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jkrsong96 · 05-14-2007, 03:49 AM

I love it soooo much! Wow, Draco got a bloody nose. *thinks* Mr. Potter and Miss Shaler...muahahahaa. What will happen? By the way, I've had a few freaky dreams familiar to yours...so don't get freaked out.

PAMS

rellybelly · 05-14-2007, 03:27 PM

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Originally Posted by springbaby

I love it PAMS i want to know what happens.
~Heather~

Hey heather! I'm really happy you liked it!
I hope you thought my poem was good.
If you want, I set up a poll, you could vote. I just put it up for the fun. At they end, i'm probably going to decide. I'll post more soon!
-Shirel

rellybelly · 05-14-2007, 03:34 PM

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96

I love it soooo much! Wow, Draco got a bloody nose. *thinks* Mr. Potter and Miss Shaler...muahahahaa. What will happen? By the way, I've had a few freaky dreams familiar to yours...so don't get freaked out.

PAMS

Hey Mindy!! I'm so happy you like it so far. I'm glad I gave you somthing to think about! LOL! You had dreams to? ?*sigh with relief* At least now I know i'm not weird, because when I told my freind, she was on the edge of her seat. She dosen't read Harry Potter, but I shore scraed her a little.
-Shirel

jkrsong96 · 05-14-2007, 11:16 PM

^^. Cool, you made a poll! I'll be voting when I have time!

Trio1237 · 05-15-2007, 08:50 PM

OMG! That was so cool! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Bravo.

rellybelly · 05-17-2007, 02:03 PM

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96

^^. Cool, you made a poll! I'll be voting when I have time!

Great! I'l be posting the next chapte soon. Look out for it!
-Shirel

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Originally Posted by Trio1237

OMG! That was so cool! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Bravo.

Hey! I'm really happy you liked it, I will post the next chapter soon!
-Shirel

rellybelly · 05-17-2007, 07:47 PM

Hey everyone! I hope all of you are well!!!

I'm really sorry I haven't posted, I like posting at least once in two days. Well I guess I gave you all a hint of when to check SS!! LOL Well I won't keep you waiting-
Presenting:

Chapter 6:
Mia's heart sank, she knew she wasn't going to like this teacher.

"Come on Miss Shaler. Were all waiting and we don't have all day." Said Professor Akumwah rather in an impatient sort of voice.

Mia looked up and saw everyone looking at her. Harry was already standing in the front of the class with his wand out. Sadley, she got up and made her way to the front of the class and took out her wand to.

"Now,I don't want to see any unforgivable curses usen in this class." He said.
As if, she thought to herself.

"Ok. Get ready, go!" No one did any move. "Come on lets go! Potter, Let's go, I know what you're capable of."

Mia thought quickly and shot a spell at harry that caused him to fall back with a *thud*. There were cheers from the Slytherins. Harry got up very quickly and aimed a spell at Mia, which she blocked almost efertlessly. He tried again and she blocked again. He tried the third time and Mia wasn't fast enough, she flew sevrelle feet in the air and then fell to the floor. This time the Gryffindors cheerd and the Slytherins booed. Mia's back ached but not enough to stop her the strenghth from shooting a spell at harry from the floor, that made blood come out of his nose then she quickly got up and wached the stunned harry trying to whipe the blood away. The Slytherins laughed so hard at this. Finaly she mutterd the countercurse and imediatly, the blood disappeard.

Professor Akumwah calle for silent. "Ok class, that's it for today. I want a four inch essay about silent spells for Friday's class."

Mia turned to walk out with Ashley, when she heard somone tap her on the shoulder, she stopped. She turned her head and saw Harry.

"Meet me on the side of the lake, behind the trees where no ones looking, right after launch."

"Ok." She whisperd back and ran to catch up with Ashley who was waiting for her right outside the classroom.

"Come on i'm starving. What took you so long?"

"Oh, nothing. I just had to ask Akumwah a qustion."

"Oh. By the way I just want to congragulate you for what you just did! This is the best day of my life! Oh, and wait till Draco finds out about this, he'll go banannah's! Let's go visit him after launch."

"Er...I don't think I can. I have some classes that I need to make up for when I was sick yesterday. Mia said. she hoped she sounded normal.

"That's okay, I'll ask Pansy to come with me."

They entered the great hall and walked twords the Slytherin table next to Pansy Parkinson. She saw them and exploded with compliments.

"OMG! Mia, you were so cool! You could so tell that you are a Slytherin!" Pansy talked some more but mia wasn't really paying attention. She was thinking, what would happen to her if the Slytherin's founf out that she was seeing Harry Potter who was not only a Gryffindor but, all Slytherins biggest hate.

Mia quickly ate her launch and got up to walk out of bthe great hall.

When she went outside she felt a liht breeze rush over her. Today is such a nice day, she thought. She walked over to where Harry described and sat against an old tree. Harry wasn't there yet so she had some time to think about what happend earlier this mornning with her and Draco Malfoy. Was ther maybe a little chance that he even liked her? No, she thought, impossible. Of course he like you, said anoter voice in tha back of her head, Why did he even kiss you?

A tap tap on her shoulder interupted her thoughts. She spun around and looked up and saw Harry. "Hey." He said.

"Hi." She replied as he made to sit next to her.

"What's on you're mind?" He smiled at her.

"Oh, i'm just thinking about my family. I haven't gotten any letters from them them yet." she said.

"Mia, don't worry. i'm sure they will send you something pretty soon. It's all a matter of time." He gave her a reassured smile.

"Harry," Mia started. She looked around to make sure no one saw them but the grounds were deserted, she turned to face him and took a deep breath and said "We can't be together anymore." Harry stared at her. "If anyone finds out about us, I will be thrown out of Slytherin."

"Mia." He took her hand. "I think what you did to me in DADA was enough to prove that you hate me. And by-the way I never knew that you were so good at that kind of stuff." He smiled. But Mia didn't look convinced.

"I told you on the train that it was my favorite subject." She paused.
"But if anyone finds out about us being together, my life is over!" She said sadley.

"So you're saying that you want me to pretend I hate you?" Ha asked sarcasticly.

"Yes." She said. She knew that she would start crying any second.

"What if we only met at night?" He tried.

Mia shaked her head. "To risky. If someone finds us..." She trailed off.

"No, I will bring my invisibility cloak then we could sneak outside and enjoy the stars." Harry said. Mia said nothing.

Finaly she nodded her head and slowly said "okay." A little more cheerfuly.

The bell rang, that meant that classes were about to start.

"I better go, I have Transfiguration now." Mia said.

Mia walked inside the casle before Harry, who waited two minutes after her and then headed back, so it woulden't look too suspicius.

Mia climbed up the moving staircase to the fourth floor and made a right and then a left and went into the classroom on the left (Ashley had told her how to get there during launch).

In the classroom some people were taking there seats and some people were taking ou their books. In the corner of the classroom, she spotted Ashley, Pansy, Gregorio, Crabbe. Goyle and to her biggest surprise Malfoy who's nose looked completly healled!

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That's it for now! I hope you all injoyed it! And by the way, in my last post, did you guys like my poem? I wan't you're honest opinions! Thanks soooo much!! I just wan't to know if I know how to write poems the correct way and also, my english teacher is obsessed with poetry so she wants us all to become poets! LOL!!
-Shirel-

jkrsong96 · 05-18-2007, 04:29 AM

Urrgh...I hate that Gregorio! Great post as usual, and I voted on the poll! PAMS

HOPEendures · 05-19-2007, 11:02 AM

I loved you poew so i hope you dont mide that i worte it down and put your name under it.good Post secrecy is a hard thing hope theyre up to it.PAMS

~Heather~

rellybelly · 05-20-2007, 09:54 AM

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96

Urrgh...I hate that Gregorio! Great post as usual, and I voted on the poll! PAMS

Hey!! Thanks for voting. I'm a little sick right now so I will post as soon as I feel better!

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Originally Posted by springbaby

I loved you poew so i hope you dont mide that i worte it down and put your name under it.good Post secrecy is a hard thing hope theyre up to it.PAMS

~Heather~

Hey!!! I'm so happy that you like my poem and even better that you wrote it down, LOL!! I will try and post as soon as I get better.

-Shirel

rellybelly · 05-22-2007, 11:45 AM

Hey girls! I'm really sorry that I didn't post yet. I was going to post today byt my dear sisster deleted it!!!!

I will try to rewrite it today since I am off from school. But it is a big disapointment when you're post gets deleted.
-Shirel

rellybelly · 05-22-2007, 04:26 PM

Hey Girls!! I finally finished typing the seventh chapter!

*shouts out loud!* I'm so exited to hear what you think about it! I put a lot of humour in it. Well I wont keep you waiting any longer...

Presenting *Blows the horn: toto...*

Chapter 7:

Mia felt like she wanted to run away and never be seen again, but Professor Mcgonagal had already closed the classroom door and was calling for quiet. So Mia took a seat where she would be the furthest away from Malfoy.

"Everybody open your books to bage 316." said Professor Mcgonagal.

Mia was heardly listening to what she was teaching, instead she was counting down the minutes that she had left of class by looking at Ron Weasleys watch who was sitting two tables away.

... one hour left ... Forty minutes ... half an hour ... time was going by so slow ... twenty five ... ten ... three ... one ... bell!

"Home work: Write about the fiifrent spells in which you use to transfigure an animal in to a diffrent animal. To be given in next Wensday."

Mia put her books in her bag and quickly exited the classroom.

Then she heard Malfoy calling after her. "Mia wait up."

She broke into a jog and he followed suit. Malfoy grabbed her arm and forced her into an empty classroom.

"Mia, listen-

"No Malfoy I will not listen to you. I don't ever want to see you in my sight again! Never again!" And she broke into a song.

"Never again will I hear you,
Never again will I miss you,
Never again will I fall to you,
Never,
Never again will I kiss you,
Never again will I want to,
Never again will I love you,
Never!"

She sang it in the most pretiest voice anyone would want to have. She felt as if she was onstage, again, singing in her old school concerts.

"Wow, Mia, that was the most bueati-"

She slapped him acroos the face and said. "I don't care!" She took out her wand and said a spell that she had made up in her old school, and Malfoy was blasted into the air. She didn't bother preforming the counter curse. Maybe one of the teachers will feel bad for him and let him down. She waved good bye and exited the classroom feeling light hearted as she skipped of, down to the great hall where a yummy dinner would be waiting for her.

Mia sat down at the Slytherin table smirking to herself. Ashley and Pansy noticed this and asked her. "Whats with the smirk Mia?"

"Oh, nothing." She answerd. "By the way, Are there any concerts at Hogwarts?"

"Yah sure." said Pansy smiling. "Theres the Christmas dance thats coming up."

"What are you going to where for it Pansy?" Said Ashley giggling.

"I don't know yet. Maybe we should got to the dress store in Hogsmade. When's the next trip we have?" Said Pansy.

"Not this weekend, but the next one." Replied Ashley.

"Mia, what do you think, Want to come with us?" Asked Pansy.

"Yah, why not? sounds like fun."

"We should get somthing very sexy, then the guys will be drooling all over us." Said Ashley, and the three giggled.

Proffesor Mcgonagal called for silence. "May I have you're attension please! Now this Saturday at the quidich pitch will be held tryouts for the teams. Hufflepuf at nine in the morninng, Slytherin at ten thirty, Gryffindor at twelve in the affternoon and Ravenclaw at two in the afternoon. For more enformation ask the captain which there names are on the notice boards. Thank you."

There was a murmur of exitment through out the hall.

"Well I guess I'll go to bed." yawned Ashley who did not look intrested in what the headmistress had said. Mia and Pansy nodded and the three Walked back twords the Slytherin common room.

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I hope you liked it and by the way the song Never again is by Kelly Clarkson. I will hopefully post the next post on thursday since I wont be able to go on my computer until late Wensday night.

-Shirel

jkrsong96 · 05-23-2007, 06:10 AM

That's an awesome post! Haha to you, Malfoy!

HOPEendures · 05-23-2007, 10:35 PM

wow she's so angry I love it anyways she should be with Harry.PAMS I LOVE IT

~HEATHER~

rellybelly · 05-24-2007, 07:20 AM

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Originally Posted by jkrsong96

That's an awesome post! Haha to you, Malfoy!

Hi! I'm so happy you liked my post, and I will write the eighth chapter today!!!!

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Originally Posted by springbaby

wow she's so angry I love it anyways she should be with Harry.PAMS I LOVE IT

~HEATHER~

Hi again...! Don't worry theres still the night time date!

-Shirel

rellybelly · 05-24-2007, 12:25 PM

Hey everyone! Finally Chapter eight. I think this has been my favorite chapter so far. I know you girls will really enjoy it!

Chapter 8! The evening date:
It was Saturday night, the night which Mia and Harry planned to see each other at eight forty five exactly by they oak front doors.

Mia was so excited for this romantic night that she decided to wear one of her best clothes; a low top that was hot pink with a black short skirt together with a scarf tied around the waste and black high boots. She laid them on her bed and examined them. They matched perfectly.

Mia showered quickly and then put the clothes away and applied some makeup: a little of blush on her cheeks; green eye shadow to go with her dark green eyes; and light pink lipp-gloss. She stood in front of the mirror and had to admit that she was very pretty, like those models on muggle television that she saw once. Then the story that heppened last week came swarming back, Malfoy probably has a huge crush on her. Well he is cute, she thought. He has this shiny blond hair and those amazing grey eyes. Oh, and that nose how cute it is, she thought. Wait, she told herself. What am I thinking? I love Harry, not Malfoy! And she quickly pushed it out of her mind.

She pulled on her boots and put on her jewlry and looked at herself in the mirror one more time before she hurried down to the Slytherin common room. She got a lot of stairs from the people that were down there Luckily, Malfoy was not there.

The weirdest thing that she saw was Gregorio slamming his book and running up to the boys dormitory at the sight of her. She exited the room and broke into a fast walk towords the meeting place.

Harry was already waiting for her and when he saw her, he gave her a light kiss on the cheek. "Wow. you... you look beautiful."

"Thank you." she said blushing.

"Shall we walk?" he pulled out his hand and she took it. They walked around the lake in silent.

"What are you thinking?" He asked.

"Oh nothing." she answerd.

Either she imagined it or not, she heard the phoenix song that she had heard once before. It was beautiful. Harry seemed to hear this song to because he said, "Fox, Dumbledores old phoenix." The two listened to the song until harry asked her if she wanted to dance. She agreed and he put his left hand on her waist comftorobaly and took her right hand while she put her left hand behind his back and he held her right hand. Togetehr they danced in this romantic kind of way. She rested her head on his shoulder. She wanted this night to never end. She felt so comftorable right next to him, his hand on her waist.

"Its midnight." he said.

Mia picked up her head and looked straight into his green eyes. "Nothing matters when were together." she said.

They each looked straight into each others eyes. There heads were moving closer and closer until slowly they were kissing. Next they started french kissing, what a good feeling it was.

The hours ticked by. From twelve, to twelve thirty then one oclock. Then all of the sudden they heard a voice, out of no where, growled: "Here you are, alone, defensless, Potter!" Harry spun around and took out his wand. Mia did the same. There in front of them were about eight Death Eaters, All with their wands out, pointed to them. They were eight against two.

A death eater on the right aimed a stunning spell which he blocked, and aimed at him Secasempra! The fight had began.

Mia aimed a stunning spel at a death eater that tried to kill her and he blocked. She was shore that she was going to get killed. How could they possibly win with eight against two?? What they needed was a miracle. She didn't know what was going on with Harry since she was fighting two Death Eaters at a time. But when she turned around for a second, she saw two Death Eaters lying motionlessly on the ground.

"You can't dance for ever, pretty." Said an uglly Death Eater as he blocked her spell.

"Take that!" She shouted as she shot one of her made up spells. The Death Eater did two somersaults backwords and fell on the ground and just lay there unconsciously. From they other side she heard someone scream, "The boy dissapeard! What do we do? he just disapeared!" And before she knew it she was being grabbed by the back. The Death Eater grabbed her hard and then scraped her hard on the arm. It heart so much as if someone was putting poison inside her. She collapsed on the floor screaming in agony. The Death Eater transformed ropes out of thin air that binded her tightly, then he and another Death Eater picked her up and them and all the other Death Eaters ran twords the front gates. Someone preformed a spell that made them open. Then all of them ran out and dissaparted, her with them.

She knew this was they end of her life. She was so scared. They reappeared outside of a huge, huge old house that looked pretty much like a castle.The Death Eater jragged her up to the door, then one of them did some kind of spell that made the doors open. She was in so much pain that she barely felt that the ropes had gone once the were inside and the doors were locked.

Mia quickly stood up and stare dangrily at the laughing Death Eaters. The trick was to so that your not afraid of them. She was going to die like her boyfreind that was killed, Not afraid, not showing any sines of pain, he died like a hero. And thats exactly how she was going to face them, bravely!

"Welcome to our head courters!" Said one of the Death Eaters with a sneer on his face.

"What do you want with me?" She asked. "Let me go!" She orderd.

"Crucio!" He said. Mia instantly fell to the ground screeching. She felt like there were hot knives peircing threw her. Then it stopped.

"Braxen, your in charge of her. Keep guard and lock her up in the dungeons."

The guy called Braxen pulled mia up by they arm an jragged her into a dirty room in the dungeons.

"Let me out!" She screamed. "Let me out! Let-" and for the second time, she felt the horrible pain peirce threw her. "AHHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHH!" She screamed like she had never before screamed in her life. And it stopped and she rolled over on the floor sobbing. Then she heard someone say to Baxen on they other side of the door, "The Dark Lord has just arrived."

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To be continued...
I know you can't wait but I want it to be a surprise!

I really, really want to hear what you think about it

-Shirel

jkrsong96 · 05-25-2007, 01:46 AM

I can understand why you want our comments and you like this chapter, Shirrel, 'cause it's totally totally awesome! I can't wait to find out! Evil cliffie! I have so many questions running through my head right now.

rellybelly · 05-25-2007, 06:00 AM

Hey! ^^ Don't worry I shall(LOL) post more soon.
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To all my loyal readers:
I have a question, and I wan't to know your honest opinion, because I am not a kind of girl who gets insulted very quickly. Do you think I should change the title of my ff (A war of love) to a better one so I will get more readers?
Thanks,
Shirel

HOPEendures · 05-25-2007, 10:47 AM

NOOOOO she can't die she can't.I like the title but it would be tricky to change because i just can't think of a title that could fit better with this story so far because it really is a war of love.Mia can't make up her mind wether or not she loves Harry or Draco.so i think its a good title.Good poast.PAMS

scc · 05-27-2007, 01:55 PM

I don't think u shud change the title i like it!
by the way it was a good post...
SCC

rellybelly · 05-28-2007, 03:52 PM

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Originally Posted by springbaby

NOOOOO she can't die she can't.I like the title but it would be tricky to change because i just can't think of a title that could fit better with this story so far because it really is a war of love.Mia can't make up her mind wether or not she loves Harry or Draco.so i think its a good title.Good poast.PAMS

Hi! I think your right about the title, you've convinced me And your also right about Mia + Harry or Draco, she keeps gettig confused.

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Originally Posted by scc

I don't think u shud change the title i like it!
by the way it was a good post...
SCC

Hey Shuli! Thanks for your advice to, so at they end I don't think I will change the title but if I do I will definitly let everybody know! I'm Happy you like my posts!!

I am hoping to write the next chapter tomorrow if I have time since I have a big history test this thursday + other work in other subjects...

If I do change the title it will be for good and I am hoping even a more catchy title since I want more readers!!!!
-Shirel

Trio1237 · 05-28-2007, 04:10 PM

OMG I am so sorry that I haven't been posting on yours lately. It is still one of the best. Don't change the name because it is catchy and I want to find out what happens. PAMS to an outstanding writer.

rellybelly · 05-29-2007, 01:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Trio1237

OMG I am so sorry that I haven't been posting on yours lately. It is still one of the best. Don't change the name because it is catchy and I want to find out what happens. PAMS to an outstanding writer.

Hey! Its okay... I'm really happy you like it -by the way I love your's 2 and you have to write more!!!- I will try to post cjapter 9 2day since I finished writing it. So if I finish studying for my test I will post it!!
Keep checking,
-Shirel

rellybelly · 05-29-2007, 06:59 PM

Hi! Sorry for what felt like a very long wait... but as promised,

Chapter 9:

Mia gasped, Voldemort! The one and only Wizard to ever go as bad and dark as him. The one she grew up knowing his name. The big, dark murderer. She thought. That's it, her life is over! Over! Over! Over! Finished! No one is known to have escaped him alive except for her own boyfriend. The one she had kissed only minutes before he left her, the one that she had held and danced with, the one she had and still, loves.

She was scared, scared about seeing his cold and scary face, scared about not ever seeing her family and friends again, the ones she loved, scared about that he would probably curse her with they Unforgivable curses. Then the door opened inturrupting her thoughts.

It was Bellatrix Lestrange. The one responsible for the death of Sirius Black and the torture of the Longbottoms. Just about two years ago she had escaped Azkaban and while she was loose she had killed Sirius Black. Since her escape, she had been all over the papers, and yet, there she stood, smiling in an evil, cold, and cruel way.

"Hello." She said evilly. "I'm so glad you're here to join the Death Eaters. Really, its such a honor you're here. And what's even better, you're Potters girlfriend." She laughed coldly.

"You deserve to be in Azkaban with your other friends the Dementors." Mia said trying to sound brave.

Belatrix's face changed from a sweet cold face into a mean, nasty look. She picked up her wand and pointed at Mia, Crucio! She yelled.

"AHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHH! STOP! STOP! I BEG YOU!" she yelled in pain.

In a minute it was gone and Belatrix said in a more business like voice. "Now, I have a little matter that I would like to share with you." She smiled again sweetly. "I want you to bring Potter to me." Mia's heart sank heavily. "Since he is being watched more than he even knows," She continued. "We have a bad chance of capturing him, so that's where you come in, Shaler, you will be cursed with the Imperius curse and don't worry sweet, you will have no control of your actions." She laughed so hard this time.

"N-No! I wont, I won't bring him to you!" She yelled.

"Oh but that's what you think. Just wait, the plan will go very smoothly. You'll see. Soon potter will be DEAD! She smirked evilly.

Mia felt hot tears rolling down her cheeks. She couldn't, that evil lady, Why, Why did everything always have to happen to her?

Well, sorry, that's it! I hope I didn't make it to scarry!! I'll try to have my next post up soon!
-Shirel

jkrsong96 · 05-29-2007, 11:23 PM

Well...I don't really think you should change the title. I mean, it would be great to have even more people to read this awesome FF! But A war a love. is a brilliant title!
You described Bella so well! Exactly how I would see. Pweeze...don't let Mia and Harry die!

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