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mrs_potter · 12-01-2007, 03:30 AM

It's me!! Chelsea!! Once again for my 4th fanfic here on snitchseeker. this is my 3rd one-shot. I just love
these things. They're fun!!! Im actually writing this while waiting for my best friend to call me. So
what better way to pass the time than write a one-shot! lol..so here it is. Hope you like it

Oh yeah-almost forgot. I don't own any of the characters. Only the lovely J. K. Rowling is allowed to say that. Lucky her. If I owned the characters, I TOTALLY wouldn't be writing this. lol....enough jabber...here you
go: (oh yeah, this is in Hermione's point of view. I just love her.)

Hey, you. Sa16+

"What makes me such a horrible person that he would do that to me?" That's the question that I kept asking myself over and over again. I couldn't get it out of my head no matter what I tried to think of. "What makes me such a horrible person that he would do that to me?" There it is again.

So there I was, having that question torture my mind in the freezing rain and I was dripping wet somewhere in the woods next to the Burrow. I don't know how long I was gone but it felt like hours. I just couldn't believe that he would do that. Draco. The one I've loved ever since the first time I told him off. The worst of it was that he did it with my best friend. Ginny. It was so hard to believe.

I just couldn't wait to see him. I was so excited. I know I was only going to marry him in a couple of hours, but I was just so ecstatic! So I told Ginny, who was helping me that I was going to go down to check and make everything was all right. Naturally, I did that anyway and everything was fine, just like I thought it would be. Nothing would go wrong with Mrs. Weasley in control. But on the way up, I snuck quietly past the room I was supposed to be getting ready in and went up to Draco's room. I heard a low murmur and figured Harry or Ron was in there with him, giving him a pep talk or threating that if he hurt me, they would hurt them.

So, just like any other person would do, I stood next to the door to listen what they were saying. Instead of hearing Harry or Ron's voice, I heard a woman's voice. I immediately thought of Mrs. Weasly, Mrs. Malfoy, or my mom. But I knew all three of them were just downstairs, getting everything ready for the wedding. So when I couldn't think of anyone else that would give Draco a pep talk, my question was answered. I heard Draco saying, "Ginny! Come on, she'll never find out, babe. She completely in love with me. Blinded by love to even begin to think that you would do this to her. You're her best friend. She wouldn't even dream out you doing this. She'll NEVER find out, babe." Then I heard the sickening sound of them kissing.

I burst the door open and screamed, "You wench! I can't believe you! You said you were my best friend and that I could trust you with anything! And you," I turned to Draco. "You said you loved me! And that you wouldn't do anything to hurt me! You're such a liar!" I had tears flowing down my face and I turned and ran down stairs. I ran through the front door, ignoring all the questions and funny looks.

I didn't know where I was going to go but I didn't care. Anywhere away from this house and away from them. I blindly ran to God knows where and, of course, it began to rain. Not just a light drizzle, it was a downpour as if the heavens were crying. It was just like every other chick flick I have seen that had someone cheating on another and they run away and it begins to rain.

I was freezing and my beautiful, white dress was know covered in mud, my train had practically ripped off and it was wet. Every single part of me was wet.

So now, here I am, freezing, wet, tired, and still, tears are coming from my eyes like I'm a human fountain. Like the rain is soaking through my skin and coming out my eyes. I just couldn't believe that this was happening to me. I was planning of living somewhere in the country with three little girls running around while Draco took a nap on the swing on our rap around porch. I had so many dreams that were ripped away from me within five mintues.

I began to think to myself all the horrible things that Draco has done that seemed so minor when they happened. There was the night that him and his friends had stripers over for a friends party. At first, I was okay with it because I thought Draco didn't do anything with them. Was I wrong. It turned out she gave him a lap dance and some much other stuff that I don't even want to think about. I was furious. We broke up for it seemed like forever. But when I look back on it, it was only a week.

There were so many other things too. I was beginning to think to myself, "Why would I ever want to marry him?" He's been so horrible at times that it made want to kill him. He could be so mean. The worst thing was when, we got into fights, he would call me a mud-blood and that I'm not worth anything. I would be so hurt, but when we tried to make up, he would make it seem like it was my fault, and I was the one saying sorry for it.

I was thinking of all the things he did when I heard my name being called out. I was getting ready to run, but then I could only hear one voice so I stayed. The person was getting so close, I could hear twigs cracking and bushed being rustled around. I knew who it was by just listening to their voice.

I stood up and turned to where they were coming. As soon as they turned the corner, I flew into his arms and kissed him. And as we were kissing, I knew I was making the right decision. I knew everything was going to be alright. Yeah, there were going to be some cuts and bruises, but everything will eventually heal. I finally pulled away from him and smiled. I rustled my fingers through his bright,red hair and looked into his beautiful eyes. "Hey, you" And at that moment, I was absolutely, positively, sure that everything was going to turn out great.

Tell Me what you think..I just realized that my one-shots are all kinda short so next time, ill write a long one

~Chelsea

nytingale · 12-04-2007, 09:16 AM

~New readr~ Wow I liked this one shot. The twist at the end was fantastic. Now I have to go back and read all of your other fanfics.

mrs_potter · 12-04-2007, 09:00 PM

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Originally Posted by nytingale

~New readr~ Wow I liked this one shot. The twist at the end was fantastic. Now I have to go back and read all of your other fanfics.

YAY! Im so happy you liked it

YES! Go and read my stories ecspecially my story story. I only have like 3 readers..which makes me sad..

but i love the readers i have now though

lol..so happy you liked it=) *does a happy dance*
~Chelsea

hpfan4eva · 12-05-2007, 01:17 AM

awww..Draco darling isnt really that bad....hes a SWEETIE...but I LOVED IT! SIMPLY wonderfuly, Cheeeelsea. WHOOP WHOOP keep up the good work, darlin!

*Kate*

mrs_potter · 12-05-2007, 02:57 PM

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Originally Posted by hpfan4eva

awww..Draco darling isnt really that bad....hes a SWEETIE...but I LOVED IT! SIMPLY wonderfuly, Cheeeelsea. WHOOP WHOOP keep up the good work, darlin!

*Kate*

You're so funny kate! I love you to death! I know he isn't that horrible but I just wanted to make him mean in that one. It was either him or Ron and I didn't want Ronniekins to be a bad boy...lol..So happy you liked it

~Chelsea

Little Trooper · 12-05-2007, 08:20 PM

Loved. Such a great twist at the end. Loved it. Cant wait for more.

mrs_potter · 12-07-2007, 09:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Little Trooper

Loved. Such a great twist at the end. Loved it. Cant wait for more.

Aww...i'm glad you liked it. I actually JUST came up w/ and idea of an actual story. Hopeful it'll be good. I like seriously JUST came up w/ it..like 2 minutes ago while sitting here, waiting for this page to load. It's gonna be a Dramione..of course...lol..I want to have it up in a week or 2. I want to make sure I'm ahead a couple of chapters...so yeah. Just be waiting....I'm debating between two titles though..but I think I've go it. So keep your eyes open..lol..wow...i babbled right on there didn't I? lol..
~Chelsea