got into Draco's head, though. That's just so creepy! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Ooh La La!
I am loving this story! Very good, and I'm feeling sorry for Draco!
Good that he lost the Dark Mark, though.
Intently waiting for more, but no pressure!
Post more when you can
xx

new readerr!
I love this story!
It's really addicting!
*suscribes to thread*
PAMS!!! please
Jess

Draco looked around.... it was obvious no one was there. Maybe. The whole neiborhood gave him a feeling he was....watched. He looked up at Apartment 13. He thought, in one window, he saw a face. Then a comet of black smoke landed.....
"Crucio!" Fenrir Greyback shouted. Draco whipped out his wand.
"Protego!" The spell rebounded off the sheild and hit a wall on the building.
"You are weak..... you think..... no, you know,..... the Dark Lord will destroy you....." Greyback waved his wand, and purple fire spurted at Draco. Draco let out a silent Protego, which power and swiftness sent Greyback flying. Greyback hit the ground. Greyback got up and ran, teeth bared-
"Sectumsempra!!" Draco called out despratley.
"AHH!" Greyback screamed, as scarlet traced the black robe. Draco thought hard on the only place he had..... The Hogs Head. He didnt close his eyes, so he saw scarlet smoke that exploded around, regular apparating smoke. He stumbled in his room. Draco held on to a deep scratch on his arm. He looked around the room.
"Accio Dittany!". Draco poured 3 drops, and greenish smoke went into the air, and a fresh strech of skin was there.

Short chapter, I know.... I'll make up for it

Great Chapter! =DD
So is this when Draco is awake or in his dreams?
PAMS!!
Jess

Wow! Intense! I can't believe Greyback! Glad Draco got away. Hope he's ok! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

This is the Epic chapter..... I tell ze truth!

Draco walked to a blank wall in the Hogs Head.
"Reveelis Dementoria!" He said, putting his hand on the wall. Where Dracos hand touched the wall, small carvings appeared. Then they were a door. Draco walked in. He sat down and read the Daily Prophet.

SNAPE NEW HEADMASTER OF HOGWARTS
by Rita Skeeter

Draco couldnt read. He then heard footsteps.
"I have evidence that Malfoy lives here, in this room." Said the voice of Severus Snape.
"What room?" Said Aberforth.
"Reveal Your Secrets!" Snape called out. Nothing. "Bombarda Maxima!" Nothing but a small thump.
"Fine. I will leave. But I will conduct searches." Small footsteps and the soft thump of a door closing meant Snape left. Then the portrait in the wall opened.
"Hello Draco!" Said the voice of Luna Lovegood.
"How- what?- You-"
"The Room Of Requirement. I was practicing a spell and the portrait moved open."
"The Hogwarts express got here a couple hours ago....."
Draco looked at The Clock. He saw several hours had passed since Snape came. It was, in fact, the next morning.
"Bye bye, Draco.... lessons starting....." She climbed in the portrait.
"Bye...." Said Draco awkrawrdly.
Luna is weird.... Said on side of his mind.
But she looks good, if you ask me..... Said the other side of his mind.
Point made.

Silly Snape! Got made Headmaster as well! Ugh! I'm glad you can't find out if anyone's living in that room by using a spell! Glad he went! I wonder what his reasons for believing Draco is living there are? Hm... *gasps* Does Draco like Luna? Woah! Talk about a blonde couple - not that blonde's are dumb! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

Ok, so I figured I'd do a whole Luna/Draco relashionship.... I dont know why, but I just see them together.... hmmm......

"Draco, are you sure that Harry Potter will come back?" Luna said dreamily.
"Of course.... I mean, he wants to kill Voldemort." Luna smirked slightly.
"Well... The Dark Lord has an army of hundreds..... but Harry does have us...."
"All of us."
Draco looked at Luna, and Luna looked at Draco, and next thing Draco knew, both of them were kissing, the most joyous moment of Draco Malfoys life-
The door of the Room of Requirement opened.
"Oh.... uh..... sorry, Draco, Luna...." Said Neville. He had his arm around Susan Bones. Draco and Luna nearly flew apart.
"Uh.... Hey, Neville.... we were...."
"Oh, its ok. This is a spot for most couples, especially for me and my little Susey!"
"Oh... Nev-Nev..." Said Susan, giggling.
"Uh... Draco.... would you like to look around?" Luna asked.
"Of course! I mean, uh.... yeah, sure, you know me, likin' to look around......" Draco said rather loudly. Luna and Draco got up off the bench and looked around.
"Hey! I remember this!" Luna said. She picked up a mini little Dementor statue.
"It used to move, but Neville used the Deminduindo Curse on it...." Luna said, examining it dreamily.
"You mean the shrinking curse?"
"Yes... I'm just used to calling it the Deminduindo Curse.... a habit...." Draco and Luna looked at a case.
"I wish I could open it!" Luna called out. At the word open, the thing fell back with a oddly soundless air to it. There was a square, gaping hole in the ground. Luna flew down it.
"Luna!" Draco jumped in. He heard Luna say,
"I'm OK!" He flew out onto a stone floor. Luna was examing what appeared to be a huge snake skeleton.
"Its a basalisk...." She said. Draco looked around.
"Its dangerous here, I can tell....." Draco and Luna clambered back in the whole. Draco took Lunas hand, and pointed his wand at the hole.
"Ascendo!" They flew up and hit the ground of the room of requirement.
"That was.... rather odd, if you ask me..... Maybe there was a Blubb Humbag there.... they can make you see odd things....."

I still think shes odd.... said a voice in his head.
But shes nice....
Another point tooken into account.

*tries to supress laughter; fails miserably* Hahaha! That was absolutely hilarious! It reminds me of the "Won-Won" thing by Lavender! Aw! That post was so cute! I like Draco and Luna together! *claps happily* Wow! That Basilisk thing! That was creepy! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

Awesome posts!
Cute pairing!
PAMS!!
Jess

Draco sat on the floor.
"Death Eaters took her." Neville said.
"Why? What do Death Eaters need to do with her?"
"Her dad writes the Quibbler. They want Harry Potter."
"They cant get Harry, Its impossible! He hasnt been sighted in days, weeks, months......" Draco wondered.... is Potter really dead?
"Anythings possible, but I doubt it too." Draco gripped his wand. Then, all of the sudden, he apparated. He was in the singed remains of The Quidditch World Cup. Then, there was an eruption of black smoke, and Dolohov was there.
"You cant get away this time...." Dolohov said. Draco thought a spell;
Protego. He didnt need to put out his wand. Purple fire spurted from Dolohov wand, and "hit" Draco. Draco pretended to be unconcious.
"MORSMORDRE!" The skull came out of the sky, made up of black smoke. The snake was absent for a reason unknown to Draco. He jumped up.
"SECTUMSEMPRA MAXIMA!" He thought Dolohov might explode, but instead, Dolohov let out a terrible scream. Scarlet covered the ground. Draco fell to his knees, the spell seemed to weaken him. Dolohov had apparated. Dracos wand fell to his side..... he wished Luna was there..... why Luna?.... he asked himself..... Why is it the Love of My Life?


I will make up for the short chapter, A PROMISE!

OOOhhhh very good chapter!
Can't wait for more!
PAMS!!
Jess

Poor Luna! That's so sad! Hope she's ok! Aw! That's so sweet! Draco counts Luna as the love of his life! Aw! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

This is still really good!! I can barely wait for more posts because I'm hooked!

This is the most epic, most suprising chapter there has been! DUDUHDUH! This would also be a cliffhanger chapter.....

Draco looked around. The air was oddly warm for night. He never understood why he liked to walk around Grimwauld Place.....
"The only way to destroy a man is to betray them, and stab them in the heart with a steak." Snapes words he had told Draco so many months ago rang in his ears. Then Dolohov was there.
"STUPEFY!" Draco yelled. Dolohov blocked it.
"CRUCIO!" Dolohov yelled. Draco fell to his knees. The pain..... was too much..... then he though of Luna..... Luna..... He found strength..... He raised his arm.
"Sectumsempra!" Draco called out. Dolohov said the same thing at the same time.
For the 2nd time in his life, Draco fell to the ground. The pain was to much. It hurt more than The Cruciatus Curse. Dolohov had apparated again. He had escaped. Draco coughed and sputtered. His breath was short. Then a coldness was over him, and the rattling breath of a dementor.....
Draco.... the best memory.... the memory may be your last, but try....TRY! Yelled a gruff version of his voice in his head.
Luna.... Said a softer, more soothing voice.
"Expecto Patronum!" A doe, silvery and graceful, burst from the tip f his wand. Then another silvery light.... a stag.... Could it be....?
Harry Potter turned Draco over.
"Are you okay?" He asked.
"No..... w-why...."
"I am repaying you. You saved me from Snape." Harry poured three drops of dittany. He put Dracos arm over his shoulder, and guided him into Grimwauld Place.
"Malfoy?" Ron and Hermione said at the same time.
"Its okay. A death eater used Sectumsempra on him."
"Dittany will support him for a little bit, but not to long." Hermione took out her wand. Harry laid Malfoy down on the couch.
Hermione began an odd incantation, unlike Snapes. The scars visible beneath Dracos ripped shirt began to dissapear, the blood around it almost melting away.
"Malfoy, if you want, you can stay here." Harry said.
"What!?" Ron said.
"Its okay Ron."
"Fine, but dont pass off infor-"
"Ron, come off it!" Hermione said.

Aw! Harry repayed Draco! Well done Harry! Silly Dolohov! I don't like him any more - not that liked him in the first place. I'm glad Draco's now healed. He really loves Luna doesn't he? Aw! It's so cute! His patronus is a doe? Wow! Hope Ron is ok with Draco! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita

Draco woke up rather abruptly.
"Draco! Wake up!" Said Hermione.
"Whasagoinonhere?"
"Its like 12:00!"
"Well..." Hermione walked off. Draco got up and sat in the dinning room. He yawned, and then a bony hand touch his elbow.
Draco start voilently, his leg hitting the back of the table.
"Draco, does thou want something to eat?" Kreacher asked.
"Not. H-hungry!" Draco said, his eyes watering with pain. Draco got up and limped to the kitchen.
"Not much to eat," He said. Kreacher snapped his fingures and a whole entire plate of Breakfast, pancakes, bacon, almost every breakfast food, was sitting there.
"Whoa!" Draco picked up the plate, which he found to be rather heavy. Hermione, Ron and Harry had left. Draco heard them say something about "Ministry". Hours passed. Then there was a thump and a scream. Draco ran to the hallway, and a flash of voilet light which reverberated on the walls.
Yaxley, his face a bright red walked in. He whipped out his wand, just as Draco did.
"Avada Kedavra!" Yaxley called. Draco ran into the Living Room, the spell exploding on the wall. Draco flattened himself against the wall.
"Can't hide yourself forever, Malfoy." Draco whipped around the wall.
"Reducto!" Yaxley jumped out of the way. The spell hit a portrait, which fell off the wall, the painted part singed. Draco ran into the Kitchen.
"Avada Kedavra!" Yaxley yelled. The other side ofthe wall Draco was against shook. Yaxley started walking around the right side. Draco ran around the Left side. Yaxley came around. Draco randomly waved his wand. Yaxley blocked it. Yaxley followed with the same Nonverbel spell. Draco ducked out of the way. Draco launched the same spell again. Yaxley ducked.
"REDUCTO!" Draco yelled. Yaxley flew in the air and hit the wall opposite. Draco called for Kreacher. The house elf took Dracos hand and they apparated to the hogs head.







Does anyone know the name of the spell they were using in The Battle Of The Dpartment Of Mysteries in the movie? Thats the spell I mean by "Nonverble Spell" or the "Spell that launched with a POP".