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07-17-2006, 03:58 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| Life Has Moments - Sa16+ hi! most of you know me as Dani or Danielle, and hi im her! i am writing a D/Hr ff! this is a song/lyrics orientated ff so the chapters will be song titles and at the end of the chapters, there will be lyrics from the song. the chapters will also be written in Draco and Hermione's POV. please read and reply! Chapter 1: Wonderful- (Ja Rule f/ Ashanti and R. Kelly) I hesitated before knocking on the door and thought for a second. Only this morning I noticed how much my physical appearance changed this summer. My mom finally tried to help me get out of my frizzy-hair reputation, so my hair is straight. And my body...well....do I even have to like think about it? Never mind.. I knocked on the door.
"HERMIONE JANE!!! Oh my dear, I wouldn't've recognized you if I Ronnie didn't tell me you were coming. How ARE you?" Mrs. Weasley bombards me with a hug before ushering me inside. "Great. And you?" "Oh just fine, deary. Don't worry about poor old Mrs. Weasley.. Let met take a good look at you." Mrs. Weasley looks at me up and down. "What a gorgeous young lady you're growing up to be, Hermione. Let me call down Harry and Ron. Ginny's in the kitchen. She was so lonely this summer." I walked into the kitchen while Mrs. Weasley yelled at the boys to come downstairs. Ginny was polishing a broomstick on the table. "Hey Gin," I said to her. She looked up and just stared at me for a moment. "Oh my God. Hermione? Oh my God. Hermione!!" She jumped up and hugged me tight. "How are you doing?" I asked once I regained my breath. All Weasley's hugs are alike. "Obviously not as great as you! Look at yourself!" Ginny said, walking around me. "Gin, I really haven't changed that much," I blushed. Ginny laughed. "What?" I ask. She pointed at the doorway. I turned around and saw that Harry and Ron were standing there, staring at me with their mouths wide open. I rolled my eyes. "Oh stop it the both of you. I know you're smart enough to know that if you stop breathing you'll eventually die." Harry smiled at me. "Nice to see you, Hermione." He walked over and hugged me. "Ron? Are you going to say hello to me? Or are you going to keep staring because it's really making me feel uncomfortable." Ron turned bright red. "Um, hi?" If it wasn't for the money, cars, movie stars and jewels and all these things I got, I wonder, hey would you still want me? Chapter 2- I Write Sins Not Tragedies (PANIC! At the Disco)* Chapter 3- Fighter: Christina Aguilera Chapter 4: Unwritten - Natasha Bedingfield Chapter 5- SOS: Rihanna Chapter 6: Control Myself- LL Cool J f/ J.Lo Chapter 7: Kisses Don't Lie- Rihanna* Chapter 8: When You're Mad - Ne-Yo Chapter 9: Enough Cryin' - Mary J. Blige* Chapter 10: I'm Tryna - Omarion* Chapter 11: Impossible - Kanye West Chapter 12: Obsession - Frankie J f/ Babybash Chapter 13: Life Has Moments - Aly & Aj Chapter 14: Heard 'Em Say - Kanye West f/ Adam Levine Chapter 15: Night Air - Teddy Geiger Chapter 16: Me & U - Cassie* Chapter 17: Unfaithful - Rihanna Chapter 18: Signs - Snoop Dogg f/ Justin Timberlake Chapter 18: Signs - Snoop Dogg f/ Justin Timberlake (P2) Chapter 19: Like You - Bow Wow f/ Ciara Chapter 20: Deja Vu - Beyonce f. Jay - Z* Chapter 21: Love - Keyshia Cole Chapter 22: Chemicals React - Aly & Aj Chapter 23: Icebox - Omarion* Chapter 24: Promise - Ciara Chapter 24: Hurt - Christina Aguilera
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07-17-2006, 05:40 PM
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| Puffskein
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YES! I LOVE IT YOU HAVE TO POST MORE!!!!
love
Adrienne
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07-17-2006, 10:37 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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thanks much! i will wait for more replies to post!!!
*Danielle*
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07-18-2006, 03:15 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| DANIELLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FOUND IT! VERY EASILY! I love it already. Loved it when Harry and Ronniekins just stared at her. She must look really amazing now that her hair is straight. PAMS!!!!
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07-18-2006, 03:40 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| hello hello! amie! thanks so sosoosos much! i think i wanna post since i am xcited about this FF! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!: Chapter 2- I Write Sins Not Tragedies (PANIC! At the Disco)* I opened my letter. And to my luck, a Head Boy badge fell out. Just what I needed. Being in charge and having "responsibilities". I want to get out of Hogwarts as quick as possible, and this will definitley slow things down. I shook my hair out of my eyes and pulled on a shirt. Today I was going down to Diagon Alley to meet Blaise. Mum was at Aunt Bella's so I was going to do whatever I pleased. Not that anything's ever stopped me before. I grabbed my ThunderStike 5000 (newest and most expensive broom yet) and walked out onto the balcony. I kicked off and flew to Diagon Alley. I met Blaise at Floretescue's. We talked about Qudditch on our way to Florish and Blott's. "Got a new girl Malfoy?" Blaise asked me randomly. "No." "I got my eye on this girl. A real looker, see. I just don't think she knows who I am yet." I rolled my eyes. "Blaise, you couldn't get a girl if she was blind." We walked into the bookstore. "Oho look who's talking. You don't exactly have a girlfriend either," Blaise shot back with a smirk. "I haven't found someone worth my time," I said simply. I've been with plenty of girls, no doubt. But I get bored with them easily. We have a good snog, maybe go farther, but then that's it. And half the other girls who think I have it for them are ugly and clingy. As I reached up for a book on the shelf, someone bumped into me. "Hey! Watch it!" I turned around. A girl bent over to pick up the book she dropped. "Sor-" She looked up at me. She had straight long hair and chocolate brown eyes. "Whoa. Look who it is. Granger? By time you cleaned up. Weren't you frizzy haired? Buck-toothed?" Blaise had wide eyes. I could see her fingers grip the side of the book harder. I snickered out of habit. She glared at me. It was evil, it was angry. It was kind of, hot. And with that vile and disgusting thought, I did not stop myself from saying what I did next. "Now that you're one step up from Ape, Mudblood, you and Weaselbee will be perfect for each other. Run along now, I think he's calling for you. Telling you to have a good look at a nice rundown shack he's got picked out for the pair of you," I sneered. Blaise and I laughed while Granger turned and walked away No, It's must better to face these kind of things with a voice of poise and rationality *thats the end of the chapter, but i had to say that i absolutley love P!ATD even if i am more of on the hip hop/rap kind of things O:-) more of the chapters will be named after hip hop-ey songs tho...&& i kno that the posts have been short so far, but they will get longer, this is only the beginning.
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07-18-2006, 05:01 AM
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AWESOME so far!!!! PAMS!!
~ Sarah
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07-18-2006, 01:46 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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i love it! It's soooooo Draco...
Pams!
Adrienne
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07-19-2006, 08:47 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| Ooooh, I love the beginning of that song. But then it turns all rock-ish and guitars start playing their heads, or in this case, strings, off and it's really annoying. The beginning is very neat. But anyway, Hermy should have said something back instead of just glaring at Draco. PAMS!!!
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07-19-2006, 11:50 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| thank youuuuuuu!: Chapter 3- Fighter: Christina Aguilera I forced myself to not cry. These past seven years, I have gotten used to all this taunting and fighting with Draco Malfoy. But sometimes, he really can push the line. As I paid for my books, Malfoy's head was still on my mind. It was really annoying, I mean, I even went to the lengths of hitting the side of my head to see if he came out. Of course, Harry and Ron asked me if I needed to have a lie down and Ginny asked me if I was going through some kind of mental illness, and I told them I'd probably be fine in time. As we stepped inside Fred and George's joke shop, I remembered something. I remembered the way that Malfoy looked at me when he first saw me. It was sort of an amazed expression as he looked me up and down (totally gross!). Then when he realized it was me, Hermione, it changed to a totally shocked expression. Usually he's the first one to insult me but that ugly git Blaise beat him to it. Malfoy never lets anyone take his first dibbs on insulting people. Especially me. As I played with a stupid fake wand Fred and George sell, I felt confidence in me once again. Not just because Fred and George's stupid fake wand is a waste of time and that if I was to be them I would probably come up with something way better to have people waste their money on something stupid, I vowed to stand up to Malfoy next time. Even if it meabns slapping him and not letting his grey eyes get to me. Makes me work a little bit harder, makes my skin a little bit thicker, makes me that much stronger, thanks for makin me a fighter |
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07-20-2006, 07:58 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Yes! Go Hermione and her insane need to slap Draco!! Silly Draco...ahh...the beginning of young love. Someone should tell him that the way to Hermoine's heart is probably not looking her up and down..ahem ahem...awesome post!!
Lurve,
Adrienne
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07-21-2006, 09:35 PM
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yeah! u go hermy! awesome post!
PAMS!
~ Sarah
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07-22-2006, 02:40 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: kissing posters of E
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| Awesome post! Tut tut, poor Hermy. PAMS!!!
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07-23-2006, 05:58 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| i feel uber bad that these posts are short, and i think this is the last uber short post for awhile. love ya'll 2 death: Chapter 4: Unwritten - Natasha Bedingfield Finally I'm here. The sooner I'm in, the sooner I'm out. Now all I have to do is find out who Head Girl is. Hopefully someone attractive. The Start of Term speech started. Blah, blah, blah. I lost interest with the first word said. My eyes scanned the Great Hall. I nearly jumped out of my seat when I felt Pansy grab my hand from underneath the table. That's enough to make me upchuck my food. I shook her off and my eyes went back around the Hall. My eyes fell on the Gryffindor table. I immediatley found her. Well how could I not? There was a bright glare bouncing off her chest. Is that a Head Girl badge? No. Yes. No. Oh Merlin it is. This year shall be rather....tasteful. Through my blonde bangs, I locked my eyes on her. Five minutes later, she flipped her hair back and saw me staring. She didn't look away, so I smirked. She bit her lip and looked away. Wait a minute, Draco. Why are you doing this? Are you flirting with Granger? No. She's a Mudblood. Stop being attracted to her. No one else no one else can speak the words on your lips. Drench yourself in what's unspoken. Live your life with arms wide open. Today is where your book begins...The rest is still unwritten.. |
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07-23-2006, 06:40 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| Ohhhhh, I love Unwritten. I don't like the music video for it, though, it's boring. But anyway, awesome post. No, Draco, continue being attracted to her!! PAMS!
Amie |
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07-23-2006, 08:52 PM
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| Guest |
awesome-ness-ess!
PAMS
~ Sarah
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07-24-2006, 04:32 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In A Book....;)
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yAy that was good
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07-24-2006, 06:23 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Quite awesome, if I do say so myself. "Am I flirting with Granger..." hmm, malfoy. And he calls himself smart =)
Love it!
Adrienne
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07-25-2006, 05:01 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| thank you, thank you *curtsies* now for the post!:: Chapter 5- SOS: Rihanna I walked through the Portrait Hole of my new dorm. I can't believe Malfoy was staring at me through the whole Start of Term feast. Who does he think he is playing with my mind? Oh, I know his games alright. And I feel used. I can't believe I'm still thinking about him. It's like he's become my new - Oh. My. God. Is this a dream? I pinch myself. Ow. Sadly, no it's not. So in this stupidly realistic life, Malfoy is sitting on the couch flipping through a book. "You? No....no, no, no....You?" I managed to say. "Yes..me. I will be sharing this insanely small Dormitory with you for an entire bloddy year. It seems I have been blessed with bad luck," Malfoy sighed. He snapped the book shut and walked towards me. "Look, I-" I started to say, but then he was so close to me I could feel his warm breath. In fact, he grabbed my wrist so I couldn't inch away. "Me and you are going to have to tolerate each other now, alright? So for that to happen...stay out of my way and out of my buisness. But see, I could do anything I wanted with you...But I don't want to because your filth to me." Same old Malfoy. I guess he hasn't changed. I stared into his grey eyes. They were kind of...no. I couldn't bring myself to think that! Not right after when he called me filth. For a split second, I found him leaning in closer to me. And during that split second, I thought he was going to kiss me. But then he whispered, "You really do look different Granger." And with that, he turned and walked up to his sleeping room. And I just stood there and thought. Why the heck was he so close to me? EW! And why did he say I looked different? What, did he care? He called me filth, he couldnt possibly care! As much as this wrongfully sounds, was Draco Malfoy attracted to me? EWWWWWWWWWW! And with that thought, I ran upstairs and took a looooong bath to try to wash all these dirty, gross, disturbing thoughts out and off of me. But it didn't work. S-O-S please someone help me it's not healthy for me to feel this Y-O-U are makin this hard I can't take it see it don't feel right. |
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07-25-2006, 06:48 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| Lmao, ewwwwww. Poor little Hermy. If only she knew. PAMS!!
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07-26-2006, 03:20 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Atlantis...that's right, I found it!
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Haha I love it! I just began reading this and I'm already hooked. I've been looking for a good fic to read for ages. WELL DONE! Keep writing its awesome!
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07-26-2006, 06:58 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2005
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i love SOS and unwritten!!! these are really good posts keep it up!!! PAMS!!
--(I'm Danielle too.. lol)
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07-27-2006, 03:39 AM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| Amie- Hah. Poor Hermione. Yeah. You won't feel that way later on in the story. :-P thanks chica. weasley6- omg, thanks SO much. that means a lot to me! glad you're enjoying it!! Danielle 2: hahaha. thats so cool. you're the 2nd Danielle i've met on this site. weird... o.O i love those songs too.......im a music junkie *rocks out to Ciara* thanks!! i'll get a post up in the next few days...i have to read 2 books this summer before school (Aug. 21) AND do summaries on them. so retarded. im still on book 1 but have 2 more chapters to go. wish me luck ;-) *Danielle* |
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07-27-2006, 03:47 PM
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| Puffskein
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It was perfect!! i loved it!
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07-27-2006, 11:13 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: wishing i was somewhere else..
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| thanks! here's a new post: Chapter 6: Control Myself- LL Cool J f/ J.Lo God it's fun messing with Granger's head. I pulled off my shirt and laid back onto my double king sized bed with dark green silk comforters. Mmm, home. But seriously, why did I let myself get so close to her? She's a Mudblood after all, and a pureblood like me shan't have mixing. I know I'm one to go for beautiful girls, so that would be pretty shallow if I got with her just for that. But I wouldn't. A few times thse past years I've found myself thinking her brains, comebacks, loyalty, bravery, and fierceness were cute. Oh dear Lord what am I DOING!?! Most importantly, what am I THINKING!?!? I need to find a girl, fast, before I lose my mind to a Mudblood. I jumped up and grabbed a piece of parchment out of my bookbag. Blaise- Know any good Slytherin takes? Has to be hott (but you know that). Oh yeah and HAS to be into me. But then again...Who isn't? -Draco Was I this desparate? Apparently so. I rolled it up and told my owl to give it to Blaise inside the Castle. He better reply quick because the thought of me thinking Granger was pretty enough for my taste is enough to make anyone blow chunks. Luckily, Blaise replied a few minutes later. Draco- Serena Franklin, a tall 7th year curly brunette. I heard her talking about you with some other girl, so I asked her if she wouldn't possibly mind dating you. Said she heard you were a good kisser and wants you to meet her at 10 tonight in Slytherin dungeons. -Blaise What a loyal friend. Getting me a date on command. I'll remember that. If only getting a date for him was that easy. Haha. Its hard to control myself, It's hard to control myself. You got, you got, you got, what it takes to make this boy be bad. |
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07-28-2006, 04:04 AM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: u.s.a.
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New Reader, I love your fic. I love most fics with Hermonie and Draco in it, can't wait for more! Pams.
~Toni
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