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03-08-2007, 06:41 PM
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03-08-2007, 07:32 PM
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03-08-2007, 07:52 PM
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AN: I just discovered that I am posting way to much way too fast, so unfortunately I need to slow done on my posting a smidgen until a can create a bigger buffer. Don't worry that doesn't mean that I am not going to post at all, just not as much as I have been  Don't worry though, I am going to write like crazy the next few days and this weekend, so everything should be fine again by next week! Chapter 29: The Closed Ward Minerva and Harry appeared in the alley next to the run down department store that Harry knew hid St. Mungus Hospital for Magical Maladies. Minerva quickly waved her wand over Sirius and he transformed into a small baby which she handed to Harry. She then did the same over both her and Harry. Harry watched in amazement as Minerva’s features began to change. She appeared to be going back in time. He gasped at the beautiful girl of about 20 standing in front of him. She was tall but very slender. She had long chesnut hair that was held out of her face in a loose knot at the nape of her neck. She pushed a few strands out of her face and behind her small ears. Her slender fingers brushing against her flawless skin. Harry's moth hit the floor as he stood mesmerized by this beautiful creature before him. "She puts Fluer to shame!" Harry thought to himself. He looked into her deep blue eyes and saw so much misheviness and humore there that he frowned, snapping himself out of his worship of the beautiful goddess before him. Muttering darkly to himself, Harry followed Minerva awkwardly holding the infant, which was still bound and stiff as a board. He conjured a blanket and wrapped it around the child so as to not appear too out of the ordinary. “What is this?” Harry hissed at Minerva when he saw his reflection in the glass as they waited for St. Mungos to open for them. Standing where he should have been was a tall muscular tanned man. He had long wavy dark brown hair and looked like he should feel comfortable on a beach. His frown deepened as he noticed his angular features, and the prominence of his clenched jaw. His gaze reached his own green eyes, and then to the faint outline of a scar on his forhead, "Gawd!" He exclaimed, "Tell me this isn't what I am going to look like in 10 years, I look like Lockhart!" He mimed gagging. Minerva giggled coyly at him while twirling a strand of long chesnut hair that had worked its way out of her loose pony tail at the nape of her neck, but did not offer an explanation. Muttering darkly to himself he followed behind her. As they entered the building, a motherly looking Witch bustled up to them. Since her unjust imprisonment for the assassination of Broderick Bode, Miriam Stout had lost her faith in the government being able to properly protect and serve the people. She had become one of the many secret members of the Order of the Phoenix and maintained her position at St. Mungo’s to insure proper care for any injured Order members. “What have we here?” She asked in a concerned voice. She knew full well who they had with them, but for appearances, Minerva recited how the infant was a muggle relation and had gotten into some Bulbadox Powder. Sure enough, when the healer pulled back the blankets, the child was covered in horrible looking blisters. “We put him into a deep sleep so that he would not feel the pain.” Minerva said, noticing several curious looks, explaining why the child was not screaming in agony. “I know just what to do for him.” Miriam said soothingly taking the child from Minerva. As the followed the Healer into the hospital and toward the closed ward, Harry looked around searching the crowded room for Tonks. He saw an old hunched crone of a woman wink at him and mouth the words, “Wotcher Harry.” He nodded back to her as she hobbled out of the hospital, her back bent so far as she leaned over her cane that for a moment he was afraid that her rather large hooked nose would scrape on the floor. He shook his head in wonderment. As Miriam led them through the hospital, Harry remembered the few times that he had been here in the past. He frowned as the motherly witch led them through the doors of the closed ward. He was curiouse as to why she was taking them there, but then realized that it would be far more private and less of a chance that they would be overheard. They finally found an empty private room. Miriam closed the door and locked it. They walked to the bed and she drew the curtain around it. Minerva waved her wand and the three of them returned to normal. She nodded to Harry and he lifted the spell off of Sirius, but left him bound. He instantly began screaming and trying to kick his leg as if kicking off the creature. Just as suddenly as he started he stopped, realizing that he was no longer even in the Ministry of Magic. “Thank Merlin, you saved me.” He gave a great sigh of relief as Miriam began to examine him. “I am fine.” He assured her. “Just a precaution, Mr. Black. For our safety as much as yours.” She told him, not pausing in her examination. He chuckled bitterly. “Well,” He said to her, “like the dementors, the evil of the veil can not sense animals, only humans. They bothered me for the first five minutes I was there and as Harry were pulling me out.” He said motioning gratefully to Harry. Harry breathed a sigh of relief. His Godfather was whole, sound and intact. He had not been contaminated. “You mean you stayed in your dog form the entire time you were in the veil?” Minerva asked in awe. “Yeah.” Sirius said nonchalantly. “Except for the fleas, I actually prefer it.” He said laughing. “For not being able to do anything at all, the time actually went by fairly fast. Speaking of which, I am famished!” He said enthusiastically, even going as far as to lick his chops. Laughing, Miriam shook her head. “I think he is no worse for wear, however I would like to observe him for a while, but not here.” She looked around as if she expected assailants to jump out behind the curtains at any moment. Minerva had heard what she needed to hear. She again pulled out her wand and waved it over the three of them. The surfer Harry again picked up the baby this time awake and giggling, kicking his little legs. He wrapped him in the blanket and headed back outside. “I will come by and check on him, I have some time off coming to me, I think I just might go on vacation.” Miriam whispered out of the corner of her mouth. “See you tonight!” She whispered smiling at Harry and Minerva. She gave the baby one last pat on the head before heading back inside. Although neither spoke, they both knew that the decision had been made to first apparate to the Burrow, and then use the floo network to get back to Grimmuald Place.
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03-08-2007, 09:56 PM
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Ill edit when i finish reading your posts....but i love the whole ring idea, when i read it i imediately thought of LOTR, which i love.  Excellent post JulieAnn, i really envy your ability to write so good, i cant even write a sentance to save my life.  cant wait for your next post
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03-08-2007, 10:44 PM
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Originally Posted by michalice  Ill edit when i finish reading your posts....but i love the whole ring idea, when i read it i imediately thought of LOTR, which i love. Excellent post JulieAnn, i really envy your ability to write so good, i cant even write a sentance to save my life. cant wait for your next post
By the way any more fan fics planned for when you finish this I do have plans to right more fanfics when i am done with this one, not to mention I also have some ideas for some non-harry potter stories, who knows maybe I could become America's JK Rowling?! HAHAHA probably not, but I certainly am enjoying writing this one  I have seen your writing in RP settings, and you are not that bad Mich, jeez! It is surprising how similar this is to RP, just you are all the characters instead of just one  As far as writing goes, I am so glad that you like my writing, I have 4 years of Honors & AP English in High school and Creative writing classes in College to thank for that You are awesomeness! I love LotR too, not quite as much as Harry Potter, but it is close  I remember reading the books with my Mom when I was little, so I was ecstatic when the new movies came out. It will be a bit before I post again  I am posting faster than I can write, and only have a few chapters left before I run out, unless i get a whole bunch typed today, I probably won't post another chapter again until Monday, so please please please send me a muse! I am suffering an irritating case of writers block  | |
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03-09-2007, 03:14 AM
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I'm happy you didn't kill the twins. they rock
awesome posts
sirius is not evil and he is free 
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03-09-2007, 06:10 PM
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03-09-2007, 07:38 PM
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Originally Posted by danismine I'm happy you didn't kill the twins. they rock
awesome posts
sirius is not evil and he is free
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Roshni I am too really, I adore the twins, and it just wouldn't have been the same without them, and I will give you a bit of a teaser, they play a large role in the part that I am writing now, the are running interference, if you will, think Umbridge I agree, and he will get his big feast, but he does have to be kept hidding for his own protection for a bit, but not like he was before, they have learned from their mistakes. I will give you a little bit of a reprive, Sirius will meet James and Lupin soon, and when he does, the issue between them will have already come out I will attempt to hide my hints a little better Although I thought that one was pretty good, maybe it is just the case that you are steller  Now the questions is, was what she turned into what she used to look like, or was it completly fictional Quote:
Originally Posted by ZephansAthena So I finally caught up with the last three postings and am amazed how well it transitioned! Well done! I know it will be a while for the next post but I might go into my secretstash and find out You make me smile friend! I am glad that you are enjoying my story and consulting your secretstash is futile! I do have new parts done, maybe I will have you Beta them for me  Do you think you deserve it, well do ya? | |
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03-09-2007, 08:13 PM
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Wow, i've just finished reading this fan fic and i love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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03-09-2007, 09:38 PM
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You make me smile friend! I am glad that you are enjoying my story and consulting your secretstash is futile! I do have new parts done, maybe I will have you Beta them for me Do you think you deserve it, well do ya? [/QUOTE]
Of course I deserve it!! Where are you gonna find such a wonderful friend such as myself? (that was rheotorical) I think a beta would be fantastic!!
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03-09-2007, 09:56 PM
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Originally Posted by monkeytrouble Wow, i've just finished reading this fan fic and i love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. You are wonderful! Welcome, and thank you so much for reading my fic! I will be posting the next chapter either sometime this weekend, and if not then definitly on Monday, I did after all get two extra chapters done Quote:
Originally Posted by ZephansAthena Of course I deserve it!! Where are you gonna find such a wonderful friend such as myself? (that was rheotorical) I think a beta would be fantastic!! Well, I suppose, you are after all a very good friend, I guess I could give you the opportunity to Beta the next part, but we will see | |
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03-10-2007, 12:47 PM
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Originally Posted by JulieAnn His gaze reached his own green eyes, and then to the faint outline of a scar on his forhead, "Gawd!" He exclaimed, "Tell me this isn't what I am going to look like in 10 years, I look like Lockhart!" He mimed gagging.  That is hilarious! Yeah they saved Sirius
Uh, I can't wait to see why James and Remus are being so cold towards each other. Pams, please!
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03-12-2007, 02:03 AM
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Whew! I just finished all the new posts. They are great!!!! Once again THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING THE TWINS!!! I dont know about you but they make the books good (well so do the trio, and the adventureness of the books) But yeah I love the twins and I would be truely upset if they were dead So why are James and Lupin being so wierd around each other?  I hope everything is okay with them. HOPE YOU POST MORE SOON!!!!!!! Bye for now.
p.s. thanx for thinking im not a moron that really made my day. 
PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS! PAMS!PAMS!
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03-12-2007, 10:27 PM
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Originally Posted by Weasleygurl That is hilarious! Yeah they saved Sirius
Uh, I can't wait to see why James and Remus are being so cold towards each other. Pams, please! That is one of my favorite parts in the story so far It cracked me up while I was writing it. And I believe that James and Remus get sorted out in this next post, if not this one then the next one Quote:
Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY Whew! I just finished all the new posts. They are great!!!! Once again THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING THE TWINS!!! I dont know about you but they make the books good (well so do the trio, and the adventureness of the books) But yeah I love the twins and I would be truely upset if they were dead So why are James and Lupin being so wierd around each other? I hope everything is okay with them. HOPE YOU POST MORE SOON!!!!!!! Bye for now.
p.s. thanx for thinking im not a moron that really made my day.
PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS! PAMS!PAMS! You are so welcome! I am glad I didn't kill the twins either They do add a considerable amount of comic relief I didn't get to write as much as I wanted to, but I did write several pages, so as I promised, I will post! As soon as I finish doing some last minute edits! | |
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03-12-2007, 10:43 PM
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AN: I just realized that the Lupin and James confrontation is not this post or the next post, but the post after that and this is a shorter post I tried to combine the chapters, but I really couldn't, I'm sorry  So instead I will post this one and then another one latter on and then the Remus/James post first thing tommorrow morning.... Chapter 30: Sirius’ Surprise “Talk about timing.” Harry said has he appeared in Molly’s kitchen, his ring warm against his finger. He looked up at a small gasp. The Weasley family was standing still as statues, staring at the two intruders. “Ah, I’m glad that you are still here and traveling by floo,” Minerva said straightening her robes. “It is not safe to travel to Head Quarters any other way, I think.” Minerva said, ignoring the incredulous looks on the faces of the Weasleys. “Minerva?” Molly asked slowly, staring hard at them. Harry shot a questioning look to Minerva, and then burst out laughing. He now understood the puzzlement from the group of people in front of them. “You forgot to change us back.” He said laughing so hard he almost dropped the baby Sirius, who began to coo and giggle in understanding. “I didn’t forget.” Minerva said with a cross sigh as she waved her wand, “I wanted to stay that way.” She finished as she patted her tight bun at the nape of her neck. Ron was still staring mouth open at McGonagall. Harry pushed his jaw back up as he walked past him towards the grate. “Wait a minute Harry.” Hermione said, “What are we going to do about him?” She asked motioning to Sirius who was nonchalantly leaning against the wall. Harry thought for a moment and then smiled, “I know just the thing.” He said as he grabbed his Godfather’s arm and they disappeared. “Thanks for the warning.” Sirius said shaking his head slightly, “Where are we?” He asked. Before Harry could answer him, he exclaimed in mixed joy and horror, “By Merlin’s beard!” He led Sirius through the halls of his Godric’s Hollow home to the back room. “Any more surprises for me?” Sirius asked, slightly sarcastic. “Actually I do.” Harry said softly as he pushed open the door to the back office. “Hello Sirius.” Dumbledore said from his place on the wall. Sirius’ face began very pale and then bright red in anger. “When did this happen?” He whispered. Harry panicked at the look of raw fury on his Godfather’s face. “I will explain everything to you, but you really must calm down.” Dumbledore said pleasantly enough, however his words were more a command than a request. “I have to go to Head Quarter for the meeting, I would like you to explain everything that has happened since he has been gone, and I mean everything.” Harry said meaningfully to Dumbledore. “I am going to call Dobby in here as well to keep an eye on Sirius; he appears to be unaffected, but just to make sure.” Harry continued as if Sirius wasn’t even there. “Dobby!” Harry called. With a crack the house elf appeared smiling at Harry. “I need you to stay in here and watch this man. Do not let him escape, I don’t think he will try, but just in case, do you understand?” He asked the small house elf who was nodding vigorously. “Good.” He smiled at Dobby, who instantly turned and stared at Sirius. Sirius laughed at the ridiculousness of the situation. “I know why you have to do it.” Sirius said when Harry opened his mouth, an apologetic look on his face. Harry smiled at his Godfather, “I’m glad that you are back.” He smiled and was gone.
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03-12-2007, 11:59 PM
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ooo Sirius is gonna be so mad when Dumbledore tells him that Snape killed him. He will want to hunt him down for sure.
great post
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03-13-2007, 05:21 AM
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Yes...yes he will be slightly (<Sarcasm)angry when he finds out what Snapey did, no matter what Dumbledore tells him AN: So I was going through my story so far, and I realized that I had to combine some chapters, and in the process my number got all messed up, so from this point on, the numbering is correct (for the moment anyway ) So as promised her is the next small chunk, and then tomorrow morning will be a huge post! Chapter 29: The New Lord
On the other side of England, a man stared out the window of a beautiful home. Behind him the door opened “My, L-L-Lord?” The small mouse like man stuttered trying to get the other mans attention.
“What is it Peter?” He asked as he turned and stepped over the dead body of the muggle caretaker. “Get him out of here.” he motioned to the body. “He didn’t last very long did he?” The man smirked as he drew his cloak around him more.
“True.” Peter said blanching slightly at the body of the old man, “But he did fix the house up nicely.” He said uncertainly as he waived his wand, causing the body to float out of the room “Too bad Nagini isn’t here anymore, she could just eat it.” Peter thought silently to himself.
“What was that?” The cloaked man asked, anger creeping into his voice.
Peter ducked his head down, having forgotten momentarily how good this man was at Legilimency as he desperately tried to protect his mind from the other’s advances.
“Occlumency was never your strong point, the man drawled lazily.” Enjoying the torment he was causing on Peter. “And yes, I know you would rather be dead than to serve me, trust me, the time will come when I will most assuredly grant you that wish, however I still have a use for you.” He negligently flicked a non-existent piece of lint off of his robes as he turned fully to the cowering man.
“So, do you have any information?” He asked, knowing full well what Peter had to tell him.
“Why do you ask me, if you already know?” Peter asked bitterly before he could stop himself. Horrified he covered his mouth.
The man simply laughed, but did nothing. “I see you still feel a bit of loyalty to your old school chums.” He said as he searched Peter’s mind. “Ah, yes, Lily and James have returned from the dead.” He said his eyes gleaming at the thought of confronting Lily again. Would she once again look on him with disgust? “Probably,” he thought, “but it is of no matter.” He said allowed, “We already knew that based on the return of that wonderful muggle man.” His voice was thick with sarcasm.
“What is this?” He asked sitting up in the chair he had been lounging in. “What is this?!” He asked joyfully, “Is it true, did they really bring him back?” He began laughing, “So the group is finally reunited” He rubbed his hands together, his eyes gleaming. “Well, except for you of course, I wonder if they would believe that you had reformed and changed your ways, probably not.” He laughed at the sobs coming out of Peter as he lay on the floor gripping his head as if to squeeze the other man’s presence out of it.
“So,” The man said, rising to pace the room, “what are they up to, I wonder if they know that I have taken control of what few pathetic Death Eaters there are left, probably.” He spoke to himself as he walked the room.
Gasping for breath Peter sat up, relieved that his mind was now his own once again, at least for the moment.
“Their silly little Order is still together, they have proven that by getting a new Secret Keeper. I wonder which one it is. Not that I am surprised.” He added, pausing for a moment.
“Sirius, Lily and James have all returned, and they have some how managed to destroy the veil. I wonder how they knew how to do it; they had to get the information from somewhere. Probably Dumbledore.” He continued pacing. “I can’t get any information from Hogwarts they have that locked up tight, and the Members are being surprising careful about what they are doing.
“Who was at the Ministry Peter?” He asked the man even as he intruded on his mind, “Harry, Ron and Hermione, of course. Lily, James and Remus, no surprise there. Minerva, Molly, Tonks, Arthur, the Twins and Moody. And then Neville and Luna, tag along that they are, I bet Potter keeps them around to feel good about himself.” He sighed, “Well they were all people who loved Sirius or where there when he disappeared.”
He sat down in the chair in front of the fire, “We need a spy.” He said more to himself than Peter, who had managed to regain his composure. “We were fortunate before, we will not be again.”
“What will we do?” Peter asked the brooding man.
“We will wait. I am sure they know about us, at least partly, so we will wait. They will come.” He said as he stared into the fire, unsure of what to do next.
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Chapter 30: An Enemy Revealed
Harry arrived at Grimmuald place and knew he was the last one to arrive. He ran towards the door of the meeting room as Ron hurriedly motioned for him to get in before they locked the room.
He slipped inside just as the door clicked shut, and tried to ignore the disapproving look from Moody.
“Some interesting things have occurred tonight.” Minerva began, looking around the room. She paused as though trying to decide how much to tell them.
“Where is Dumbledore?” An impatient voice asked from the back. Harry turned and recognized the man as the rude man from the previouse meeting, he had meant to ask about him.
Minerva sighed, and drew herself up, as the preparing herself for the onslaught that would come. Harry began to shake his head, as if to tell her not to do it.
“I am getting to that Mr. Gudgeon, if you will but be patient.”
“Gudgeon.” Harry thought to himself, “Good that’s a start.” He couldn’t explain why, but he did not trust the man a bit.
“After our last meeting some interesting events took place. As most of you know, several of us were celebrating the birthdays of both Harry and Neville, and we were called away. After the meeting we went back over to the Weasley’s to continue the party.”
“I hope this isn’t why we were called here.” Gudgeon mumbled under his breath, but not under enough for more than half of the room to hear him. Dirty looks and scowls were shot his direction from around the room, Harry being one of them.
Harry was immensely surprised when Gudgeon looked up and shot him a look of such deep seated hatred. Harry frowned in surprise and looked around the room to see if anyone else noticed the man's glare.
“Davy that is enough!’ Minerva exclaimed. “If you can’t keep your comments to yourself, you will leave!” The shook her head as she continued.
“We received word from Dumbledore that he had received some information from some of the portraits at school that there might be a way to destroy the veil in the Department of Mysteries, which used to be used for evil. The Department of Mysteries has apparently been examining it, and would not be aware of what they could inadvertently unleash .” Minerva said, not showing any sign of remorse for bending the truth.
“Now how is that possible?” Gudgeon once again interrupted to ask, “Everyone knows that the Headmaster’s can not leave their portraits and likewise other portraits can not enter theirs.” He smirked as though putting everyone in their place.
Minerva began to open her mouth, but Hermione beat her too it. “Please keep your mouth shut if all you are going to do is persist in showing off your ignorance. You obviously don’t pay any attention to anything. If the Headmasters could not leave their portraits, then how does Dumbledore get here?” She asked him, effectively stomping him down.
Davy Gudgeon’s face flushed with anger. He muttered darkly as he abruptly stood and made his way to the door. “Let me out, now.” He growled to Moody.
Moody glanced at Minerva who nodded, every head turned towards the back watching as Moody cast a series of spells to allow Davy to leave.
“Let him leave the room, but not the house, take him upstairs Hagrid, don’t let him out of your sight.” The soft voice of Minerva blew through his mind.
Harry glanced back at her and smiled. She was adjusting the sleeves of her robes, having discreetly sent the message while the attention of the room was else where.
“This is going to take some getting used to.” Harry thought grinning to himself. He glanced at Hermione who was rubbing the side of her head, and he had to struggle to not start laughing.
Moody had finished with the spells and opened the door to allow Davy to leave, before the door had completely closed behind him, Harry was sure that he caught a glimpse Hagrid.
“Now where were we?” Minerva said when again the attention of the room had returned to her. She glanced about as if trying to get her bearings.
“Ah yes.” She said picking up her train of thought, “After receiving word from Dumbledore of the importance of promptly destroying the veil we hurried over to the Department of Mysteries to carry out his instructions. I wanted to explain this to you, so that you would know that we were not leaving you out, time was of the essence, and there was simply no time to call a meeting and discuss what would happen, we had to act, and we did.”
She said with such force, yet almost apologetic that Harry was not surprised to see the other members in the room nodding their heads in understanding.
Almost instantly after she said this, Harry understood why she had told them this.
“The fact that we did this in it’s self is not what is important, I would just as soon not bothered the Order with this information. Based on the nature of the veil and the Department of Mysteries, this information will never get out in public.” She said truthfully, “What is important however, is what came of these actions.”
Harry nodded, he know understood how difficult it would be to explain Sirius to everyone without their knowing what had happened, or at least an abridged verson.
Harry braced himself mentally, knowing that now would come the outburst from the Order. He looked around and saw that everyone was on the edge of their seats, waiting to see what Minerva would say. He could see on the faces of others that they were wondering if her revelation would have anything to do with Sirius.
Sighing, Minerva continued, “While we were performing the spells to destroy the veil, we somehow managed to extract Sirius.” She paused for the outburst that she knew would happen, and she was not disappointed.
When the other Order members had regained composure she continued, “I know that many of you did not trust nor believe that Sirius was innocent of the crimes he was framed for, even after seeing Peter Pettigrew alive and well during the final battle.
“However," She said loudly stopping any interruptions before they began, "I have heard and seen proof of his innocence and I believe him. Also take into consideration that the two people who can prove his innocence beyond any doubt, are now sitting in this room.”
There was a moment of confused silence following Minerva’s words, then suddenly as one, almost every face in the room turned to look at the very embarrassed Lily and James Potter.
“Is it true?” Kingsly asked the Potters, “Tell us what happened.” He all but whispered.
At a nod from James and a smile of encouragement from her son, Lily began the tale. “It was September after Harry turned one that we really began considering having a Secret Keeper. We really didn’t want to have one, but Dumbledore finally convinced us of the need.
“We had already managed to escape Voldemort three times, along with Frank and Alice.” Lily paused a moment, overcome with grief, the knowledge of Frank and Alice still new to her. James rubbed her back lightly, and when she had recovered, she continued.
“Dumbledore convinced us that we had already beaten him three times, we wouldn’t be able to remain so lucky; that we needed to take our son into consideration. We didn’t know about the Prophecy at the time, we just wanted to keep our son safe, looking back it makes sense, and I now know Dumbledore knew that all along.
“We had originally asked Sirius to be our Secret Keeper, everyone expected it. Just before the spell was to be cast, Sirius, with the help of Dumbledore asked us to reconsider using him for our Secret Keeper, not because we didn’t trust him,” Lilly added hastily, seeing people begin to smirk and nod, “but because it was expected, no one would imagine that we wouldn’t use him.”
The incredulous looks that covered the faces of the people in the room began to disappear as Lily continued.
“We started to ask Frank and Alice to do it, but decided that since they had also been attacked several times, that they would be too great of a risk, so we decided on Peter.” She choked on his name, and began sobbing.
“James said that he wasn’t sure about Peter, and I chided him and told him that Peter was his friend, and that he should ask him to do it, no one would imagine that we would ask Peter, he was a nothing to most people. I told James that it would let Peter realize that he was loved.” Lily was sobbing uncontrollably, and was forced to stop.
Harry along with everyone else in the room was staring in open mouthed horror at Lily, realizing the implications and her over whelming feeling of guilt. For the first time, Harry realized that his mother blamed herself for their deaths.
“We had also almost asked Lupin, but we realized that he knew that Lily and I loved him. He wouldn’t need the proof.” James said quietly staring intensely at his long time friend while he waited for Lily to compose herself.
Lupin stared intently at James for a few moments. A myriad of expression crossed his face. First was the same angry expression that had been on his face every time he was forced to be in the same room with James. Next was disbelief, disbelief of what he was hearing, like it was just an excuse. His expression then melted away, showing that he knew James and Lily especially would never lie to him, especially not about something like this. A deep sadness filled his heart and was apparent on his face as he realized that he had scorned James when he had first come back, scorned James when James had needed him the most, when he had realized that the rest of his friends were dead or had betrayed him.
He smiled sadly through tear that flowed down his face as he looked at James. He lightly patted Tonks’ knee and got up and joined Lily and James. He sat down next to James and the two men stared at each other for a tense moment.
“Can you forgive me? Can you forgive my behavior?” Lupin asked, searching James eyes. James returned his stare for a moment before smiling, the two men embraced, hitting each other on the back and began laughing, both crying.
Harry smiled, now understanding the awkwardness between the two men.
“Oh Lupin!” Lily said crying, “How could you possibly think that we didn’t trust you.” Lupin folded her into a hug.
“I’m sorry, Lil. It won’t happen again.” He said softly, tears freely flowing down his face.
After several more minutes of laughing and crying, Lily finally pulled away from Lupin, to continue. The rest of the group sat in amused silence watching the friends.
Her voice began shaking, “We made Peter the Secret Keeper and within a week, we were dead.” If that statement sounded weird to anyone else, no one mentioned it.
“I knew right away what had happened when I heard James yell to go save Harry. I knew that we had been betrayed, that we had made the wrong choice, that we had found that spy within the Order, and that Peter must have immediately told Voldemort how to find us.” Her voice abruptly changed from the shaky tear filled voice, to having almost no emotion in it what so ever.
Harry looked up alarmed at her change in voice. Lily was sitting with her hands in her lap, staring straight ahead, unseeing, as she began to recount her final moments.
“I saw the reflection of a flash of green light on the wall in front of me and heard a crash as I bolted up the stairs. I knew that James had just died. It took all of my power to keep going, all I wanted to do was lay down and cry. I heard Harry scream from his bedroom and that was what kept me going.
“I had just grabbed him out of his crib and was about to jump out the window so I could apperate away when the door slammed open and Voldemort came through the door. I was a little surprised that it was him and not one of his minions. I remember thinking in a panic that we most be very important.”
Harry had often wondered why his mother had not just apperated away, he hadn’t even considered that there had been anti-apperation spells on the house, but it made sense.
The people in the room stared at her in horror as she recounted the events that led up to her death. Minerva tried to get her attention, but to no avail; Lily needed to tell them what it was like, how it had been. The group stared in rapt silence, listening to her every word.
“He told me to give him the baby; I needn’t die as well. He said that all he wanted was the insignificant child.” She raised her arms up as if protectively holding a baby.
“I could feel Harry fighting against me, could hear him crying. He again repeated that all I needed to do was to give Harry to him, that he didn’t want to kill me; he said that he had other plans for me. I knew that I would not be able to survive after the death of both my husband and child.
I put Harry back in his crib and told Voldemort to take me instead, that Harry didn’t need to die; he was just a baby for Merlin’s sake. He told me to step aside, or he would be forced to kill me too, I could feel him trying to use the impervious curse to get me to obey him. I resisted, as much as I could. He finally sighed and said, ‘So be it.’ The last thing I remember is a flash of green light.” She began crying again as she finished speaking, Harry reached out and lightly touched his mother’s shoulder.
She jumped and looked up at him for moment and thing grabbed him in a tight hug, sobbing into his shoulder. Harry looked around for a moment, silently asking for help, and then slowly wrapped his arms around his sobbing mother, not knowing how to thank her for saving his life.
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Wow, that was brilliantly written! I'm glad James and Remus aren't fighting anymore. Oh, I can't wait 'till they see Sirius! Pamsoid!
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you finaly gave us another post(s) that was a great post ^^^ JulieAnn, it was so sad, but great.
I think i know who the person is, a certain name beginig with S slipped into my mind but then (of all the times to think of it) while making tea i thought of 2 more names, both having a surname of M wonder which one it is
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Originally Posted by Weasleygurl Wow, that was brilliantly written! I'm glad James and Remus aren't fighting anymore. Oh, I can't wait 'till they see Sirius! Pamsoid! What was funny is that when I was writing it, James and Lupin's "fight" if you will was not that big of a deal, but I already knew why and what happened. I was surprised, though I shouldn't have been, that everyone was so upset about their situation, I kept wanting to say, "no guys, it is just a misunderstanding, it is ok!" but I knew that would ruin it. I did have to go back and make a little bit of changes to that part to make it more significant, I hope you weren't disappointed They have a.....mission.....to go on that is top priority and Dumbledore is explaining everything that happened for Sirius (We don't see that, we already know what happened, or at least we will ) but then the Marauders - one will be reunited! I am hoping that will be big, but it isn't for a while*cough*hasn't been written yet*cough* Quote:
Originally Posted by michalice *SPOILER* Small one: This post was from Lily's point of view, from what she remembered what had happened. later on, while there is some more unanswered questions It is decided that they want to know specifically what happened before and after (the missing 24) so they use the pensieve and extract Harry's memories. He can't remember them, but they are still there. I haven't written it yet, but I have a general idea of what is going to happen, and part of it has to do with the last part of Part B, Chapter 21. As far as being the new Dark Lord, You are on track for 1 of them, as for the rest, I am so not telling you! Jeez, you guys make me want to just tell you everything and ruin the story Stop tempting me! ok, I really don't want you to stop tempting me, it make it fun! you all! 
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He didn't sound all the evil. 
Keep up with it. I Love evrything about the story!!! 
For now
The man who said "Merlin's Beard!" Is NOT the same man who was outside of Grimmauld place!! 
The most wonderful thing about Tiggers, is Tiggers are wonderful things. 
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I Siriusly Love him!!
How they make you think alot? 
I mean if it's good you relive it in your mind everytime you think about. Am I right??? But maybe you could hide them a little better. It would give me more of a challange!!
I am absolutely glad Sirius is fine. Awesome(love him lots). 
I might know who it is!!!....I see Peter is having trouble in calling Him, My lord like he did easely(fear) with Voldemort....................On another point I think I also figured out who the person was at the Ministry. I think it was that muggle man that's now died (Frank Bynce). Maybe he was being controled by The (new) lord. 
