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12-03-2009, 07:55 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alice Granger First Year |
I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for more
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12-10-2009, 05:47 PM
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#202 (permalink)
| Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
Posts: 32,841
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexander River Hirsch Gryffindor Third Year Hogwarts RPG Name: -- x11 x11
| urine trouble | Pat's Strong Confident Other Half | Pees Like a Champion Unicorn Racehorse OMG! I can't believe i missed so much! Anyways. I can't believe how smooth Savannah is in getting Ron to do what she wants. She's really evil! Sorry i didn't reply in a long time! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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12-13-2009, 02:31 AM
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#203 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Loving it! I needz more lol! Great job!
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12-15-2009, 04:36 AM
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#204 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥ Chapter 8 Thanks for all the comments!
Jess & Caley
Ron and Savannah walked down the tight, empty corridor hand-in-hand. Savannah had felt disgusted with herself. She wanted to be done and finished with this filthy bloodtraitor. Ron of course was on a mission. The mission to apologize to Hermione. I hope this gets over soon and quick was Ron's thought. The couple approached the Head's Dorm portrait and saw Hermione talking to the knight in the painting. Savannah smirked at her, while Ron was taking slow, deep breaths to calm his nerves down.
"Hermy-own-nee" Ron stuttered.
Hermione raised a brow and said,"Viktor?"
Ron's mind became filled with memories of Hermione and Viktor together which began to anger him. Ron stepped closer to Hermione and tapped her shoulder.
Hermione whipped around and sighed.
"What do you want Ronald?" She said taking a glance at Savannah who in return gave her an evil glare.
"I'm really sorry for hurting you." Ron said. "I truly am."
Hermione sighed and could feel tears daring to fall at any second.
"You should be." Hermione muttered.
"Anyways I agree with Savannah. I should have never been a friend, let alone a boyfriend with a mudblood. It all makes sense now that Savannah explained it to me." Ron said over-exitedly.
Hermione flinched at Ron's use of words. She would not let him see her cry. She tightened up her fists, one with her wand.
Ron saw the anger rise within Hermione and he said, "Oh...erm...I didn't mean it like that 'Mione."
"DON'T. CALL. ME THAT." Hermione siad sternly.
Savannah smirked and kissed Ron on the cheek.
"Well done." Savannah said smiling at Ron.
Ron's face grew red with pride and embarassment.
"RONALD. BILIUS. WEASLEY." Hermione screamed. "How dare you treat me like this. We were best friends! Now you just think I"m trash? Why? Why Ron? Why?"
"What's wrong love?" A familiar voice called out from behind Hermione.
"What do you want ferret?" Ron asked squeezing Savannah's hand in frusturation.
"I want you to stop insulting my girlfriend." Draco said putting an arm around Hermione's waist.
Ron sputtered. This can not be happening.
"Are you okay Ronnie?" Savannah asked looking up at Ron.
Ron dropped Savannah's hand and walked closer to Hermione.
"He is lying right?" Ron asked.
Hermione shook her head and could swear she could see a glance of hurt flicker across Ron's eyes. Hermione looked up at Draco nervously and Draco leant down to kiss her. Ron's eyes widened and he tightened his fists walking back to Savannah.
"Stupid mudblood." Ron muttered taking Savannah's hand in his.
The two walked off from Hermione and Draco. hermione and Draco pulled apart. Hermione's face with shock and Draco's face with a pleasant additude.
"You can do better than Weasley." Draco said.
Hermione nodded her head. "I know." She said frowning.
"Let's go inside love." Draco said taking her hand in his pulling her into the Head's Dorm.
Hermione sighed and followed. What else could she do to make Ron jealous?
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12-15-2009, 05:11 AM
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#205 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
Posts: 1,534
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
PAMS!!!!!!!!! I love it RoN is so EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it Draco is sweet and Devious at the same time! I love it please post more sooN!
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12-15-2009, 04:15 PM
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#206 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
I was about to say evil Ron.. But then again, this is all Draco's fault!! Bad boy! AWESOME JOB!
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12-15-2009, 04:23 PM
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#207 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
what the hell did Ron say? OMG!!! ridiculous prat...both Draco and Ron...
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12-15-2009, 04:30 PM
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#208 (permalink)
| SS Featured AuthorTürk Bilgini Bugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12
| ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] I can't believe Ron is acting like that.
That is ... totally not him. Is he under the Imperius curse, or something?
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12-15-2009, 09:13 PM
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#209 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ariana Jane Salvatore First Year | Abby(:
I love it! PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!
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12-15-2009, 10:23 PM
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#210 (permalink)
| Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
Posts: 32,841
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexander River Hirsch Gryffindor Third Year Hogwarts RPG Name: -- x11 x11
| urine trouble | Pat's Strong Confident Other Half | Pees Like a Champion Unicorn Racehorse OMG! I can't believe how evil Ron is! And Savannah! She reminds me of a puppeteer. I was gobsmacked at what Ron said to Hermione. And Draco's just as bad. Oh dear! Poor Hermione! I feel so sorry for her. Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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12-16-2009, 05:37 AM
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#211 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Nov 2009
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New Reader! This is really cute. Ron is really making me made though haha. I love Hermione and Draco together!!!
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12-17-2009, 07:44 AM
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#212 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts India
Posts: 108
Hogwarts RPG Name: Emma Radcliffe First Year |
unbelievable... ron saying all this... amazing yet shocking
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12-19-2009, 01:58 PM
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#213 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 290
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alice Granger First Year |
great post, i loved it !!!! Ron is being so mean and calling her mudblood, thats it *pulls up sleves* *holds up fists and punchs him* Now say sorry Ron or else !!!
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12-19-2009, 07:41 PM
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#214 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Want help Alice?
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12-23-2009, 02:51 PM
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#215 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Home ♔
Posts: 7,300
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tilly C. Richards First Year | Bluejay | Potatopop! | SRS - Stupid Ravenclaw Syndrome
No way!
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12-24-2009, 01:36 AM
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#216 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
i really thought the idea of hermione and draco being together was stupid but a think you hae changed my mind :O!!! your storys are mine blowing
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12-27-2009, 02:14 AM
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#217 (permalink)
| Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Reeser Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥ Chapter 9
Draco followed Hermione into the dorm room and she sat on the couch looking up at him.
"You okay?" He asked and she shrugged. He sat down next to her.
"Don't be upset about Weasley." Draco said and she sighed.
"I just don't get it." Hermione said.
Draco raised his eyebrows.
"Don't understand what...?" Draco asked.
"I don't understand how he can leave me and just change so quickly." She said looking into Draco's pearly bluish-gray steel eyes.
"Savannah is just....charming." Draco said sarcastically.
"What do you mean?" Hermione said squinting her eyes with anger.
"She is just very good at getting what she wants. Savannah does it with everyone, not just Weasley." Draco mumbled. Hermione let go of a breath she was holding and nodded.
"Were her parents deatheaters?" Hermione asked.
"They still are." Draco said.
"Savannah won't try to get Ron to become a deatheater....right...?" Hermione said and Draco shrugged.
"I don't know Hermione. Her family always has been deatheaters. I would assume that yes, he would only because of Savannah and her parents."
"I hope you're wrong. Ron just couldn't become a deatheater." She said her eyes tearing up.
"You never expected him to call you a mudblood." Draco said and she sighed.
"I'm going up to bed. See you tomorrow Draco." She said, getting off the couch.
"Bye Hermione." Draco said and she walked off, leaving Draco on the couch.
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Savannah was walking Ron back to his common room. They were almost at the portrait.
"Why would she date that git? Why does he even like her?" Ron complained and Savannah sighed.
"Some people just have a weird type. I do not understand why. Draco even likes her. He is so much mor..." Savannah stopped. She looked up at Ron, his jaw was cleanched.
"He is so what?" Ron said clearly still angry.
"Better than her and twenty times better looking." Ron stopped walking and looked at her. Savannah could tell Ron wasn't too happy with this comment.
"Not near as georgeous as you though." Savannah said batting her eyes. She was lying, she knew it. Ron smirked and kept walking until they got to the portrait. Ron gave her a tiny kiss on the lips. Savannah grimaced as he did.
"I love you Savannah." He mumbled wrapping his hands around her waist. She said nothing and just looked in the other direction. Ron waited, looking concerned.
"Well?"
"I love you too." Savannah mumbled and he smiled.
"Bloody hell, you are amazing. I will see you in the Great Hall tommorrow?" He asked and she nodded.
"Bye Ronald." She mumbled angrily.
"Are you okay, love?" You seem a little....-"
"I'm fine Ron. I'm just tired I want to go to bed." She growled and Ron chuckled.
"Okay I'll go in now." He said letting go of her, he waited for a response and sighed.
"Bye Savannah." He said walking away into the common room.
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Draco was walking around the 6th floor, looking for Savannah. He then spotted Savannah and Ron outside of the Gryffindor Portrait. Everything seemed to be going well. He smirked. He was glad he didn't tell Savannah that he spiked Ron's punch with a love potion that lasted as long as he wanted. He walked back up to the Head's Dorm and went to sleep.
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12-27-2009, 05:18 AM
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#218 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year |
OMG!!! that is so horrible of Draco!!! spiking Ron's drink and setting up Hermione and Ron against each other...Draco!!!...
waiting for more...
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12-27-2009, 05:39 AM
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#219 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
Posts: 1,534
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
PAMS! That is really Good! Bad Draco... But he is so amazingly handsome that you have to love him! I love the story you are so so so talented please post more soon!
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12-27-2009, 06:45 PM
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#220 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
I am happy I interrupted my reading another ff to read this! PAMS!
Bad Draco!
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12-27-2009, 10:05 PM
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#221 (permalink)
| Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
Posts: 32,841
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexander River Hirsch Gryffindor Third Year Hogwarts RPG Name: -- x11 x11
| urine trouble | Pat's Strong Confident Other Half | Pees Like a Champion Unicorn Racehorse Draco really knows how to change someone's mind, doesn't he? Do i hint jealousy in Ron? Hm... OMG! Draco spiked Ron's drink with Love Potion? Wow! No wonder Ron seems so "in love" with Savannah! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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12-27-2009, 11:55 PM
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#222 (permalink)
| Gnome
Join Date: Jul 2009
Posts: 277
| Draco that was very bold but i love it : )
PAMS PAMS PAMS Shell |
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12-28-2009, 03:49 AM
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#223 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hangin With The Crew
Posts: 960
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ariana Jane Salvatore First Year | Abby(:
love it jess! bravo bravo! PAMS!
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12-28-2009, 05:01 AM
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#224 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 683
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SO GOOD! Please update sooooooon I love Draco and Hermione together, but Ron getting spiked with a love potion?! Tsk, tsk. Great twist on that. And Savannah just gets on my nerves. Hahaha, PAMS!
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12-28-2009, 09:07 PM
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#225 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
OMG !!! so good Bad Draco :O keep it coming
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