wow JESS!!
i have to agree with u that this is ur best chappie!!
now i really think hermione likes draco....!!
ron does have a sensitvity of a blunt axe!!

i thought it was the best too

i think it was ron that kissed her

PAMS!!!!!!!!!

i wonder who kissed Hermione???
Is it Ron???
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Marcy

Amazing!!! New reader. I love it! PAMS!!


~Spencer~

P.S. When people review I message them as quickly as possible. If you would like me to do that please review! I would like to have at least 3 more reviews to continue on with the story! ~Jess

pls post the next chappie soon!!

Happy Mother's Day! Thanks for all the reviews and here are the responses from me of course! ~Jess







driveunit1

wow JESS!!
i have to agree with u that this is ur best chappie!!
now i really think hermione likes draco....!!
ron does have a sensitvity of a blunt axe!!


Hermione<3Ron:

Thanks so much!!
You never know what might happen....
haha yeah like how Hermione says he has an emotional range of a teaspoon
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Jess





POTTER128

i thought it was the best too

i think it was ron that kissed her

PAMS!!!!!!!!!



Hermione<3Ron:

Thanks so much!!
It might be him, it might not be....hmmmm
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess




hermione9495

i wonder who kissed Hermione???
Is it Ron???
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Marcy


Hermione<3Ron:

It might be Ron it might be not you never know....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess




forensicscientist101

Amazing!!! New reader. I love it! PAMS!!


~Spencer~


Hermione<3Ron:

Thanks so much for becoming one of my new readers!
I love to hear your feedback on my story!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess




Thanks to everybody who responded! ~Jess

Thanks to everybody who read and reviewed my story!! Thanks to the new reader; forensicscientist101! This chapter may be short but it gets more interesting! Please read and REVIEW!! Oh and go check out The Unknown Writer by hermione9495!! Hope everyone likes it! ~Jess




Chapter 7

I woke up that morning, well I have no clue if I did have any sleep at all, but It seems like I didn't, *sigh* oh well. I look to my right at the clock and it shows that it's 10:40 A.M.! I better hurry to breakfast and go to Hogsmede with Draco.

As I rushed down the Great Hall I couldn't help but think of who kissed me in the Room of Requirement, the conversation with Draco, and the conversation with Ron. Oh well, I just hope it was someone nice, no wait what are you thinking Hermione? The person couldn't be, the person pushed you out the door, without telling you his name! Then Draco just ran out without telling you. Ron seemed to care last night when I was upset with him though. I mean I gave him all the hints I could think of to show him that I liked him. But he didn't seem to get it. I sighed and opened the door into the Great Hall. Nothing but silence all around.

No one was there. I bet everyone has gone down to Hogsmede already. I was starving and there was no food on the tables. I was heading to the kitchen to see the elves but then I see a flash of light pass me. I turn around to see Draco and another death eater. I started to run and scream at the same time. Then I heard "Crucio!" from the death eater. I screamed with pain as I was being tortured and fell to the ground. Then I heard that famous cackling laugh. Two words. Bellatrix Lestrange. EVIL!

But when I was trying to get up, Draco seized my arm and pinned me up against the wall. He mouthed the words, "I'm sorry, I'll explain later" then he winked and had that famous smirk of his on his face. Bellatrix came over and raised her wand to my chest. I was starting to faint from the pain of the cruciatus curse had on me. That's when I saw Ron standing in the hallway. Ron's face looked horrified and his eyes looked red and puffy, did he cry after the conversation we had last night? That's when I started to faint. The last thing I remember hearing was, "Avada Kedavra!" Was I dead?



Did you like it? Please REVIEW!!!! I love to hear what you think about the story! What should I add to it? Who do you think kissed Hermione in the Room of Requirement? What do you think? Thanks! ~Jess

P.S. If you want me to put an ad up here for your story just review on my story and ask! ~Jess

WWWWHHHHYYYY HERMIONE!
You were so young!
That little son of a something Bellatrix is EVIL!
I hate her!
Thx for the ad Jessica!

~Marcy

what a cliffe hanger!!!
Not hermione or ron or draco pls!!!
waiting for the next chappie!!

This is a chapter. I L-O-V-E-D It. PAMS.


Spencer

woaw...what was that...draco, hermione, ron, Bellatrix, crucio and avada kedavra! so many things at the same time...what's gonna happen next????waiting....waiting....

Very good, very good. Keep on writing!

Yeah it's Friday!!! No school until Monday!! I have nothing else to do so I'm deciding to review to your comments and post Chapter 8 up!! ~Jess



hermione9495

WWWWHHHHYYYY HERMIONE!
You were so young!
That little son of a something Bellatrix is EVIL!
I hate her!
Thx for the ad Jessica!

~Marcy


Hermione<3Ron:

haha i love your comment!
No problemo!
Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jess



driveunit1

what a cliffe hanger!!!
Not hermione or ron or draco pls!!!
waiting for the next chappie!!


Hermione<3Ron:

You'll just have to see....
Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jess




forensicscientist101

This is a chapter. I L-O-V-E-D It. PAMS.


Spencer


Hermione<3Ron:

Thanks I loved it too haha
Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jess




harita

woaw...what was that...draco, hermione, ron, Bellatrix, crucio and avada kedavra! so many things at the same time...what's gonna happen next????waiting....waiting....


Hermione<3Ron:

Yeah i wanted a little bit of violence in this story too just a little..
Thanks for becoming one of my new readers/reviewers!
Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jess





TheatreActress

Very good, very good. Keep on writing!


Hermione<3Ron:

Thanks so much! Oh I will!
Thanks for becoming another one of my new readers/reviewers!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess



Thanks for all your feedback! I love to hear it! ~Jess

Here is Chapter 8! I hope you like it! Please REVIEW after you have read! I got 2 new readers;harita and TheatreActress! I would like to have some new readers! Thanks! ~Jess




Chapter 8

I woke up to find myself in St.Mungos huddled by Harry, Ginny, Cho, Fred, George, Hagrid, Mr.and Mrs. Weasley, and Draco. Even though Draco was the farthest away from me, Ron wasn't here. I sighed.

The next hour was all full of talking, Draco didn't say a word. But questions kept popping up about what happened to me, etc. I told them I didn't know because I wanted to hear the full and true story from Draco.

"Ahem, may I speak to Hermione alone?" Draco asked politely. Harry covered me and shook his head. I took ahold of Harry's hands and nodded to him so he knew that I can trust Draco. Although Cho gave me a nasty look when I was still holding Harry's hand. I let go and they all filed out except for Draco.

"Hello Draco, I'm thinking that you can tell me what happened?" He nodded and began. "Hermione, I need to let you know that I'm an undercover death eater but so far you are the only one who knows" " Before you fainted Bellatrix Lestarange was about to kill you, but before she could I killed her first." He said panting trying to get all of that out in one breath.

He looked down and started to cry. He then came over to me, hugged me, then before I knew it he was kissing me again on the lips! I shoved him away from me and then there was a shuffle of feet and a sob..

"Oi!" said Ron. I killed Bellatrix not you ferret! I killed her! You just stood there blanked out like a moron Malfoy! I kept glancing between Draco and Ron, "Is this true Draco?" I looked to see Ron standing there with tears in his eyes.

After 5 minutes of him just staring at us, actually it was only 20 seconds but it felt so long, anyways Ron looked behind him and down the hall. I had no clue why he was doing but then he started wiping his tears off his face. That's when Lavender came in. So that's why Ron was wiping off his tears, just so "she" didn't think that he was crying over me.

Right as Lavender walked in Ron kissed her full on the lips right in front of Draco and I. Then Lavender and Ron stopped and were about to take there last steps out of the room. But Ron glanced over his shoulder and gave me a smirk, like Dracos'.

I looked at Draco, he had tears in his eyes but said, "Hermione, you know that time in the broom closet I was going to tell you something?" He said. I nodded and he continued. "Well I think I should tell you now, Hermione I love you." He blushed furiously and left before I could say anything else. I'm in a dilemma.



Did you like it? I hope so... I would like some more reviews and more new readers this time please! ~Jess

OHH!!!! Ron's trying to make Hermione jealous!!!
Cant wait till the next one!
Glad you liked my last comment!

marcy moo

hhmmm.....sounds like jealousy to me!! great job!

herminone!! is in a g8 trouble!!

sorry i havent been on in a while i just got back from washington on our 8th grade trip but these are awesome i wish i could write like this

Ahhh!! Dilemmas!!! *Runs around* *breaths hard* Great... job..! *Smile* PAMS

i'm really looking forward to the next post, this is really good, i just reread it all. lol.

Nice story .... just read from the starting ... can't wait for more!!

Hey everyone! Thanks so much for the comments! I want more next time and more readers please! Here are my comments! ~Jess




hermione9495

OHH!!!! Ron's trying to make Hermione jealous!!!
Cant wait till the next one!
Glad you liked my last comment!

marcy moo

Hermione<3Ron:

I'm glad you liked it!
In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about...

~Jess



TheatreActress

hhmmm.....sounds like jealousy to me!! great job!

Hermione<3Ron:

Thanks so much!
In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about....

~Jess



driveunit1

herminone!! is in a g8 trouble!!

Hermione<3Ron:

Oh yeah she is! haha
In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about.....

~Jess



POTTER128

sorry i havent been on in a while i just got back from washington on our 8th grade trip but these are awesome i wish i could write like this

Hermione<3Ron:

That is no problem, I totally understand!
How was your trip? I've never been to Washington before, wow.
Really? Thanks, I don't think I've ever written a story before. haha
In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about.....

~Jess



forensicscientist101

Ahhh!! Dilemmas!!! *Runs around* *breaths hard* Great... job..! *Smile* PAMS

Hermione<3Ron:

haha thanks!
In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about....

~Jess



TheatreActress

i'm really looking forward to the next post, this is really good, i just reread it all. lol.

Hermione<3Ron:

really? you reread it all? wow thanks though
In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about....

~Jess



vishu.emma

Nice story .... just read from the starting ... can't wait for more!!

Hermione<3Ron:

Thanks for becoming one of my new readers!
Wow thanks for reading/reviewing it!
In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about....

~Jess



Thanks everyone so much!! I love your feedback on my story!! Check out Chapter 9!!! In Chapter 9 I would like to know who you guys think should be standing behind Hermione, you'll know what I'm talking about....
Thanks! ~Jess

Hey Everyone!! Thanks for all the comments! I would like to have some new readers and more comments please! In this Chapter I need your guys's advice to help me figure out who should be standing behind Hermione, because if you don't I will have total writer's block for who knows how long. So please help! Thanks! ~Jess

Chapter 9



Woah! I can't believe Draco did that and then told me he loved me! Then I hoped Ron would get jealous but he didn't! He just kissed Lavender and left me with Draco sad, mad, and confused.

Who should I pick, Draco or Ron? I mean I'm in love with Ron but Draco has been with me "pretending" to be my boyfriend. But I'm not sure if I like Draco
that way because before he was one of my worst enemies. I remember in third year where I punched him in the face! But now he's undercover as a death eater!

Ahhh!!! Who do I pick? I finally open my eyes to see that I'm back in the girls dormitory. I go down into the common room to find Ginny dressed up. "Ginny,
where are you going?" I asked curiously. "Oh! Hermione your up, well since the death eater came that day the trip got cancelled to Hogsmede until today" She said.

"Okay, so why are you so dressed up Ginny?" I asked curiously. "Oh, this old thing! Umm..." Ginny said. "Oh, Ginny! Harry wanted to spend the time with you didn't he?" She nodded and smiled big.

Then I heard rustling of steps and random screaming. Someone was listening to the whole thing. There glaring at Ginny was Cho. She looked furious. "It's all your fault Ginny! I hate you! I also hate you Hermione, trying to flirt with my boyfriend! How Dare You! Harry was such a good kissing partner! He was the

one I could have a shoulder to cry on because Cedric died! But now look I don't have him anymore because of you two! She said furiously while throwing her hands up into the air. Then she left the common room having tears in her eyes.

Ginny and I looked at each other in suprise. We never even knew. I could tell Ginny felt guilty but I could also tell deep inside her that she cared for Harry more than anyone else. There was an awkward silence as we stared at each other about the "argument" that just happened with Cho and us. Then of course I broke the silence.

"Well this is great! So now I can go to Hogsmede with Draco and see if I can make Ron jealous!" I said happily, forgetting about what happened last night. "Hermione, I think you should stop "dating" Draco." She said with her head bowed down. "Why Ginny?" I asked. "Because last night I found Ron in the common room crying because he thinks that your in love with Draco!" she yelled, now getting red in the face.

"I am not in love with Draco!" I screamed. She looked behind me with her mouth wide open, white as a sheet. Standing right there behind me was.....




So what did you think? Please tell me! Like I said if you don't give me a name of who you think should be standing behind Hermione at the end I will have total writers block for who knows how long! Please tell me! Oh and like I said I would like to have some new readers and more reviews please!! ~Jess

Draco. Have It be Draco. But how will he get in the common room?


Nevermind. Have it be Ron. I changed my mind.