I'm afraid to say it nearly is. For the horcruxes, I've used Nagini, the Locket, Diary, Hufflepuff Cup, and my own idea. Riddle Senior's tombstone. One was destroyed in the 1st year, and the last was never created. Or was created but is in Harry ( won't say which). That's what I've based this fic on.

Dont worry, I wont kill anyone apart from your Remus, Sirius, Harry, Ron and Hermione. That's what you meant, right?

I have a post... For once.
The begining of the end begins now. That's confused me, so enough small chat. Heres the post.


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The week had passed and it was time for the exams. On the night before the exams started, a note was attached to the Gryffindor board revealing the times of the exams. Even though these weren’t the official N.E.W.T.s, they were the last test where the students would be able to find out their weakness. First up Monday morning was Defence of the Dark Arts. The students were asked to arrive at the classroom as usual only bringing their wand.


One by one as their names were called they stepped in they saw an obstacle course. First up was a tub of water with red caps and other beasts of water. They had to stun the creatures and would get 10 points for each creature successfully stunned. After the water tub they had to go stop a flying ball rather like a bludger from hitting them, with their wands. Once they did this they could take a small breath, or that is what it looked like. When the students sat down at a table, a boggart would jump out and transform into their fears. Ron unsuspectingly sat down and jumped up as the table was covered with a large spider. He froze for a split second and then pulled his wand out and said “stupefy” at the spider. Even though he had successfully stunned the boggart, he lost five points because he didn’t handle the situation properly. After a moment of telling Quarterman that he had dealt with the boggart as he would with a real spider he was given his five points. He then had to walk through something resembling a shrub which attacked him. He used “Reducto” to destroy the vines, enabling him to reach the finish. When he did, he went into a room where the other teacher, Professor Sawyer had a collection of magazines to read through. One quidditch magazine caught Ronald’s eye. After all it was bright orange and had Chudley Cannons written all over it.

The exam took around two hours for everyone to complete, and most people felt that they had done rather well. Harry and Ron had an hour spare whilst Hermione had to go to another exam, so they went back to the common room.

It was empty as they walked in so they took the two nearest seats near the fire.

“So this spider, it was massive jumped at me. I stunned it but Quarterman didn’t let me get the marks at first. I had to tell him that if I did see a spider I would do that and then he let me have them. Improper way of dealing with a boggart, well I’m not going to know if it’s a boggart, am I?”
Harry chuckled and didn’t want to tell Ron about how he had his wand in his hand and destroyed the dementor before it got a chance to look at him. Smiling to himself, everything went black.

“Hagger!” Grawp screamed as four death eaters had their wand pointed at him.
“Be quiet you foul beast, tell us what we need to know and you shall die quickly.” A cold voice said. It emerged from the body of a tall man with silver hair.
“Hagrid!” Grawp shouted clearly. “Hagrid, Reid.” He continued calling his brother and cousin hoping that they would hear him from the forest.

With that Harry jumped up suddenly. His scar was stinging and he knew what was happening.

It's begun

*drawn in* You have something planned don't you. Yeah, that's true about the RP. We have to see.

ZOMG, I can not belive it. Voldemort is at the school, I so did not see that one coming. I mean you only basically said it in your reply. . . *pokes and huggles* It's really good, now I want some more action. Have Harry kill Voldemort, or vise versa. Then have Hermione and Ron get together. Wait, how did the dark lord get in Hogwarts so easily. I was right, the Headmaster was a death eater in desguise isn't he?

Who said Voldemort was in Hogwarts? I was just referring to the RP

I'm not going to deny it, but thats only because it's funny watching you try to work it out. Is Orios a death eater? Well the translation of his name in a language means something, I'll probably tell ya later!

And yup, it's all planned. Right up till Harry's death. Oops, I shouldn've said that.

No it hasn't Ali ... I only know that from the PoA film interviews, JKR wouldn't let Cuaron the director, film anything at the school graveyard, we assume because she's planning to use it in the next book but book 6 came out so that can only mean book 7, right? It must be important who's buried there.

Well this:
and this:
So that's why.

*Ottery squoshes the spider with his giant robot* No one messes with my Ronniekins!

I think that's so cute but seriously, Ron has a point, how is he supposed to know it's a boggart not fair Professor give him full marks. *pouts*

That's my Ron *madglomps* *sniffles* Don't kill him Ali

So I should start worrying now, right?

Love the posts Ali, post again when you can. *eagerly anticipates the battles*

nooo, harry can't die and nor can hagrid
omg, suspense
PAMS

Roshni

Oh dear! This is too much for my nerves, lol. Post more soon!

I think I remember that interview, maybe the founders of Hogwarts? Or the Potters? If their bodies ever got found after the explosion.

And if I did? Nah, to tell the truth, there's no reason to kill him. Then again, there's no reason to keep him alive

Yup, well maybe after the next few posts. But then it would be too late. So, yes. You should worry now

Why not. Well Hagrid can live, I like him. But Harry? Lol, It all depends on the allignment of the planets on the 32nd of this month.

Lol, I'm sowwy. It'll only get worse, or better. I dunno, I'm confused now.

So, I have a post ready, just need to put a few finishing touches on it and then it'll be out.

A bit later than planned, but it's here anyway.


“What’s up?” Ron asked seeing Harry jump up.
“It’s started!” Harry said grabbing the pendant hanging on his neck and holding it tightly. He ran into his dormitory and pulled out a large gold coin. Harry began to fiddle with it until it became hot and hoped that the members of the D.A would be carrying their coins with them.

As Harry ran back into the common room to see a confused Ron Sirius appeared. He looked even more confused when he looked at Harry, then at Ron.
“Harry, what’s happened?” He asked clearly.
“In the forest, with Grawp.” Harry said stowing Albus Dumbledore’s wand in his left pocket. “Just in case I need it.”
With this, the three of them left the common room and ran down the stair case. As they did, they saw members of the D.A and Order bursting out of classrooms. Sirius must have told the Order.

As they reached the entrance hall, they saw many confused first years look at the people running out of the school. Tonks appeared from the dungeons and was on a broomstick flying out of the door. As Harry saw her, it gave him an idea.
“Accio Firebolt,” he shouted, wand pointed at the broom shed.
A fine wooden broom suddenly began to fly above the heads and arrived at Harry’s feet. Mounting the broom, he felt the light rain hit his hair. His hair began to get heavy as he kept increasing his altitude. He reached a height where he could see all of the lake when he saw something strange happening in the forest. The trees were all moving strangely, almost like they were being pulled back and released like an elastic band. Harry had only seen this happen when he first met Grawp. Understanding what the signs meant, he sent some red sparks into the air where he wanted to attract attention from the Order and not the Death Eaters.
Luckily, the forest was too dense for them to see above them but Harry caught the attention of the Order. He sent some smaller sparks in the direction of where it was all happening and they understood him.

He charged into the direction with his wand in hand. He kept his body as close as he could to the wood of the broom so he would be the most streamlined. Not thinking about how foolish it was to go into a battle with at least four Death Eaters when he hadn’t even finished Hogwarts, he dismounted close to where they were but they didn’t see him.

In the distance he could hear Grawp roaring, probably being cursed. He didn’t know what to do but walked towards the crowd with his wand aimed high.

He could see the rest of the crew arriving slowly and saw the fiery red hair of Ron in the bushes nearby. He walked up to the hair and tapped him on the back saying, “Hey Ron!” However, when the red haired person turned around he looked different from Ron. He had curly hair which went down to his eyes and had a busy orange moustache.
“Well, look what we have here!” the man said in a Scottish accent with a grin on his face.

Now y'all can worry.

Ali!!! you're evil
just kidding ali
i loved the post
please post really soon so we know who the scottish man is.

thanks that's so sweet



PAMS

Roshni

I was just saying. . . lol! Oh fine, I'll act as if it was nothing more then a reference.

It's funny to watch me try to figure it out. How is that funny, I'm not funny??? *bust up laughing* Okay, who am I kidding, I'm funny. At times! Wait, you can't start something then not finish it, its not nice. You tease. . . *pokes you*

Harry's death. . . yeah, I kind of expected that one. You shouldn't have. . . Your just teasing me again arn't you? *eyes then continues to poke you*

Oh, and interesting post. That guy, it reminds me of Gimli from LotR. . . *giggles*

*is speachless* But...how...Scottish man? Where'd he come from???

Yay, I'm evil. Is that a good thing? The scottish man, well, he's a man. Who is scottish.
This post made me laugh. Yes, you are funny. And yes, I am just teasing you. *pokes back* You've just given me an idea. Not going to tell you what though,

Harry's death, well as I don't like him. I dunno, maybe I'll let Lockhart have him. [/teasing] *pokes again*

The guy was a mix between Gimli, Groundskeeper Willy (simpsons) and and the fake bad guy at the end of Johnny English.
Well Hogwarts is in Scotland. And maybe the man is a naughty man.

You're evilness Ali seriously, I haven't got a clue ... who that guy is, the battle seems like it's going to be fun though, I like the way you wrote that whole post it was very exciting which is more than I can say for some other fics I've read ...

It's gonna be sad when you finish it. But you're off to a good finish ... you've got me worried for Harry and Ron and everyone else. *gulp*

Back when I can ...

Thanks Ottery. I plan to finish this well, but I might mess up as the end confuses me. Oh Well, at least I'll try .
Let's hope nothing bad happens to Ron or Harry. Coz I'd never do anything bad, would I?

Next post is quite short, but I'll have some more tommorow, definately. Just want to use this cliffy.

Like I said, very short. And very late, but it's here.

Harry looked at the man and realised what he had done. He had just blown the only advantage the Order had over the Death Eaters. With his wand in the air, he tried to send any spell at the person. The ginger man put his hand over Harry’s mouth, saying “Oh, no you don’t kiddo.”

Not having any idea what to do, Harry plunged his wand into the mans stomach. The man fell onto the floor and lost his grip on Harry. Harry took his wand into his hand and aimed it like a sword at the man’s throat.

“What are you doing to Grawp?” Harry spat.
“Keep yer nose out, yeh little brat.”

Harry pushed his wand up the mans face until he was looking down the wand into the mans eyes. They were bright red with thin jet black pupils.

“Go on then, kill me now. One lost second can change a lot.” The man said. “Like now.”
“What?” Harry said.
“Well, my men will be coming in a minute. And the don’t like the brat who lived, so you should either kill me or let me lose. Look behind you, my men are coming.”
Tired of the mans babbling, Harry decided to act. “Petrificus Totalus.”

As soon as the spell had made contact with the man, something heavy hit Harry’s head. Falling to the ground, Harry’s wand flew away from him.

“Stupefy!” A hoarse voice shouted.


And who do we know who has a hoarse voice? Yup, it's wolfie!

omg!!! hoarse voice??? snape maybe? tho i dont think so
um... moody? but moody is good
PAMS so we can find out

Roshni

Snape? Maybe. You say Moody is good, so you think Snape is bad? Tut tut.
Maybe someone a little closer to home. His name is Lima, Uniform, Papa, India, November. That'll tell you who it is. If ye can work it out.

Just a small warning before you read this, there might be some bits which rate higher than Sa9+. I'm planning some which make it worse, but there are a few in the next post. Oh, yeah. Enjoy!


A flash of red light flew past Harry’s head and hit another man in the bushes.
“Sorry Harry,” Lupin said picking Harry up. “You need to keep your eyes open, there was one behind you. I had to use a silent spell, and then he fell on you.” He said pointing to the body on the floor. “C’mon, we need to sort everything out.”

They walked to the site where torches were lit and noises were heard. On arrival they saw that the fight had already begun. Seamus was seen chasing Macnair around the forest sending spells at him. Ernie Macmillan was launching spells at random Death Eaters. Harry ran in and sent a stunner at a tall black haired man. He fell to the floor falling on a woman in a black hood.
“No,” she screamed. “You’ve snapped my wand, you-.”
“Nice shot,” Ron said appearing from the trees.
Harry smiled as he saw Ron, knowing that he was safe. “C’mon, we need to get rid of them.”

They suddenly heard a very loud scream and saw a man flying through the air. He landed, splashing blood everywhere. The body which had landed had a bushy moustache with an eye patch underneath the mask. In the distance a large tree was standing, swinging about. Walden McNair had just been killed by the whomping willow.

A small child was seen running into the battle zone and was obviously a young student at Hogwarts. He saw what was happening, screamed and then fainted. Being the only one to notice this, Hermione shouted “Accio, First Year.” The body began to fly above the spells and landed in the distance. As they landed, she sent a body bind curse in the direction of the child so they would not run into the battle area again, but missed and hit a tall silver haired man. He fell to the floor and tried calling his fellow Death Eaters. Thinking quickly, Harry sent a stunner at him.

“Tarantallegra,” A cold female voice shouted, making a dirty blond haired girl scream and do a strange dance. “Longbottom, does this remind you of anyone?” The woman pointed her wand a Luna and said, “Crucio.” Luna screamed in pain on the floor.

Neville turned around and saw what was happening. He raised his wand, shouting, “Crucio,” at the woman. Bellatrix Lestrange nearly fell to the floor, but quickly regained her footing and increased the amount of pain which was attacking Luna.

Harry and Ron were in a duel with two unknown Death Eaters. They were moving around the forest when Ron nearly tripped making Harry fall.
“Don’t look down, keep an eye on them!” Harry said jumping onto his feet. Just before Harry was up, they sent a curse at them.
“Protego,” Ron shouted creating an invisible force field shielding himself and Harry. He then launched a stunner knocking one of the men down.

Me likey....poor Luna...Save her, Harry!

Sorry I haven't replied lately Ali. Yes. . . action! I mean, the fighting. The action. . . I can't wait for more. Keep up the lovely work my sweet. Your the best. . . I'll see you around. *blows kisses* Later luffs, Chao!

Silly Ali, I know that code ... it's Lupin ... *Ottery the spy*

I was trying to remember that ruddy spell all week to use in my fic ... 'sfunny I should have read your posts sooner

Dork? LOL Yeah, I'm sure that's what she meant to say you're funny Ali, and I'm loving the action.

I just seriously think this has to happen .... seriously. Neville v. Bellatrix, in canon, I mean ... it's a revenge thing ... not like Harry & Wormtail, that fight I think will have less of a chance of happening, the main bad guy is Voldemort. I don't know about Lupin v. Wormtail either ... but it's more likely ... but now that there's what's that wolf's name in HBP ... Fenrir.

is my hero ... and Harry's too ... *sniffles* Go good guys! w00t.

Loving your story Ali, seriously, you're really good at writing this action stuff. I like it. Post more when you can ... I can't believe it's almost over ...

Yup, definately poor Luna. Will harry manage to save her, or will someone else have to?

Lottie! Nothing like some action, only thing I can write easily. And even that's hard
Yay, someone else knows it. Proof that I'm not crazy. Don't ask how, it just is
It's the only way it should end. But Sirius has something against Bella aswell. She "killed" him didn't she? What's Wormtail ever done to Harry? [apart from turning in Harrys parents to Voldie] I did plan for Lupin to fight Fenrir, but I killed him off earlier on.

I have a post, since yesterday infact, but I'm just doing some finishing touches on to it. Yup, the next post will have some detail on some spells again so it'll be higher than a Sa9+.

Ok, this post definately has stuff rating higher than Sa9+. It ain't that bad, but it is more detailed on the stuff.

Meanwhile, Neville and Luna were having problems of their own.

Bellatrix Lestrange had increased the amount of pain which Luna had to endure and Neville couldn’t do anything about it. Every time he attacked her she raised the limits knowing that Neville would not take a risk in harming Luna. His face was blank and his eyes were wide in fear. He imagined that this would be how his parents had lost their sanity, in the hands of this evil witch.

With the thought of his parents in his mind, Neville dropped his wand and ran at her. He didn’t stop, even after knocking her to the ground. He began to punch her in the face, not thinking about the fact that she had a wand and he didn’t. Stopping for a moment Neville turned around to see where his wand was.

A boy in Hufflepuff robes was engaged in a duel with a Death Eater. He had curly hair and went by the name of Justin Finch-Fletchley. So far, he had been able to stun three Death Eaters and nearly stunned his fourth, Antonin Dolohov. The Death Eater was stuck with nowhere to run as Justin was hit by a weak spell from someone else.

Knowing that this could be his only time, Dolohov raised his wand and shouted an unusual incantation. A jet of purple light shot out of his wand, flying in a zigzag pattern and hit Justin squarely in the chest. This spell was the same as the one which nearly killed Hermione two years ago in the department of mysteries.

Justin was on the floor coughing but nobody saw him. He tried getting his wand but Dolohov accio’d it away. Falling backwards, Justin was out of the battle and possibly out of life.

Bellatrix Lestrange had managed to stop Neville from punching her and threw him off. Unluckily, for her, she threw him in the direction of his wand. Neville grabbed his wand and aimed at the woman.

“Crucio.”

This time the spell worked properly as the woman screamed in pain. She kept screaming until Neville paused from the torturing curse and performed a silencing charm. Knowing that there was no time like the present, he raised his wand to an inch above her chest and sent a stunner. Although this should have only stunned her, it didn’t.

From a long distance, maybe, but from less that an inch, the spell was fatal.
Bellatrix acted like she was winded, until she couldn’t breathe anymore. Slowly feeling her lungs collapse, a tall figure emerged over her body.
Not of Neville, but of her cousin, Sirius. He looked down at his dying cousin with disgust. She thought that she had watched him die; now Sirius was just repaying the debt.

“Help,” Harry shouted from the distance.
Ron jumped up and looked at Harry. He was pointing at the blazing cabin which was owned by Hagrid.

“Remus!” A cold voice shouted. A greasy man dressed in black robes had appeared with a small young boy with silver hair.


End of chapter 15. So, that means that...Chapter 16 is next

Oh! An Update. . . Oh, go Neville!!! What, I'd beat her up too, she's a total. . . I shall not finish my sentence. Anyways, so did Sirius just kill Bellatrix? I think that's how I read it. Well it's really good Ali. I mean theres so much going on, and you've improved in your writing. Your detail has gotten better, it actually draws you into the story more. Nicely done, keep up the wonderful work. *blows kisses* Chao!

~Lottie