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10-07-2006, 05:12 PM
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#601 (permalink)
| Niffler
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year | Old Man Beans | "BOY" | FARM ASSIST| L u L u | Derping like a Boss Quote:
Originally Posted by Fortune_Cookie Wow, very cool ending, Ali! I've really enjoyed reading this story! Thank You Cookie, I've enjoyed reading your replies, and they've been helpful to me.
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10-07-2006, 08:37 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year | One last turn ... *Teddy drags Ottery away* Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert Quote:
Originally Posted by allucha No more Peeves Tickets for the game. Woohoo. She gave me a couple too. *gives them to you guys* Ron will be there. Hmm, but if Peeves dies, yes I know he's a poltergeist but if Peeves dies, then his ghost would still haunt Hogwarts wouldn't it? LOL Peeves would never leave. Quote:
And thank you for the help you gave me. I don't think I'd have even been close if you and my other readers didn't help me. And for that, I thank you all.
You r0x0rs Ali. You're story r0x0rs and ... I'm gonna miss it. *sniffles* Why am I still spamming? Uhm ... no reason ... *can't let go* Noooooooooooooooo *is dragged away by Teddy* Quote:
And for the fact that it wasn't that clear, I think I might clear it up. even though this won't be that clear Remember when the card pointed at Harry, he felt he had a weird feeling in his forehead. Well, it all links up to an interview JK did when someone asked how the Order communicated. The interviewee asked chocolate frogs, so that stuck with me. *ten thousand years later, after I've bored you to sleep* Anyway, that card had something special about it, and the Lunch Lady isn't all who she says she is.
So all of this we need to remember for the sequel? I'll be here in December when you start again If you do let me know, and now you pointed it out it makes perfect sense ... I can't believe I'd forgot that little bit. Hmm ... Well now I'm really out *lies* but thanks for a great story Ali.
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10-07-2006, 09:05 PM
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#603 (permalink)
| Niffler
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year | I spy Mrs.Lupin! Old Man Beans | "BOY" | FARM ASSIST| L u L u | Derping like a Boss Quote:
Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole Hmm, but if Peeves dies, yes I know he's a poltergeist but if Peeves dies, then his ghost would still haunt Hogwarts wouldn't it? LOL Peeves would never leave. I think you're right. That would be awesome, because he'd be always causing trouble. Yay! Quote:
Originally Posted by Ottery You r0x0rs Ali. You're story r0x0rs and ... I'm gonna miss it. *sniffles* Why am I still spamming? Uhm ... no reason ... *can't let go* Noooooooooooooooo *is dragged away by Teddy* Aw, shucks. Thanks Ottery, I'm going to miss all of this stuff. And why the spamness, well this thread has a week of life left. Quote:
Originally Posted by Otts So all of this we need to remember for the sequel? I'll be here in December when you start again If you do let me know, and now you pointed it out it makes perfect sense ... I can't believe I'd forgot that little bit. Hmm ... Yeah, if there's a sequel, then the stuff I said will be showing up. And I'm glad it all makes sense, because when I read it afterwards it confused.
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10-10-2006, 04:38 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: *thinking* can't remember i'll get back to you on that
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Em Second | I know about the whole time thing no affence but why was it bledding and glowing?! plz tell and will there be a secuel? plz for your fans Em |
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10-10-2006, 07:52 PM
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#605 (permalink)
| Murtlap
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: somewhere warm and sunny (i wish )
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i'm confused too
why is there a 7 year gap ??
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10-10-2006, 10:28 PM
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#606 (permalink)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year | Old Man Beans | "BOY" | FARM ASSIST| L u L u | Derping like a Boss Quote:
Originally Posted by Radcliffe's lil angel I know about the whole time thing no affence but why was it bledding and glowing?! plz tell and will there be a secuel? plz for your fans Em None taken, it's a perfectly normal question. *points up* to the post. The card wasn't a normal card, meaning that not all is gone. And I'm not sure if I'm doing a sequel, I'm trying to brain storm the stuff at the mo. If I do, I'll get the word to ya Quote:
Originally Posted by dobby92 i'm confused too
why is there a 7 year gap ?? It's an epilogue. It's there to describe what happens after the days events and how they live out in the future. Hope that summed it up for ya! |
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10-11-2006, 01:54 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year | Just kidding Ali ... erm ... mostly LOL the wedding the wedding LOL Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert Quote:
Originally Posted by dobby92 i'm confused too
why is there a 7 year gap ?? In Ali's defense, this isn't uncommon in literature and films. Think about Peter Pan, after Peter drops the kids off he comes back to find Wendy all grown up. *shrugs* We really don't know what happened in between. I think people thought it was too sudden after Harry collapsed or something but I just thought that added excitement ... *shrugs* Why isn't everyone bothered that Ali didn't write the R/Hr wedding ... *pouts*
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10-11-2006, 02:59 PM
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#608 (permalink)
| Niffler
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Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole In Ali's defense, this isn't uncommon in literature and films. Think about Peter Pan, after Peter drops the kids off he comes back to find Wendy all grown up. *shrugs* We really don't know what happened in between. I think people thought it was too sudden after Harry collapsed or something but I just thought that added excitement ... *shrugs* Why isn't everyone bothered that Ali didn't write the R/Hr wedding ... *pouts* Thanks Ottery. I had problems trying to think of an example, but Peter Pan is a good one. Oh, and did you know that there's a sequel to the first out now.
The R/Hr wedding, aww. Maybe it'll happen in space. You know, space weddings. Or maybe even in the sequel if it's written...Nah
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10-12-2006, 12:46 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Pompano Beach, FL
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it's over
it was a great ending tho.
there is a sequel then Ali? You must tell us all when it's up
great story
Roshni
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10-12-2006, 03:02 PM
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| It's Sirius..why else? James' Glasses Remus Artiste Jarvey
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Great ending! I wish it didn't had to've ended!
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10-13-2006, 03:20 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: *thinking* can't remember i'll get back to you on that
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Em Second | ok thanks Ali!and yes great ending too bad its the end though *sighs* why must every great story come to an end *sighs again* Em |
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10-13-2006, 07:06 PM
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#612 (permalink)
| Niffler
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Originally Posted by danismine it's over
it was a great ending tho.
there is a sequel then Ali? You must tell us all when it's up
great story
Roshni
Thanks Roshni. I'm gunna miss reading your replies, if I get a sequel, the link will most probably be in my signature. Quote:
Originally Posted by Mrs.Lupin Great ending! I wish it didn't had to've ended! Thanks Mrs. Lupin, so do I. I dragged it out way longer that I was supposed to, it was meant to end on the 18th of August. Quote:
Originally Posted by Radcliffe's lil angel ok thanks Ali!and yes great ending too bad its the end though *sighs* why must every great story come to an end *sighs again* Em Thank You! I'm glad I made sense. Eeyk, it didn't come to an end. It just finished *shrugs* That's the same day.
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