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04-03-2010, 10:55 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Wow !!!! Pams pams pams !!!!!
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04-04-2010, 01:15 AM
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#102 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
DRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACO WOULDN'T DARE BELIEVE PANSY EVEN IF IT WAS THE TRUTH! IT'S ALL RON'S FAULT!
I like blaming poor Ronnikins. I will have to make one where it is Hermy's fault lol
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04-07-2010, 02:26 PM
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#103 (permalink)
| DoM Sea Serpent
Join Date: Sep 2009
Posts: 41,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD First Year | Mommy of 3 <3 <3 <3
I've already commented, but I can't wait to read more!!! I love this story
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04-07-2010, 05:21 PM
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#104 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by gustka48 Wow!!! Crazy...because now Hermione is going to have to make a choice!!!! It will be interesting that is for sure! Good job! I like it Very crazy! -smiles-
Hermione:-teary eyed- Why-why is this happening to me!!
^^ Yeah i agree
Thanks for reading! Quote:
Originally Posted by harita cool...that was sweet how Ron spoke up his feelings and oh...that cow!!! Parkinson do you have anything better to do then just irritate others???
waiting for more... Ron: -smiles- Thank you -blushes-
Pansy: Why do you care?
Gahhh ^^ Thank you for reading i really appriciate it..seriously!
More soon! Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Wow !!!! Pams pams pams !!!!! -smiles- More soon Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy DRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACO WOULDN'T DARE BELIEVE PANSY EVEN IF IT WAS THE TRUTH! IT'S ALL RON'S FAULT!
I like blaming poor Ronnikins. I will have to make one where it is Hermy's fault lol You never know, Pansy could make him believe not that she would But-but...sheshe could!
Ron: Dont blame me! -stare-
Haha, awww dont hurt Ronnikins feelings...Haha but you have to blame someone though, dont you?
More soon! Quote:
Originally Posted by gustka48 I've already commented, but I can't wait to read more!!! I love this story Hello Again Alyssa! Haha, dont worry, i like reading your comments
I really happy that you like my story enough to double post
More soon i promise..im going to start writing it now! Me thinks!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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04-09-2010, 06:06 PM
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#105 (permalink)
| Lobalug
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Jakarta
Posts: 171
Hogwarts RPG Name: Shirako Takamoto |
thats good
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04-10-2010, 12:54 AM
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#106 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Yessssss! More soon Lol, well.. I shan't blame Ron I'll blame... VOLDEMORT! Yes, yes. It's all his fault *nods head* |
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04-13-2010, 11:03 AM
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#107 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by takato matsuda thats good Heyy...Welcome
Thank you Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Yessssss! More soon Lol, well.. I shan't blame Ron I'll blame... VOLDEMORT! Yes, yes. It's all his fault *nods head* Haha...Yeshhhh lets blame Voldemort....We blame you!!
lol buttt yeahhh dont blame Ron..he cant help his feelings...can he?? CHAPTER 11 This is Dedicated to Cassiopia Malfoy, for being a great reader "I caught them red handed.." Blah blah blah "...They were kissing!!" Blah blah blah "That Mudbloo.."
Draco whipped round to face Pansy, his face angry "Dont you dare call Hermione a mudblood" He spat at her.
He was annoyed with her stories, he could tell she was making them up. He stood and walked away
"You'll be sorry you picked her over me" Pansy called after him, some students turned from there conversations to stare at her.
Draco ignored her and walked out, away. He sighed, she wouldnt do that, would she? He asked himself sitting down on the damp grass outside the school. The low-set sun was shiny its rays across the lawn, birds were flying high over the forbbiden forest. Seeing them Draco automaticlly though of the first time he had gone in there, his first year. He had wanted to get the trio into trouble, whilse accidently landing himself in it too. He hadnt liked Hermione then, he couldnt think why. "Hey" Someone said quitely behind him. Hermione sat down next to him, pulling her legs to her chest, laying her head on her legs. She began to pull little grass shreads from the ground, while not looking at Draco. "Hey, you ok?" He asked, slightly concerned, moving a little closer to her. "We have to talk Draco" She replyed quitely, finally looking at him, he stopped in his tracks. "If its about that rumour Pansy is trying to tell me, well i dont believe it!"
Hermione's eyes looked less troubled, but she spoke "It-it wasn't a lie, it-it did happen. And-and Pansy did catch us..." She gulped before rushing into her next sentence, "I didnt want it to happen, he just kissed me, i-i couldnt...I-i didn't..." she was unable to finish her sentence, tears wer running down her cheeks, she gave a small sob.
Draco pulled her into his arms, and cradled her, "Its ok Hermione" Was all he said. "Arnt you mad? Arnt you going to finish it"
More tears fell from her eyes, she quickly whipped them away and stood up. Looking at him once she ran back towards the castle. "I would never" Draco replyed watching her go, he didnt shout it, he didnt run after her. He too put his head in his lap and watched the grass again, thinking. "Draco, i wasn't lieing you know" Pansy purred in his ear, sitting down next to him, resting her head on his shoulder. He pulled away, standing up. "Leave me alone" Pansy stood. "Draco when are you going to see that she's nothing, that its destiny for us to be together" She breathed in his ear "Leave me alone Pansy, we were never anything, and we never will"
Pansy smiled smugly, "Do you want me to tell your father about your lovely little thing with a mudblood?" "Leave her alone"
His mind was racing, what his father might do to him if he found out, what he'd do to Hermione. He shivered. "Think it over, i know your choose the right person"
She kissed him lightly on the cheek and walked away. He fell to the floor, tears in his eyes, he couldnt let anything happen to her, he loved her. There was only one thing he needed to do, end it.
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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04-13-2010, 02:03 PM
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#108 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
oh that Pansy Parkinson! She is such a blackmailer!!!good one...pams when you can...
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04-13-2010, 02:40 PM
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#109 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
All this stories when Pansy blackmails Draco to separate from the one he loves. Ugghhhhhh! I want to murder her. Do you mind if I do? I love it as always, I feel so bad for Draco and Hermione..
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04-13-2010, 05:26 PM
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#110 (permalink)
| DoM Sea Serpent
Join Date: Sep 2009
Posts: 41,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD First Year | Mommy of 3 <3 <3 <3
Evvie! It's cute I like it...but now Draco has a decision to make!! I wonder who will chose who. Part of me hops that Draco will leave Hermione! Just because I love Ron! But great job!
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04-13-2010, 05:39 PM
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| Bundimun
Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: california:)
Posts: 32
Hogwarts RPG Name: Shanqisha Roberts |
this is so cute, i love hermy/draco fics, theyre adorable ! & oh geez ... PANSY.
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04-13-2010, 05:52 PM
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#112 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by harita oh that Pansy Parkinson! She is such a blackmailer!!!good one...pams when you can... Thanks...and yeahhh i agree...I really dont like Pansy.... -shakes head- Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy All this stories when Pansy blackmails Draco to separate from the one he loves. Ugghhhhhh! I want to murder her.
Do you mind if I do? I love it as always, I feel so bad for Draco and Hermione.. Ahhh...i see im not the only person with a story were Pansy blackmails...Sorry about that!
Yeshhh you could murder her...But she's needed for the story...sorry maybe someother time
Pansy: Heyy.. -angry stare- anyway she couldnt muder me, im so much better!
Awww thanks...yea i feel bad for the love couple to...lets see whats in store for them..shall we Quote:
Originally Posted by gustka48 Evvie! It's cute I like it...but now Draco has a decision to make!! I wonder who will chose who. Part of me hops that Draco will leave Hermione! Just because I love Ron! But great job! Thanks Alyssa
Ohh yeahhh i hate having to decide on something... Well maybe...i Love Ron too..
Ron: Blushes
Draco: Angry stare
Lets wait and see
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Originally Posted by spartanlove this is so cute, i love hermy/draco fics, theyre adorable ! & oh geez ... PANSY. Heyy...Welcome
Thanks for the comment
Awww yeahhh i love them too...they come second to Harry/ginny fics
Yeahhh what had Pansy gone and done now....-shakes head-
More soon
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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04-20-2010, 11:25 AM
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#113 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: BST (GMT +1 for DST)
Posts: 768
Hogwarts RPG Name: Nico Phoenix First Year |
Sorry it took me a while to read it but it's really good
And would you mind if I killed Pansy before you finished the story? Sorry, I just hate her |
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04-20-2010, 01:34 PM
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#114 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
^I'll help you kill her Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 Ahhh...i see im not the only person with a story were Pansy blackmails...Sorry about that!
Yeshhh you could murder her...But she's needed for the story...sorry maybe someother time
Pansy: Heyy.. -angry stare- anyway she couldnt muder me, im so much better!
Awww thanks...yea i feel bad for the love couple to...lets see whats in store for them..shall we Haha... I don't have any Pansy blackmails! but I have Pansy's kid blackmailing someone lol.
Daaarn! Okay. I'll let her live and won't kill her,
Me: I couldn't murder you Pansy, I'm not that type of person dearie. Anyways there is some redemption for you
I guess we will.. I hope nothing bad happens too my perfect couple! *whacks Pansy with a mallet*
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04-20-2010, 08:55 PM
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#115 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Eradication Sorry it took me a while to read it but it's really good
And would you mind if I killed Pansy before you finished the story? Sorry, I just hate her Thats ok Dray...Welcome.
To be honest i dont like her much either...but sorry no...maybe at the end?? Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy ^I'll help you kill her
Haha... I don't have any Pansy blackmails! but I have Pansy's kid blackmailing someone lol.
Daaarn! Okay. I'll let her live and won't kill her,
Me: I couldn't murder you Pansy, I'm not that type of person dearie. Anyways there is some redemption for you
I guess we will.. I hope nothing bad happens too my perfect couple! *whacks Pansy with a mallet* Bahaha
Ohhh Pansy kid blackmail's...i wanna read this -nodss-
Pansy:-glares- How dare you!!
Me: LOL!
Yeahh i dont want anything too bad to happen...well im the writer i decide! LOL! lets see what my mind comes up with this time! I shall try and post ASAP...Butt with soo much homework, and my exams soon it may be hard for me...lets see shall we. Thanks for reading all!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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04-21-2010, 01:23 AM
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#116 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Me: I do dare!
Hehe.. Well.. I'll be waiting for the update
Oooh for Pansy's kid blackmail that's in my Character story Tessa's Loathing.. Somewhere in the middle of it hehe
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04-23-2010, 07:34 PM
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#117 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. SPOILER!!! {Sorry for the wait...School, coursework, exam Prep...etc etc...Its taken me ages to get to write. Ive written this in like a hour...{spoiler} Hope you like} "Hermione, Can i talk to you?"
Draco asked quitely, Slightly touching her arm, She turned to face him, a smile on her face. All seemed forgotten about her crying. Draco could feel Pansy's eyes baring into the back of his head, it was very iritating. "Can we go for a walk?" He asked, looking towards the ground, only one thing was on his mind. His father. "Sure" She said happly.
She slipped her hand into his, leding the way. He wanted so much to keep hold of the hand, spin her around and off her feet. To kiss her passionatly on the lips. He did none of these. Instead he withdrew his hand and put them in his pockets, Hermione looked at him quizzenly. They carryed on walking, stopping short of the giant lake. "Are you alright Draco"
She asked kindly, bending to pull grass from the ground. He watched her, seeing her hair gleaming in the low sunset, how her hand brushed over stray grass strands. How she stood and brushed her legs down for grass. How she moved her eyes from her legs to his face, serching.
He took all this is, breathing deeply, He couldn't do it, but he needed to. To save her. But How. He nodded. "Im sorry Hermione, but im breaking up with you. I just dont love you anymore"
He was surprised at how his voice didnt shake. He searched her face hungerly,
waiting for the outburst, the tears. All of which didn't come. She nodded her head once, stepping forward to kiss him once on the cheek and turned and walked away. No words spoken.
Draco watched her leave, tears in his eyes, he couldn't believe he had done it, all to save her life, but he hated himself. "Draco.." {what do you think?}
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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04-23-2010, 07:43 PM
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#118 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
*kills Pansy* I'm sooo close to tears! I feeeeel sooo bad for Hermione! And Draco!
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04-23-2010, 07:50 PM
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#119 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Fab pams pams pams !!!!!!!!!!
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04-24-2010, 02:52 AM
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| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
oh nice one...and is that Pansy yet again with
"Draco..."????arggg...oh no...can be Malfoy Sr.too...pams....
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04-27-2010, 05:11 PM
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#121 (permalink)
| DoM Sea Serpent
Join Date: Sep 2009
Posts: 41,122
Hogwarts RPG Name: TBD First Year | Mommy of 3 <3 <3 <3
AWWW! So sad! I wanted Draco to leave Hermy, but not I'm sad that he did!
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04-30-2010, 07:41 PM
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#122 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee. Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy *kills Pansy* I'm sooo close to tears! I feeeeel sooo bad for Hermione! And Draco! Ahhh, the story is almost finished...Soo you cna kill her then..with my blessing gunna miss the story though. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Fab pams pams pams !!!!!!!!!! Thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by harita oh nice one...and is that Pansy yet again with
"Draco..."????arggg...oh no...can be Malfoy Sr.too...pams.... Well im just about to post he next chapter...so you shall see then. Thanks for reading Quote:
Originally Posted by gustka48 AWWW! So sad! I wanted Draco to leave Hermy, but not I'm sad that he did! Awww ALyssa...its ok..... More coming up! CHAPTER TWELVE "Hermione, Can i talk to you?" Draco asked quitely, Slightly touching her arm, She turned to face him, a smile on her face. All seemed forgotten about her crying. Draco could feel Pansy's eyes baring into the back of his head, it was very iritating. "Can we go for a walk?" He asked, looking towards the ground, only one thing was on his mind. His father. "Sure" She said happly, slipping her hand into his, she led the way. He wanted so much to keep hold of the hand, spin her around and off her feet. To kiss her passionatly on the lips. He did none of these. Instead he withdrew his hand and put them in his pockets, Hermione looked at him quizzenly. They carryed on walking, stopping short of the giant lake. "Are you alright Draco" She asked kindly, bending to pull grass from the ground. He watched her, seeing her hair gleaming in the low sunset, how her hand brushed over stray grass strands. How she stood and brushed her legs down for grass. How she moved her eyes from her legs to his face, serching.
He took all this is, breathing deeply, He couldn't do it, but he needed to. To save her. But How. He nodded. "Im sorry Hermione, but im breaking up with you. I just dont love you anymore" He was surprised at how his voice didnt shake. He searched her face hungerly, waiting for the outburst, the tears. All of which didn't come. She nodded her head once, stepping forward to kiss him once on the cheek and turned and walked away. No words spoken.
Draco watched her leave, tears in his eyes, he couldn't believe he had done it, all to save her life, but he hated himself. "Draco.."
She said, her annoying voice reached him before she did. He quickly whiped his tears and turned around, suddenly angry. "What do you want Pansy?" He asked her, strolling away. She jogged after him, he could hear her feet hit the grass. She grabbed his hand and pulled him round to face her. She kissed him full on the mouth.
Draco yanked himself away from her, whiping his mouth as he went. "What was that for?" He asked angerly, glaring at her. "Well now you go rid of that Mudblood.." "Don't call her a mudblood!" "...Fine, now you got rid of her, we can finally be together" She smiled "Just because me and Hermione are not together anymore, doesn't me we are. I ended it for her" He turned and stormed off, leaving Pansy on her own.
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Hermione gasped from her hiding place, tears were rolling down her cheek. She quickly whipped them away and stood up. She had stormed off, not saying a word to him, not wanting for him to see her cry, to see she was weak. She had waited till she was a saf distance away before she let the tears fall. She coldn't believe it was true, no, she couldn't believe Harry and Ron were right. She had just prepared herself to go find them, tell them, even she she didn't want to. But she say Her, Pansy Parkinson, walking towards him, She needed to see. She had followed.
Hermione now found herself walking back towards the castle, happy that Draco still loved her, Sad that they weren't together any longer. But also confused. What had he meant? She pounded on the thought, almost walking in Ron. He grabbed her shoulders to steady her. "Whoa, 'Mione. You alright?" He asked looking into her eyes. "Im fine Ron" "Then why are there tears in your eyes?"
She sighed, "You were right Ron, Draco ended it..", She couldn't keep it from them. "I knew it, that Weasel!" "No, wait Ron, I followed Pansy when she went to go talk to him, What i heard was confusing." She shook her head at the memory. She need to speak to him. "Look Ron, lets go find Harry, then talk. But i need to Speak to Draco" She took his hand and pulled him towards the Gryffindor common room. EDIT! I just had a thought, im my VM, i said 'Its Finished!!' Just so you guys dont get scared...the story is NOT over yet!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back.
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04-30-2010, 07:46 PM
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#123 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Pams pams pams !!!!!
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05-01-2010, 04:17 PM
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#124 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
OHMIGOSH! THAT STUPID COW!
Oh and thank you for letting me kill Pansy-poo!
I'm glad that Hermione knows the truth.. Well, the semi-truth
IT'S ALMOST OVER! It's wonderful!
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05-01-2010, 07:02 PM
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| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
nice...that's what i was thinking...you couldnt leave us like that in the middle...:O... ...good one...pams when you can...
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