Hello Chelsea. Great posts! Your writing is so real. It's refreshing to read the same way you talk. And I love Draco's reaction to her entrance. I bet she was beautiful. But sadly good intentions can't keep bad things from happening. Awe poor Jess! I hate to say, I forgot all about that. Been caught up in the moment I guess. I want eberything to be wonderful for her and Draco. :gasp: I hate it when that happens! I think it was Rita Skeeter. I don't think Pansy has time for spiteful ways now. She is otherwise occupied with her own happiness hopefully. :P
Great posts, Chelsea. I'll be watching for your next.

:O What happened !!!!?!!

Chapter 20:When the Lights Go Out,We'll Be Safe and Sound(NOT.)

Jess's POV:

It was pitch black,I couldn't see where I was going.i could hear footsteps following me around in circles. A flicker of a light came out of no where 10 feet in front of me and I walked towards it. A paper was in my hands,and I felt my wand ripped out of my hands. It read,"Better Run."I gulped,I was in major trouble.

Where would I run too?There was no where.A paper landed in my hands as I felt the feeling of a knife slashing my hand hit my arm.I could feel the blood. It read,"The Clocks Ticking,Better Get Moving."and I ran forward,and hit a wall.I felt the edges,only too fell a sharp spike hit my Leg.A large bruise forming. I cried out in Pain,though It couldn't be heard.

I ran the way I came.But there was no door,only words written on the Illuminated wall. "If You can't run?How about you just drop then?"it asked me.And then the floor beneath my feet,gave weigh and I fell,at an amazing speed no way I could stop myself,until I hit the floor hard and hit my head.

My vision was going Fuzzy,and as My eyes shut,and evil face appeared before me.Someone unknown,someone I only had rare memories of,from my worst nightmares. It was my Brother.My abusive brother,who went too askaban. I never heard from him again. I heard a feint,"Good too see you again Sis,too bad Mom and Dad are goen now too."and then his elbow met my face. I was knocked out,but in my head repetivly I said,"Why Jeremy,Why?"

Draco's POV:

Where was she?I could sense danger.She had been gone far too long. I alerted a Security Member. I would find her,"I'm coming Jess."I mummered. I took off my suit jacket,and ran with my wand out into the Hall,and began too run.

Why was she such a mystery,where could she have gone?Then I got it.The Department of Mysteries.

ooc:DUN DUN DUNNNN

reviews please..

A/N:

I wanna than kyou all for the lovely reviews and for keeping up with my story.

XOXO

Chelsea

Great post Chelsea! Really good, evil, but good!

What is going on??? Draco, find Jess!!

Oh no! This is seriously not good! :erm:
Ohh, I don't like this at all.
Yeah, cliffies aren't nice, by the way! :lol:
Great post, Chelsea! Please PAMS! I have to know what happens! And I'm with Katie: Draco, please find Jess!

Interesting post. I honestly though it would have been Pansy, but her brother?
Wow! I can't wait for more. I wannaknow if Draco finds Jess
PAMS!

And your welcome :D

Hello Chelsea. Wow, things are happening quickly! I hope Draco is able to find her. I don't understand how the papers keep getting in her hand, and how who ever is sending them knows exactly what to write. Scary! :gasp:Never would I have guessed this! Draco needs to find her quickly! How could he know this!? Intuition? Or he heard something somewhere? I need to know more. :P
Great post Chelsea. I'll be watching for your next.

Chapter 21:Well She's not Bleeding on the Ballroom floor just for the attention,cause that's just ridiculous...

Draco's POV:

I ran,huffing and puffing.The ministry would be sued one day for their ridiculopus slippery floors,constant tripping,it's really not safe. I whipped around the halls until I found the dreaded door. I grabbed the door handle it was locked."BOMBARDA MAXIMA!"I hollered and the door exploded.

I ran through,the wind hitting my face as I dropped. I landed on my feet,thank goodness for a cushioning charm.I spotted her immediatly,her unconcious.Her body just inches from the veil.

I ran towards her pullign her body away from it,her blood unveiled. It was definently a lot. I looked around. Written on the walls was,"AS LONG AS SHE SHARES MY LAST NAME,LET HER NOT REST ANOTHER DAY!"and I knew immediatly who did it. Jeremy Kinns.

He had anger problems,and killed muggles so he was sent too Askaban for life. Jessica had turned him in. He had also abused her.It was all over the prophet. I heard the aurors foot steps and said aloud,"Call St.Mungo's get her there,call Askaban,there's been a mass breakout."I said. I watched as she rose,and watched as reporters snapped,and asked me questions.

I stunned them all.

ooc:sort of a filler,but Jeremy is the enemy obvy...His story will coem out soon,,,sorry for shortness...but it's not too bad of a cliffie

I'm really curious about Jeremy's story.
Well, that's not good... Is it a mass breakout really, or just Jeremy? And how did he get out exactly?
Argh, I hate reporters. How did they get there already and everything?
Way to go, Draco! ^_^
No, it's not too bad of a cliffie, but I still want Moooorree! :D
Great post! Please PAMS! ^_^

Nice chapter! I want to know what's going to happen!
PAMS!

Eviee <33

Good post, short but sweet:loved:

Ahhhhhhh! I will hunt you down Jeremy :hack: Be warned!
That is so sad. I feel so bad for Draco. I hope the ministry does get sued for the incident AND bad security AND the mass breakout. PAMS!
S x

Hello Chelsea. Good thing Draco can think so good on the run. :faint:She could have fallen right through the veil! Oh how terrible! How could her brother do that? Oh well, her and Draco can just hurry and get married! Then she'd have Draco's last name, and not share that senile man's name!:P Post when you can Chelsea. I need to see what Draco does to him when he catches him.

Chapter 22: Do you feel like a man when you push her around,do you feel better now as she falls too the ground?

Jeremy's Story From His P.O.V.

At Age 10:

Always a dissapointment I am. Always never as good as the rest of the family.Be more like your sister,see how talented she is?Isn't she great?Well I've had enough. I punched the wall in my frustration. I heard a knock on the door and there she stood,Jessica. Silent as she's always been,but with tears on her face. I glared at her.

"THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!"I hollered at her. 2 years my elder and still a wimp. She walked in her hands out as if she expected me too swing. She signed too me,"It's not my fault you a squid,your no different then me."I glared again of course i was different.

She sat on my bed,her hands on her wand,just in case. But i wouldn't swing not this time.

At Age 11(August 31st):

I would go too Hogwarts tomorrow,my parents had been debating wether i was good enough or not. Jessica was excited as ever. She practiced a simple spell,ones she could get away with.like Lumos,but it was making me crazy.in my eyes every second. "WOULD YOU STOP?"I yelled at her.

She backed off scared,like she should be. My mother came in,congratulating her on her great work,scolding me on how I should do better. "ENOUGH!"I yelled and then i swung,at Jessica. "NOT SO HIGH AND MIGHTY NOW ARE YA? ON THE GROUND HMMM?"I taunted her,as she crawled away blood coming from her mouth her eyes brusing.

She wrote a note quickly,and sooner then later,Dementors were here too pick me up.

Aurors grabbed both of my arms,I was done for.But she would regret it,oh she would. "YOUR GONNA REGRET THIS!"IO yelled at her,as she cried for herself and even me,that I was being dragged away.

PRESENT DAY:

"I told you so."I said too myself,and apparated away too my hide out cliff. I finished my parents,now she,she would be finished.


Draco's P.O.V.

I sat by her bed,as they cleaned her wounds,Aurors everywhere asking questions,I not ready too answer. I sighed as a Nurse came over. "Mr.Malfoy?"she asked,I nodded,yes i was him. She took me too a Private room.

"You heard her parents were foudn dead correct?"I nodded,i had,it was terrible.

"Well I have some news,"she paused tryign too sound happy,not working."Mrs.Kinns' has pulled into a coma."I exited immediatly,back at her side,she could be out for a while. I placed the box with the ring in her hand,she would wake up,she would.Maybe.

ooc:thsi is saddd....Blaise and Pansy will be back...reviews pelase!

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Oh man, that was so sadddd! But a very good post! :yes: I understand his ill feelings, but it doesn't justify his actions. I hope she pulls out of the come soon. Great post! Please PAMS! ^_^

That was such a sad chapter. But i liked it :) Yesh.
Jess's brother is MEAN! and i actually don't like him
I want to read more soon. PAMS!

Eviee <33

Hello Chelsea. Thanks for giving the background information on Jeremy. Such a sad thing when younger children are constantly put in the footsteps of older siblings to be as good as them. But, even at that, abuse is wrong anyway you look at it. This reminds me of when Tom Riddle terrorized the orphaned children. Nice work. I'll be watchimg for your next post. Im anxious to see Blaise and Pansy. I hope all is going well with them.

Great post!!

Poor Jess, Bad Jeremy!!!

PAMS PAMS :D

Chapter 23:Lemme tell you a story

Pansy's POV:

Was I over staying my stay?I had been at Blaise's for about 4 days. Is that too much?He did everything for me.got me what I asked for,but I didn't abuse it. I sat on the couch starring up at the ceiling,the hot chocolate warming my hands. It was the day after Christmas,and the decorations I had forced hi mtoo help me put up were still everywhere.

As I looked at the celing,a head appeared above mine.I did a little jump,he shocked me. "Thank you for that Blaise."i said,smiling all in all though. He sat down next too me,and looked over at me,"I forgot too give you something."he said. He pulled out a long box,that would fit a necklace.

My eyes widened,as he passed it too me. I opened it,and was shocked at what I saw. "Oh Blaise,it's beautiful."I said. It was a pearl necklace.I had wanted one for years. "You remembered?"I asked,he nodded. My eyes were watery.

"Why do you care about me?"I whispered too him,as he put it around my neck. I looked at him as I heard the click,of it around my neck."Why?"I asked,I couldn't read his eyes.What emotion is that?I wondered too myself.

Blaise's POV:

I looked down at her and said,"It's a long story."I looked at her,as if too say,"wanna hear?"and she nodded. She leaned back on me and I grinned. "Now Before you say or do anything,I want you too listen.."I paused.

I made myself more comfortable. "I promised myself when I was Five Years Old,I would marry You."I could sense her eyes widening in shock,but I kept going. "So I kept at my goal,even though you were always after Draco,and i was immensly jealous,i kept at it,cause I knew too be you Knight in Shining Armor as my mom told me,was too go on the quest,and rescue you from the tower,that's what she always told me."I said.

"Throughout Hogwarts,I would see you with draco,and want too punch a wall,it was taking way too long for my liking,but again,I had too wait the quest was still on."I continued."You didn't make it easy for me,not that I don't like a challenge,but draco was a tough one, he always got their first and the one time I beat him,you didn't seem to notice and for a while,I ended the quest,and by a while I mean two days."I laughed lightly."Then Seventh Year came rolling around and I had too put the quest again on pause,because of the drama going on between you and jessica kinns over draco,that continued into the next year as well,though i did try and continue the quest."I said.

I took a deep breath,"Which brings me too four days ago,where i beat Draco again,and I think this time you seemed too notice."I said. She looked up at me,I looked down at her,and closed the gap between us. I expected too get slapped but it never came. She just kissed me back.It was perfect utterly perfect,I had nothing too complain about. I pulled apart,and our forehead rested on eachothers,she put her coffe down and wrapped her arms around me,I grinned down at her,as she fell asleep with a smile on her face. "I love you Pans."I said.

Pansy's POV:

As I dreamt,I saw Blaise saying he loved me,but the kiss was real,but the other part was a dream right?

ooc:fluffiness!!!! reviews!!

I wanted too give you a happy chapter

Awe, that was too cute ^_^ Pansy and Blaise are good together. And we definitely needed a happy chapter :P Great chapter! Please PAMS! ^_^

Great post:D

You write Pansy well:glomp:

K xx (PAMS PAMS)

Such a cute chapter
I loved it!
PAMS!

Eviee <33

Hey. Sorry I've missed so many posts. I've been really busy, so just have't got round to commenting! Great Posts btw...I love Pansy and Blase together. So Cute :loved:
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Soph x

Hello Chelsea. Although I wonder what's going on with Jessica, this was a very nice post to let us all have something good to feel good about. I loved Blaise's story. And how wonderful he stuck to his quest! I'm likeing the way Pansey went from being a possessive brat to a frail girl depending on Blaise her Knight in Shining Armour. A wonderful little story, in both instances, his, and hers. I can't wait though to get back to Jessica. I hope you can post soon.