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That was so sad, wanted to make me cry Brillient chapter Lily. I will post my chapters soon (: |
Awwwwww! Loved the new chapters, both of youu! Keep up the amazing work, can't wait to see what else both of you come up with! (: :glomp: |
But...But....bUUUUUT! *cries on Minerva's shoulder* THAT WAS SOOOOO SAD! And Hermione, wow, and Ron, WOW, and Ron twice, WOWOWOWOOWOW your so nice. Lavender, well... I guess your being a little more nice now and um, Neville, your adorable and the best friend anyone could ask for! Harry and Ginny, I laugh at you too. All the updates, they were both sad, in a way, but the first was happier :xd: |
I realise i said i was going to post more then one point of view like before but i havn't had time to actually write recently so i'm posting just the one which was suppose to actually be in my last chapter. Enjoy! And thank you Maura! I clutched the books to my chest as I walked down the corridor; I had just been to the library and picked up something to read. I needed something to pass the time as I waited to see who would partake of the wizard’s games. Not me certainly, I didn't want anything else to worry about, there were plenty of people to enter instead of me. Another thought in my mind that morning was Fred, and how he actually was different then George. Though they had the same taste in pranks, they were, in fact, very different people. I smiled at the thought of some of their better pranks; they had always made me laugh even if I didn't let on. I turned the corner to find the temporary Headmistress walking briskly towards me. I stopped and waited for her to walk past but instead she stopped in front of me. "Professor" I said politely trying to get past her instead. "Ah Miss, Johnson. Just the person I was looking for," she said crisply. "Professor?" I asked, clearly interested. I stopped trying to get around her and stared at her. "If I’m correct you will not be entering the wizard games this year?" She asked me, I nodded and she carried on, "Then I would like you to stand in to judge. We seem to be a judge short and I and my fellow Professors felt it would benefit to have a student judge as well. To keep the score even," She explained to me. I was shocked, a judge? But I didn't know how to, and…Didn't the Professors always judge, wasn't it like a tradition or something? I asked myself as I stared at the Professor. I didn't realize I had my mouth open until the Professor said; "Close your mouth Miss Johnson, it's very unladylike." I snapped my mouth closed and swallowed. "I...Uh...Wouldn’t know how to judge, Professor," I admitted, hanging my head. "Nonsense, it's quite easy and you have the other three Judges to help you when you’re stuck." I swallowed again, not sure whether I should take the offer or not. I took the first and said smiling lightly, "Okay, I’ll give it a try" I looked up. "Excellent, There is a meeting tomorrow night in the Professor's lounge for all judges. I expect to see you there. 8pm sharp." I nodded at the instructions, my mind whirling at all the information. It was just too much and yet I was excited at the same time! I couldn’t wait all of a sudden. "Thank you" I said before walking away. I just couldn't wait to tell George, he was going to be thrilled I knew it! I quickened my pace down the staircase and towards the Great Hall, where I knew he would be. I was pretty hungry and glad I was going that way. Just as I stepped off the last stone step, I saw Ron storm out of the Great Hall, red in the face. "Ron..." I called out but he stormed off up the stairs; I watched him go. A few moments later, Hermione ran out of the hall, clearly upset, and it clicked into place - yet another fight. "Where's Ron?" Hermione asked, her voice wobbling; I pointed upstairs and watched her too run away. Sigh, young love, I thought with a smile and walked happily into the Great Hall - nothing was going to destroy my excitement. It didn't take me long to find George; he was with Jordan and they were yet again whispering together, no doubt coming up with a new prank. I slid into the seat next to him as he quickly finished up the conversation. I guess he didn't want me to know what they talking about. I stared at him for a few moments before launching into my good news. "Guess what?" I asked happily. "What?" He asked, biting into his half eaten food. I pulled a plate of food my way also and took a bite. "Guess who's going to be the fourth judge in the Wizard Games?" I asked him, hardly able to keep in my excitement. "…Winky?" He guessed randomly, clearly not that interested. I sighed. "No! Guess again," I said, smiling a bright smile. "Who then?" He asked, clearly bored with the game. He still wasn't looking at me, but at his food, which he was slowly eating. "Me!" I cried, bouncing up and down. I was so happy, happier than before, when I had first been told. George put his fork down and looked at me like he didn't believe me. "I know hard to believe but it's true, Professor McGonagall asked me just now. I’m so excited" I said, rambling on and waving my hands around. "Really? Wow! Congrats, Angela!" I heard George say. "Thanks!" I said leaning forward giving him a kiss on the cheek and a hug. I immediately froze, completely surprised with myself. It was true that I’d wanted to kiss George for a long time, but I didn’t think I’d ever have to nerve to do it. George was clearly surprised as well. "Sorry…" I said, going red. "No worries," He replied, equally red in the face. I looked at my hands as he looked away. Jordan - who I had forgotten was still there - laughed however, slapping George on the back saying, "Just kiss her." I looked up as George turned to look at me. "Err...” I managed to say before he slowly leaned forward and kissed me on the lips. Oh my. Our first kiss. It was awkward for a moment before we both relaxed and leaned further into the kiss. He gently pulled me closer to him on the bench, and I smiled beneath his lips, completely content. |
EEEEEK! That's sooooo awesome! Lee is hysterical! WOWWWW! Theeeeey kiiiiiiiissseeeeeedddd! :x3: YAYYYYYY! *falls in love with the story all over again* And, and, and, SHE'S A JUDGE! *dies* This is just to awesome! pamspamspamspamspamspamspams. I love this story soooo much, it's awesome. And poor Ron and Hermione! *huggles them* |
:D Looks good. Your editor must be a genius. Oh wait. |
Poor Ron and Hermione in this chappie! Can't wait for more! ;) |
Good. Somebody tell me, please, what means word "MOARRR"? Thank you for reply! |
Great chappie Eviee! I'm really liking George and Angelina and well poor Ron and Hermione :( Can't wait for the next post! :D |
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Aww glad you fell in love with the story once again (: and yeshh i felt it was about time...and the story felt the same! :P Yeah! It just came to meh! and i thought why not? haha i'm glad you liked it. Oooooh i hope you don't have to wait long for the next bit. In fact i'm going to start writing my chapter soon even if Lily has to post first. Thank you again for reading and i'm glad you love that story (: *huggles you* Quote:
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Aww yeah George and Angelina seem to be having all the fun :P And i really wanna know where Ron and Hermione get to after there little argument! Hmmmm. More soon! (: |
"We love to read your comments (:" Great. I become alive with heroes at HP films. "I'm Eviee (: You must be Valeria?" Certainly. "Moarr? do you mean More? We shall indeed give you more to read soon. (:" Must be air from France was into my mind. I will read more with great pleasure, just do you recomend me common translater as for Harry Potter user? http://i.smiles2k.net/love_smiles/272.gif |
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Oooh good! Ah i've never heard of that, and sorry that last bit i couldn't quiet understand :/ |
HAI I'm back and I love it and I want more it's amazing!! Your character development is fabulous! Update soon, please! :glomp: |
Awwww! Angelina & George are one of my favorite couples ever! <333 I feel horrible for Hermione & Ron, though. :( Keep up the good work! :D |
OHMIGOSH! I'm late in reading this, as I can see, but AWWW! George and Angelina! Poor Minerva! I like, cried when I read that! Lavender.....Well, she's becoming nicer! Harry and Ginny = AWWWW! Rom & Hermione = So cute together! Neville!!! (sorry, I like him) Lunaa!!!!!!! ( I like her more!!!) and lastly, PAMS! |
Okay I am FINALLY caught up. Love the new chapters!! Aw yaaay angela and george =]=] How cute!!! =p POST MORE SOON PLEASE! And please let me know when you do =] |
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Thanks for reading. Why thank you (: I'm sure there will be a update soon! Quote:
Yeah it's just not right them not being together, though the fight well that was normal. XD Thank you and i'm sure Lily will post her chapter soon! Quote:
Haha such a cute couple (: I know, i almost cried on that but! :/ Was such a good chatper! Well think she knows she has to, not such :/ Haha my favourite couple, Harry and Ginny (: My second favourite couple, Ron and Hermione (well they were a couple) Hahaa that last bit about Neville and Luna made me smile. They're really great characters after all (: thanks for reading. :glomp: Quote:
Why thank you and yesh! the new famous couple of the story :lol: Will see what i can do (: thank again :glomp: And of course i will let you know, i tend to tell all the most active readers that me or Lily have posted (: |
I walked along the corridors. The sound of my footsteps echoed off the bloody stone floor. Grief had crept around the school, gripping pupils; siblings; parents; professors – everyone, like a plague. I didn't know where I was going. I stopped suddenly as I passed the room. No harm with checking... I opened the chipped, blood-stained, formerly beautiful, mahogany doors that led to the room that held the Goblet of Fire. I searched through the burned pieces of paper that littered the floor. Nope. My name wasn't on any. I sighed. Maybe I could explain that it wasn't me that did it. That a gust of wind had taken the paper and dropped it in the blue flames. No, I wouldn't waste my breath trying. I, Neville Longbottom, was in the running for the Wizard Games. *** I walked into the infirmary. “Can I help?” Madam Pomfrey glanced up from tending to a wound on a young enough kid. “Move the body.” She tried to keep her voice emotionless as she indicated to a dead body covered by a crisp, clean, white, linen sheet but her voice broke at the end and she grabbed a tissue to dab her eyes before she had a chance to start to cry. I nodded and winced as the body felt so limb and lifeless in my arms when I picked the body up. I didn't want to look at whoever it was. I didn't want to know. It would just be too painful to see another pair of closed eyes and waxy skin. It was light. Small. A shuddering sob racked through my lanky body but no tears came. For that, I was grateful. But to think that a child was gone because of him. Millions gone because of Voldemort. (I was one of the view that was brave enough enough now to say his name.) Well, it's enough to make a grown man cry. *** I leaned against the wall of the fifth floor corridor, my eyes closed – trying to rid the image of the small, cute, blond little girl. When I was placing the body under the sheet down in the mass grave, the sheet had fallen off and reviled the face of a twelve year-old girl. He vaguely recalled saving her from Amycus Carrow. Suddenly, the eerie silence was broken as Peeves came 'round the corner. I cursed. I broke into a sprint, not wanting to hear his crap right now. “UGGGHHHH! Nev-Nev Looooongg Buttum. His name insults him! Hehe! Where's you running to Looooongg Buttum? Well, Peevey is gonna get ye!” And Peeves started to chuck bottles of blue and red ink at me. I turned a hard left and threw open the brook closet and shut the door quickly. I moved back and stood still, barely breathing. “Nev-Nev?” Peeve teased as he passed. I remained quiet till I was sure he was gone. Then I let out a long, deep breath. I whipped out my wand and whispered, “Lumos,” I glanced around and jumped into the air at the sight of Hannah Abbot, looking shocked, pressed up against the wall. Her eyes were red and blotchy and tear tracks ran down her cheeks. “Merlin Hannah, I'm so sorry.” She moved away from the wall, clearly still shocked but relaxing a bit. “That's okay.” “Hannah...” I asked tentatively. “Where you crying?” “What?! No!” But she turned around quickly to wipe her eyes. I found myself just standing there awkwardly,wanting to move towards her. Her tears pierced me and I wanted to know why she was crying. What was wrong with her? When she turned around she glanced at me and whispered in a hoarse voice, “I know y-you're with L-Luna, but I can't hold it in any longer a-and I swear it won't happen again.” I could feel myself getting nervous, my stomach twisting in knots. She pulled my wand out of my loose grip and I noticed how silky her scarlet hair was. How her lips were no longer swollen. How her noise was back in it's place. And then she distinguished the light. Darkness. After a couple of seconds, I could feel her warm breath on my face. And her lips touched mine. Electricity ran down my body as her kiss deepened. Knowing it was wrong, but feeling like it was right, I kissed her back. She wrapped her arms around my neck and I placed my hands on her hips. Suddenly, the door opened and there stood... |
Luna... My guess. New reader and I love the story. You and Evie are such talented writers. Cant wait for more. |
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OMG! I'm so sorry guys that i've not posted. I will post asap! Sorry again! *hides* |
heya everyone. I'd like to thank everyone who nominated us for the Golden Globes. It's such an honour! *luffs on you* I just came back from my holidays and to see that this story was nominated was so...no words can discribe. thank you.thank you |
I'm trying to improve my writing, sorry if this sucks... to all who nominated mine and Lily's story for the Golden Goblin Awards. Also i'm terribly sorry for this being MEGA late, i really don't have an excuse. I hope you like it i've been trying to move the story forward, closer to the date of the games which seem to be a sparkle in the eye of this story at the moment. -------------------------------------------------- Well you could say a lot had happened in the past few weeks and soon the cup would annonce who would be chosen to play part in the wizards game. The tension was rising all around me and was putting me, and i'm sure others, into foul moods. It was all the talk around each common room it even out bid all the disagreements between who was dating who although i never really got why girls faught over all that. Now i didn't enter the games, after everything that had happened i don't think i was up for it. Not that i was saying i had done a lot to cause the fall of He Who Must Not Be Named as we all still called him but to tell you the truth i-i really didn't have a reason, even after all the weeks of trying to think of one to tell everyone around me i was stil stumped. As i had been thinking someone had walked up to me and was not tapping me on the arm. It took me a few moments to realise this and looked up, i was surprised to see Ginny looking at me as she wasn't one to really talk to me. She was all about sticking to Harry and his gang of friends rather then with people her own age. "Dean, Dean. You there?" I heard her ask but it sounded like i was in a container and she was tapping on the window. Weird but nevertheless i answered smiling. "Haii how you doing?" I offered her a seat opposite me as i spoke, she gladly took smiling back at me. "Pretty good thanks, you? We. Me, Harry, Ron and Hermione were wondering if you wanted to come join us? Seamus and the others are with us" I heard her sayas she drummed her fingers against the woddern table. I looked over at where she had come from and sure enough there was indeed a large crowd gathered round a small table. I strengthed my neck to see what was happening and saw small parts of a chess board, chess pieces but couldn't see who was playing "Is that a chess game?" I asked suddenly happy not tearing my eyes from the sight. Finally something fun was happening around here. Ginny nodded as she answered me, "Yeah Ron and Harry are battling against each other..." She didn't get to finish before i was up on my feet. This was something to watch. Ron was chapion at the game. "I've got to see this" I said rushing over and pushing past fellow students to get a clear view. I wasn't sure if Ginny had followed me but i guessed she had, i continued to watch the game. I cheered both boys on as they faught back and forth between each other. It was truely an entertaing game to watch. Just as Ron played his last move - winning the game like i had first through he would - there was a sound of someone clearing their throat behind us. A bit like what Professor Umbridge used to do back in the day, but it couldn't be her. We never saw her anymore, she'd just gone. All looking over we saw Professor McGonagall standing before them, although she was Headmistress to the school she was still their head of house temporary. Till after the games i believed but now she stood before us holding a piece of parchment in her hand, her glasses watching us all in turn, her hat sitting perfectly on her head. She waited for silence to fall over us all before she unfolded the parchment and began to read... "All students are to gather in the great hall this saturday for the sorting of the wizard games. All students are asked to gather at the starting of the feast and the sorting will begin once the feast is over. Anyone still wishing to enter have until friday evening to do so. We wish everyone good luck in the following games...." She paushed and pushed her glasses up further on her nose as she looked up "Thank you" she finished speaking and folded up the parchment, with one more look at all those gathered in the common room she turned on her heel and walked away. A moment more and i heard all the whispering get louder and louder around me. The people before me began to get back to their game with the spectators around them commenting every now and again. It was like it had been before the professor interupted them only he heard snipets of conversation about the games and what categories there might be. He too wondered what the people chosen would be asked to do, no one but the judges knew anything about what was expected of the participants. This had sparked up a few poeple to try and find out in any means necessary, something the Weasley twins would have done in their day no doubt. Trying to become part of one of these conversations beside me between Seamus and Lavender i piped up, "Did you hear that Neville entered?" I asked while looking around for one of my fellow class mates. I turned back to them both just as Seamus opened his mouth. "Yeah, did you see the shocked look on his face when it hit him?" He laughed and i too joined in. Before long we were shushed from the side by Ginny who leaned in and whispered, "Haven't you noticed that Neville has been spending a lot more time in the library reading. He's scared, give him some slack" She returned to watching the game as Ron once again won. I suddenly felt bad for laughing about Neville, it was no secret he wasn't the best in the feild of Charms and DADA. He wasn't that good at many subjects but Herbology. What he did have though was a brave heart and a eagerness to fit it, that i liked about him a lot. "Whats that? Ron; 5 Harry; 1?" I heard Ron gloat at Harry as he raised his hand in victory. "Whats that?" A voice beside us all said rather tirdly. I turned to look just as everyone else did to see... |
New Reader! :) Evie thanks for getting me into this. At first I thought this would be a bunch of random bits and pieces with changing characters and all, but it all really is one story! I love it! And Lily, I L O V E D your George bit. Being a twin myself, I found myself getting really emotional about it :P *tears* wish I read this sooner! |
AHHHH, soooo many cliff hangers! *pokes you two* :lol: I loved the two new chapters, they were great! Keep it up! <333 |
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