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Author's note: This is a collaboration between Cassiopia Malfoy and I, it will from two PoV's.

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Chapter index:
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine



Chapter One: Rose PoV
There I was again tonight forcing laughter, faking smiles
Same old tired, lonely place
Walls of insincerity
Shifiting eyes and vancancy vanished when I saw your face
All I can say is it was enchanting to meet you--Taylor Swift



[I]Gah...Why did I have to come here?[I/] I thought as I faked a smile to Lilly, pretending to listen to what Rose was talking about. I nodded to her, I loved my cousin, but I was just tired, bored...lonely. Like everyday, like every week, like every day since graduating Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, not that it had been that long...But I still felt empty...

"Isn't this an enchanting party? Are you okay, Rose?" Lily Potter asked me, finally penetrating my thick wall of thought.

"Hm? Oh yes, I'm fine Lilly. I'm glad Lorcan and Lysander invited me," I lied with a convincing smile. Lorcan and Lysander Scamander, Luna Lovegood's children had thrown this party, and I was extreamly uncomfortable there.

I had already kicked off my pinchy shoes, and undone my too fancy braid of red hair. I was absently playing with the silver necklace around my neck. I wished I hadn't allowed Lily to set up my wardrobe for this party, now I felt more out of place then usual, too dressed up. I was not very confident about anything really, except when I was on a broom, I smiled at the thought. When I was on I was focused, confident, positive, and everything made sense, but on the ground, around other people...all of that confidence just disappeared. So a party was a bad idea for me (unless it was in the air, but that has yet to happen), and yet there I was.

"Rose!" Lily waved her hand in front of my face.

I blinked and looked up at her, "Huh?"

"Rose, I have been saying your name for the past two minutes! Are you sure you're okay?"

"Um...yeah, I'm having an enchanting time," I teased her, using her own words against her.

She smiled at me, buying the lie. Dominique Weasley, yet another cousin of ours, come skipping over. She was a very small part Veela and was gorgeous, looking just like her mother. She greeting me with a smile and a polite "Hello Rose Weasley," she liked using our last names.

I replied, "Hello Miss Dominique."

Dominique then started whispering to Lily, who suspiciously broke into a wide grin and kept glancing towards me then breaking into giggles that made her seem like a twelve year old.

I fidgeted, knowing who they were talking about. I was sure they meant well, but those two had tried to set me up on so many dates in the past, and it never worked. This was no doubt another one of their set-ups.

Bored out of my mind, I looked around, trying to find a familiar face, one that would actually hold an interesting conversation with me. Before I could spot someone Lily and Dominique grabbed my arms and dragged me, bare foot, across the room. They dropped me by Albus then they disappeared.

Well, unless they were setting me up with my cousin, major ew, then they had other plans. Uh-oh. "What is going on Albus?"

He smiled happily at me, uh-oh, "You'll see Rosie, you'll see."

Yep. Major Uh-oh. "Why did they dump me with you?"

"Because they have to ge- I mean, do something," Albus responded hurriedly.

"Wait, what?" I asked stunned.

He just laughed. I groaned. I was at a party, only half knew half the people, and now my evil cousins were keeping something from me.

The lights dimmed. The room quieted. A door opened. Rose and Lily walked in, carrying a giant cake with eighteen lights floating around the cake. They smiled broadly at me before walking over/ "HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROSE!!" the room exploded with noise and commotion.

I blinked. It's not my...oh. Wow, I forgot my own birthday... "Um..Thank you. I think.."

I hated surprise parties. I hated them because it made the center of attention, and I only went because I figured I could blend into the crowd.

So much for blending.

For the next couple hours I was pretending to have good time. Forcing laughter, faking smiles, I had gotten good at it.

Finally I managed to break away, saying I needed some water.

Then, I saw him. He was standing away from the main part of the party. His gray eyes shifting from place to place, his face kind of far off.

I don't what came over me, but I was..I was enchanted. All I saw was him.

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Chapter Two: Scorpius' PoV

Your eyes whispered, "Have we met?" across the room, your silhouette
Starts to make its way to me
The playful conversation starts, counter all your quick remarks
Like passing notes in secrecy
And it was enchanting to meet you
All I can say is I was enchanted to meet you--Taylor Swift



“Lorcan, tell me again what the heck I'm doing here?” I muttered to my kind of friend, some celabration party for Ireland winning the world cup, this was, I didn't know a single person here.

“You're here to celebrate the quidditch world cup game, honestly Scorp, you need to get out and about more often.” Lorcan laughed at me then walked away, evil git.

Sighing, I walked around aimlessly doing nooooothing, cause there was nothing to do, then the lights dimmed, I freaked out, obviously. Then someone said happy birthday to someone. Oh yippee, I just love birthday's, not. Who's Rose anyway? I mean, the name did sound somewhat familiar, but I don't know, it is a common name isn't it.

I was half awake and heading towards the drink table and trying to stay out of the way and also moving increidbly slowly, glancing around to make sure that I didn't bump into anybody (not that I really would, cause I was avoiding everyone) when my eyes locked with bright blue ones, it was a girl, she looked at me confused, clearly wondering if we'd met before, there was some memory in my mind that I couldn't exactly recall, but we must have met at some point, she looked so familiar! Maybe it was one of Lorcan's or Lysander's ex girlfriends? Huh, she looked to pretty to have ever dated one of them, er, not that they didn't date pretty girls, she was just prettier then average pretty.

For some reason we both started to walk towards each other and ended up like, in the middle of the room, face to face? Kind of an awkward situation if you ask me. “Hey, I'm Scorpius.” I gave her a quirky, Malfoy style smile, smooth, really smooth. Yup, I'm talented, got it all from my dear dad, I also really hoped this made the awkwardness went away, that would be good.

“Uh, hi, I'm Rose.” WAIT! Rose, birthday person Rose? Brain is not working at the moment, but yea, maybe it was after the birthday girl all.

“Cool, happy birthday I guess?” I wasn't sure what exactly to say right then.

“Ha-ha, yea, I guess.” She blushed, probably didn't like being noticed, hm, I kind of understood why, er, not really, never mind. “Uh, you enjoying the party?” Rose then asked, clearly at a lack of what to say.

“No, not really, I don't know anybody here.” I admitted truthfully.

“Really? Same here!” Rose smiled a little bit, and I nearly sighed in relief, I was not alone in not knowing people, good for me. “Never really fit in the 'social butterfly' group.”

“Me either, if I did my parents might have had a heart attack.” I joked, countering her quick remarks.

“Parents, you never mentioned your last name.” Rose pointed out, raising her eyebrows.

“Well neither did you.” I shot back, somewhat defensively.

“Touche, I'm Rose Weasley by the way.” Oh, Weasley, huh, I don't care, even though my parents might.

“Scorp Malfoy.” Did I seriously just address myself as Scorp?

“That's hysterical, the only person I can actually talk to at this party, is the one I'm forbidden to talk to.” OH YEA, I remember her now.

“Same here, same here.” I chuckled, well this was certainly an enchanting conversation, no sarcasm there believe it or not.

“So do you have any siblings?” Rose couldn't help but ask.

“Nope, luckily I'm an only child, yourself?” I queried, smirking a little bit.

“Younger brother, Hugo.” Oh that kid that causes a lot of trouble, ha, I've heard of him.

“Nice,” not sure what else to say, I was happily an only child. “Just guessing here, but since you don't really know anyone here other then family members, I take it you were dragged along?”

“Yeah, pretty much.” Rose nodded a little bit. “It was probably because of the whole birthday thing, honestly, I forgot about it myself.” She paused to laugh before continuing. “The worst part is, I hate surprise parties.”

“Ah, so do I.” We have so much in common, it makes me feel like jumping around and screaming, then I'd look really insane. I was still have an enchanting time here, and enchanting is a weird word.
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Chapter Three: Rose's PoV

This night is sparkling, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, blushing all the way home
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew
I was enchanted to meet you--Taylor Swift



Parties are so much better when you have someone to talk to.

Scorpius and I got along great, he was easy to talk to, made me laugh, listened to me...It was one of my best birthdays ever.

Finally, looking at my watch, I realized with a sinking heart I had to leave. It was the first time in a long time I was upset to leave a party that I was dragged to.

Looking to Scorpius I said with a sigh, "Looks I got to be off to home."

Scorpius tilted my wrist so he could read my watch (despite the fact he had his own watch) and asked with wide eyes, "So soon? The party's only just begun!"

We both looked around and laughed, at this point in time several people had already left, some had fallen asleep there, and others were talking quietly to each other in different parts of the room. "You know, I never, ever, thought I would say this, but I think we're the life of the party, if only my brother were here. The pranks I could picture him pulling on the ones asleep.."

Scorp let out a chuckle, "Like what? Hand in warm water?"

I shook my head, "Last time, he somehow managed to put Uncle Harry up on the roof, of the neighbors house."
Scorpius laughed so hard he snorted, causing me to burst into giggles. Giggles? Since when did I giggle? "Well, I really do have to be going though. I'm walking home, and I'm already late as it is."

Scorpius stopped laughing, but that handsome in a cute way smile was still there, "Well then, good-bye eighteen-year-old-girl-whom-is-forbidden-to-talk-to-me-but-has-any-way." He gave a slight bow in farewell and I burst into a combination of giggles and laughter, it sounded odd coming from a girl that hardly laughed except for when it was fake...

"Good-bye boy-whom-I'm-not-allowed-to-talk-to-but-have-any-way. Maybe I'll see you at the next party we're dragged too." Although, if I know you're going to be there, I won't have to be dragged to it..

I said good-bye to my cousins then skipped walked out the door. As soon as I exited the building my lips instantly formed a toothy smile that I couldn't have faked if I tried. I danced the whole way home, well, not quite danced...but the occasional twirl on the side of road while staring up at the stars did happen.

We can just say that I was wonder-struck all the way home, because I just had the best day ever. Then, of course, my brat brother, had to notice I was different then my normal sulky self....probably because I was singing quietly to myself as I practically skipped through the door way.

Hugo, who was sitting at the kitchen table when I entered, took one look at my face, looked taken aback, squinted, and held his hand up to shield his eyes. "Rose," he said as if in pain, "your happy glow, it's blinding!"

I rolled my eyes, feeling my cheeks heat up in embarrassment. "Shut it Hugo," I retaliated lamely. Inside though, I still felt "as light as a feather" (not meaning to be all cliche or anything, but that's the only way to explain it.

"There is no way on earth, my sister, the most Anti-Social person in the history of people, likes some guy. It's just not possible, and I know it's true, because your face is beet red," Hugo pointed out, obviously right.

I just smiled at Hugo deciding to go with the best tactic in getting rid of annoying brothers, creeping them out. "You're right dearest brother of mine," I started walking towards him, a wide smile on my face "I have fallen in love, completely and utterly in love!" I put both hands up to my heart, a dopey and creepyish expression on my face. Taking a few steps closer I said, "So in love I can hardly stand it!" I was now right next to him, I wrapped my arms around his neck, he squirmed, my trick was working. "So in love I can't keep it in any longer! I love you Hugo!"I moved in for a kiss on his cheek and was met with empty air, he managed to squirm under my arms and out of the room.

I loved it when I managed to scare my brother.

Then I escaped to my room, before Hugo returned. I flopped on my bed in a very un-ladylike manner, and sighed. Only thoughts of one person were in my mind. One thing was torture though, did he like me?

I mean, he could be a natural flirt and I was dumb enough to fall for it, he could have forgotten about me already. He could have a girl friend. He could be in love with some random girl. The more I thought about the more my heart sank. I doubted that I would ever see him again anyway, and that this was some crush that would pass in a few weeks, or at least, that's what I tried to convince myself.

I couldn't let myself say the four words, enough to myself, for fear of bitter disappointment. I could not bring myself to say those four words that my heart felt. I, Rose Lillian Weasley, couldn't say it. I could say, "I. Am. In. Love."

For the next several hours those thoughts swarmed my mind. I tried to shake them out..but was impossible.

Finally my mouth and tongue and voice whispered into the darkness of my room, "I, Rose Lillian Weasley, am in love with a Malfoy, desperately and completely in love." It was most definitely enchanting to meet him, because now I loved him.

Now the question was, was he enchanted to meet me too? I could only hope...
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Nahhhh, of course Scorpius wasn't enchanted to meet her, he absolutely hated her and the only person he could possibly talk to was her, and he also decided that he should play with her emotions.

Scorpius: O_o

Anyway, the part when he looked at her watch, that made me giggle sooooo bad.

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Chapter Four: Scorpius' PoV

The lingering question kept me up, 2 a.m., who do you love?
I wonder 'til I'm wide awake
Now I'm pacing back and forth, wishing you were at my door
I'd open up and you would say
It was enchanting to meet you
All I know is I was enchanted to meet you

This night is sparkling, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, blushing all the way home
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew



I started on my way home not long after Rose left, there was no one for me to talk to anyway, nothing for me to do, I waved to Lorcan and Lysander and told them I had a enchantingly great time, and they just smirked at me. Drat, did they notice me talking to Rose? Oh, that can't be good. Right as I was about to walk out the door, my mind on Rose again, one of them, Lysander I believe, tapped my shoulder. I turned around, had I forgotten something?

“Scorp, did you know that your blushing like a school girl?” He was laughing hysterically, I just glared at him and punched his arm, before continuing on my way home.

I stared at the sky and was whistling softly to myself as I walked home, the stars were sparkling brightly, and I had to admit, I probably was blushing like an idiot, not a school girl though, that's just a stupid idea, and impossible.

I was completely wonder-struck by Rose, and her beauty. I entered my house, smiling widely, both my parents noticed but refrained from saying something, thaaaaaankfully. And then I sat down on the couch and my face fell, I just realized that things couldn't ever work between Rose and I, I liked her, and she clearly didn't like me.

“Scorpius honey, it's way past your bedtime, get some sleep.” Astoria looked up realizing it was 2 am, she noticed that I was sitting on the couch, staring off into space and looking slightly frustrated, I had been like this ever since I had come back from the Scamander's party. “Scorpius, are you listening to me?”

“Yea, bed, I know,” I mumbled, still dazed, getting up I headed to my room, but I just couldn't fall asleep. I was so confused, a girl as pretty as Rose, HAD to be romantically involved with somebody. I was so frustrated, but who in the world could she be with? It had to some really crappy guy, if he wasn't there to spend time with her. Unless he had a job and a life, and was working on making a foundation for their family. But who was it? Was it like, some professional quidditch player? The handsomest bachelor of the year that wasn't related to her?

Who ever it was, I had to admit, I was insanely jealous of him. Wait, did I just, WAIT! I'm a Malfoy, she's a Weasley this won't, no can't work, but I don't care, I love her. I stopped in dead, not noticing that I was pacing. Did I just say that I love Rose Weasley, no way, but yea way, I was, oh gosh, this is bad, but it's insanely good at the same time. I just wish she was at the door of my house at this moment, so I could tell her how enchanting it was to meet her, and all I knew was that I was enchanted to meet HER.

That's insanely cheesy and makes me want to die, and I'm back to pacing back and forth, still wanting to know who the heck she loved, because it certainly wasn't me. Finally I lay down on my bed again, I was just to tired to stay awake any longer. After what felt like ages, I fell asleep with Rose still on my mind.

When I woke up I was still incredibly tired and I was still thinking about Rose, yup, that pretty much proved that I was in love with her, I've never been able to think about the same girl for longer then one hour. But just one question for myself, why did I have to fall in love with the most beautiful girl in the world and one of the smartest girls, who I am forbidden to talk to, and most likely has an amazing boyfriend that she'll never ever leave. Yea, I've got severe problems with my choice of girls.

I went down for breakfast, still smiling despite all my worries about Rose, and that is when my parents finally couldn't contain themselves anymore, I was expecting them to break anytime.

“Scorpius, what is wrong with you, you've been smiling like a teenage girl ever since you got home from that, and I quote 'horribly, stupid, boring party' is there something I need to know about?” Draco snapped at me, Astoria gave me a worried glance before turning to reprimand my father.

“There's nothing wrong with him sweetie, nothing wrong with smiling, right Scorp?” Astoria didn't even sound like she believed herself.

“Um, nothing you need to know about and I'm not acting like a teenage girl.” Why was everyone using that line against me? “I only met a girl there.”

“A girl, when can I meet her, what's her name, is she pretty?” Thanks mum, I began to blush a little bit at the last question. My dad just spewed his orange juice all over the place, looking freaked out.

“Who is she?” He finally managed to ask.

“Um, just some girl at the party.” It wasn't like I was going to tell them I'd fallen for the girl they (they meaning dad) said I could never talk to or interact with ever.

“It can't be 'just some girl' if your acting like this!” Astoria persisted, and I wanted to disappear, why did I mention that I met a girl?

“Uhhh, I'm going to get ready for whatever I have to do today.” And with that I left the room.
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Awesome job! I love how we had it up for a total of three days and already have so many posts up
Haha thanks, I was worried you might hate the part I added on and didn't tell you about *is sneaky* lol.

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I loved the chapter!

Scorpius is so awesome! *glomps Scorpius, knocking him over*
Thaaaaank you! Haha, I loooove Scorpius, he is sooo awesome.
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Chapter Five: Rose's PoV

Author's note: Sorry it is so short, not much can be done with the verses I got...So enjoy what you got! Also sorry that it took this long to get up a post, I kinda forgot to post it the other day ...Gosh, A lot of sorrys


This night is flawless, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, dancing around all alone
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew
I was enchanted to meet you

This is me praying that
This was the very first page, not where the storyline ends
My thoughts will echo your name until I see you again
These are the words I held back as I was leaving too soon
I was enchanted to meet you-- Taylor Swift


I could not sleep. I groaned and went my window. I looked out the window, they stars were sparkling, the moon was bright, the night was flawless.

I was restless, unable to sit still. It was about 3:00am, and I was still wonder-stuck! Gosh, no one had ever effected my like that before. So why him? Why did I have to love him?

I made a mental list of why I shouldn't love him:

1. I am forbidden to talk to him or listen to him.

2. He's a stinking Malfoy! He's supposed to hate Blood-Traitors

3. He probably DID hate me, and just pretended to like me because we were surrounded by people.

4. HE'S A MALFOY!

5. Because he was so awesome he probably had an equally amazing girlfriend.

6. Dad would kill me and him if he knew.

7. Sigh...

Yep. Only seven reasons reasons why I should not be in love him. Now I made a mental list of why I should.

1. He is funny, and made me laugh

2. We clicked instantly

3. The way he was so disappointed when I left

4. The way I still can't stop blushing

5. The way his face and his name just floated through my thoughts

6. Because I was smiling like a five year old

7. Because no matter how hard I try, I doubt I could fall out of love with him.

8. The way my heart flutters whenever I think of his smile.

9. The way I'm thinking of way more items

10. He just simply can't leave my mind.

My thoughts were so jumbled at this point, I just had to find an escape. I grabbed my broom, and raced outside through the back door.

No sooner than my feet hit the grass, I jumped on the broom and did several laps around the yard. Then I just started, well...Is it possible to dance in the air on a broom? Because that's what it felt like...

My thoughts went back to Scorpius as I landed an put away my broom. He must love someone other then me. I mean, who wouldn't fall for him? Was he a quidditch player? What was his favorite food? Was he in a relationship? Who was he in one with? He was so funny and sweet....

Would I ever know the answers to those questions? I hoped so. I hoped I could see him again, that there would be several more run ins with each other. I hoped that the party wouldn't be the last time we met. I hoped that the story ended with "Happily Ever After".

I had to see him again, or else my head would explode from these thoughts. I was hoping, no, I was PRAYING that I would see him again, and that he would be Enchanted to meet me too.
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Brillient chapter
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Awww, loving how lovestruck Rose is! Awesome chapter! PAMS
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Miss Evi3e <3:

Thank you! That song IS amazing! although I like Owl City's version better

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Yes, she is very love struck :heart2: and thanks you!
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Owl city did a version? Really i've never heard of it :/

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Chapter Six: Scorpius' PoV

Please don't be in love with someone else
Please don't have somebody waiting on you
Please don't be in love with someone else
Please don't have somebody waiting on you -- Taylor Swift



Oh my word, if I had one more thought about Rose Weasley, I was going to do something drastic. Really drastic, like, tell her I love her drastic, wait, NO, that's a completely stupid idea, but on the other hand, maybe it's not. Groaning in irritation I decided to head over to the park in Diagon Alley, there was no way she'd be at a park was there. Settling on that I apparated once I exited the boundaries of my house. I arrived in an alleyway not far from the Leaky Cauldron, briefly greeted Hannah Longbottom and then continued into Diagon Alley, stopping at Floreans for some icecream.

He always commented on how polite and kind I was, funny, I didn't think I was that gentlemen like. Maybe my father wasn't the kindest person to him when he was a kid, that was probably it, sad as that is. Sitting down at the park bench, I noticed Chase Tim there, so I sat down next to him. “Hey Chase,” I said, I believe he was at the party last night, his mother Cho Tim was somewhat friends with Luna Scamander. He looked up and grinned at me. “You were at the party last night, right?”

“Yea, it was pretty wicked, and also Weasley's birthday, gosh she is so hott.” Chase marvelled as I gagged on my ice cream and resisted punching him. I nodded meekly, not sure what else to do. “I mean, you, even as a Malfoy, got to admit it. I just can't wait for the day when she and I are together, I can totally tell she likes me, why in the name of Merlin wouldn't she?” He paused for a bit in his obnoxious ramblings and then continued. “She'd totally hate you though, so don't even bother going for her.”

“Well um, I don't really care for her at all anyway, she is a Weasley after all.” I stood up, really annoyed with Chase at the moment, ugh, some times I just want to curse people into next week, but with Chase, I wanted to curse him into next century. He nodded, but his eyes were glazed, as if he was thinking, and he probably was, about Rose, which made me so flipping angry. I was the only one allowed to say she was hott, I don't know, or care, what gave me that privilege, but I still had it. In my frustration I didn't notice a certain red head until I ran into her. “Rose!” I exclaimed astonished.

“Scorpius! I uh, I've got to be, getting, er, somewhere.” She mumbled, she was smiling a little bit, but for some reason she still seemed rather upset as she quickly left.

I was confused but continued in the direction where I was going, when my feet suddenly turned me around and I began to follow Rose, not like a creepy stalker, heck no, but because I was worried about her. She was leaving Diagon Alley through the Leaky Cauldron, so I automatically went there as well, staying a bit behind her, incase Mrs. Longbottom thought about greeting me and Rose noticed, and then she'd never talk to me again, thinking I was a stalker. I waited till she was outside till I came out of the back room, and as I suspected, Mrs. Longbottom, smiled said hi and waved a little bit. I responded, trying to not look like I was in a hurry or following Rose.

As soon as I got outside I noticed that Rose was crossing the road, she looked back for some reason, but I'm not sure if she noticed me or not, and then she continued going, my eyes widened seeing the bright red convertible, before she did, and before they saw her. “ROSE!” I yelled out helplessly, but even as I reached for my wand, I saw the accident.

I was shocked, I couldn't move, my body was numbed. I couldn't feel anything and it felt as if someone was posessing my body and making me move forward, quickly I got Rose out of the road, there were still people screaming, and others calling the hospital. Rose was completely unconscious, it looked as if she was bleeding from her head, I had to get her to St. Mungo's immediately. The driver had gotten out of the car and was helping me, muttering his apology over and over, he looked near hysterics. I knew I was, inside at least.

Finally I was able to get into the Leaky Cauldron again, where Mrs. Longbottom rushed over to me, I was unable to say anything, what if Rose died? This was all my fault, I'd never be able to live with myself if she died. She could NOT die. With the help of Hannah, I was able to floo to St. Mungo's and get Rose seen immediately, I was breathing heavily, if breathing at all as I was made to sit outside the room where she was. Merlin, what if she had a boyfriend and he showed up, he would be so mad at me for hurting his little angel. I am never, ever, ever, going to be able to live this down.

Within ten minutes family members of hers were already showing up. One of the first, was her brother, Hugo I believe. He took one look at me and glared. “What the hell are you doing here Malfoy?” He snapped, I looked up at him, half shocked. “Get out of here, you don't have any reason, or right, to be here.” He pointed at the door angrily, I shot up, my fists clenching. How dare he say this to me? “Leave, now.”

“I have every right as you do to be here.” Maybe that wasn't completely true, but hey. “I'm the one who brought her here, I think I deserve to know if she will be all right or not.” Hugo's jaw dropped, but he quickly shut it, that was until he began to speak.

“Yea, right, you're probably the reason why my sister is hurt in the first place!” I lost it there and punched Hugo right in the face. I heard someone scream and there was a few shouts.

“SCORPIUS!” Lily then screamed, and grabbed my arms. “Hugo, you guys both need calm down!” She looked frantically at us, and I noticed that Albus was holding Hugo back from attacking me. “Hugo, you have no right to be making accusations at Scorpius, you don't even know him, and Scorpius, don't you ever punch any of my family again, because I won't be able to hold back the wrath of myself and my family even if I wanted to.” I nodded mutely, glowering at Hugo.

Finally, Lily let go of me, and I was able to go sit down, yet again having to wait to find out of Rose was all right or not.
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