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06-05-2010, 11:07 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Candy Mountain =P
Posts: 208
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Robin Mitchells
First Year |  A New Surprise - Sa13+
Hi everyone! I'm Jocelynn! OK, so I was bored one night and this story just popped into my head. I dare not take the credit of the wonderful creations of J.K. Rowling - the characters are all hers. The plot is mine! I hope you like! Chapters:
Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13
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Chapter 1
I waited all night for him to return. And it was quite obvious that I was getting restless.. I paced back and forth around my house so much that night that you could almost start to see the outline of my footprints on the floor. I also ate…..a lot. Ice cream cartons filled the trashcan and piled up on top of each other. I ate from being nervous and afraid that maybe Harry had to stay a day longer and come back days later. So I had to find a way to keep myself occupied.
I used this muggle machine, called a computer. Its almost like a television in some ways, except you don’t need a remote and you can do so many things on it. Living with Harry, I was sure to learn new things and be surprised. I wasn’t like my father who went completely bonkers with every muggle contraption, but I was still amazed at the things they invented.
One day I went out to the store with Harry in London, and bought a guitar. He wanted to get me a teacher, but I refused.
“Harry, I don’t need a teacher!” I told him.
“So the guitar is just for display?” He asked me.
“No, silly!” I told him, playfully slapping him on the arm. “I’ll teach myself.”
He put his hands on his hips, smiling. “Ginny, I know you’re always up for a challenge. But how will you do that? You cant teach yourself if you don’t even know the basics to begin with.” He told me.
“I know. Gosh, Harry, I’m not gonna teach myself nothing. There’s youtube.”
“Who tube?”
“Youtube. Have you been living under a rock, lately?”
“Haha, very funny. Now my own wife thinks she knows more about the muggle world than I do.”
“Youtube is a website where people can post and watch videos. There’s tons of tutorials. How do you think I’m learning French basics? I’ll learn from there.”
“You‘re getting so good with the computer. You‘re a fast learner.” He told me.
“Sometimes I just get bored. What’s a girl to do? ”
And I got pretty good at the guitar, and started playing songs, not quite writing them though. I was snapped back to reality when I saw the door knob of the front door turn. I held my breath. The door slowly turned, and who I saw took all my worries away. I didn’t have time to think. I acted sorta on instinct. I just ran to him and hugged him and kissed him.
Last edited by emerald dawn; 04-23-2011 at 06:59 PM.
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06-07-2010, 06:48 AM
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| | Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: TARDIS.
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Sixth Year |  Weeee Jenn <33... | You know Ravvies are awesome | | Loly... I luff you! | LOVES mah TWINNEH!
This is really good! PAMS!
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06-07-2010, 09:12 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2009
Posts: 622
Hogwarts RPG Name:
GinnyWeasleyPotter
First Year |
oih finally, Ginny WEasley! I like it. It's cute.Worth tweeting for! please PM me when there's an update...  | |
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06-07-2010, 05:14 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
Posts: 1,534
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lily Adams
First Year |
Thats so cute! PAMS! I love it!
Ps... reina9 I LOVE your signiture!!!!!!!!
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06-07-2010, 06:31 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 400
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Monica Brennan
First Year | RED VINES!! * AVPM
I LOVE it!!! More please!! PAMS
Sammy
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06-07-2010, 06:57 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kaylee Strap
First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Jocelynn, it's awesome! Ginny is hilarious, and youtube is amazing! I loove it! Pams when you can!
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06-07-2010, 08:28 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Candy Mountain =P
Posts: 208
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Robin Mitchells
First Year |  Thanks for the replies!!!
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Originally Posted by TeamHermioneGranger  This is really good! PAMS!
First reader Thanks so much! glad you like it! Quote:
Originally Posted by reina9 oih finally, Ginny WEasley! I like it. It's cute.Worth tweeting for! please PM me when there's an update... Hi and thank you! Oh and I love you signature too! Quote:
Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 Thats so cute! PAMS! I love it!
Ps... reina9 I LOVE your signiture!!!!!!!! Thanks so much! Quote:
Originally Posted by potionsmaster22 I LOVE it!!! More please!! PAMS
Sammy Yay! I appreciate the reply! Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Jocelynn, it's awesome! Ginny is hilarious, and youtube is amazing! I loove it! Pams when you can! Yup, youtube really is amazing! I'm working on it! I'll post it by tuesday(i hope)!
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06-08-2010, 03:27 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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I really liked this. I have an idea what a New Surprise is but I won't say anything!!!! 
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06-09-2010, 03:02 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Candy Mountain =P
Posts: 208
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Robin Mitchells
First Year |
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Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I really liked this. I have an idea what a New Surprise is but I won't say anything!!!! Thank you! And shhh! don't tell anyone. You'll find out if you're right or wrong in the later chapters! <3  | |
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06-09-2010, 03:09 AM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Candy Mountain =P
Posts: 208
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Robin Mitchells
First Year |
Chapter 2
Ginny’s POV (Point Of View)
“I’m so glad you’re home, Harry!” I told him, ecstatic.
“Me too! I’ve missed you, Ginny!” Harry told, flashing me a smile.
“Not as much as I have, love. Come, let’s unpack.” I told him, grabbing his arm and pulling him to the bags. He stayed still, not moving.
“The bags can unpack themselves.” He smiled, and with a flick of his wand, the bags did just that. He looked around. He frowned. “Ginny, what happened here?”
I suppose he was talking about the fact that there were piles of ice cream cartons in the trashcan. I was so excited about Harry coming that I…well, forgot about everything else.
“I got hungry.” I batted my eyelashes and smiled innocently. Harry wasn’t mad, he just rolled his eyes and smiled.
“I love you, Ginny.” He said, giving me a warm hug. I looked into his beautiful green eyes and felt my heart flutter.
“I love you more.”
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Harry’s POV
“Harry, I’m so glad you’re back, mate. Ginny’s gone mad.” Ron looked over his shoulder. “Literally.” He said with a serious expression. I couldn’t help but laugh. It was my second day back and he and I went to the burrow. Everyone was there.
Ginny, Hermione, and a few others were in the kitchen making dinner, Ron and I where doing anything BUT being productive. And here was Ron telling me that my wife is mad. I laughed and looked at him.
“What are you talking about, Ron?” I asked him. He shushed me.
“You’re too loud. They’ll hear you!” He told me, whispering. “Woman. Anything you say and they’ll take it as an insult!”
I was starting to think that it was Ron that was mad instead of Ginny. I put a hand on his shoulder and looked at him with the most serious expression I could muster, which wasn’t easy. This was Ron we were talking about!
“Ron, don’t take this the wrong way… I mean, you’ve been my best friend for a long time. But…I think you’re losing it.” I told him, my mouth twitching slightly.
“No, Harry. I’m serious. There was this time while you were gone, we went out to dinner, I told her that her clothes were looking a little bit…tight, and she instantly blew up on me!” He said. “She made a whole scene. She went crazy.”
“You should know better than to say something like that to any girl, especially her.” I told him. Sometimes Ron was so clueless.
“Whatever mate. But here’s a little advice, don’t comment on anything except for the weather if you don’t want you head blown off.” He told me. I rolled my eyes. Our conversation ended when we heard Ginny call both our names into the kitchen.
“Speaking of the devil.” Ron muttered under his breath. We took our time walking back inside the house, but Ginny wasn’t so patient. And it killed me to say it, but…Ron was right.
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Well, that's chapter 2! Reply and tell me what you think! <3 Since this one is so short, I'll post the next one soon(i hope)!
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06-09-2010, 03:44 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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I have a feeling that I know whats wrong but you told be to stay quiet!!!! 
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06-09-2010, 05:45 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Canada (GMT -5)
Posts: 808
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Orchid Danelli Simmons
Fifth Year |
NEW READER!
i love it! PAMS!
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06-09-2010, 07:33 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kaylee Strap
First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
I think I know why she has a craving for ice cream! Okay.. That was a little random, but still. I THINK I KNOW! I THINK I KNOW! Eh, it's gonna be soo funny if it is what I think it is. Wow, talk about using think to many times in one review. lol.. I loved it Jocelynn! | |
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06-12-2010, 10:06 AM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2009
Posts: 622
Hogwarts RPG Name:
GinnyWeasleyPotter
First Year |
 that's so funny hey, Ginny is pregnant, isn't she?  | |
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06-12-2010, 03:33 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 166
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Elizabeth Burnes
Fourth Year |
nice story so far
and i think i know the surprise as well
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06-13-2010, 04:39 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Candy Mountain =P
Posts: 208
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Robin Mitchells
First Year |
Ok so nothing can get past my readers...=) Sorry I'm having some writers block on both of my stories, but I'll post more soon! Maybe late on in the week <3
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06-13-2010, 10:48 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Candy Mountain =P
Posts: 208
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Robin Mitchells
First Year | 
Chapter 3 Harry’s POV
“RON! HARRY!” Ginny practically screeched. Ron gave me a side glance, sort of like an “I-told-you-so” look. I didn’t respond, hoping that he was wrong, even if I knew he wasn’t. By the third time Ginny called after us, we quickened our pace, basically running to the house.
We went into the kitchen, and we found Ginny looking at us with a forced smile. She looked at me, then Ron, and then me again.
“Harry, dear, where have you been?” She asked me. You know when you know someone is secretly irritated but they give you this fake smile and an even creepier fake sweet voice? Now imagine that that person had red hair, a fiery temper, big older brothers, and could do magic, and was well known for a bat boogey hex. EXACTLY. This was what I was dealing with.
“I was outside.” But then I quickly added, “With Ron.” Ron looked at me in disbelief. Sorry, Ron. But If I’m going down, you’re going down with me.
“Oh, okay.” She said through pursed lips. She turned to Ron. “You dragged him out there?”
Ron shook his head like crazy. “No.” He croaked.
“Are you calling my,”- She turned to me at this point, -“beautiful, sweet, loving, non-lying husband, a liar?” She turned back to him. I held my breath. Yup, we’re screwed.
“No! Of course not!” Ron said, shaking his hands.
“Well than are YOU lying?” She took a step forward. I barged in, not having a clue why I did that.
“Ginny, its okay. We were just catching up. Calm down.” I said.
“I am calm.” She said, faking that smile and that sweet voice of hers. Then she sighed. “Its just that…I’ve missed you, honey. I want us to spend as much time together as possible.” Oh boy. I wouldn’t mind if she wasn’t so…irritated. Ron(my BESTEST buddy in the world! Note that that was sarcasm.) took this as the best opportunity to offer some…advice.
“Oh, Ginny, that’s so sweet of you. Harry wants to do the same. That’s what we were talking about, actually. SO I’ll just stay out of this and leave you two lovebirds alone.”
“You better leave us alone! Harry’s my husband, not yours!” Ginny called after him. He assured us that he does have his own and then gave me and evil grin while Ginny wasn’t looking and than walked away…more like ran away, actually. Ginny’s POV
Ok, so might have overreacted a little bit, but the guys will get over it. It’s just that I’ve been feeling a little…funny. I can’t quite explain it. I kept on thinking about what Ron said last week. About my clothes looking tight. In truth, everything was tight. So I just picked something nice and put it on, thinking that they wouldn’t notice. But, of course, Ron and his big mouth had to mention that. And worse, the whole restaurant heard! Oh, and I’ve been having these strange cravings! Particularly ice cream. I guess that’s the reason why I’ve been gaining some weight.
I’m just a little annoyed right now. Men are soo lazy! We cook and clean and take care of kids and what do they do? Fight off monsters and stuff! BIG WHOOP! Stupid Ron had to drag off Harry outside the house, probably finding ways to brainwash Harry and stuff, and he wasn’t even being productive! What an idiot! So Harry is helping me cook in the kitchen(isn‘t he such a sweetie?), and I’m positive the food is going to be lovely. Harry is doing EVERYTHING just as I told him to do it and I love it. What could I ever do without my little jet-black-haired angel?
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Ok, so nothing gets past you guys! You're so smart. I had fun with Harry in this chapter, and I'm gonna have more fun with Harry in later chapters. MWAHAHAHA I'm soo evil! 
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Reason: changed word that tripped censor
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06-13-2010, 10:51 PM
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| | Billywig
Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: TARDIS.
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Maddie Force
Sixth Year | Weeee Jenn <33... | You know Ravvies are awesome | | Loly... I luff you! | LOVES mah TWINNEH!
Awwh, this is great
PAMS!
__________________ _________________________Homecoming, I'm coming, I'm coming back...
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06-13-2010, 11:31 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2009
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GinnyWeasleyPotter
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more! more! more! i'm having fun!  | |
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06-14-2010, 05:22 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Canada (GMT -5)
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Orchid Danelli Simmons
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Ginny's preggers!!! OMG! I knew it! Haha anyways you'll probably be hearing this from me a LOT...PAMS!
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06-14-2010, 06:25 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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I loved it Jocelyn!!!!!!!!!!!!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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06-19-2010, 04:13 AM
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Love Hunter ExtraordinaireMooncalf
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*New reader alert* I love this fic! It's so cute! And I love Ginny's temper and everything! Hilarious PLEASE PAMS!!  | |
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06-19-2010, 06:51 PM
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X-treme Horcrux Slayer!Puffskein
Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Killing Rob!
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sophie Potter
First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
New Reader I love your Story. Harry/Ginny fics are the best. Your a great writer.
PAMS!
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06-20-2010, 11:48 PM
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| | Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Kaylee Strap
First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Ohmigosh! An update! YIPPEE'S! Your the bestest!  I looooove it! Ron is such a jerk, deserting Harry... Bwhahahaha, there gonna have a kid!
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06-23-2010, 12:29 AM
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| | Kappa
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I loved it  I don't usually read fan fics to be honest but then I thought why not try this site's fanfics... and I'm glad I did I like H\G stories...Keep up the good job!
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