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Lissydove 08-29-2005 08:26 PM

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Originally Posted by evlpez
Whew! All caught up!! I remember validating this fic. Can't recall for the life of me why I didn't subscribe immediately. *does so*

MAH TWIN!! :glomp: You so rock, and so does this fic! I'm not going to quote all the cool parts like the others do, especially since I had several updates to catch up on. :shifty:

Kissy, Lissy. *mwah*

^^hehe... look. no typos. :evil:

OMG! First I have to greet my twin!!! *tackleglomp* :glomp: You guys had no idea that I had a twin here! One of us is the evil one... We're not sure which!! :evil:

Thank you so much mah twin! I am so very excited to have you here! You have no idea! :jump: Wow!

I love the typo free post you slipped in while I was replying... Not too sure about this one though... *looks up* Maybe not too bad! No needs to quote, and you take your time and come whenever you want! You are always welcome! :glomp:

Loves you!
Lissy

Lissydove 08-29-2005 08:27 PM

and now for some Fic!
 
Gryffindor House

Sirius made a show of thinking about this. “I’m not sure…” he pondered for a moment. “I know!” he snapped his fingers, “The Quidditch World Cup! Lower tier, behind the Bulgarian goal posts, terrible seats!”

Harry looked at Sirius as though trying to remember, “no… we didn’t sit there…” he ventured, “did you camp in the first field?”

“Nope, sorry mate,” Sirius said regretfully, “we were in the third field, bloody long walk,” he added, hoping this was true.

Harry still looked uncertain, but let the subject drop, to his Godfather’s relief. Sirius wasn’t in the mood to try and recollect everything that Harry and Ron had told him about the match and he certainly didn’t want to test out the scroll yet.

“I’m Brian Wulfric, by the way,” Sirius added by way of introduction.

“Right, I’m Harry Potter,” the boy extended his hand for Sirius to shake. Sirius noted with pride the boy’s increased confidence. While at one time the boy may have introduced himself with a slight air of embarrassment, now he simply stated himself as though to say “this is who I am, think what you want.”

“Nice to meet you, Harry,” Sirius clasped the boy’s hand and was sure to look him in the eye while doing so. He could see a faint glimmer of surprise followed by relief in their green depths. Too many people stared at the boy’s scar when introduced to him and few could get beyond that. Knowing Harry so well, Sirius knew he had earned a measure of the boy’s respect for not making a production of it.

Suddenly a flash bulb went off, blinding them and interrupting Harry from replying. Apparently the Creevey brothers felt that the most famous boy in school entering into an alliance with who they felt might be the second most famous student was extremely newsworthy.

Harry blinked repeatedly, “didn’t we ask you to tone it down with that thing?” he asked.

“Sorry, Harry!” Dennis grinned, not the least bit upset, “we want to do an article for the school paper on Brian and what it’s like to be the new student.”

“Don’t you have about a hundred first years to interview first?” Sirius rubbed his eyes, sounding a bit grumpy. He didn’t need his face plastered on papers all over the school.

“We can do that later,” Dennis replied, waving this off as though interviewing a hundred first years was something he could do with no trouble. “No one’s ever started in their sixth year before!”

“So, are you going to be taking first year classes?” Colin chirped in.

“What? No!” Sirius found that talking to these two was a lot like watching the quaffle get passed at a Quidditch match.

Lavender and Parvati glared at the boys for their disrespect, “why don’t you sit and tell us all about it then,” Lavender invited.

Sirius found himself dragged over to the couch, the girls taking up spots on either side of him. Dennis and Colin followed eagerly, as did a surprising number of other curious students. Harry, for his part, took a seat in a comfy armchair nearby and grinned. For once the spotlight wasn’t on him.

“There’s really not much to say…” Sirius tried. Normally he would enjoy embellishing a wild tale for them, but with age, he had acquired a bit of caution, if only a small bit.

The girls didn’t look convinced and edged closer to listen. Sirius could feel Lavender’s leg brush up against his, but he couldn’t move over without leaning on Parvati.

“So where have you been all these years?” Parvati asked.

“I escaped from an institution,” Sirius couldn’t help teasing them just a little, as their faces lit up with interest. “Decided I could hide out here…”

“Really?” Dennis was in his glory.

“No!” Sirius scoffed. “My family doesn’t believe in going away to school. I’ve had private tutors. They want me to be a shut in,” he added ruefully.

The girls looked disappointed, as this story wasn’t nearly so romantic.

“Why the sudden change of heart, then?” Harry asked, having been the only one who didn’t believe the escape story.

“Well, what with the state of things these days…” Sirius knew that all assembled understood what he meant, “my Uncle stepped in and convinced my mum that a formal education would be better. So now I’m here,” He concluded hoping this was dull enough to satisfy the students.

“Who’s your Uncle?” Harry was too shrewd to make Sirius comfortable.

“You wouldn’t know him,” Sirius replied blandly.

Still hoping to salvage a story out of this, Dennis and Colin looked ready to ask more questions, but were interrupted by the return of Ron from his prefect duties.

“So, did you put the kids to sleep?” Harry asked his friend.

“Too right, I did!” Ron grinned, cracking his knuckles.

“I think it’s time that we all retire,” Hermione put in, ignoring Ron’s remark. “It is a school night,” she stated heading toward the girl’s stairway, expecting the others to follow.

The boy rolled his eyes behind Hermione’s back, but no one argued, heading up to their respective dormitories.

Upstairs, Sirius was pleased that once again, little had changed in Gryffindor House besides the names of the students who lived there. The dormitory was set up exactly as it had once been years ago. He spied his trunk and belongings tucked neatly at the foot of a bed on the end. He smiled to himself, pleased, as this was once his spot years ago. Ron was set up in Remus’ old place and Harry in James’. Other things had not changed as well, as the boys clearly had no intention of turning in just yet.

The group gathered around Harry and Ron’s beds, breaking out smuggled butterbeer and treats from Zonko’s. Sirius brought over some of his goods from the Weasley’s store to share as everyone traded stories about their summer holidays. This was not lost on Ron, however…

“No thanks,” he turned down the offer of some disreputable looking candies, ”that’s from my brother’s shop,” the boy observed, “and I’ve learned not to trust anything they make.”

“Well, you should tell them that,” Sirius put aside the candy, opting for a safe looking chocolate frog,” they seem to think you’ll be helping them make sales.”

“What do you mean?” Ron asked confused.

“It’s true,” Dean Thomas put in, sipping a butterbeer, “they’ve been giving out your name to every Hogwarts student who walks in.”

Ron flushed so that his face matched his hair, “they better not be!”

“They called you their Hogwarts connection,” Seamus Finnegan laughed.

Ron sputtered in indignation as his friends got a laugh from the boy’s reaction. Before long, the topic of conversation turned to girls…

“So how did you manage to get two of the best looking girls in our year to follow you around already?” Dean asked Sirius somewhat enviously.

“Aah, it’s the new guy thing,” Sirius waved it off, handing out more goods. “They’ll be on to someone else next week,” he replied, hoping he was right.

“What does everyone think of the new DADA professor?” Seamus asked significantly, raising his eyebrows.

“Thank you!” Ron exclaimed, “exactly what I was saying at dinner! The girls got Lockhart, finally we have something to look at!”

This brought forth agreement from everyone present, except Neville who looked slightly embarrassed.

“She kind’ve looks familiar for some reason, though,” Ron continued thoughtfully, ripping in to some Bertie Bott’s. “What do you think Harry?”

“I’ve never seen her,” Harry shrugged.

Observing his Godson as close as he was, Sirius was sure that the boy had just rubbed his forehead when he said this… Keeping in mind the conversation he’d overheard on her arrival, Sirius vowed to keep a closer watch on the new professor. He wished he had his old…

Suddenly Sirius choked on his butterbeer. The boys stopped their conversation to stare at him. Harry raised a hand helpfully to slap Sirius on the back. "Are you ok?” he asked.

“Fine, fine…” Sirius lied, not believing he could be so stupid. He had been about to wish that he had the Marauder’s Map. An item that now lay safely in his Godson’s possession. The one object that could probably ruin this whole deception…


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*Mirror of Erised* 08-29-2005 08:27 PM

Aha! A post! Oh I loved it! :loved:
But I'll be happy when another comes! :flower:
So, take your time! Let it be great! I'll see it then! :hello:
But I wonder what happens with the Marauders Map! Hmmmm...

Rcaleb 08-29-2005 08:46 PM

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“Fine, fine…” Sirius lied, not believing he could be so stupid. He had been about to wish that he had the Marauder’s Map. An item that now lay safely in his Godson’s possession. The one object that could probably ruin this whole deception…
ANd the mystery continues, How will Sirius get the map out of Harry's hands? What happens when Harry sees Sirius sleeping in the bed right next to him?

Until the next installment.

I really liked the picture, it will ensure just one more reason Snape can pick on Sirius.

evlpez 08-29-2005 10:26 PM

Wow. See? I post and she updates! *ignores the fact that she knew Lissy was already writing and planning to post today* :whistle:

Most excellent post!

I still want to know what was in the rest of the letter from Dumbledore. :evil:

aiangel327 08-29-2005 11:07 PM

Lissy! Excellent post! Interesting. I'd completely forgotten about the Marauder's Map. But I cannot wait to see what happens when Harry uses it. And Jan has a good point. What was in the rest of Dumbledore's letter? Once again the parts with Colin, Dennis, Lavender, and Parvati make me laugh. :rotfl:

Can't wait for your next update!

Laieesha 08-30-2005 06:54 AM

Yay!! Lissy!! I love this chapter/post!!
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Sirius found himself dragged over to the couch
mmm... young Sirius... I'd be all over him too!
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“Fine, fine…” Sirius lied, not believing he could be so stupid. He had been about to wish that he had the Marauder’s Map. An item that now lay safely in his Godson’s possession. The one object that could probably ruin this whole deception…
:lol: I could imagine his face, choking on butterbeer, thinking of the map. That's right huh?? Hhhmm.. oh however will he get a hold of that?? *waits in excitement*

And yes, I also want to know the rest of Dumbledore's letter. Curse that Snape! ggrr

BlackFiresong 08-30-2005 06:55 AM

Nice post! I'd totally forgotten about the Marauder's Map too. Great idea! Will he try to get the map from Harry? What if he gets caught? When will Harry find out the truth? Will he find out at all? Too many questions... so get another post up quickly!!!!!!

I liked the bit about Fred and George calling Ron their Hogwarts connection - very in-character for them! In fact, everybody was so in-character I felt like I was reading canon sometimes!

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Originally Posted by Lissydove
While at one time the boy may have introduced himself with a slight air of embarrassment, now he simply stated himself as though to say “this is who I am, think what you want.”

I loved that part - it was so touching. And so Harry.

Post quickly!... or I'll go mad... :dizzy:

Love,

BlackFiresong (Nazneen) :)

P.S. - Show's getting hotter... lots of shouting :mad: , lots of slaps :poke:, some revenge plans to be put into action :shifty: ... oh, and some romance on the side. :loved: :loved:

mugglemom 08-30-2005 02:25 PM

too cool...maybe that map will have to be confiscated...oh no-o-o-o!
:whip:

Ally_W 08-30-2005 04:47 PM

Me loved the post my deah.

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My dear Ally- ally221289 Who I hope has no more vacations coming up!
Nope, I dont! I have relatives down, so its been hard to get on. I shall pm you!


PAMS!

Mubote 08-30-2005 06:01 PM

nice post, sorry i've been away. Yay i'm on your list. Longost post ive ever written

allucha 08-30-2005 09:33 PM

ooo, thats a great post, if only harry knew!!!
well, all i say is Post Another Message

Waddles 08-30-2005 10:17 PM

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“Fine, fine…” Sirius lied, not believing he could be so stupid. He had been about to wish that he had the Marauder’s Map. An item that now lay safely in his Godson’s possession. The one object that could probably ruin this whole deception…
ooh! I knew you were planning something, Lissy. But I was thinking of the two-way mirror...hmmm....oh, ya. pams!

~Lily~

X-Girl 08-31-2005 01:59 AM

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Wow. See? I post and she updates! *ignores the fact that she knew Lissy was already writing and planning to post today
HUH? *GASP* *POUTS* But, I’ve been waiting for days, and she didn’t post for the Riddle Queen! *Murders Jan* *Remembers she annoyed everyone to check the fic out on chat* Lmao, *Revives out of luff* You know I luff you right? And, it’s okay for my stalkee to luff you… *HUGGLES HER FAV MOD* (*Pokkles her user notes…then Shakes head*
Anyhoo, YES! FINALLY AN UPDATE! *POUNCES ON SIRY AND LIZ* Okay, let’s get to business! *Scrolls down*
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Sirius made a show of thinking about this. “I’m not sure…” he pondered for a moment. “I know!” he snapped his fingers, “The Quidditch World Cup! Lower tier, behind the Bulgarian goal posts, terrible seats!”
*Pokkles her bad memory* Where did we last stop off at? *Thinks* I have no clue…*Scrolls down for last update* *Sees the link to the previous page since so many posts were made* *Is too lazy* *Scrolls back up to read where she was last at*
So, many darn posts…Is this the Creevy boys who were interviewing him?
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Harry looked at Sirius as though trying to remember, “no… we didn’t sit there…” he ventured, “did you camp in the first field?”
Oh yah, LMAO…He’s talking to Harry…I’m such a dope…You’d think after all these times, I’d get a clue and actually save the last sentence of the fic so I could remember…
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Sirius wasn’t in the mood to try and recollect everything that Harry and Ron had told him about the match and he certainly didn’t want to test out the scroll yet.
Lmao, He’s so helpless. I mean, he wants to get Hp to open up so badly, but he’s stuck once more. Why do these things always have to happen to my Siry? *Thinks* Okay, he gets himself in this mess, but it doesn’t have to always end up so sadly…
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Right, I’m Harry Potter,” the boy extended his hand for Sirius to shake. Sirius noted with pride the boy’s increased confidence. While at one time the boy may have introduced himself with a slight air of embarrassment, now he simply stated himself as though to say “this is who I am, think what you want.”
Oooh, I luff how you’re writing Harry. It seems really surreal that we don’t know exactly what Harry’s thinking. I think I like it from Siry’s perspective. I mean, this also shows your awesome talents. No one that I’ve read so far can write Harry as good as that. They usually forget they’re writing in a diff perspective and mess it up.
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Knowing Harry so well, Sirius knew he had earned a measure of the boy’s respect for not making a production of it.
Awwww, That’s so cute! Harry is so predictable. I can’t wait until Harry finds out who Brain really is. Don’t think you’ve distracted me from remembering the MM…
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Apparently the Creevey brothers felt that the most famous boy in school entering into an alliance with who they felt might be the second most famous student was extremely newsworthy.
They’re so creepy. Creepy Creevy Twins. Hehe, but I think I STILL like them. They might be annoying, but they have some sort of respect…
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What? No!” Sirius found that talking to these two was a lot like watching the quaffle get passed at a Quidditch match.
What a cute description! They are like sooooooooooo Forge and Gred wannabees. Siry getting annoyed eh? Hehe, I think this is going to be a really tough year. Wait, as stubborn as Siry is, It’s gonna be real tough
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Sirius found himself dragged over to the couch, the girls taking up spots on either side of him.
Hehehe, I already knew this right? I mean this was part of the teasers you were making me for crazy for….It also was the teaser that made Jan freak. Haha, once you think about it, Siry w/ Lavender and Parvati is hilarious! Let’s just hope you don’t get them too crushed! Oh, Harry is so gonna love this, then again maybe some jealousy will arose? Who, knows? All I know is Siry is going to be cursing everyone if they keep following and smothering him…
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“I escaped from an institution,” Sirius couldn’t help teasing them just a little, as their faces lit up with interest. “Decided I could hide out here…”
HAHA! He’s so evily cute (If that makes any sense, or any of my posts for that matter)! Lmao, you know how to add the perfect schemes to make us so interested. I was here, before all this glory, You remember that Miss-I –don’t-need-you-I-have-22-readers (Hehe, I can tease too)
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“Why the sudden change of heart, then?” Harry asked, having been the only one who didn’t believe the escape story.
AS much as JKR mentions that Harry and James were so alike in the books, I never really actually saw the similarities (I’m just as stubborn as Siry). However, Harry is so cool and free with his words. I mean he seems so un-attached yet so wantable and mysterious. Maybe it’s just because we don’t know the crazy thoughts that go through his mind before finding the right thing to say. Anyhoo, he’s written awesome! (Sadly some stories are making me hate Harry’s personality…they just don’t know how to write him)
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The boy rolled his eyes behind Hermione’s back, but no one argued, heading up to their respective dormitories.
OMG, I forgot about this. Will Siry sleep near Harry? I mean, that’ll be so cute. I’m pretty sure Ron will get so easily jealous *HUggles her Ronnekins*. I so can’t wait for your ending!
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Well, you should tell them that,” Sirius put aside the candy, opting for a safe looking chocolate frog,” they seem to think you’ll be helping them make sales.”
MY FORGE AND GRED AND SOOOOOOOO CUTE! Awww, that’s your way of saying Siry will be cool w/ Ronnie right? Okay, maybe so. But, I still think that there will be a bit of trouble every once in a while. Some steaming action is always wanted on my part…
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Aah, it’s the new guy thing,” Sirius waved it off, handing out more goods. “They’ll be on to someone else next week,” he replied, hoping he was right.
I hope so…No we all know Siry is too charming to be get over in a week. That’s like saying it’s nothing special sitting in a room w/ Chad Michael Murray *Swoons*
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Keeping in mind the conversation he’d overheard on her arrival, Sirius vowed to keep a closer watch on the new professor. He wished he had his old…
MAURADERS MAP!!!!!!!! I WAS WONDERING WHEN IT WOULD COME IN! Lmao, oooh, Siry’s going to freak out…Hah, he’s clever enough. He’ll get it back eventually right? OMG, this is so brilliantly thought out. I have it all analyzed in my head Liz!
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Fine, fine…” Sirius lied, not believing he could be so stupid. He had been about to wish that he had the Marauder’s Map. An item that now lay safely in his Godson’s possession. The one object that could probably ruin this whole deception…
That’s not only what it’ll do. IT’LL ADD TO MY WANTED STEAMING ACTION! MUAHAHA! I’m so evil! I have many many things that are going through my mind. I hope for so much but I can read your mind (Even though you told be straightaway) You won’t give us too much at once. You wont post every other day. You wont give me any more teasers (Well, Pweez, you know I luff them) You wont give me any special attention a stalker like me needs. However, I know what you will do. You will still work your magic, write your awesome story (Even if it’s a but slow), and attract so many other awesome peeps who should do nothing but adore you!
Just remember the Riddle Queen is Always one of those people!
PAMS!
Luff you loads,
~Tina

Lissydove 08-31-2005 02:15 AM

Dear Sweet Riddle Queen Tina who reads my mind so well, :glomp:

I was just trying to send you a PM, but your box is full, lovey. I have to leave for work soon (:cry:) so I'll catch you later! :glomp:

Love ya and I love reading your reply!

All the STEAMING ACTION is for you my dear even if I forget to say so!

Loves always,
Lissy

PS: The same goes for you LadyV - Mailbox full sweetie! :glomp:

super_girl 08-31-2005 12:36 PM

post more ...this is great!

mbenitez919 08-31-2005 07:29 PM

amazing post!!! I LOVE IT!!! Thanks for posting!!! the marauder's map was a great idea!!! But don't u think dumbledore took care of that?

X-Girl 08-31-2005 07:42 PM

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I was just trying to send you a PM, but your box is full, lovey. I have to leave for work soon () so I'll catch you later!

Love ya and I love reading your reply!

All the STEAMING ACTION is for you my dear even if I forget to say so!
HAHA, *LURVES THE SPECIAL ATTENTION* Lmao, it's full? I ijust emptied it out like a week ago...*eek*
Well, Thankees! Can't wait for more!
I forgot to hail last post. *POkkes herself*
*HAILS LIZ'S AWESOMENESS*
Ciao,
Riddle Queen Tina

Rcaleb 08-31-2005 07:45 PM

OOS: Runs up to Tina and huggles. Missed you much.

Federov4eva 08-31-2005 07:51 PM

Great Post. I can't wait for more!

El_Coolio7458 08-31-2005 08:54 PM

Ooh another post! Can't wait for more!

~Insanely Insane~ 08-31-2005 09:45 PM

Omg that's so creative! I could never think of things like that

IBelieveInMagic 09-01-2005 12:49 AM

New Reader!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!
 
Omg! This Is Such A Great Story!!!!!!!i Love Sirius Black!!!!!!!!! Post Soon Please Please Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This Is Great!!!!!!! Keep Going!!!!!!!!!! <3

hprulz 09-01-2005 03:25 AM

****New Reader!!**** Thats so smart! The Marauders Map! The Shatter point. ok I'm over it. of course Sirius is in Gryffindor. I know Sirius is gonna steal the Marauders Map. He only does REALLY bad things for good reasons. or maybe he'll tell Dumbledore! Hmmmmm. So many possibilities!! PAMS I love this!!! PAMS PAMS!!

harry__dan 09-01-2005 07:17 AM

cute cute
 
well its an awesome post . and parvati and lavender are wishing for sirius hhahahaha i imagine them wot they will do if they no its sirius!! hahah
and haary is curious !yeah its too bad sirius cant have mrauder's map


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