Cool! Good job, allucha!

OMG!!!!!!! Ronnnnnnn, he has to be saved. He can't die.
PAMS so we can know what's goin on.
Roshni

Still paitiently waiting. I mean if you were wondering, Ali.

Hey, so, mabye i was taking my time.
To tell the truth i have had to hand in 5 pieces of coursework this week, plus learn the lines for a play which goes for my GCSE's.
So that will be the reason that i havnt been posting anything recently.
And Spooks finished, and one of my fav person got shot, snipered actually. But he's not dead. Anyway, before i start talking about something entirely different i'm better of posting this.

They walked slowly up to the house, looking in every direction for Death Eaters. The grass was bushy which made walking quietly hard. The rustle of grass didn’t seem to attract the Death Eaters’ attention. Tonks arrived at the door first and noticed that it was slightly open. She pushed it gently and crept in the house. The others followed.
The hallways had burning torches hanging; life size portraits were on the wall. Harry took lead and walked into a room. He had seen a program that Dudley watched on the television where Secret Agents had to sneak into houses, this felt the same.
In the first room that Harry walked in he saw a roaring fire, and a humongous chair. It would even fit for a giant. Harry beckoned Remus as he walked into the room. They quietly surrounded the chair, and then jumped in front expecting to see someone. It was empty.
“Help.”
“Did you hear that?” Hermione said
“It came from up there,” Ginny said pointing upwards.
”Be quiet, they might hear us. Yes it did come from upstairs,” Lupin whispered, “Harry.”
“Yes?” he replied.
“I know this might be hard for you but have you ever got into Voldemort’s mind, on purpose?”
”No, do you mean Leglimency?”
”Well, it’s like Leglimency. Seeing as you have a strange connection with Voldemort in your head, maybe it would be easier for you to do it. Its not easy but it would help you a lot.”
”How, can I do it now, will it help us find Ron?”
”For the moment, let’s stick to the basics.”
The walked out of the room and arrived at the stairs.


Just abit but i wanted to keep the fic alive. Im getting the GoF video game today,

You're too cool Ali. Sorry about all that school work...bleah, can't be any fun. You poor soul. I guess those GCSE's are pretty important. Good luck then.

As for your post...OMG! Harry and the gang as secret agent spies... you've been in my head haven't you? I always wanted to write a fic like that, pity nothing ever came of it really. Haven't the time anymore, or the energy really.

I loved your post just the same, even if you're still dangling the carrot...I want to know that my Ronniekins is allright...want me to write the post in which they rescue him? I could you know. I'm just kidding Ali, this is your fic. I'm loving it, post when you can, and good luck with school.

yessss, u posted. skool sucks doesnt it. i hate it too. some of these courses are just impossible to do. they make it so hard and pointless. :angry: neways, great post even tho it was short. i hope u post a long one sooon.
PAMS

Roshni

Quote:

Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole

I guess those GCSE's are pretty important. Good luck then.

Thanks, they are for what jobs your get and the future, so yeah, they are but i dont do them until summer 2007. But the work leading upto it dosnt stop

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roshni

i hope u post a long one sooon.

Well the next one isnt long, but its all i got at the mo' and you guys deserve it!

They slowly walked up the stairs, checking that no one saw them. If they were seen then Ron might be killed. As Ginny was looking up, she saw a small rope moving. She pointed it out to Lupin.
”Clerano,” he said pointing at the rope.
The area above their heads changed colour, from a pale brown, to bright green and red. A red square was marked out above their heads.
”Reducto,” Harry said automatically.
”Harry, what were you thinking, they will definitely know we are here.” Tonks whispered.
”Oops…I forgot,” Harry said feeling guilty.

Sure enough, three cloaked figures appeared at the foot of the stairs. They didn’t see anyone but they seemed to want to search downstairs.
”This is our chance, everyone hold onto me.” Lupin whispered, holding everyone, “Leviatus.” They all began rising, until they reached the hole where Harry broke through. But they kept rising, until they were in the attic.
It was dark and full of boxes big enough to fit a human. Even with the darkness, some red hair was standing out behind the boxes.
”Ron!” Ginny exclaimed.
”I thought you would be coming here.”
They all turned around and saw Lucius Malfoy and two large Death Eaters blocking the exit.

*Ottery is thinking that school was an invention of the devil* Uhm, well don't let them work you too hard Ali. You need a break every now and then, okay? Go out and party.

I loved the post. Even if you did leave us with another cliffhanger. And yes, I still don't know how my Ronniekins is. *sighs* That's it...I'll save you Ron. *Ottery jumps into a phone booth and out comes* SuperOtter. I'm off to save my Ron.

But seriously, I liked how Harry made a mistake, I mean he is just a kid, it's not like he's an auror like Tonks or an ex-DADA professor like Lupin. They'd be experts at fighting evil. So that was cool. I like that you're going for realism.

Post more when you can, Ali, but have fun first. Love your story, I'm always here.

Thankies Ottery.
Cliffies are evil, hehe,

Well heres abit more
Just to refresh minds-
”I thought you would be coming here.”
They all turned around and saw Lucius Malfoy and two large Death Eaters blocking the exit.


”So this is the end of the famous potter, with a Wolf, Freak, Mudblood and a…well, Weasley.”
This seemed to annoy Lupin, as he shouted, “Stupefy,” at one of the large
Death Eaters. Remus suddenly collapsed on the floor unconscious. Tonks was in charge.
”Luminite,” she screamed as everything began shining a strong white colour. Then she performed an amazing spell. Waving her wand a gold light came out of her wand and split in two, hitting Lucius and the death eater.
Harry remembered why they were in the Riddle house in the first place, but the path to the red hair was blocked. “Accio Ron,” Harry said. Nothing happened. “Help, Ginny, Hermione.” Tonks smiled and told them to try as she revived Lupin.
”Accio Ron,” they shouted together. The red hair stayed where it was. It wasn’t Ron.
”Where is he?”
”Here,” a bruised Ron said getting out of a box behind them, “Missed me?” He added with a grin.
Lupin sprang alive and jumped with his wand aiming at Ron. “Ron, what does your father collect?”
”Dad? Muggle stuff, like plugs.” Ron said looking at Lupin’s wand.
”Just security, I’m sorry I had to do that Ron.”
”It’s ok, now can we get out of here, there’s more spiders here than there was with Aragog,” he said scanning the floors.
”Who?” Tonks asked.
”Never mind,” Harry said, not wanting to talk about his rule-breaking habit.
”Alastor Moody,” Lupin said into the mirror.
”Remus.”
“We have found Ronald, I did the safety check, and it’s him. Call the search off, I’ll see you at the Burrow.”
Mad-Eye once again dissapeared from view.
Remus pulled out a newspaper and tapped it with his wand, it glowed blue. “Everyone, you know how to use these, three, two, one,” they all began spinning and landed in the kitchen again.

”Ronald,” his mother screamed as he grabbed hold of him. “You’re safe,” she added hugging him. “Harry, Hermione, Remus, Tonks, thank you so much, you don’t know how much I…Well, its good to have you back Ron!”
”It’s good to be back,” he said wiping his mucky face.
’POP’
All the rest of the order arrived into the kitchen, looking at Ron.
”You’re back,” the twins said walking up to him.
”Yeah, I am,” Ron muttered with a grin.
”All, Bed. We have to get your supplies tomorrow for school. Bed, Now!"

Not one of my strongest posts, but, its all there is.

Hmm. I think it could have used more action, but all in a ll it wasn't a bad post Ali, you did good. You had me worried when Harry kept spelling Ron and he wouldn't appear...I thought for sure *crying* You're soooooo bad.

I thought it was cool though how Tonks was the one who held off everyone. Harry though should have gotten more action, I mean he is the hero of the story Ali...

Oh, and if you'd have made it so that--I don't know, Ginny tripped and fell in Harry's lap and they had a cute moment of love, as they fight off the death eaters... Sorry I think I'm coming down with Lovesickness... LOL

It was a good post Ali, and we know you're busy with school so don't worry, take your time we're still here. *looks around* Well I am. The others'll be by in a bit I'm sure.

kool posts. glad he's back. pams
Roshni

Sweet!!! Keep writing...

Thanks everyone, just abit more. New chapter though, no idea for a name. Suggestions?

Chapter 5- the chapter without a name (not the real name)
The next day they woke early to go to diagon alley. Harry and Ron were sat in their beds wandering who the new Head Master would be.
”Do you think it will be someone from the ministry?” Ron asked.
”Could be, but I doubt they would fit in,” Harry said, “Especially if they are like Umbridge.” He added looking at the back of his hand.
”I think it will be a guy though.” Ron said. “What about Defence Against the Dark Arts now that Snape is gone?”
”It will be some weird fake who doesn’t know the difference between a boggart and a -.”
”Ronald,” screamed a voice from downstairs.
”Oops, we were supposed to go to Diagon Alley to get our books today,” Ron said jumping out of his bed.

They both ran down the stairs, skipping two steps at a time, which unfortunately lead to Ron tumbling down. Harry couldn’t stop himself and followed Ron to the ground.
Just then, a tall figure with red hair approached them.
”I heard some noises and came to investigate,” Fred said. “Someone fall over?” He asked sarcastically.
Harry and Ron looked at each other and burst out laughing until Mrs Weasley shouted. They both got to their feet and quickly walked into the kitchen.
”So, what was all the noise about,” the other twin asked.
”They fell down the stairs,” Fred answered.
”Well, I didn’t think that head boys fell down stairs.” George said.
“Who’s a head boy?” Ron said curiously.
”No one,” Fred said, “yet but-.”
”Get some food to eat, we are leaving in a minute!” Rang the voice of Mrs Weasley.
”How are we going to Diagon Alley, Mrs Weasley?” Harry asked the woman who just entered the room.
”We’re not sure, probably by floo unless we make another unauthorised portkey.”
”We’ve been doing that for ages mum.”
”EAT.”

Harry took a piece of toast and began putting jam on it. As he ate, be began thinking seriously about the Horcrux situation. A voice in his head kept telling him that he didn’t have to do it, but he heard the prophecy. Unless it was Neville, then Harry had to do it.

Ginny and Hermione walked into the room giggling and ready to go. They looked around and saw Harry and Ron eating. They tried to cover up the giggles.
”What’s wrong with you?” Harry asked Hermione.
”Nothing…Nothing at all,” Hermione said trying to keep a straight face. “I see you two are not ready yet.”
”We are now,” Ron said finishing his breakfast.

So, useless convo but o'well. Might be useful later on
-@1i

Hello Ali. I'm so glad you updated, and before I leave too...I'll be gone for a few days.

Uhm, not a lot happens...LOL but I still liked it. It's nice to have Ron back safe and sound...and you've got me wondering who the new DADA teacher is going to be and the Headmaster too...I thought McGonagall for sure...but you've got other plans maybe? o_O

So, throw in some action in Diagon Alley if you do write that...LOL maybe a DE ambush or something fun like that...but no more kidnappings...LOL

Post when you can...can't hardly wait.

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Good post! Now I have a lot of meandering thoughts in my head about what's going to happen next...

well, not a lot happened. but i still liked it. pams.
Roshni

Thanks Guys. I know the last post was slow, but the next post will hopefully be good! I've been watching Street Fighter so i have some ideas but its hard putting it to paper. I'll do my best.
Cya laters
@1i

hey that was gr8. totally rad.pams. hey, is ron head boy? and is hagrid head master? cant wait to read more. post soon.........

p.s. is ali uor real name?( just curious)

Hey, hello. i hope u enjoy this fic. Ron=Head Boy? no, Hagrid=Head Master? i wanted people to think this so im not going to answer the question.
And yeh my name is Ali.

POST COMING UP

Like i said, here it is. From a post with no action to, well, a post leading upto a bit of action.
Enjoy!

”Nothing…Nothing at all,” Hermione said trying to keep a straight face. “I see you two are not ready yet.”
”We are now,” Ron said finishing his breakfast.
”Well, let’s get going.” Mrs Weasley said. “We decided to make a portkey, a lot easier. And, if anything happens whilst we are in Diagon Alley, get Ginny and apparate back here.”
”Nothing’s going to happen Molly, After all, the Aurors and patrolling Diagon Alley 24 hours a day,” Arthur said as he walked into the room.
”They are just safety precautions, Arthur.”

They all got up and walked out of the kitchen. Harry and Ron went upstairs to get a coat, and by the time they arrived all the Weasleys, along with Tonks and Lupin were stood around something that looked like a fence gate.
”What’s with the gate?” Harry asked.
”Hello Harry, it’s the portkey,” Lupin said. “Now gather around, we will be going in 5, 4, 3, 2, and 1.”

Everything began spinning, but Harry was used to this. As they all let go they landed in Diagon alley, and it was raining.
”Everyone, you have an hour to use. Get all your things for school and meet me in the Leaky Cauldron when you have finished,” Mr Weasley said.
Harry, Ron, Hermione and had decided to walk together. First they needed to go get their money. As they walked into Gringotts around 5 goblins were stood at the door.
”They’ve tightened security,” Ron whispered as one of the goblins stared at him.

After ten minutes, they came out of Gringotts carrying enough money to get their school supplies. They went to Flourish and Blott’s for their new books first. The man had bundles ready for each student, and gave each of them their own book sets. Harry gave the man the money as they walked out carrying a few books.
”Where next?” Harry asked.
”I need some parchment and ink.” Hermione said.
”Lets go to the stationary shop,” Harry said walking to the shop next door to Flourish and Blott's.
It was crowded inside with many Hogwarts students. Harry saw Neville and his Grandma purchasing some different coloured quills. As he saw Harry he waved. Harry returned the wave and walked nearer to him and began talking.
30 minutes later, the finally came out of the shop after talking to Luna and a small boy who appeared to be lost. When they came out of the shop they heard shouting.

Many people were crowded around something outside the entrance to Knockturn Alley. Harry began to run in that direction but Ron stopped him.
”What if it’s a trap?”
”I doubt it, a trap for what anyway.” Harry said.
Ron and Hermione looked at each other but did not say anything. Harry decided that they wouldn’t answer but he knew what the answer was. It was outside Knockturn Alley, a great place for the Death Eater’s to ambush.
He ran to the crowd and pushed until he got into the centre of the crowd.
In the middle was Mr Borgin, lying on the floor.
”Well done Potter, we knew you like a crowd,” said a voice Harry had heard before. Nott was standing behind him, for once, not wearing his death eater robes.
Harry turned around, and noticed that he, Hermione, and Ron were surrounded by Death Eaters.

What dya think? I should be able to post once in a few days
@1i

yay first to post after uor post.that was pretty nice.write more soon.write long posts ....plzzz.:

(soo....uor actually a guy? i thought u were a girl by uor nic-allucha. r u a muslim?)

Thanks, this was going to be a long post but i decided to split it in two. I have the other half written and will post it when i get some more typed up.

Yup and Yup

yay! i totally forgot about this fic! although i have no idea since it is the best ever! i haven't checked since the first page! oooh! please post some more soon! even though you posted today! ignore me. well i can't wait for an update anyways!
much love and hugs
sara!

:sorcerer: Ali, *madtackleglomps* You posted and I wasn't here I'm sorry...stupid American holidays *fires all the cannons* had to go be with my family *Ottery and Teddy duck knives, guns and bombs as they pass the cranberry sauce at the dinner table* but I managed to survive. LOL

Okay, so yeah...LOL...a lead up to action, also known as...A Cliffhanger! *points accussatorily* You're evil...LOL but in the good way...LOL I'm glad I'm back and I'm glad you posted...love your story Ali, keep it up. Back when I can, so post when you can

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Welcome back

Me? Cliffhanger? I would never you will never know

Ok, so heres a post coming up. Good job i didnt post it with the other one because i "accidentaly" put something important in it. Anyway, post in a min.