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05-30-2007, 04:30 PM
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Hi Shuli! How's the studying gowing??? LOL!! This is so funny, but I should really be studying! I'm such a bad girl. *puppy face*
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05-31-2007, 02:35 PM
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Originally Posted by jkrsong96  Well...I don't really think you should change the title. I mean, it would be great to have even more people to read this awesome FF! But A war a love. is a brilliant title!
You described Bella so well! Exactly how I would see. Pweeze...don't let Mia and Harry die! Thanks so much, Mindy, I think that I will leave it like it is and be patient to get more readers. I'm happy you thought that I described her good cause I actually thought her description wasn't so good. 
-Shirel
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06-01-2007, 03:17 AM
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I loved the post and I hate Belatix's shes evil and maipulative and should dissapear.I hope Mia throws the Imperius Curse that could prove how much she loves Harry.Glad your not changing the title.PAMS.
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06-01-2007, 10:31 AM
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Originally Posted by scc shirel ya cant tell me off for not studying if ur not Hey! I was studying I just wanted to check if anyone posted thats all!! *wipes away a tear and sticks out her tung at you.* Quote:
Originally Posted by springbaby I loved the post and I hate Belatix's shes evil and maipulative and should dissapear. I hope Mia throws the Imperius Curse that could prove how much she loves Harry. Glad your not changing the title.PAMS.
~Heather~ Hi heather! I actually like Belatrix cause shes kind of evil and... I don't know... I just like her in a bad way!! LOL I will try to post either today or tomorrow night!
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06-01-2007, 08:57 PM
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OMG! That next part was so good. PAMS! I'm obsessed with this story.
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06-03-2007, 06:09 PM
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Originally Posted by Trio1237 OMG! That next part was so good. PAMS! I'm obsessed with this story. Thank you so much! I love to hear such nice comments!!
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06-03-2007, 06:11 PM
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Hello all! I'm back with the next chapter!! Here is a little bit of the last sentence from the last post just to refresh your memories: "...Mia felt hot tears rolling down her cheeks..." And now, I give you- Chapter 10:
Belatrix stood up. "And now I shall preform the curse and then you skip of to school." She raised her wand.
"NO! PLEASE NO! DON'T DO THIS TO ME! I BEG YOU!" She sobed.
"Oh don't worry you fool. you'll get used to it. Imperio!" She said.
Imediatly this weird sensation fell over her. She tried to move her hand to wipe her tear stained face but she coulden't move it, she had no control over her own body. She heard a tiny voice in her head telling her to get up, and the curse lifting her on her feet. She tried to fight it but the curse was to powerful.
She heard Bellatrix laughing at her, a evil, mean laugh. Next thing she felt herself moving out of the room that she was locked up in only an hour before. She walked past the laughing Death Eater, Braxon and many other laughing Death Eaters. She felt humiliated and beaten but, she had no way of showing it for the curse, was telling her to put up a straight face. Bellatrix, in back of her muttering the charms to unlock the doors.
Outside, she took out her wand and the curse made her Apparate back to Hogwarts. When she arrived, she saw a lot of witches and wizards from the Ministry of Magic. When they saw her their, they all ran twords her. They all blasted he with questions that she coulden't hear and then she felt someone hugging her, it was Harry. His warm body attaching to hers. Harry dragged her quickly away fromthe Ministry people, ignoring there shouts to question her. "Come on." He wispered. Luckily, there were no Hogwarts students out of the Hogwarts grounds. The gates were opened so they quickly walked threw and he took her into the corner of the forest next to Hagrids hut.
"Mia!" He exploded. "Its such a miracle you're allive. How did you get out there safely with no more than a few cuts?"
The curse made her answer, "Nothing matters as long as were together."
He tried to ask more about her lucky escape and what had happened there but gave up because of 'Mia's' pleading face.
"Look Harry-" 'Mia' pronounced the 'H' especialy loudly. "-Let's just leave it where it is, okay?" And 'she' moved she moved her face closer to his and kissed him lightly on the lipps.
Inside, Mia was crying, her heart was breaking into a million peices. She wanted to tell him everything. How the Death Eaters used the Cruciatus curse; How Bellatrix is so evil and mean; How this is not her who is speaking but Bellatrix; And how -now her heart really broke- this whole thing is a plot to kill Harry!
After a few more minutes of talking, she felt Harry taking her hand before leaving so no one would see them together. She watched him silently walking back up to the castle before she felt the curse tugging her to get up. Then, while she was walking back up to the castle, she felt tears falling down. She guessed that fellings don't work with the curse. But all the while 'she' kept smiling and wiping her tears away. It looked so weird so she forced herself to stop crying.
When she opened the oak front doors Proffesor Mcgonagal rushed twords her. "Follow me to my office." She said impatiently. 'Mia' followed her, to her office. Mcgonagal lead her to Dumbledore's old office and gave the Gargoyle the password. She and Mia stepped up and the Gargoyle spun them up to the top. It stopped infront of a huge oak door. "Come." She said. "Sit." She instructed, pointing to a chair infront of thed esk while proffesor Mcgonagal sat inback of the desk in a quite comfey chair that had also once belonged to Proffesor Dmbledore.
"Now, I need to know exactly what happened when the Death Eeaters captured you."
"Sorry." 'Mia' said smartly. "I can't tell you."
"And why is that?" She asked surprised.
"Because, its none of your bisness."
"Look," Mcgonagal said firmly. "I need to know, the ministry needs to know what happend in order to prevent that from happening again and even better to defeat you-know-who."
"Well, you can't make me."
"You're right, I can't. But tell me for you're sake."
"I better be going." And the curse made Mia get up and leave a stunned looking Mcgonagal. Mia didn't know where she was going, the curse was leading her. Then she realized it was taking her to the slytherin commin room, the problem was that Bellatrix did not know the password. So they waited until finaly some second year came out of the common room and when 'she' asked for the password he said it was pureblood and then ran away like 'she' was poisonus. The curse made her say the password and when the common room door opened, when everyone saw her the room became quiet. Ashley, Pansy and to her surprise Draco and some other girls came over to greet her. When Draco came he looked really embarassed and all he said was, "I'm glad you're alive." Alive, he said, What did he want her to be dead, she thought? For some reason she looked around the room for Gregorio, but there was no sighn of him.
When 'she' finaly got free from all the hugs and kisses from her freinds telling them that 'she' was tired from all that had happened and because she hadn't slept all night 'she' hurried up to the girls dormitories and made her way threw all the clothes of her roomates that were on the floor to her four poster bed and was shocked to find a letter on her bed that had her name scribbled on to it. The curse made her pick up the letter and open it and to Mia's surprise, she saw it was from Gregorio. Well, thats all for now, I would just like to tell you theat all the words like 'she' with those marks on the top means, that the curse is doing it, not on Mia's own will. I hope you understood.
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06-03-2007, 06:37 PM
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Wow, a letter from Gregorgo,a curse, and yes I understand! Great post and PAMS!
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06-04-2007, 07:10 AM
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| | Moke
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A letter what can it possibly say.I hate belatrix's so much more.good post PAMS.
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06-05-2007, 05:52 PM
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Originally Posted by Trio1237 Wow, a letter from Gregorgo,a curse, and yes I understand! Great post and PAMS! Thanks so much! Quote:
Originally Posted by springbaby A letter what can it possibly say.I hate belatrix's so much more.good post PAMS.
~Heather~ Thank you for your comments and I will try to post more soon!
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06-05-2007, 06:54 PM
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#61 (permalink)
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Yay! I'm in GRYFFINDOR!! Harry, here I come!! I'm soooo happy! *Cheers and dances* :-D
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06-07-2007, 03:19 PM
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Hey girls! Sorry I haven't posted for a long time! Just at the end of the year we have TESTS! *Grown*
Chapter 11:
The letter read:
Bellatrix, I will meet you in the morninng in classroom 13, right before breakfast to know if Shaler was imperiused. Be sure to look at your class sceduale.
~Gregorio~
P.S. We are going according to plan M.I.
Mia stared. Whats plan M.I.? She sked herself but bfore she could think somemore, the curse made her walk to her trunk and take out her sleep stuff. When 'she' dressed into her P.J.'s and was in bed, she heard Ashley come into the room. She tried to say hi, but forgot that she was cursed by the Imperius curse. She lay sadly in bed untill she finally fell asleep.
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In the morninng, Mia was awoken up by the curse. 'She' got out of bed and got dressed. When she finished it was pretty late so the curse made her run pretty fast to an empty classroom on the third floor where Gregorio was already waiting for her and by the looks of it quite impatiently. The curse made Mia say, "I'm here. It's all going as planned. We don't know when it will be put to action, we are waiting for the signalle."
"Ok." He said. "Now about the classes, what is the plan?"
"You will be doing her homowork." The curse made her smirk.
"How am I supposed to do your work if I have my own work to do?" He asked his temper rising with every word.
"Now really! That's you're problem. I have my own work to do-"
The classroom door swung open and standing there, furiously, was Harry with his wand out. "I thought I heard shouting in here." He said. "Mia, I can't believe it. You out of all people... you cheated on me!"
The curse made Mia say, "Excuse me! I would never-"
"You liar! He screamed. "It all fits! No wonder you only wanted to date at night, so during the day, you and that git could go snogging each other! That's it, its over!
Over. It hit Mia so hard. Tears started porring down her face from her eyes.
That's it, never again would they spend time with each other. Never again wouls she be able to kiss him! That's it, he meant that their relationship was over! She felt heart broken.
Harry stared at her now, tear stained face a momment before leaving the room.
"Great plan!" The curse made her say angrily. Then it carried her legs to the great hall, all the while tears falling down her face.
In the great hall, 'she' sat down at the Slytherin table next to Ashley and Pansy. They looked at her and frowned. "Mia, what happened, Why are you crying?" Pansy asked while Ashley nodded.
"Oh." 'Mia' laughed. "I'm not crying, i'm just tearing." 'She' said and Mia's tears fell down some more. How ould life do this to me, Mia thought. Help! Help! She tried to say. The curse was making her weaker. If only she could tell some one, anyone! She thought desperately.
Transfiguration was the first class she has today, so all the while 'she' walked, tears still falling down, she heard Ashley and Pansy whisering about her. And from students near by, she got stairs and points because of her tears and smile at the same time.
In the Tranfiguration classroom, she took her seat while Professor Mcgonagal called for silence. She started teaching but Mia wasn't lestening at all. She just coulden't yet, believe that their relationship was actually over! How much longer would she be able to take this? And let's say Voldemort killed Harry before she would even be able to tell him she loved him and what really happened with her and Gregorio? And then she heard Mcgonagal whisper in her ear, "I would like to see you after class, Miss Shaler."
Ten minutes later the bell rang and Mcgonagal pointed twords Mia to come up to herd desk befire Bellatrix could try to make Mia escape. So slowly the curse dragged her up to the desk. Mcgonagal frowned and asked, "Mia, are you all right? Why are you crying this whole entire class?"
The curse answerd for her, "I'm fine! Just because i'm crying, dosen't make it any of your buisness!" 'She' said. And inside Mia was screaming: Don't listen to her! Can't you see it's Bellatrix?? Don't let her get away with it! Help me! She cried even more.
"You will not use that tone with me, and next time it's Detention!" She said strictly.
It's not her! Mia tried to scream, can't yous see!! Don't you know what the evil Death Eaters planned? Don't listen to her! She cried so misrably.
Well that's all for now! Are any of you done with school yet?
-Shirel
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06-07-2007, 06:38 PM
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it's gr8!! i cant wait 2 hear what'll happen next.
i don't think Bellatrix is happy that Harry broke up with Mia... :-D
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06-08-2007, 02:43 AM
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Those are two lovely chapters you wrote there, Shirel!
Poor Mia...I would hate that if somebody did that to me. Just break the curse, Mia! Break the curse!
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06-08-2007, 05:26 AM
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your storie rox 
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06-08-2007, 10:51 AM
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Originally Posted by chuvvy it's gr8!! i cant wait 2 hear what'll happen next.
i don't think Bellatrix is happy that Harry broke up with Mia... :-D Hi, Chaviva! Yah, I don't think she or Voldy are happy... Quote:
Originally Posted by jkrsong96 Those are two lovely chapters you wrote there, Shirel!
Poor Mia...I would hate that if somebody did that to me. Just break the curse, Mia! Break the curse! Hi, Mindy! You're so right, I would totaly hate if somebody did that to me! Quote:
Originally Posted by Diana00 your storie rox
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thanks for getting me an account Hey Elital! I knew it was som thing like that! And guess what I think that really was my toothbrush!!! LOL! To all my new readers who have asked about PAMS: 1. Post Another Message Soon. 2. Please Add More Soon.
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06-10-2007, 05:19 PM
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#67 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
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you haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaave to ****ineu!!!!!!!!!
PAMS and fast it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
p.s.
i need help with my ucant.
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06-10-2007, 05:43 PM
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| | Snidget
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Hi! ^^ I'm soo glad you like it! I really don't know when my next post will be because you know...MATH!!
Whats ucant? does it mean account? and whats ineu? Does that mean that you had trouble posting your storie?
Oh, I'm so sorry to tell you but I didn't see your storry up, did you called it a messed up love?
-Shirel
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06-11-2007, 03:47 AM
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#69 (permalink)
| | Moke
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Goood Post I hpe she eventually fights the curse maybe the shock of Harry breaking up with her might help because that shock might never go away.PAMS
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06-11-2007, 02:56 PM
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#70 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
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I really enjoyed the post!
PAMS
SCC
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06-11-2007, 07:51 PM
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#71 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by springbaby Goood Post I hpe she eventually fights the curse maybe the shock of Harry breaking up with her might help because that shock might never go away.PAMS
~Heather~ Thanks Heather, I will probably write the next chapter in a couple of days to a week since I am flying to America, New York, on Thursday. So I will TRY! lol Quote:
Originally Posted by scc I really enjoyed the post!
PAMS
SCC Shuli! you wrote something!! I am so happy! You made my day! lol
Again I will probably write the next chapter in a couple of days to a week since I am flying to America, New York, on Thursday, which you probably know all ready lol!
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06-12-2007, 12:46 PM
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| | Bundimun
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my story isnt coming on and i dont now why????????????
i need your help fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS
call me 999-3570
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06-13-2007, 04:27 PM
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#73 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
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I'm in Ravenclaw!!!!!!
GO RAVENCLAW!!!
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06-13-2007, 07:37 PM
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| | Snidget
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Originally Posted by scc I'm in Ravenclaw!!!!!!
GO RAVENCLAW!!!
OMG!! Shuli, I'm so happy for you! I think that means that u got a good grade on the math test!! I'm supposed to be packing right now but I couldn't resist congratulating you! Well c u tomorrow!
-*~ Shirel ~*-
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06-14-2007, 03:02 PM
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| | Horklump
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hey shirel
try 2 post as soon as u can,
no excuses that ur having 2 much fun where u r! lol
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