Hello Chelsea. I've been hoping to be able to read more on this ff. It's getting very intense. I sure hope that things are being figured out and a capture of the brother can be pulled off. I'm thinking that Shadow is going to be able to come out of the control her brother has on her. It doesn't seem like her heart is really in it, if I understand this correctly;
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I said the Jayson in me I could tell was biting back the words.
And please forgive me, but I don't think I understand this either.
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"And with this Pansy killing Jess,will make Blaise think she stills loves Draco,breaking up with her killing two romances in one."
If they're going to kill them so they can go as them, then what will it matter if Blaise thinks Pansy is still in love with Draco? I mean they'll be dead anyway, they won't be able to think anything. Is Shadow just trying to throw off his suspicions if he has any? It seems like a good thought till you think about it. Maybe it'll give her enough time to escape and help Jessica.
Not trying to cause problems, just want to understand. I really do love your story. I'll be watching for your next post. Hope it's soon. And I hope the real Blaise and Pansy will be ok. They are such a cute couple now. It'd be terrible if their new found love for each other was spoiled by them dying.

I'll be watching for your next post.