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Old 02-12-2008, 09:20 PM   #451 (permalink)
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OH. MY. GOSH.

YOU HAVE GOT TO POST!

Soon!
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Ok I would like to aplogize to everybody for making you all wait for so long for a new post and also to all the new readers. But I have been going crazy the last few weeks and have had like no time to write this story!

Im really, really sorry that I havent posted and I so wished I had a post for you today I will try and write soon. I really am sorry, and if you dont want to read this FF anymore, I totally understand.

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LOL, YEAH RIGHT!

I'm not abandoning this! When a fic is great, true fans do NOT abandon, no matter what...after all, Jo only used to put out a Harry Potter book once every two years or so, and we didn't abandon her!

You rock, keep on going with your life, and we'll be here when you want to post!

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Your comment made me want to cry
It made me open up my Microsoft and write a chapter.

I havent been feeling all that great today, but your comment made my day.

You really made me write tonight so I have to dedicate this to you


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Hermione nearly freaked out when she saw that Harry’s eyes were closed. He looked dead! “Harry!” she shouted.

His eyes fluttered open and Hermione could of cried with joy. She threw her arms around him and held on tightly. “Oh Harry! I’m so sorry! I thought I had killed you. I shouldn’t have done the spell. I was just being big headed again. I wont ev-“

“Hermione! It’s ok. I’m fine.” Harry chuckled. He patted her back as she clung to his body. But as he she hugged him tightly, he figured something out. His ribs weren’t hurting him anymore.

“Hermione!” he said excitedly.

“What?” she sniffed and pulled away from him.

“My ribs! They don’t hurt anymore! You healed them.” Harry said and swung his legs over the side. He stood up and lifted his shirt a little bit to look at his chest. Man was he skinny! He ran his hand up his rib cage and only flinched because his hand was cold.

“Really?” Hermione asked with wide eyes.

“You did it! They aren’t broken anymore!” he said happily.

“But…I thought….” She started.

“Well you thought wrong!” Harry chuckled happily. He wrapped his arms around her and lifted her in the air. He spun her around and let out a cheerful laugh at her protests to put her down. When he finally put her down, her face was red and her hair was wildly hanging over her shoulders.

“So it looks like you are ready to leave again.” Ron’s voice said quietly. The happy mood left the room with a flash and Hermione’s eyes went to looking at both boys.

Harry didn’t know what to say. He didn’t want to hurt Ron and Hermione anymore. He knew now that he needed them most of all. Without Hermione he would still be laying in that stupid cot. And without Ron, he would be stuck with Hermione all day.

“No. I’m not leaving again. I will only leave if you two agree to leave with me.” Harry said.

Ron looked at him for a while. A slow smile spread on his lips, and he nodded. “I’m here for you mate.”

“Me too.” Hermione said with a wide smile. Harry could tell she was ready to cry again. But Harry didn’t care. He had his best friends again.

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Ginny began toward the staircase as dinner ended. She had no idea why she had agreed to go to the feast. She wanted to see if the spell had worked on Harry.

As she stepped on the grand staircase, a hand grabbed her arm. Ginny turned back and looked into Draco’s steel gray eyes. “Ginny are you mad at me?” he asked her.

“Of course not.” She replied.

“Then why are have you been so distant lately. I feel like I haven’t seen you in forever. Then at dinner tonight you ate your food so fast I thought u were Granger for a minute.”

“I just…have a lot of homework.”

“Don’t lie to me Ginny. Something is up. Talk to me.” He said, his eyes pleading.

Ginny didn’t know what to say. She wanted to tell him that Harry was back and that she was worried about him, but how would he handle that? Biting her lip, Ginny weighed her chances.

“I think I know what you are hiding from me.” He said sadly.

“You do?” Ginny asked.

“Yeah. Potter must be back. I’m I right?”

Ginny gulped. It was like he read her mind. “Well…he…”

“Can you do one thing for me?” he asked her.

“Sure Draco. Anything.” She said.

“Come with me.”

“Go with you where?” she asked.

“Just come with me really fast.” He said and pulled her to the great oak door that led outside. Ginny let herself be pulled by her arm into the chilly night air. She didn’t know where they were going, but she didn’t object.

As they walked toward the forest, Ginny began to grow curious. “Draco, where are we going?”

“Its just a little bit further.” He said and squeezed her hand.

They walked together into the dark forbidden trees of the forest. Deeper and deeper they walked. Ginny was starting to get the feeling that they were being watched. “Draco, I don’t like this.” She whispered.

“I know. But it will be over soon.”

Ginny stopped mid-step. What was going on? She did not like that answer at all. It sounded way too suspicious. “Draco what’s going on?”

But he never answered her as men began to form a circle around them. All of them had the same familiar mask on. Death eaters were here.
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Ya Hermiones Spell worked. *dances*

But Draco , how could he do that to Ginny. Hope shes okay nd nothing happens to her and Harry rescues herand they live happly ever after.
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steph why would we leave ur FF? we must b crazy to do tht!! >.< lol
omg i loveddd this post i can't believe it hermione did it!!
but what draco did OMG!!!!! he betrayed her! omg! :o
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AWWWW! Thank you so so so much I'm glad I could inspire you in some way, and OHMYGOSH the chapter was AH-MAZING! I'm proud to have that chapter dedicated to me

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Alright I want to thank you all for staying, even though I am the wrost replier in the world

I also would like to dedicate this chapter to kelcie
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Chapter 48


“So have you found any horcruxes?” Hermione asked curiously.

“Well I found the locket.” Harry said and took the faded gold necklace from out his pocket. Hermione took it delicately into her hand. In some places it was charred almost to a crisp. But it was still distinguishable what it was.

“How did you find it?” Ron asked, just staring at it. Harry had a feeling he didn’t want to touch the locket.

“Funnily enough, Kreacher.” Harry replied.

“So, you have found everything then, right?” Hermione asked.

“No, just one left. Dumbledore had a strong feeling that it was Voldermort’s snak-“

Suddenly the walls of Hogwarts shook so hard, Harry had a feeling it was going to fall all down on them. Horrific screams were heard through out the castle. When the shaking ceased, Harry jumped to action. The three of them ran from the room as if the devil himself was chasing them. Kids were seen running up and down the corridors, calling to each other franticly. Terrified expressions were placed on every student, young and old.

“What happened?” Hermione shouted through the noise.

“Death eaters!” a young girl with pink tails cried, and disappeared behind the corner.

“He’s here.” Harry said quietly. By the looks of Ron and Hermione, he knew the understood him.

Harry took off in a solid sprint toward the staircase. Ron and Hermione were both on his hills. They couldn’t be here. Not now.

As they approached the Entrance Hall, Harry saw every teacher Hogwarts had facing the Great Oak doors, wand at the ready. Quite a bit of seventh and sixth years were also facing it, ready for the fight. They stood just behind the teachers. Courage shined on every one of their faces. But it did not hide the fear in them all.

Harry worked his way through the crowed, quickly. Nearby, he saw Neville standing next to Luna. He no longer had the lost first year look. His face held the bravery of a true Gryffindor.

As Harry walked through the people, he heard some of them whispering. But this time, it was a positive feeling.

Finally he made it to the front and stood facing McGonagall. “H-Harry?” she said, emotion cutting though her voice.

“I am here to fight.” Harry said, honor coating his eyes. She said nothing, but nodded. She understood it was something he had to do.

“You are just going to let him fight? He is what you-know-who wants!” Madam Pomfrey hissed franticly.

“I’m not going to hide anymore!” Harry said.

“You are just being foolish boy!” Madam Pomfrey retorted.

“I’m not a boy anymore!”

“Yes yo-“

“Poppy. Its ok. He will stand along side us.” McGonagall said. Madam Pomfrey looked unconvinced but backed down.

Harry nodded a thank you to McGonagall, before turning to the room at large.

“Alright. This is it. We have been at war with Voldermort for too long. Today it is going to end. When they brake open this door, fight. Don’t let them get past the Great Hall. I need four people to get every student in this castle to the seventh floor. Walk past the empty wall three times until a door appears. You should all fit until the coast is clear. Check every classroom until the room is full. Nobody gets left behind.” Tentatively, he saw four students (two Hufflepuff sixth years, one seventh year Ravenclaw, and a sixth year Slytherin) slip away from the crowed to the grand staircase.

Harry continued, “I know you’re all scared. You would have to be crazy not to. But just remember, this will be the last fight. If you all promise to stand until the end, then I promise to end this. Remember Cedric. Remember Dumbledore. Remember all the souls who have lost their lives in this war. Remember.”

All around him he saw people nod their heads. He knew he didn’t wipe all the fear out of them, but he knew they were ready.
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Can't wait to see what happens. Hope its a happy ending So can't wait for more.
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Great post but I haaave to know what will happen and I need to know if Ginny will be okay. Please post soon, I can't wait!
The post was awsoooome!!!
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omgggggg i can not believe a slytherin actually went to help lol well they all can't be bad now can they great post steph just like always and this chapter seemed long to me not short
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I dont know if I am sad or if I am relieved

Ok so since I am so bad, I have two posts for you
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Chapter 49


The loud banging at the door announced they were trying to break it down. Nerves were shooting up and down his whole body, but his hand was firm on his wand. This was it. The final battle.

He needed to find the snake first. The snake. Find it first. When it was dead, he could go after Voldermort.

“Harry.” Hermione said in a low voice. Harry turned to see worry etched in her face, but he knew she was determined as much as he was. When she saw that she had his attention, she pointed with her eyes toward Ron. His eyes were scanning every inch and every face in sight. He was searching.

“He can’t find Ginny.” Hermione said to Harry. “Malfoy is missing too.”

Harry stomach dropped below his feet. Ginny was missing? No. She was just in the back, hidden behind the crowd. But as his gaze became more anxious, he too didn’t find the familiar doze of red hair.

Just then, the door gave way and mobs of people in identical masks stormed in. Curses and jinxes flew. A red one shot toward the three of them, but Harry put a shield charm up like nothing. The spell ricocheted and hit another Death Eater in the leg. One down, about fifty or so to go.
Harry aimed his wand and began firing spells in every direction. Mini fights broke out all along the hall. They were doing very little damage to them, but they were keeping them back.

“Ah, is the inkle Nevvie going to fight me now?” The chilling jeer crept down Harry’s neck. He turned sharply and saw Neville had his wand pointed at Bellatrix Lestrange. Fire was seen in Neville’s eyes. This fight was similar to the one between himself and Voldermort. It was either kill or be killed. Harry hoped he would see him standing in the end.

Turning back to the other mini battles, he saw a Death Eater getting ready to send a curse toward Padma Patil, who’s back, was turned away from him. Harry immediately shot one of his own toward the Death Eater and he went down.

Slowly the Death Eaters began to retreat out the door, but they weren’t giving up. The Order must have arrived finally from the behind.

Harry ran outside into the cool night air. His scar burned as if somebody was putting a hot iron to his forehead. Voldermort was close. He was even hiding the fact that he was here. He was really close. He could feel him. Almost like he was in his head…

“Shut your mind Potter!” A hissing voice said in his head.

Shocked, Harry stopped and looked all around him. It wasn’t Voldermort’s cold voice, but it sounded oddly familiar.

Behind him he heard somebody yell. He turned and saw that Percy was here. He was actually here, fighting along side them. Finding the owner of the voice, Harry took in a gulp of air. It was Charlie who had yelled.

A picture of the edge of the Forbidden Forest crossed his mind. He knew it wasn’t himself who was thinking about it. Somebody was using legilimency on him.

Shutting down his mind, he began toward the forest at a run. When he reached the spot in his head, he saw it was deserted. He had done it again. He had fallen for the bait easily. But this time, it might cost him his life.
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His heart was beating so rapidly, he could feel it in his throat. The forest was silent, but in no ways peaceful. He began to break out in a cold sweat.

The breaking of a twig made Harry turn, just in time to move out of the way of a green light.

“You are to easy to read Harry. Didn’t you learn anything in your Defense Against the Dark Arts class?” the cold voice said. Automatically, Harry put the wall up in his head.

“Ah Severus, look! He put up the wall in his head.” Voldermort taunted.

Harry turned so quickly, he got a cringe in his neck. Severus Snape stood just behind Voldermort. His face was expressionless. Hatred shot through Harry. All he wanted to do was curse him until his wrist hurt.

As loathing shot through his veins, the wall in his head steadily broke. Suddenly he felt something in his head. But it was different than before. It was like there were two people inside his head, fighting for dominance. What was going on? As the two presences fought harder and harder, his head began to throb painfully and his scar was burning fire. When he felt like his head was going to split into two any minute, the same voice from before screamed inside his head.

“Close your mind to feeling boy!” the silky voice screeched. But this time Harry recognized it. Unluckily for the owner of the voice, Voldermort did too.

“TRAITIDOR!” Voldermort’s icy voice shrieked. It made the hairs on Harry’s arm stand up. The battle in his head ceased and Voldermort turned his wand toward Snape.

“How dare you challenge the Dark Lord! You will pay.” Voldermort said, anger coursing through his whole body. His eyes were bleeding red and waves of fury were radiating off his body. Harry didn’t know how Snape could keep such a straight face.

As the green light shot out from Voldermort’s wand, realization began to sink in for Harry. Snape was always good. Dumbledore asked Snape to kill him. Probably to protect Draco. He all along has been telling him to close his mind. To keep Voldermort from reading his thoughts and weaknesses. Snape was protecting him.

But it was too late. Snape’s body was already crashing to the ground.

“NO!” Harry shouted and shot a lousy curse toward Voldermort. It missed drastically.

Voldermort turned back to him, his eyes flashing.

“Ah Harry. Hasn’t anyone every taught you that I will never be defeated? I guess not.” He smiled evilly. “Crucio!

Pain erupted through Harry’s body. His head was going to burst. He couldn’t handle it anymore. Death would be a sweet release. Only if it would come!

Then the curse was lifted. His whole body ached and was twitching as he looked up at Voldermort from the ground.

“You don’t fear death Harry?” Voldermort’s cold voice said, having read his mind.

“Death is just the next greatest adventure.” Harry replied. Voldermort began to laugh, making the hairs on the back of Harry’s neck stand up along with his arm hairs.

But that was what Harry needed. A distraction. As Voldermort continued to laugh, Harry aimed his wand.

Stupefy!” Harry shouted, jumping agonizingly to his feet.

Voldermort looked at Harry and flicked his wand, almost lazily.

Harry flew back at least twenty-five feet. He groaned when he finally landed and rolled over. Looking around he saw that he wasn’t in the forest anymore. He was out in the open, close to Hagrid’s hut. Fighting was heard but not seen at least forty feet away.

The slow, steady steps of Voldermort grew closer. The malevolence smile still spread on his face. He stopped right in front of Harry’s mangled body.

“Just give up Harry. You have nobody to come save you anymore. Its over. Your little red head is long since been killed.”

“NO! She’s not dead!” Harry shouted, refusing to believe it.

“Your friends are not to far behind her. I’m sure.”

“Ron and Hermione are too smart to be killed by idiots like you!” Harry retorted.

Crucio!” Once again the pain shot through every fiber of his body. Harry screamed just so he had something to concentrate on. If he put all his energy into screaming, his mind didn’t focus on the excruciating pain.

“There is nobody here to help you. Its over.” Voldermort said slowly and wickedly. Harry coughed roughly and turned away from Voldermort’s face. He didn’t want to look at him before he died.

“You have nobody Harry. You are all alone.
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