whats up with the polyjuice potion i dont get it is someone pretending to be hermione maybe a death eater to spy about the da

YEA! Or Ron or someone else!


I KNEW those kids were bad news!

You CANNOT have Harry, Ron or Hermione die!


PAMS!

Wow, it's getting really exciting! Post soon!

Aw, thanks Lissy. It means alot...
Don't you just love that smilie? Well, hope you enjoy this.


*coughsurecough*
In what? The big old reponsible people? How many times in the books have the teachers gone bad...Well, there's Quirrel, Lockhart, Fake-Eye Moody, Umbridge, Snape...I think I'll shut up

You are close, but how close are you? I guess you will find out soon.

Why not? Kids aren't bad, they're just, um...misunderstood.
Thankies! Post soon!

Like said, a post soon. I've just realised that this has hit 200 posts, so thats made me happy. So, thank y'all for supporting me so far.
Now all you people think that there will be a human death? Well, will there be one?
And, i dont think that i will be doing that many cliffies from now on, only a few

”Who are you?” Hermione said failing to keep her voice calm.
”Quiet, Mudblood…Stupefy,” He said, first only pointing at Hermione, but soon after, sending the other two unconscious. He realised that if Harry and Ron were wandless then they would fight the muggle way.

”Well done, I didn’t expect you to complete this task. Now I hope you have learned not to betray me, or next time, I shall kill you,” A cold voice said.
”Yes master, I will always stick with you,” a weak voice trembled.
”And, I thank you for keeping an eye on him, Bella,” the cold voice said, “You are truly faithful. I have something planned for you, and the others. I will allow you to watch me kill Harry Potter, and his friends. You may even join in if you want.” He then let out a cruel, high pitched laugh.
”Yes, my lord. I would love to join you in finishing off the famous Harry Potter. I would most enjoy it.” She said, letting out a cackle.

Harry kept his eyes closed. He knew that if he opened them then he would be killed. Hoping that his friends were thinking the same thing, he tried to concentrate on the voices. It seemed that the people had wandered off, so Harry slowly opened his eyes, at first, only letting light enter the cracks of his eyes. The room was a large room, with a wooden door in the corner, and a few empty boxes. Torches hung on the walls, which looked like a bad thing, as the whole room was wooden. Lying next to Harry was Ron, and then Hermione.
Harry tried to stand up, but his legs couldn’t hold the weight. He tried and tried, but it didn’t make a difference. He picked his arm up, which felt heavy, and tried to push himself up. Managing to stand up, he tried thinking of a way to get out. Ron let out a groan, showing that he was coming round. Harry tapped his arm and tried helping him stand up. However, Ron didn’t need any help as he sprung up quicker than Harry could pull him up. After a moment or two, Hermione began moving, and soon enough, standing up. The three looked around for a moment, and then looked at each other.
”Where are we?” Hermione whispered.
”Well, it looks dark, so, I’m guessing that we’re in a basement somewhere. Do you want to try apparating?” Ron said quietly.
”I doubt it will work. We need to think of a way to get out, or something bad will happen. This all connects to your dream Harry. Did you see where you where?” Hermione said, letting her voice take over her.
Harry looked around, then closed his eyes, and replied, “No,” slowly.
Then an idea slowly came to Harry. He dug his hand into his pocket looking for Dumbledore’s wand but it wasn’t there. He put his hand in his lower combat pockets, and pulled out a wand. Hermione and Ron looked at Harry and gasped. Not because Harry had a wand, but because a big snake was slithering into the room.

Harry turned around very quickly and took aim at the snake. But it wasn’t that simple. It leapt at him and sent him to the floor.
”Leave me alone,” Harry hissed.
”Potter, you will die with the fangs of my snake,” said a voice, apparently from the snake.

”Harry, what’s happening?” Hermione asked, running up to him.
”Stay away or she’ll eat you. He’s in there. It’s the ho-.” Harry managed to say before being slammed into the wall. Even if it was a snake, it was a vicious one. His wand flew to the side of the room and got stuck in one of the torches. Ron reacted quickly and dove into the torch, grabbing the wand before it set alight. He pulled it back and took aim. Just before he sent the curse, Harry flew backwards into Ron and Hermione. The room was on fire. The torches once hanging were lying on the floor, lighting the wooden walls.

Nagini rose up inspecting the fire, and then dived down at Harry. He stuck his arm out to the side and took hold of one of the burning torches. Without a moments delay, he threw the torch into the snakes open jaw.
It flew backwards and hit the wall, making it collapse.
”Harry, we need to get out of here, before they come,” Hermione said pointing at the still intact door.
”That’s a horcrux. We need to get it.” Harry panted, wiping away sweat from his forehead. His scar began stinging wildly, a sign of things to come.
The snake appeared dead, as Harry began walking around it. Just before he tried to open its eye it dove up and sent Harry into the air.

Whaddya think?

Ahh! Another cliffie! Even more exciting. Keep writing!

What do I think? What do I think?

I think cliffhangers are going to be the death of me...

Nice post, I love action, but that goes without saying I'm always trying to milk action scenes into whole chapters... I still haven't yet found a way to do it right though...must work harder.

Yay, the trio...they really do go everywhere together...even in kidnappings and fights...

I hope Harry gets Nagini and not the other way around...

Cliffhangers are going to kill me, seriously I'm too old for this.

I Hate These Cliffies I Still Dont Get How The Polyjuice Potion Ties In With It Do We Find Out Soon Or Not If Not Pm Me Because I Dint Get It!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH! Pams!

I Hate These Cliffies I Still Dont Get How The Polyjuice Potion Ties In With It Do We Find Out Soon Or Not If Not Pm Me Because I Dint Get It!!!!!!!!!!!!!

me too !!

Oh The Death Might Be That Mr Bad Snake Lol My Idea Kills Harry Or The Other Way Around?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Thanks, I really want to stop doing cliffies, but it just always pops up.

Thanks, the cliffhangers are, bad. I think I should stop doing them after every post. You are great at writing the action scenes, especially when Teddy's around.
Ah, now that would reveal the plot The cliffhangers will, or should stop. The polyjuice could tie in many ways, what if Nagini is the one polyjuiced?
It may, it may, but then again...It may not

I'm sorry I haven't posted this week. Been caught up with school and revising, but I have a post coming up next. It's not that long, but it will make something clear. I hope to post some more sometime on Friday but no promises because exams smell. Enough poop talk, post coming up...

Now, just before the cliffhanger, Harry had been sent up in the air by Nagini.

”Harry,” Ron shouted running into the body of the snake. He kicked it a few times before the snake collapsed, with Harry on its head.
”Harry, are you ok?” Hermione said.
”Yeah, of course I’m ok; I’m only being attacked by a big snake.”
”How do you take care of the horcrux?” Ron said trying to get from under the snakes body.
”No idea, lets try summoning it, accio.” Harry said pointing at the snake. But instead of a horcrux coming out of the snake, tiny spiders launched themselves on Harry. He threw his wand to the side and dove to the floor trying to get the spiders off. Hermione ran to the wand and picked it up.
”Reducto,” Hermione squeaked aiming at Harry. It seemed that she was a clever girl so she knew what she was doing because the spiders froze and exploded into dust.
”Thanks,” Harry said catching his breath. “Can I have the wand for a second?”
”Yes, Harry. Here you go,” she said throwing the wand to him. “What are you going to do?”
”I’ll try summoning it again, but in parseltongue,” he said. “Accio, Horcrux.”
”Nope, you said it in English.” Ron said coming out of the corner. The spiders had affected him.
Focusing on the snake, Harry looked at it and tried again. “Accio horcrux.” This time, those words did not exit his mouth, but a collection of hisses followed the word accio.
The snake began glowing silver and shield shaped silver came out of its mouth, with a few silver spheres after.
”Reducto!” Harry shouted pointing at the silver objects.
They began to swell, until each thing was the size of a human head. Then they exploded, leaving a cloud of fog behind. With the explosion, Harry’s scar felt like it was on fire. He dived on the floor and began punching the corpse of the snake, trying to take his pain out.

”Master, they were coming from here.” A voice said in the distance, followed by a high pitched scream.
”You failed me, and let them kill my faithful servant. Avada Kedavra” the voice said.
Harry dived up, took hold of the wand and looked at Hermione and Ron. They were trapped, with no means of escape. All they had to defend themselves against the dark lord was one single wand.

Suddenly, a silver leopard burst through the walls. It was not a solid object, but it could protect them. It was a patronus.

OMG!! excellent posts. wat's happenin next?? plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
PAMS

Roshni

ooohhhhh was the death in that i didnt get that one

Action, adventure, and mayhem...w00t and all in this one post...you rule Ali

Too cool, I guess I've been reading girl fics too long... it's all *smoochies smoochies* You don't love me Harry *smoochies* I needed some action adventure... and you do it well too.

I like how you keep in canon too...Ron hiding in the corner because of the spiders...and Hermione being all "Reducto"

Well done Ali, I'm loving your story...but who would have a leopard patronus????

OMG! You're killing me with the cliffies... but that's not a bad way to go...

Post when you can...

u are truely evil... lol jk! Busy so can't be long... but I love it. Keep it up Ali... its great!

no!! PAMS pls!! oh n btw.. im a new reader obviously.. n kudos about R.A.B being regulus.. never thought of that.. n now thinking bout it again.. it seems kindda logical.. write more ali!! for a new writer ure writing fairly good tho there might be some infos mixed up here n there [e.g : some infos already in HBP but u wrote it again as if its new infos.. or was that the point? coz i thot this is supposed to be an era after HBP.. so shouldnt we already know all that?] btw.. its all good!! PAMS!!

Okay, I finally got to read your post... I love it papi, its so you. Anyways, who would have a lepoard as their patrounus??? Hmm, intersting! Anyways, keep it up! Opps, almost forgot... huggles!!!

~Lottie

Woot, very exciting. Keep writing.

Thanks Roshni, but that would be telling.
Thanks Otts. Most of the fics on SS are girls, I think. Apart from yours and a few others. Romance is ok upto a limit, but action is good all the way
Ah, the leopard. Could it be a person?

Thanks, and welcome to the fic. Which info's? Some stuff i meant to write again to refresh the memory of people, like the intro's to each chapter.

Thank you!

Exams smell, but thats old news. English tommorow. Post soon, hopefully...

All three of the turned around and looked in the direction where it came from. A solid wall, or was it? Harry reached out to touch the wall where the patronus had appeared. Unusually, his hand never touched wood, but just went through.

He looked at his friends amazed. Just before he walked through the wall Hermione pulled him back.
”Harry,” she said. “What if it’s a trap?”
Harry looked at her and bit his lip. “Patronuses are good, and I have the wand with me. There’s nothing to worry about.”

He slowly made his way through the wall. Expecting them to follow, he looked around and tried to see a sign of where they were. They didn’t come through. He heard a few voices and pulled his wand out. Soon enough, he lowered it noticing a few familiar faces.
Shacklebolt, Tonks and Lupin were running towards him, followed by Orios and Sawyer in the sky on broomsticks. They looked at Harry for a moment, and then drew their wands out, aimed at Harry.

A swoosh sounded as a vial flew past their faces, uncorked itself, and forced its contents down Harry’s throat. He began choking but a clever Lupin sent a spell to make him swallow.
”What is it?” Harry asked.
”Veritaserum, who are you?” Mad-Eye Moody said walking out from the crowd.
”Harry James Potter,” Harry said quietly.
”Are you under the influence of polyjuice potion?” Mad-Eye asked.
”No.”
”Are you under the influence of any other potion?”
”Yes.”

Lupin aimed his wand in the air, and then brought it down with power, aimed at Harry. A yellow light beamed from his wand and shot down Harry’s throat. After a few moments, it shot out in a mucky orange colour.

”Ah, now that’s better. I’m awfully sorry about that, but it’s the safety measures we have to go through. Where are Ron and Hermione?” Lupin asked walking up to Harry.
”They’re over there, in that building. I don’t know why they didn’t follow me.” He said pointing to the wall. He walked into the wall followed by the rest of the Order, and went to save them.

”Harry,” Hermione screamed. “We couldn’t get out, and the voices, they’re getting nearer.”
”Which voices?” Orios asked.
”Voldemort, he’s over here, well, we heard him.” Harry said checking the door. He still needed to regain his own wand as well as his friends’.

The members of the Order rushed out of the still standing door looking for anyone. Harry followed them with Ron and Hermione behind them.

The building was dirty, with cobwebs in the corners. Tiny mice bones were on the floor. Hoping that it was Pettigrew’s bones, Harry tripped and had to throw his hands out in front of him to break his fall, cutting his hand in the process. Getting back on his toes, he saw a door in the distance. The members of the order were far away so he couldn’t talk, or shout in case of attracting attention.
Thinking about what Orios did, Harry stuck his wand out in front of him and whispered “Expecto Patronum.” It worked as a silver stag galloped out of his wand and charged off straight forward. A moment later, a few members of the Order came back trying to see what the problem was. Lupin, Shacklebolt and a tall blonde walked up to Harry.
”What is it?” Lupin asked.
Harry merely pointed at the door and said “There.”

Lupin got the message and placed his fingers in his mouth. He blew and sent out a loud high pitched screech.

Harry looked at Lupin, trying to wonder what he was doing. It was almost like a wolf’s howl.
Lupin had his eyes fixed on the door, whilst muttering a few words.


Has Loony Loopy Lupin gone cwazy?

Ahhh! Post more soon...

WHAT!!! I am so confused... lol! What is bloody going on in here. I mean really! Anyways... I mean please. My head hurts and this isn't helping. Anyways me amor, your doing fabulous and I can't wait to find out what is going on... PAMS!!!

~Lottie

So it was Orios patronus? Cool

What I don't get though is Harry walked out into the open when he walked through that wall? And why didn't the others follow? Especially my Ronniekins, you know he'd never leave Harry alone or behind.

*Ottery unlike Lupin really has gone mad*

That spell to get the potion out...uhm, yuck it was ingenous though too cool Ali, and I love romance but you're right too much kills a fic, to bad the girls here don't all write like JKR now I'm just being a dork... *fires the cannons* but I get to be a dork on SS.

You still rock Ali, keep up the great work. *fires the cannons* post when you can...and more Ron please?