Bravo Chelsea! Bravo! Wonderful chapter! How cute is that?! I love how you write humor in such a subtle way! This was pricless! I loved it.

Chelsea, your post was great and I can't wait to read more. Did you notice the edit I made on mt last comment?

Yes I did,and than kyou for the lovely comments,I'm goign too look into it :) i just wanted to get it up! again than kyou=)

Aww i can tell this is going to be a cool prom.
Hate Pansy though :D
Aww its soo sweet
PAMS!

thanks! i will update thsi soon,it's just as of the moment,i am rather busy,with life so yeah:)

Chapter 8:It's quite obvious the slipper doesn't fit Draco.

Jess's POV

I walked into the Great Hall,or rather I walked into a fairytale.It had some obviously magicked carriages that were pumpkins. There was a tall tower with real lava around it,that some unlucky idiots got their dresses burnt in. Pictures only people!I thought in my head. We danced a fair amount. But we couldn't talk to much. You can't really write when you dance,so it was slightly awkward.

There was also a contest. A girl would walk up and sit in a chair. A court jester would walk up to you,and try to fit on the glass slipper. If it fit,it meant you had luck in a relationship you were in at the moment. If it didn't fit,it meant tears and faces ruined with make-up for hours. I was determined not to go to the contest for i myself was confused as to weather the shoe would fit or not.

I sighed as I got death glares from all around the hall. One in particular almost ruined my dress,it was Pansy. I knew she would give me hell tonight.But I attempted to ignore her. Later on that night,the dancing had died down slightly. Everyone was eating,but still I could not speak to Draco,and I could see it was bothering him. He offered to get us drinks and I nodded my head in reply. Once he left,I could see him in line;I was ambushed.

Pansy and her friends grabbed me by my arms,forcing me to walk with them,my protests inaudible. She plopped me down in the dreaded chair. And actually cast a spell so I couldn't move. I gave her my best death glare. The court jester looked amused,and I kicked him,right where the sun don't shine. Ha. I thought successful. After he recovered,he tried to slip the shoe on my foot. But my foot just wouldn't fit,and Pansy looked amused and shocked at the same time.

She took the microphone from the court jester,and tapped it too make sure the sound was on. "All please listen up,I have some rather interesting news."all heads turned,as tears slowly ran down my face. "Draco, you may want to hear this."she said again with a wicked grin. She moved out of the way so everyone could see me. Draco saw me,and the drinks fell to the floor with a splatter.

He looked confused,but then he finally realized exactly why I was crying. "It's quite obvious the slipper doesn't fit Draco."and that's when my hold was released,and I ran away crying. It was over,between us. We were over,we were doomed to an end. All because of one damned slipper,that just wouldn't fit.I could hear Pansy saying into the microphone,"She's the ugly step sister."and then I heard cheering and Clapping of happiness. I knew why Draco didn't run after me,he knew it was over,he knew I wouldn't budge,I would break up with him,no matter his reasons.

I knew though,I wouldn't be able to face him,and I planned on transferring by the end of the year.

REVIEWS PLEASE! Sorry but thsi chapter was necessary important to the story=)

Oh no!

I feel so terrible for her. I'm anxious for your next chapter, so we can find out what happens next! I really hope she doesn't transfer.

Hello Chelsea, I must say that I read your chapter after you posted, and didn't feel like I could comment but, happily, now I can. A little awkward, yes. But expressions say a lot without speaking a word. I bet Jess spoke a lot with her eyes on Draco. I wonder if he understands eye language? hehehe I love this idea Chelsea. I wonder if the shoe would fit if you just knew it would. hmm, I guess maybe he's not used to eye language yet. I do feel badly for both of them. Awe Jess! Maybe that's not the reason he didn't run after you. I hope she's able to pull herself together. She can't transfer!
Don't feel like you need to say you're sorry. I loved the chapter. It's good to make the story have ups and downs. I mean look at the 4th story in the movie. I think they wrote the story from all the high arcs of the book, and therefore left much to be desired in watching the movie. I think you did great. And I'll be watching for your next post.

Oh No!
How could Pansy do that!
Ohh i really would like have words with her ;)
Great chapter...Im sad for Draco and Jess
PAMS!

Chapter 9: You'll never see me again.

Draco's POV

I woke up the next morning with the biggest head ache in the world.I have learned one thing though,Prom sucks. Jess is never going to speak too me again,over some dumb shoe.I groaned as i walked to the bathroom. I looked in the mirror,and noticed I was a total mess. Great. But then I remembered something. Today was Christmas.

I quickly took a shower,changed,and ran down the stairs. I was hoping I would catch Jess but I had no such luck. I looked at the Christmas tree and frowned. There were presents underneath the tree for her,and she didn't even touch them. I sat down in front of the tree,and grabbed a present. It was from father. It was a book on dark spells.Thanks dad,I thought sarcastically. It was typical of my mother to send me money,for one,she didn't know anything about me. For two, she didn't care enough too actually try to learn something about me.

I opened the rest of the typical presents,until there was one left. It was written in Jess's handwriting. I gently ripped the wrapping paper and found in the box a glass slipper. The one she wore last night. something clicked in my head. I knew why the slipper didn't fit her last night. She already had a pair of her own.

Attached to it was a letter,it read:

Dear Draco,

Please don't get any ideas about the slipper,it's useless,because by now I am already gone. Last night was beyond awkward,and I couldn't hide my embarressment when the slipper didn't fit. Ironic isn't it?Seeing as I went as Cinderella,and left as the Ugly Step Sister. I will never forget these past few months,and I thank you for that. But that isn't what this letter is about. This letter is to inform you,that you'll never see me again. So don't try and look,because I'm gone. Finish your school years,and find someone else. Better suited for your life style. I stopped by Our Tree this morning,I fixed it.

Love,
Jessica Kinns

P.S. Happy Christmas.

I sank to the floor,she was gone.

Jess's POV

The wind blew in my hair,and stung my soaked cheeks. I had no idea where I was flying,but I knew somewhere hidden,somewhere in seclusion. I flew and flew until I found a far off cottage. In a far away land,far from Draco. He would never find me.

I touched the ground,and grabbed my things from my trunk. I pulled them into the dusty cottage. I set up an area for my potions,transfiguration,charms,and all the other subjects. I found a comfortable place I could sleep on a cot,and laid down my sleeping things. I tested the water,good it's hot,I thought absentmindly in my head.

This was my new home,I transferred to my own school. I was the teachers,and the students. No one hear to judge me,or too fall in love with. No I was alone.My mind flashed to Draco,and I kept myself from crying. I glared at the glass slipper i wore to the Prom yesterday. "STUPID SHOE!"I hollered.

And that's when I began teaching myself,how to become one of the strongest wizards,my school has ever known. Seeing as I was the only student.For months I practiced all the subjects. Suffering minor injuries from potions. Nearly killing myself with draught of the Living Death. No I would never try that potion again.

It was Summer by now,and Draco would be headed for his seventh year. And I would be here for my second year. The cottage was clean,seeing as I took time to actually take care of it. I furnished it,got groceries,but of course every time I went out,I used a huge dosage of Polyjuice Potion.

I knew by newspapers there had been warnings of me being missing. Aurors out to find me,but none successful. I had hidden myself well,and Draco he knew that as well.

Draco's POV

I boarded the train hesitantly. Pansy has once again begun hanging all over me,kissing me at any chance she gets. Her result usually being pulled off. I was a depressed person,and felt weak too be having the glass slipper still with me. Along with the letter.

I still visited Our Tree. Blaise often finding me there,looking disgusted or sad for me. I couldn't help but wonder what it would be like,were she still here. Would we have eventually spoken again?I doubt it. But at least I could have seen her again.

When we got to the school,i could see the boy Avaric who was know a 3rd year. He and Jess actually enjoyed each other's company. Jess told me she had thought of him as a little brother. But now that she was missing. Avaric was alone again. There had been rumors that she was dead.And both he and I believed it. Aka reason we were totally depressed. I sat down in front of him,gave him the most pathetic smile. he returning it.

I sighed Pansy Parkinson ruined my Hogwarts life. And I wasn't going too find Jess. I knew it. Or else I would have already found her. i knew that in the near future,when i was planning to be a Puddlemore United player,I still wouldn't find her. Plus I had already signed with Puddlemore United,so i wouldn't even have the chance to go out to look for her.I wouldn't earn anything this year. My grades would be good,I'd get job offers,but i wouldn't earn anything. But i knew this year would fly by,and then I would be on the road too becoming a quidditch star. And yet I knew I would still,have that note in my left back pocket. That glass slipper and letter in my trunk. I would save every little thing I had of her.

Because I lvoe you guys so much:)

Amazing chapters :D PAMS PAMS PAMS :love:

Gasp! Chels! You didn't tell me you had an amazing story out! I would've been here to read sooner!
I love all the chapters, Draco and Jess are too cute! And this one nearly broke my heart. Poor Jess. :( But I actually feel worse for Draco. It sounds like he's the one going into a deep state of depression.
Awh, poor Avaric as well! Losing his only friend. :( I'm glad he and Draco are they for each other. They aren't totally alone.
And Pansy...I'm so disgusted with her there isn't much I can say.
Great story! Love love love it! :glomp:
PAMS!

Amazing!
Thanks!
OMG! That's so sad! I could have cried..wait why didnt i? Oh right im singing at the moment ;)
It was amazing! Your a Fantastic writer!
PAMS PAMS!

I am so sorry to say this but I kinda forgot about this story!!! But I am back, thats what counts, right?

I have missed so much but I am simply going to say this: DRACO SAVE HER, MARRY HER, BE HER TRUE LOVE!!! WHO CARES ABOUT A DAMN SLIPPER??

than kyou for the reviews..

epp michelle,your reading my sotry..yey!

Chapter 10:An Interview

Draco's POV

I sat in the chair,as the make-up artists attacked me with all kinds of unnecessary make-up. I was being interviewed,all the Puddlemore United players were. I waited until you heard the :5..4..3..2..Go!"and we were live.

It began with typical questions,all about quidditch.I answered them all,none with mistakes. But then the one question I dreaded came,the interviewer began,"So your just out of Hogwarts;Good looking;Successful;Any girlfriend?"and thats when i froze.

I knew the zoomed on my face,I sighed and regained composure. "I haven't had a girlfriends since my 6th year."he said,he couldn't hide the sadness.You could see the satisfaction on the Interviewer's face. "Oh,"she then smirked,"We found a piece of paper on the floor.."it was the note,the first conversation i had with Jess."It's pretty beaten up?Is it yours?"she asked with an evil grin,"Yes it is."I replied evenly.

"So who is this girl,and why are you writing a conversation instead of talking?"she asked. I looked at her,"She was my old girlfriend,and she was mute."he said. "So why do you still have thsi paper?"she asked,almost sadly.

"I still love her."i said.

Jess's POV:

I stared at the TV. "Oh my gosh."I thought.I was coming out of hiding,and fast.

Aww thats sweet, he said it live!
Great chapter!
Jess...Run..fast!! :lol:
PAMS!

Hello Chelsea. Great work. I bet Jess is very powerful now. She's been alone for a long time! And Draco has been alone really for just as long. The only thing is he was around people. I do hve a question though. Do the wizards have TV and their own network now? I always wondered why they didn't. They had radios. I was only asking because they (Muggles) wouldn't be following Quidditch. Yes! Watch out Pansy!
Great post Chelsea. I'll be watching for your next!

Chapter 11:A Kiss; I didn't want.

Draco's POV:


Today was the first game of the season. Puddlemore United against The HolyHead Harpies. It was too be a rough game. But all knew who would win in the end. Puddlemore. I flew around the pitch in circles,fans screaming. My ears numb to the noise. I was the seeker. The decider of the game.

The points flew,so did the players. The Harpies were keeping up,70-60. The snitch was no where in sight. I saw hints of gold,but they were rings on the Harpies fingers. A smart trick,I admitted. i could tell it was a trick fro mtheir satisfied faces.

I saw a glint on gold and zoomed after it,their chaser on my tail. My broom was faster. I zoomed downward,the snitch just inches from my hand. I reached out for it and caught it.Winning the game. We landed and shook hands with the teams,what happened next I didn't expect.

Pansy came running at me,she practically tackled me and kissed me,the whole stadium saw. I pushed her off,"Just what the hell do you think your doing Pansy?"

Ohhh great chapter!
Ohh they won :woot:
Pansy....what the??
PAMS!

Very nice post Chelsea, poor Draco just doesn't have heart since Jess is gone. He would have been so excited over their victory. That was an important game to win wasn't it? And Pansy better be careful, it might be there is a very powerful witch in the stadium she won't want to mess with. :mwaha: Oh but wait! Jess needs to watch out for the Aurors looking for her. Unless she already checked in with them.:worried:I just want to see when Pansy gets whats coming to her!:drool:
Good writing Chelsey! I'll be watching for your next post.

Oooooh! What the hell is Pansy's issue!? Jeez! Jess should hunt her down and punch her in the face!
And speaking of Jess, I hope she didn't see the kiss! -bites nails- Then she might doubt Draco and that would just be a mess! I would have to hunt Pansy down and stun her! :yes:
Tehehe, good posts luff! :glomp: Can't wait for your next one!
PAMS!
:loved: Chelle

aww thansk guys,i will be posting another chappie soon,hopefully longer ones XD promise:)

hmmm you people are giving me ideas.....

MWAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

Pams pams pams :love:

Pansy, horrible horrible Pansy!!!
He loves her :love: