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12-31-2009, 02:09 PM
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#351 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ariana Jane Salvatore
First Year |  Abby(:
OhMyDracoMalfoy! (Something i picked up from my friend courtney!)
I have been so busy i havent gotten to read!
PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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12-31-2009, 02:36 PM
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#352 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name:
isabella Macmillan
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hey nice post...cool...but Pansy shouldnt be blaming him! she had been horrible to him all these years and he to her and obvious that the note Harry would think as if it was a prank!!!
Harita: get your priorities cleared Miss Parkinson, i dont like you shouting at Mr.Potter
*hands across her chest and glaring like Mcgonagall*...  ...
good going...waiting for more...
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12-31-2009, 04:18 PM
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#353 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kaylee Strap
First Year |  Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
I can't believe that I didn't come and read this before! BAD BAD BAD ME!
Newest reader!
DRAMIONE!! *faints*
Pansy your weird.....
Draco your smexy and awesome....
Hermione your madly in love.... I can't blame you though, Draco is so... Wonderful!
Ron your annoying, and your mean to Hermione, and
AWESOME JOB!
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01-04-2010, 04:49 PM
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#354 (permalink)
|   SS Featured AuthorTürk BilginiBugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated  x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
Quote:
Originally Posted by Firengine  "You lot,"[/B] he said, turning to face the spectators. "Sod off. Now." Bwaha. =DD Quote:
But what do you say in a situation like this? To someone you've hated since first year?
"You wanna go to Hogsmeade? You, me, two bottles of firewhiskey?"
 Quote: "Of COURSE its your fault!" She turned to him. Eck.
"Well i...."
"I gave you that note hoping you would be nice about it. Like the great Harry Potter should be!"
"But i thought it -"
"You thought it was a trick?" She narrowed her eyes at him.
"Well..yes." He rubbed his neck nervously.
She PUNCHED HIM! Loved it. =pp Quote:
Hermione pelted off in the other direction. She was going to the library.
She would. Classical Hermione Granger.
Update soon! =]
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01-05-2010, 03:14 AM
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#355 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
Posts: 1,534
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lily Adams
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PAMS!!! I Love the story! I am sorry but i dont want pansy and harry to go out! Gasp i knew Draco didnt do it... so who did?????
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01-05-2010, 05:24 PM
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#356 (permalink)
| | Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Enya Mayberry
Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ohhh good chapter...
Hope Pansy and Harry make up somehow 
mmm...the necklace what happend! ahhhh
cant wait for more
PAMS!!! 
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01-05-2010, 09:14 PM
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#357 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Nov 2009
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Told ya I'd get around to reading it  I LOVE it!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!! Draco is maaaa favorite.. Him and Hermione are so cute Great writing, great story, keep it up!
Cait
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01-05-2010, 11:58 PM
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#358 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
Hermione could find nothing at all to sugest what may have caused the necklace to react in the way that it did during potions. Frustrated by this, she wasnt her usual self when it came to lessons. Her parchment was full of unsightly scribbles, her quills were bent and twisted from her constant fiddling with them, and one one particualr, horrible day, she had only recieved 99% on a Charms test.
She had actually cried over this.
So when the next potions lesson came along, she was not feeling her best. She kept a clear distance from Draco the entire time, and never looked up from her cauldron.
Worst of all tho, she had left the necklace abandoned in her dormitory.
She alone was left clearing up at the end of the lesson - Snape's doing, again- and he himself had rushed off to assist in an emergency on the fifth floor corridor. Peeves. 'Nuff said.
She was pileing ingredients into her cauldron when she heard a footstep behing her. She turned. Draco Malfoy had stayed behind. He said nothing at first, and began helping her to clear her things away.
After a moment, he spoke. His voice quiet and soft.
"The necklace.." he began. "Do you know why it -"
Hemrione shook her head before he could finish.
"I couldn't find anything. Not in the library, not anywhere."
Draco went thoughtful for a moment. When he looked up, his eyes were unsure.
"I-I have a theory. I think."
She looked questioningly at him.
"What were you thinking of, the moment the necklace did that thing?" He asked, quietly.
Hermione froze. It was clear that he knew the answer, he must. She had gone red as soon as he had spoken. She looked into his eyes. Cold, grey, yet...trusting.
"You." she said quietly, her face turned towards him but her eyes looking down so as to not see how he reacted to this.
There was a silence. A heavy silence, filled with emotion and tension. Until she felt a warm hand on hers - one that was holding a potions book mid-way between throwing it into the cauldron. She looked up slowly. His eyes were boring into hers.
"W-what were you thinking of?" she asked in almost a whisper. Rejection could come so easily, and she couldnt bare it if he rejected her.
"You." he mouthed.
It took Hemrione a moment to recover from the bound of joy that had taken over her body. When she calmed herself internally, she came to a conclusiion.
"So the necklaces..what, they connected to each other? Because we were thinking of eachother.." The last two words were muttered fairly lamely.
Draco nodded.
"So what now?" Hermione asked in her continued small voice, and it carried through the darkness like a ribbon through the air.
Draco leaned forward.....
The kiss could have lasted a second, or it could have lasted a century. She wasnt sure jsut how long she stood there, but she didn't care. It was pure bliss. Soft, sweet Draco, entwined i her arms. It wasn't anything like the dream she had had about this very moment. Alone in the Dungeon, in everlasting bliss; It was a thousand times better.
♥The End ♥
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
Last edited by firenjen; 01-06-2010 at 12:05 AM.
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01-06-2010, 12:03 AM
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
The End. Ok, it scares me to say this (a LOT), just in case, but i thiiink Echos is now complete!
Thanks everyone for reading, especially to those of you who read from the very begining, but new readers too. I couldn't write if you didn't read. So glomps for y'all
I've loved writing this, hope you enjoyed it. Ima carry on with Many Ships, so check it out if you haven't already, and then a new fic is in order i think
Ta again,
Jen
xxxx
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
I'll be home in a day. I fear that's a month too late. ♥♥♥
Last edited by firenjen; 01-06-2010 at 12:29 AM.
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01-06-2010, 12:21 AM
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#360 (permalink)
| | Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kaylee Strap
First Year |  Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
 Almost in tears because it is over! waaaaa 
Awesome... Just lovely
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01-06-2010, 12:28 AM
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#361 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Almost in tears because it is over! waaaaa
Awesome... Just lovely Aww thankyou 
No tears!!! *gives you tissues* hahahaa thanks for reading
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01-06-2010, 12:34 AM
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|  DMTMountain Troll
Join Date: Jul 2009
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Jen.... it's over?!
I love it! Great way to tie it up. I have to say I am now a Draco/Hermione ship fan | |
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01-06-2010, 12:37 AM
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#363 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by Pink Ninja Jen.... it's over?!
I love it! Great way to tie it up. I have to say I am now a Draco/Hermione ship fan yup 
But YAY for Dramione fanage!! And thankyou
You're AMAZING
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I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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01-06-2010, 01:26 AM
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#364 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Nov 2009
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Oh man its over and I just started reading! :'(
I loved it! It was amazing writing! Great story line too!
Cait
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01-06-2010, 08:08 AM
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#365 (permalink)
| | Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Enya Mayberry
Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Awww i think i might cry
It over...i really liked this fan fic
That was a really good chapter....ohhh there in Love!
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01-06-2010, 11:23 AM
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#366 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by cait malfoy Oh man its over and I just started reading! :'(
I loved it! It was amazing writing! Great story line too!
Cait
Im sowwieeeeeeeeeeee!!
I didnt really know i was going to end it last night, it just kinda happened. But it felt right, otherwise it just would have dragged onnn and ooonnnnnn lol
Thankyou so much, especially for hanging around yesterday and reading ALLLL of it! Quote:
Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione Awww i think i might cry
It over...i really liked this fan fic
That was a really good chapter....ohhh there in Love!
x aww *gives out tissues*
Thanks Eviee
And thanks for reading
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♥♥♥My heart is out at sea. And my Head's al over the place.
I'm losing sense of time, and everything tastes the same.
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01-06-2010, 11:28 AM
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#367 (permalink)
| | Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Enya Mayberry
Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
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Originally Posted by firenjen aww *gives out tissues*
Thanks Eviee
And thanks for reading *takes tissue and wipe her eyes*
Your welcome....
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥
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01-06-2010, 05:45 PM
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#368 (permalink)
| | Jarvey
Join Date: Nov 2009
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Originally Posted by firenjen Im sowwieeeeeeeeeeee!!
I didnt really know i was going to end it last night, it just kinda happened. But it felt right, otherwise it just would have dragged onnn and ooonnnnnn lol
Thankyou so much, especially for hanging around yesterday and reading ALLLL of it! Well I was certainly glad I did! It was awesome
Cait
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01-06-2010, 06:03 PM
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#369 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
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Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by cait malfoy Well I was certainly glad I did! It was awesome
Cait Thanks, glad you liked it
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01-10-2010, 08:23 PM
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#370 (permalink)
|  I Nailed Wormtail
Love Hunter ExtraordinaireMooncalf
Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach
Posts: 7,087
| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥
WOAH! It was a great way to tie it up; fantastic chappie and everything. I guess I just wasn't expecting it to end that soon, well soon for me anyway... It was a fantastic story; thanks for giving us something great and worth while to read (:
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01-10-2010, 08:37 PM
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#371 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
IT'S OVER?!?!?
Awww, this was an amazing story Jennerzz!!
Thank you for forgiving me for such late comments as well(:
Draco & Hermione <3
I can't wait for more stories from you, keep writing!!
Jess(:
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01-10-2010, 08:45 PM
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#372 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name:
isabella Macmillan
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aw...it was so good but i was stunned to see a the end...i had no idea that you would be ending it...but it was a great post...i loved it... | |
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01-10-2010, 09:18 PM
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#373 (permalink)
| | Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
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OMG! I can't believe i didn't comment! So sorry Jen!
Wow! Talk about angry! Wow! Pansy must be really upset! And so is Hermione! Oh dear! This is sad! Aw! That's so sad! Crabbe is so mean! Good on Harry for going after Pansy!
Aw! Poor Pansy! And poor Harry! That's really sad! OMG! Draco doesn't know what happened to the necklace as well? That is creepy!
Aw! Poor Hermione! This must be affecting her really badly. Wow! The necklace connecting them when they think of each other is a very clever theory. Aw! That ending was so cute! The perfect ending!
Aw! :cries: It's finished? Thanks for such a brilliant story! I loved the whole thing!
Kita
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01-10-2010, 09:29 PM
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#374 (permalink)
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SS100 TriumphantMooncalf
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥
Posts: 7,769
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carve Hetcher
Fifth Year | so you can convince yourself that im cute
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Originally Posted by emilyblack WOAH! It was a great way to tie it up; fantastic chappie and everything. I guess I just wasn't expecting it to end that soon, well soon for me anyway... It was a fantastic story; thanks for giving us something great and worth while to read (:
wow, and thank YOU for reading glad you enjoyed it. Yeah i thought it was time to wrap it up otherwise it would go on and on and on and ON lol Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron IT'S OVER?!?!?
Awww, this was an amazing story Jennerzz!!
Thank you for forgiving me for such late comments as well(:
Draco & Hermione <3
I can't wait for more stories from you, keep writing!!
Jess(: Yes indeedy jessiluff
Thankyouuuu, and I LOVE YOU Quote:
Originally Posted by harita aw...it was so good but i was stunned to see a the end...i had no idea that you would be ending it...but it was a great post...i loved it... Haha thanks for reading harita Honestly dont worry about it lol thanks for readig kitaaa
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