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Connie · 06-14-2011, 04:37 AM

Hey Jazz. Very, very , very nice. You closed up the gap nicely from the time they went through and came back through the veil. I was wondering what time period in Harry's time they would come back and see Harry. I'm so glad you stuck with your storyline because it made reading, and understanding it very simple. Your chapters were well written, and I can't wait to see your next post. Great work Jazz.

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-14-2011, 10:10 AM

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Aww, such a touching chapter again, I loved the Severus/Izabella scenes, he would be great as an uncle

Since you didn't have the heart to let Sirius die please please please don't kill Snape

And I also loved McGonagall's reaction at seeing Sirius and Iz alive

Thankyou! Ahhh you'll have to wait and see.

I thought it seemed very McGonagall

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Originally Posted by Connie

Hey Jazz. Very, very , very nice. You closed up the gap nicely from the time they went through and came back through the veil. I was wondering what time period in Harry's time they would come back and see Harry. I'm so glad you stuck with your storyline because it made reading, and understanding it very simple. Your chapters were well written, and I can't wait to see your next post. Great work Jazz.

Thankyou Connie! Next post soon

Not many left now, can't believe it's almost finished!

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-14-2011, 07:57 PM

Once again, contains spoilers about Deathly Hallows Part II

Chapter Fifty-Two - Loving Angels Instead
Gradually, the bodies were moved to a room just off the Great Hall and the survivors grouped together. The hour was almost up and people were slowly moving towards the doors, preparing for the battle to commence once more.

Izabella stood in the Entrance Hall with Sirius. She was extremely tired, but didn't show it as she knew that Sirius would send her home at any sign of weakness. She needed to be there for Harry.

As an hour came and went, worried mumbles echoed around Hogwarts.
“What if he went to the Forest?” Izabella said, looking up at Sirius as he wrapped his arms around her.
“Izabella stop worrying. Harry knows what he's doing.” Sirius said. He kissed Izabella's forehead and smiled gently, but as she looked away, burying her face against his chest and locking her arms around his waist, Sirius' face creased and he looked just as concerned as Izabella did.

Just as people began getting impatient, the cold voice rang throughout Hogwarts for the final time.

“Harry Potter is dead.”

Izabella froze, her chest began to rise and fall rapidly then she shook her head before she ran out of the castle, others followed her and together, they watched the procession of Death Eaters, lead by Voldemort and a sobbing Hagrid, who was carrying Harry gently in his huge arms. As Hagrid laid Harry down on the floor in front of the steps, a loud scream was ripped from Izabella's throat and she stumbled forward, yanking out of Sirius' grasp as he tried to pull her back. She fell to her knees beside Harry's body.

“No.” she cried, tears cascading down her face.

Voldemort was silent for a moment as he looked down at the sobbing person in front of him.

“Izabella?” he said, his voice mildly surprised. Through her tears, Izabella saw a blonde figure step out from the crowd of Death Eaters. Then she looked up at Voldemort, her face full of contempt.

“So you really were a traitor?” he said, his voice was low and dangerous. He looked up to the crowds on the steps and raised his voice. “I do not take kindly to traitors.”

He lifted his wand and directed it at Izabella, but suddenly there were hands pulling at Izabella's shoulders and Lucius Malfoy was in front of her, writhing in pain from Voldemort's Cruciatus Curse. Narcissa stepped forward, shrieking her husband's name and Voldemort lifted his wand. Lucius fell to the floor, breathing heavily.

“Lucius, when will you learn that she doesn't love you?” Voldemort said, sighing.
“You can't... Her baby... It's not right.” Lucius panted, struggling to get to his feet. Izabella watched, her hands cradling her bump and Sirius holding her tightly.

As Lucius staggered to his wife, he turned and Izabella smiled gently.
“Thank you.” she mouthed. He nodded as Voldemort stared at her stomach, looking almost disgusted, then suddenly Neville Longbottom came flying towards Voldemort until he lifted his wand and with a loud bang he disarmed Neville, throwing him flat onto his back.

“Who is this?” Voldemort asked as Neville hurried to his feet.
“The Longbottom boy my Lord. The son of the Aurors.” Bellatrix said hungrily.
“Ah yes.” Voldemort said quietly. “You are a Pureblood, you will be welcome amongst us.”

“I'll join you when hell freezes over.” Neville spat.
“Very well.” Voldemort said, raising his wand. A black shape flew through the air and landed in his hands. He held it up, revealing the Sorting Hat. “There will be no more Sorting at Hogwarts. Everyone will be in Slytherin.” he announced as he shoved the hat roughly onto Neville's head.

“Neville is going to demonstrate what happens to anyone that disobeys me.”
With a flick of his wand, Voldemort set the hat on fire. Flames burst into life on Neville's head, but before Izabella could step forward and help, a group of centaurs appeared, firing arrows and Grawp bashed through the grounds shouting “Hagger” at the top of his voice. Hogwarts was in chaos once more as spells flew through the air amongst the arrows.

Sirius grabbed Izabella's hand and pulled her up the stairs back inside the castle, until Hagrid's voice rang out through the crowds.

“Where's Harry?” he boomed. Izabella stopped and looked back at the spot where Harry's body had been moments before.
“Izabella come on!” Sirius said, dragging his eyes away from Hagrid and pulling her into the Great Hall where various duels had started. Izabella grabbed the front of his shirt.

“Sirius we have to find Harry's body!”
“Someone will have moved it. We'll find it later.” he said, before turning and firing a spell. The battle continued, but there seemed to be more people than before.

One by one, the Death Eaters became outnumbered and they started to fall. Members of Dumbledore's Army, along with their families and the Order of the Phoenix duelled fiercely until only two fights were left.

Hundreds of people stood in a ring around the outside of the Great Hall whilst Mrs Weasley flung spells at Bellatrix Lestrange and Voldemort fought Kingsley, Slughorn and McGonagall. Bellatrix laughed manically then suddenly, Mrs Weasley's curse hit her straight in the chest and she crumpled, falling to the floor, the shock still present in her face.

Voldemort screamed in rage and his three opponents were blasted backwards. With a vicious malice in his eyes, Voldemort turned on Mrs Weasley and raised his wand until-

“Protego!”

Mrs Weasley was shielded and in the centre of the room, Voldemort looked for the caster of the spell.

In a flourish, Harry whipped off his invisibility cloak and Izabella gasped loudly and her knees buckled beneath her. The room was buzzing as everyone stood on the toes to get a glimpse of the Boy Who Lived again.

Lady of the Lake · 06-14-2011, 08:42 PM

Oooh, this makes me even more excited about seeing DH part 2

And Lucius was so gallant

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-15-2011, 02:08 AM

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Originally Posted by Lady of the Lake

Oooh, this makes me even more excited about seeing DH part 2

And Lucius was so gallant

I can't wait! I know, I don't think he'll ever stop loving Izabella! I hope you'll see why once you read my prequel which I shall be posting soon!

Connie · 06-15-2011, 04:13 AM

Hey Jazz. Very nice. By the time I reached the end, I had goose bumps.

You've done a great job, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. I can't say anything else at the moment because allergies are flaring up in my eyes, and makes it difficult to see. But, it was very good.

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-15-2011, 04:48 AM

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Hey Jazz. Very nice. By the time I reached the end, I had goose bumps.

You've done a great job, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. I can't say anything else at the moment because allergies are flaring up in my eyes, and makes it difficult to see. But, it was very good.

Thank you Connie! Oh gosh I hope you're okay!!

Nothing too serious hopefully? Get better soon!

I have finished! Cannot believe it, feels very strange but there is Fifty-Five chapters in total, so I will have the remaining ones up very shortly! Then I will start posting my prequel and will post a link for anyone interested

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-15-2011, 09:31 AM

Chapter Fifty-Three - The Final Fight
Harry and Voldemort began to circle each other, their wands raised. Izabella's legs became weak and she felt Sirius' shaky hands on her arms attempting to keep her upright as she tried to stagger towards her godson. Harry raised a hand, not moving his eyes from the red slits across from him.

“Stay where you are. It has to be me.”
Voldemort laughed harshly.
“He doesn't mean that. Someone will always be there to help you Potter, to step in front of you before I kill you.” he taunted. “This time, it'll be your loving godparents. You would let their child die just to save your life.”

Harry shook his head defiantly and looked straight into Voldemort's eyes with confidence.
“You're wrong Riddle. You are wrong about a lot of things and there's a lot of stuff you don't know.”
“Tell me Potter. Is it about love? Is love going to save you once again? Or do you perhaps believe that you have greater magic than I do?” Voldemort jeered, his face twisting with the sneer that played about his mouth.
“I believe both actually.” said Harry calmly.

“You are not a better wizard than me Potter! I killed Albus Dumbledore!” Voldemort yelled.
“No you didn't. Severus Snape had arranged Dumbledore's death with him, long before you told Draco Malfoy to do it for you.”
“What?” he snapped.

“Severus Snape was working for Dumbledore from the moment you started hunting down my mother. You never realised how much he loved her, because you don't understand love Riddle.”

Voldemort stayed silent, still circling his enemy but his eyes were becoming increasingly narrowed, his jaw clenching dangerously.

“I have some advice for you Riddle... Try for some remorse. I've seen what you will become and I'm telling you that this is you're last chance. Think... Try to be a man.”
“How dare you-”
“You see, the Elder Wand doesn't really belong to you.”

“I took it from Dumbledore's grave!” Voldemort shrieked.
“When Dumbledore died, the wand didn't belong to him... It belonged to Draco Malfoy.”

There was shock in Voldemort's face for a moment then a cruel smile wiped across his face.
“Well I shall deal with Draco later...”

“You don't understand Riddle. I already disarmed Draco weeks ago.”
All eyes in the room fell onto the wand in Harry's hand.

“So you see, I am the true master of the Elder Wand.”

At that moment, the sun rose and dawn was upon them. The sun was blindingly bright as it illuminated the enchanted ceiling above them.
As the orange glow spread across the Great Hall there was a shout:

“Avada Kedarva!”
“Expelliarmus!”

The jets of lights combined in the air halfway between the two wizards. Where they met, a firework of red and golden flames burst forth, raining down in sparks until in one swift motion Voldemort was blasted backwards and he fell to the floor with a loud thud.

There was a deafening silence before an ear-splitting roar raced throughout the Great Hall. An overwhelming emotion hit Izabella as she rushed forward with the crowds, running towards Harry and pulling him into a tight embrace as she reached him. More people surrounded them and Harry was bombarded with hugs and pats on the back, all shouting and singing in joy...

The sun was slowly rising and people were sitting in the Great Hall, wondering what was to happen next. Everything seemed so surreal... The Aurors had removed Voldemort's body and stood guard by it. Kingsley Shacklebolt had been whisked away to stand in as Minister for Magic. Harry roamed the Hall, shaking hands and consoling people on their losses. Izabella watched him, an immense wave of pride sweeping over her. She sat with the Weasleys at the Gryffindor House table and there was an odd sense in the air, a combination of sadness and joy. Izabella felt as thought her heart had been dipped in cold water as she remembered, Harry pulling her to one side just after his triumph...

“Izabella... I'm sorry there was nothing I could do.”
“Harry? What do you mean? You did brilliantly!” she praised, beaming at him.
“No...” he looked down at the floor. “Severus died.” he said gently.
Izabella felt as though the walls of Hogwarts were falling around her once more.
“I'm sorry Izabella. Voldemort killed him. He said he loves you and he's glad you finally got everything you deserve.”
At that point, Izabella's cool exterior had fallen apart and she crumbled in front of Harry, dropping her head into her hands as she sobbed relentlessly. Harry had embraced her and spoken softly in her ear.
“I wouldn't be here without him. He told me what I needed to do.”
Izabella lifted her head and smiled slightly and Harry nodded.
“He was a very good man.”
....

Izabella watched Harry sigh and then disappear under the cloak. She smiled. He deserved a rest. As his body disappeared, Izabella caught sight of a family looking out of place in the corner of the Hall. She excused herself, kissing Sirius' cheek lightly and walked over to the Malfoy family. As she approached and sat down opposite them, Lucius looked up and smiled.

“Thank you. For everything.” Izabella said genuinely. She turned and looked directly at Narcissa. “He wouldn't be here without you. I can't thank you enough.”

Narcissa lowered her head slightly in acknowledgement and patted her son's hand.
“Well, we owe it to Harry for saving our son's life.” she said.

Izabella smiled. Lucius leaned forward slightly, his forehead creased.
“I'm sorry about Severus.”
“Me too,” Izabella said with a sad smile.

“He was a good person.” Draco said suddenly, his voice croaky and quiet.

Izabella smiled and felt tears warm her eyes. She nodded slightly and stood up. As she was about to swing her leg over the bench, she stopped, frowning slightly. She clutched at her stomach, clenching her teeth as a cry of pain escaped her lips.

“What's the matter?” Lucius asked in a concerned voice, hurrying around the side of the table.
“Ouch!” Izabella replied, holding her midriff as she bent over, curling her body.
“I would say, you are in labour.” Narcissa said, smiling gently. Izabella snapped her head up as her eyes bulged.

“I can't be! I'm not that pregnant!” she protested, groaning as another cramp squeezed inside her stomach. Lucius wrapped an arm around her waist and held under one arm, gently carrying her towards the doors. Suddenly Sirius was on her other side and two pairs of strong arms held her up as she bit her lip against the searing pain.

“She's in labour.” Lucius said to Sirius over Izabella's head as they struggled to carry her into the Entrance Hall. Harry appeared by the steps.

“What's going on?” he asked, his voice full of worry.

“We're having a baby!” Sirius yelled, grinning from ear to ear.

Izabella laughed and looked up at his smiling face as they lead her into a deserted classroom close by.

Lady of the Lake · 06-15-2011, 06:37 PM

Noooo! First J.K, now you, killing Severus...nooo! But I will forgive you because you write beautifully and I'm too curious to read the prequel

Baby on the way

Sirius as a dad

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-15-2011, 07:43 PM

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Noooo! First J.K, now you, killing Severus...nooo! But I will forgive you because you write beautifully and I'm too curious to read the prequel

Baby on the way

Sirius as a dad

Thank you! I know!

I'm so sorry. I just had to though or it would of ruined the story. My prequel starts in Izabella's sixth year of Hogwarts so don't worry, there is alot of Snape and Lucius

There is two more chapters eeeeek!

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-15-2011, 09:33 PM

Chapter Forty-Four - A Bundle of Hope
Izabella smiled as she looked down at the tiny bundle that was sleeping soundly, curled up on her chest. Poking out from the numerous blankets was a tiny tuft of jet black hair and a small, pale, delicate hand, curled into a miniature fist.

They had arrived back at the Burrow a few hours after the birth, which had been eventful to say the least. Sirius stood by her head, shouting “Push” whenever he felt it necessary. This ended with Izabella throwing her arm at him until her fist made contact with his chest, hard.

Lucius attempted to be helpful, but ended up standing in the corner, growing very pale and almost fainting.

Madam Pomfrey fussed with towels and even McGonagall tried to take control at one point. Until Mrs Weasley came bursting in shouting;
“I've had seven children, move out of my way!”
And the baby was soon delivered.

She sighed contentedly and looked about the Weasley's living room, where she was currently occupying the sofa. Across from her, curled up in an armchair, Harry was deeply sleeping, looking peaceful where he had fallen asleep before finishing his story of the journey they had been on. Izabella didn't mind. They had all the time in the world now. Opposite him, Ron was sprawled out on the sofa, snoring gently with a tranquil Hermione tucked safely under his arm.

Izabella sat up as there was a firm knock on the door.
Gently, she held the baby against her chest, securing the blankets around the tiny form whilst she opened the door to the kitchen where most of the Weasleys were sitting.

George had gone straight to his room, the loss affecting him the most. Ginny was sent to bed by her mother and despite her protests, fell asleep as soon as she reached her bed. Sirius was currently in the shower, the last in line as Izabella and the others were all freshly washed and cosy in her borrowed pyjamas. It may have been past lunch time, but considering the events of the previous days, everyone had agreed it was acceptable to stay in their pyjamas and be lazy for a while.

Mrs Weasley stood by the stove, a mouth-watering aroma coming from the large pot she was stirring. Bill sat with his arm around Fleur next to Charlie who sat next to Percy, all cradling a large mug in their hands. Mr Weasley stood by the doorway, his body tense and his nose raised high in the air.

“I don't think Izabella should be disturbed at the moment.” Mr Weasley said, not realising her presence.
“It's okay Arthur, I'm awake.” she said smiling as she walked to the doorway to greet the guests, touching Mr Weasley's arm in assurance.

“Good afternoon.” she said, hiding her frown as she greeted Narcissa Malfoy, her husband and son just behind her.
“I came by to give you this. I thought you might be a little unprepared for the little one.” Narcissa said, holding out a crib, filled with blankets and baby clothes.

“Thank you!” Izabella exclaimed. “That's really too kind.”
“It's just some of Draco's old stuff. I found some things that would be acceptable for a baby girl.” she said, smiling at the tiny bundle in Izabella's arms. Mr Weasley stepped forward and took the crib off Narcissa, Izabella smiled at him gratefully as she shifted her baby to a cradle in her arms so the Malfoys could have a glimpse.

“She's beautiful.” Lucius breathed softly, smiling at Izabella with sparkling eyes.
“Like her mother.” Sirius said as he joined Izabella by her side, his hair still slightly damp and his skin glowing a light shade of pink. Izabella smiled as he kissed her cheek then lowered his face to kiss his daughter's forehead gently. “I see you've met Lucia?” he smiled.

“Lucia?” Lucius said in a quiet voice, his eyes meeting Izabella's.

“Lucia Hope Black.” Izabella announced, her smile beaming across her face.
“It's perfect.” Narcissa said smiling. Lucius looked at Izabella wordlessly and she smiled.

“Well I guess this is goodbye.” Narcissa said.
Izabella stepped forward and kissed Narcissa's cheek.
“See you soon.” she said, leaning forward to embrace Lucius for a moment. He stroked Lucia's forehead gently and she smiled.

She patted Draco's shoulder as Lucius and Sirius shook hands briefly. They stood on the doorstep and waved before the Malfoy's disapparated and were gone.

“Right. Who wants soup?” Mrs Weasley asked as they made their way back inside. Everyone hurried to their seats greedily as Mrs Weasley chuckled as dished out bowls of soup.

Izabella pulled the crib towards her and emptied it, laying Lucia down gently amongst the blankets, her tiny chest rising and falling as she slept, blissfully unaware of her history.

Izabella watched her daughter for a moment then sifted through the baby clothes. She had a suspicion that some of the clothes weren't as second hand as Narcissa made them out to be.

She smiled and turned to the table, wolfing down her meal in between glances at the baby that had brought them hope. Their lives had been plagued by disasters, but suddenly this little bundle of joy made the world seem a better place.

And of course her father certainly helped, grinning at her from across the table and making her swoon, in a way that only Sirius Black could achieve.

Lady of the Lake · 06-16-2011, 08:46 PM

Aww, this was adorable

Haha, loved Molly and the 7 children comment

Aww, and Lucia? Just like my aunt's name ~~and totally not the feminine from Lucius~~

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-16-2011, 09:44 PM

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Aww, this was adorable

Haha, loved Molly and the 7 children comment

Aww, and Lucia? Just like my aunt's name ~~and totally not the feminine from Lucius~~

Glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad you noticed

Well he saved her life so I thought it was appropiate. What a coincidence that it's your Aunt's name though! Haha that can be my dedication to you for sticking with the story until the end!

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-17-2011, 11:21 AM

Chapter Fifty-Five - Happy Endings
“Lucia! Stop right there you little madam.” Izabella said, glaring at her daughter as she fought with the pushchair wheel that was stuck in the elevator. She yanked the handlebars and managed to free the wheel just as her two year old began to toddle off again, Teddy Lupin following gladly behind her.

“What am I going to do when all three of you can walk eh?” she mumbled to the baby that was sat on her hip, who was currently fascinated by the Ministry and wasn't listening to a word Izabella said.

Managing to catch up with the tornado toddlers, she grabbed Lucia's hand before they walked into the Auror Office, parking the pushchair in an empty space by the door.

“Dadda!” Lucia yelled, running the well-known path towards Sirius' desk where he lounging, feet up on the desk, roaring in laughter. At the sight of his daughter, he scooped her up in his arms and swung her through the air, much to the delight of Lucia, who squealed happily.

“Put her down before she's sick.” Izabella said leading Teddy away from the doorway and into Harry's open arms. Sirius grinned and placed Lucia back on her feet where she wobbled slightly then began to make her way over to Harry and Teddy, comfortable once she had seen her father.

Sirius placed his hands on either side of Izabella's face and kissed her, his thumbs tracing patterns on her cheeks softly, until the baby on her hip cried out and reached for Sirius' hair.

“Aw Heidi, are you not getting any attention sweetheart?” Sirius said, taking the baby and drowning her in kisses whilst she giggled delightedly. He held Heidi expertly in one arm as he took a seat by his desk.

A young woman with startling blue eyes and dark hair popped her head around the corner of one of the offices.

“Izabella. Please come back to work soon and save me from these men and their awful jokes.” she begged. Izabella laughed and looked about the office.
“It has gone down hill since I left.” she said, looking about at the overflowing bins and empty food and drink packaging on the desk. She shook her head, smiling fondly.

“We've not done too badly on our own. We've managed to round up nearly all of the Death Eaters.” Harry said defensively.
“Finally. Only took you two years.” Izabella teased.

“Well if you would stop going off to have babies...” retorted Harry.
Izabella chuckled and smiled down at Sirius as he grabbed her hand and pulled her closer to his chair.

“Well don't come back too soon.” he said grinning.
“I thought you missed me?”
“You're the one who comes in to see me nearly everyday.”
“I come to see Ron actually...” Izabella said, laughing as Ron grinned as he passed with a pile of paperwork. Sirius chuckled and pulled her closer, wrapping an arm around her waist as she perched on his knee.

“What I meant was, maybe we could have another baby before you come back?”
“Are you serious?” Izabella said, arching an eyebrow.
“Yes.” he replied calmly.

“I don't know Sirius-”
“I'll take that as a maybe. Which means yes.” he grinned then pulled her forward so that she lowered her face to his and he pressed his lips against hers for a long moment. She looked into his eyes and sighed deeply, a smile spreading across her face then turned to the room as she remembered her message.

“Mrs Weasley wants everyone at the Burrow by no later than six o'clock tonight,” Izabella said, fixing Ron and Harry with a stern gaze. “She means it. Don't be late again.”

Harry laughed.
“I don't know what you mean, I'm always-”
“Lucia put that-!”

There was a loud bang a cloud of black ash as Lucia managed to take the wand off Harry's desk. She stood in the middle of the office, holding the wand, her face slightly black from the soot, then the shock kicked in and she started to wail. Whilst Sirius roared with laughter, Izabella bit her lip, holding back a giggle and rushing forward, taking Lucia in her arms and cradling her gently against her chest and stroking her hair soothingly. She smiled contentedly as Lucia started to giggle, unharmed.

Harry was alive and well. Her two beautiful girls were growing up to be truly wonderful.

And Sirius. That rugged boy with the cheeky smile, that would never admit he had a girlfriend, was her husband.

A familiar squirm wriggled in her stomach and Izabella frowned, placing a hand delicately on her midriff. She laughed slightly. She had a strong feeling that Sirius would get his wish soon and she wouldn't be returning to work for a while longer. She shook her head and looked about at her family.

Life just kept getting better.

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-17-2011, 11:41 AM

Final Words
I would like to say a huge thank you to everyone who read my story and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

A special thanks to Connie and Maria (Lady of the Lake) for being there from start to finish. You both helped me and assured me and made me grow as a writer. Your support was incredible and I thank you for giving up your time to read my chapters.

Once again, a final thanks to all who read and I hope to see you all when I post the prequel, Forever Hold Your Peace which shall be up shortly.
All my love,
Jazz

Lady of the Lake · 06-17-2011, 02:34 PM

A perfect, sweet ending

Awww, thank you, I'm glad to have been of help

It's very sad that this has come to an end, but I'm looking forward to the prequel

Congratulations on a beautifully written story

Emileyn · 06-17-2011, 02:42 PM

I absolutely loved the fic, Jazz! I know I didn't comment all the time, but I've been keeping up with it every time you've posted!

It was a fantastic outtake on things and quite creative. I can't wait to read the Prequel. Message me when it's up, please? Fantastic as always and superb writing. And Lucia seems to be turning out just like her father.

They're quite adorable,

ThePureBloodPrincess · 06-17-2011, 06:01 PM

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A perfect, sweet ending

Awww, thank you, I'm glad to have been of help

It's very sad that this has come to an end, but I'm looking forward to the prequel

Congratulations on a beautifully written story

I know, I can't believe I finished it! I have started writing the prequel, I think you'll enjoy it. There is a lot of Lucius

Thank you!

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I absolutely loved the fic, Jazz! I know I didn't comment all the time, but I've been keeping up with it every time you've posted!

It was a fantastic outtake on things and quite creative. I can't wait to read the Prequel. Message me when it's up, please? Fantastic as always and superb writing. And Lucia seems to be turning out just like her father.

They're quite adorable,

Thank you Emily! It's fine, I'm just glad you enjoyed it!

I have posted the prequel but I shall message you when it's approved by a Mod

I'm really excited for you all to read it!
Thank you, I tried to make her as cheeky as Sirius!

Connie · 06-18-2011, 03:08 AM

Hey Jazz. Such a wonderful ending. Your story from beginning to end was clever, riveting, and very entertaining. These are things that make me want to read any story. You've done very well with it. I'm very glad I read it. Good luck with your next one. I'm sure it'll be just as good as this one was.

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A special thanks to Connie and Maria (Lady of the Lake) for being there from start to finish. You both helped me and assured me and made me grow as a writer. Your support was incredible and I thank you for giving up your time to read my chapters.

It was really my pleasure to read it. And I'm thrilled I was of service to you.