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| Dusty Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) The cellar holds unfinished confections of storytelling, giving readers a glimpse into creative ideas that may one day be revived. |
07-27-2010, 02:44 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Chapter 16:Watch the Rockets collide in the sky,cause I'm leaving tonight
Pansy's POV
Sobs chorused harmonically through me. I sat against the wall in my living room.It was stone cold,just like everything in my world. My body shook from the tears that were instantaneously soaking my face,yet making my skin dry. I sighed and let the tears fall.
I can't stand losing,and I just had. Jessica Kinn's had gotten all I ever wanted. I got up,still crying and found my broom,and got on,telling it too,"Take me anywhere,I don't give a damn anymore."and so it did.
I flew for a while,tears gliding down my cheeks. The broom took me too a hill. It had a perfect view of the ocean at Sunset.It was beautiful.Unlike myself. Unwanted,cruel,unjust,girl-who-never-will-have-a-boyfriend. I glared at the sunset,it was too pretty for it's own good.
I sat there for a long time,listening too a radio,that was playing all sorts of sad music.All that I know-By Zach Berkman came on,and brought down heavy sobs. I lost control just as the words went,"All that I know,is all that I'm leaving behind,you can never be sure,but you haven't got time to decide,so sep off the porch watch the rockets collide in the sky,cause I'm leaving tonight."
I wiped my eyes,the words stung me a little bit.It seemed as though the more tears I wiped,the more they came. I sighed on the blanket,and laid down.That was when I heard the foot steps coming towards me,"Pansy?"the voice asked,I turned and saw the face,more tears falling.
Jess's POV:
I sat at the table making christmas crafts the muggle way,it was ffar more fun then the wizard way. I was attempting too show Draco,that making a Gingerbread house was not hard. I showed him,and began icing it,and sticking candies on it.He mutterign things like,"Candy is only good for eating...it's not like Gingerbread even tastes good."but all in all,he seemed too be having a good time which made me happy.
When it was complete it looked more like a Gingerbread mountian of candy. I grinned,as he seemed to think it was how it should look,I walked up too him,kissed him on the cheek,"good job student."I wrote in the air quickly. He grinned,as he should. It started too snow outside.
I went too a couch,I was in my pajama pants,and a sweat shirt. I snuggled up too him. As he watched a quidditch game,playing with my hair as he did,one of my favorite things.
Blaise's POV:
"Pansy?"I said as I saw her crying on the blanket,she was covered in snow. she turned too me,and began crying uncontrollably. I ran up too her,and embraced her tightly,no matter how nasty she could be,she was my friend,and I also happen too be in love with her,so hey what would you do?
I held her tightly,her tears soaking my winter coat. After a while,I looked at her,"Let's get you somewhere warm,okay?"I asked,she nodded in response,and gave me a small smile.
We apparated too my house,I had left the manor as soon as I could. I got her a cup of hot chocolate,and took her too the seat closest too the fire. I sat next too her,and looked at her,"So tell me what happened."i said,and a single solitairy tear rolled down her face.
REVIEWS! I just wanted you guys too see pansy's side too it
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07-27-2010, 04:44 PM
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I feel so sad for Pansy ....wow I never thought I would say that
Gingerbread doesn't taste that good 
Blaise is such a sweetie!
This was awesome!
post more soon!
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07-27-2010, 05:15 PM
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| Puffskein
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great post
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07-28-2010, 06:26 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Chelsea.I'm so glad you posted! I really enjoyed reading your chapter. It was good of you to give us Pansy's POV. Never would O have thought her to care so much. I'm so glad Blaise was there to help her. And now she can have someone that really loves her. Everyone deserves to have someone to love them.
The Ginger Bread House scene was wonderful. I love Ginger Bread, but, those houses taste like cardboard if you ask me.  Great post, and I'll be watching for your next one.
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07-30-2010, 11:16 AM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Great post! I loved hearing Pansy's POV. I'm glad Blaise was there for her. She may not have Draco, but at least she has someone looking out for her.
I love Gingerbread- espcially a gingerbread loaf!
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07-30-2010, 01:11 PM
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| Snidget
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Gingerbread rules!!!!!
Great post, come on Christmas day. I need Draco to pop the question!!!!
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08-05-2010, 06:55 PM
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| Graphorn
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Ah that was a cute chapter. I liked it alot!
I feel sorry for Pansy now 
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08-10-2010, 02:44 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Chapter 17:Lay down,Be still don't worry talk they will.
Draco's POV:
He had too make it special,he would propose the day after Christmas. Pretend he forgot too give her one gift.Well Santa Claus forgot. He grinned at the thought,he still even at his age had a belief in the jolly old fat man. There was always one gift he didn't get from his parents,that they didn't buy.And he always knew it was him. He remembered when he was younger,and he saw a bag of coal by the Christmas Tree and started crying.
He of course ran too his mother crying and said,"I'm sorry,I'm sorry,I'm sorry,"she later explained,it was for the fireplace,or for the heater.
I sighed as I placed presents under the tree for her.Some of hers for me already under. I resisted the urg too shake them,wondering what each was. I grinned,and began too cook a breakfast,something I hadn't done in years. Pancakes. The difficult task of pancakes.
Jess's POV:
I smelled a scent of burnt Pancakes downstairs. So I slowly walked my way down the stairs. I made my way too the kitchen,and it was a mess. There was food everywhere.There were 5 different batches. One totally burnt,one less,one dark,and then the perfection ones,light.
He turned too me,flour on his face,it wa adorable. I looked at him,gave him a look that said,"Really?"He grinned at me,and nodded. ""Happy Christmas Eve."he said. I took the plate of light ones. Grabbed my wand and wrote in the air,"Your a terrible muggle."I commented. He only laughed.
i sighed as i tasted the warm buttery taste,yes i don't give a crap about carbs or anything.IT.WAS.AMAZING. Only 5 batches,and these ones were perfect. I smiled at him,and wrote,"But these are very good."He grinned triumphantly. I kissed him on the nose. Was life getting too perfect. "Now come on we have the Christmas Eve Game today."I wrote,and sent him off too get ready.
Pansy's POV:
"I lost."I said,a tears slid down my cheek."He chose her,it's over,I have no chance anymore."she said,"I really am the Ugly Step Sister."I said. I moved over too the couch he was on,and gripped him tightly,and buried my face in his chest and cried. I sighed,"I don't even know what I saw in Draco,it's not like he cares about me or something,or cares about me in that way."I said,I sighed as he ran his fingers through my long hair. One of the nicest feelings.
I grinned into him,and he noticed. He looked down at me,"Now your one person I don't get.."he trailed off,I gave him a confused face. He muttered something along the lines of,"cute..." then he answered. "Your crying seconds ago,and then your smiling?"he asked. I only laughed. He then got serious and said too me,"Then it's time i dropped the bomb,the Daily Prophet sent out a last second report,and it's about your fiasco,picture and everything."he said as he laid it down on the table.
Tabloids suck.Period. The heading said," CINDERELLA WINS AGAIN."it was a picture of her words,"cinderella always wins or never loses"I didn't care for I let more tears slide. ANd then he grabbed me again,and all I could feel was his strong arms around me,and I let all the tears slide. "You need a place too stay."he commented.
Blaise's POV:
I picked her up easily,she was weak,and that was obvious,so she made no attempt too get out of my arms.I brought her too my guest bedroom,and laid her down.i sat on the bed,her tucked under the covers. "Now i want you to Lay down,and be still."I said."You need rest,"And don't you worry,talk they will."I said,and she nodded.I wiped her tears,and kissed her on the forehead. I left a dim lantern on the dresser,and went too the doors. When I closed the door,I said too her through the doors,she couldn't her,"Ill be loving you until..."and walked away,as i heard through the door her breathing slowly and knew she was sound asleep.
--Christmas Eve Morning--
I sighed,and went too Pansy's room,and opened the door.I went too her bed,and sat down.Deja vu?I thought.i shook her gentley,and she opened her eyes into slits,she yawned as I asked her,"How are you feeling?"she nodded,as if too say Good.I smiled,my charming smile i only really used with people I liked,hopefully she didn't notice."good cause Your not going too be sad on Christmas Eve."I said with a grin.
I sighed,and practically dragged her too breakfast.She saw it and immediatley her face lightened up. "I remembered it was your favorite."I commented,as I saw her,tackle me with a hug. "Alright now don't let it get cold."I said,as I saw her take the plate of waffles,with blueberry's and chocolate chips.I had just chocolate chips. I find the other too be a little well for me too much.
She finished eating and said,"Thank you,so much."and she kissed me on the cheek,before leaving too the living room,too sit in front of the fireplace. I touched the spot,"Well your very welcome."I whispered.Well it was a step.
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08-10-2010, 03:32 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Doxy
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ruby Cynthia Ciao Fifth Year | Gleek in Disguise ll Doctor Who! Daughter of Hades ll Leslie-loo-whoo ♥ Chelsea!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!  Poor Draco got coal for Christmas! 
5 batches of pancakes? Draco is a terrible Muggle!
I love Pansy and Blaise! Its so cute how Blaise loves her and she can't see it!
Post more soon please!
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08-10-2010, 03:45 PM
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| Puffskein
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Great post  pams!!!!
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08-10-2010, 07:41 PM
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| Graphorn
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That was a really sweet chapter. I loved it!
I cant wait for more 
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08-10-2010, 09:31 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Aww that was sweet! I loved the wee bit about Draco getting coal for Christmas. Nice idea about the engagement.
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08-11-2010, 01:18 AM
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| Puffskein
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Hello Chelsea. Christmas is always special. That was a sweet memory of Draco's. I can see why he thought the coal was for him. I bet his dad did get it for him, but his mom came up with it being for the fireplace.
The scene with the pancakes was very cute also. I tink he did very good. He only ruined 4 batches till he made the perfect ones. 
Pansy will be fine now. Blaise will be good for her. Way better than Draco, cause Blaise loves her and Draco doesn't.
Great post Chelsea. I'll be watching for your next.
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08-11-2010, 11:19 PM
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I LOVE this fic! It's a different type of plot and soooo cute! I love Jess and Draco together! Him cooking was hilarious. And so adorable. I'm glad that Pansy has Blaise. He's better for her for sure! Great writing! Please PAMS!  I want to see Draco pop the question! 
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08-19-2010, 09:20 PM
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| Snidget
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Great post!!!
I didn't even realised you had posted!!
Can't wait for the next  xx
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08-23-2010, 07:45 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Chapter 18:I talked too your dad go pick out a white dress<3
Draco's POV:
I had been up for hours rehearsing how i would do it. Christmas was not supposed too be stressed out. I had been coming up with reasons for me too wait. I flipped the box open and closed it.Open,close. Open,close. Over and over in my head.
Her reactions coming at me like bludgers. Her writing No in big letters and a slap in the face. Her saying yes,and I kissing her.(My choice one). Her deciding too say maybe,me following her around ofr days until she answered.but I had a feeling she would do none of the three.
I gulped as she walked down the stairs,she had gussied up for the day.Her hair in curls,cascading down her back perfectly.She wore a red dress with a green ribbon beneath her chest.You would think it was ugly.But it was stunning. I gave a shakey breath,and did the classic,"You look beautiful."and she gave me a warm smile. We had decided too wait till night time too open the gifts.But for now,we had too leave for the Ministry's Christmas Day Ball.
This would be her first appearence,in the Ministry since her disappearence,there was bound too be questions,and bound too be trouble.But I would keep her away.The Daily Prophet wouldn't have a story for tomorrow.She would have a good Christmas.
I promised myself one thing,tonight if she said no.I wouldn't run around asking her again,or crying.I would either let her go,or just I myself dissappear.I bought the ring for a reason. I had it enchanted.It was a Past,Present,Future ring so,it would guarentee I seeing her in her future.
As we got in the car,I begged Merlin she would get the white dress.
ooc:it's a filler okay...no complaints
if you notice my chapters are all song quotes for a while...
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08-23-2010, 07:56 PM
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| Snidget
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Lovely post, I don't mind fillers - especially ones as good as this! 
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08-23-2010, 09:51 PM
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| Graphorn
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Brillient chapter. I can't wait to read what she says *dances*
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08-23-2010, 11:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Pottergrl101 Chapter 18:I talked too your dad go pick out a white dress<3 I love this song by the way Quote:
Her reactions coming at me like bludgers. Her writing No in big letters and a slap in the face. Her saying yes,and I kissing her.(My choice one). Her deciding too say maybe,me following her around ofr days until she answered.but I had a feeling she would do none of the three.
Awe, I hope she doesn't do the first one. My choice would be the second one too. And the third one I could live with as long as it turned into a yes.  What does he think she'll do, if he doesn't think she'll do one of those? 
Great post! I hope her answer is a good one! No pressure...  Please PAMS! |
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08-24-2010, 03:24 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Ah! That was so cute!!! I hope she says yes and I hope everything goes ok at the ball! I don't want anything bad to happen at Christmas... I can't believe you left us there. PAMS!
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08-24-2010, 11:30 PM
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| Jobberknoll
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Chapter 19:We'll write a song,that turns out the lights..
Jess's POV
I walked into the Ballroom,latching onto Draco's arm tightly.big crowds made me nervous,and I did not like nervous. Something always seemed too go wrong.Need I not mention 6th Year Cinderella Situation.Yeah that wasn't particularly on my best days ever list.
The Classical Music played,and Draco swayed with me.While he laughed as I stepped on his feet for about the 100th time. I lightly smacked him on the arm,tonight was no night too make fun.It was a ministry event,so no one dared misbehave.
I glanced around the room and noticed a group of about 6 younger kids,they all had cute little dresses on,and it melted my heart as they danced in a circle. It made me think of what life would be like if I was married,with little kiddies running around a house.I shook my head,and he gave me a questioning looked but I only shook my head.It was nothing.Nothing that I dared believe would ever happen.
My dress he said,"Perfected me perfectly."but I had too disagree. I grabbed his hand,no magic was allowed too be preformed so I wrote."Please I look nuts,red dress and a green belt,what matches there?"I asked him.He laughed,"Sure on a rack it might be ugly,but on you...it's gorgeous."I shook my head,but kissed him on the cheek anyway.
I glanced around the room,and looked up at a DJ,I would complain about the Lame music,but again it's a Ministry Event and it was only fair that Classic played.But,as we danced,I didn't even hear the music,we just talked.
We sat down,with a huff.My face said,"Boring."he only nodded,he knew of course.I was surprised there had been no drama yet,but then again the night was still early.
-2 hours later-
I excused myself from the slow dance with him,I needed too use the bath room.He asked if he should come but I shook my head "No."Boys weren't allowed in the girl's Bathroom.
As I walked down the marble narrow hallway,I got a weird feeling,like someone was watching me.Then all the lights went out.
ooc:review....sorta a filler...sorta not...hahahha i'm making you wait longer muahahaha
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Oh no! Is it Pansy? I don't think it is. I don't know who it is. PAMS so we can find out who. I'm not good at waiting!
Great Post!
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08-25-2010, 02:48 PM
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Pottergrl101 My dress he said,"Perfected me perfectly."but I had too disagree. I grabbed his hand,no magic was allowed too be preformed so I wrote."Please I look nuts,red dress and a green belt,what matches there?"I asked him.He laughed,"Sure on a rack it might be ugly,but on you...it's gorgeous."I shook my head,but kissed him on the cheek anyway. They are so cutttteeee together! It makes me kind of giddy. Is that weird? Quote:
As I walked down the marble narrow hallway,I got a weird feeling,like someone was watching me.Then all the lights went out.
Uh oh, this is not good. Especially since she can't really yell out to alert anyone. I think it's going to be Pansy. Quote:
hahahha i'm making you wait longer muahahaha
That's not very nice. I like being on the giving end of cliffies, not the receiving. Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag I'm not good at waiting! She really is telling the truth by the way... 
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08-25-2010, 05:29 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hmm, i wanna know who or what made the lights go out *nods*
Great filler 
I can't wait for more
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| Snidget
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Oh no!! I need to know what happened!!
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