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| Dusty Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) The cellar holds unfinished confections of storytelling, giving readers a glimpse into creative ideas that may one day be revived. |
04-25-2010, 05:46 PM
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| Snidget
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BWHAHAHA! Gabrielle is hilarious!
OHMIGOSH RON! You have to learn the difference between yourself and Harry. Hahahaha!
I love it! Nice, pams!
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04-25-2010, 05:58 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Great chapter PAMS PAMS PAMS
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04-25-2010, 06:27 PM
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| Snidget
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I love you and your story Sophie!!!!
This is so good.
If Ginny doesn't want to marry him I will!!!!!
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04-25-2010, 08:52 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
awww what a sweet chapter!!!
Ohhh Harry told Ginny he was going to marry her?? Interesting
Cant wait for more
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04-25-2010, 09:20 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Chapter 8 Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Chapter 8
The sun was very bright and gave a plesant warmth to my skin. It was very peaceful to be lying in Harry's arms. My white cardigan had lots of lovely grass stains thanks to us rolling around on the grass kissing. Mum will be very pleased I thought though I was having a great time. We walked back to the Burrow hand in hand. We were just in time to see Ron steal a kiss from Hermionie much to my surprise but Harry said it was inevatible. Gabrielle came floating out the kitchen with a wonderous look on her face. "Fleur haz been lookeein for you" she huffed in her poetic french accent.
"What for?" I asked. "I'm sort of... busy." I told her looking up at Harry. He smiled at me and kissed my hair igroring Gabrielle. She threw me one dirty look and muttered some jiberish in french. She stormed into the house. "Gabrielle!" I yelled after her but she ignored me. Harry and I laughed as she turned around and made rude signs at us with her finger, before entering the house. "Sheesh. I knew she liked you but not that much. So much for her being the pretty blonde innocent french girl"
"Hmm...blonde girls," he shook his head "not really my type...but you know something?" I looked at him, "I prefare redheads" I blushed then gave him a quick hug before letting go of his hand. "Where are you going?"
"To see Fleur and Gabrielle." I made a face. He laughed and pulled me into his arms.
"You don't need to go." He whispered into my hair.
"But I do. I have a feeling it will be something conserning the bridesmaids dresses" I stuck my toung out. "The dresses are horrible. I look like a meringue."
"If you were a meringue, Gin, I'd eat you" I looked at him a shook my head. "Thats a compliment" He said but kissed him on the cheek and went straight to see Fleur.
"Love you, Gin" he shouted. I stopped and turned around.
"Love you too, Harry" I shouted back before blowing him a kiss and stepping inside the kitchen.
I know its short and so is the next chapter but bare with me. Tell me what you think :D
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04-25-2010, 09:27 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ohhhh Great chapter
Haha Gabrielle...Awww she liked Harry 
&&&Aww the Lovebirds Harry and Ginny
Love it!
More soon please
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04-25-2010, 09:54 PM
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| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
*is now hungry for a platinum blonde colored meringue*  BWHAHAHA It's wonderful, I don't care if it's short, Gabrielle is a very rude little girl like me! j/k I can't believe she did that *is horrified* Nice, I liked it very much!
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04-25-2010, 10:15 PM
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| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Originally Posted by Morag She threw me one dirty look and muttered some jiberish in french. She stormed into the house. "Gabrielle!" I yelled after her but she ignored me. Harry and I laughed as she turned around and made rude signs at us with her finger, before entering the house. Hahahaha, Gabrielle is a wee bit jealous. Quote:
"The dresses are horrible. I look like a meringue."
"If you were a meringue, Gin, I'd eat you" I looked at him and shook my head. "Thats a compliment" He said but kissed him on the cheek and went straight to see Fleur.
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04-25-2010, 11:13 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Sophie. It's great you include real things into your story. Ginny noticing the grass stains on her clothing, Ron sneaking a kiss, and just walking hand in hand talking about nothing. This is a very sweet image to watch. I myself hate grass stains, but if I was a witch, then I woudn't mind them at all. Quote:
Harry and I laughed as she turned around and made rude signs at us with her finger, before entering the house.
 She doesn't need to be so jealous. Harry has never given her any reason to think he' ever had any feelings for her.  Very nice Sophie, I look forward to your next post.
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04-26-2010, 05:50 PM
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| Snidget
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I loved this post Sophie.
Especially the fact that you were next to me whilst reading it!!!!
lol
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04-26-2010, 09:58 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Great chapter PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!!
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04-29-2010, 06:49 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | New Post! Chapter 9... Finally Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
I am sooo sorry. I know I've not posted in DAYS and those of you whos fan fics I read, I'm sorry I've missed your posts. I'll try to get round them all tonight or the near future. I've had maths NABs, Chemisty tests, Macbeth character essays. Please forgive me :/
Thers a competition in the next post so keep your eyes pealed!!!
Chapter 9
I climbed the stairs to Percy's old room to where Gabrielle was sharing a room with Fleur, knocked once and peeped inside.
"Hi Fleur. Gabrielle said, you were looking for me"
"Ah Ginnee." She smiled "It iz for thee dresses" she said as she pulled two dresses out of a closet. "Ee slight change" The dresses were a slight improvement, only slight. It was awfully low cut at the front, now strapless. I don't like strapless anything. But it was now too rufled at the bottom. It wasn't the disgusting gold/yellow colour anymore. It was lighter, a champagne colour.
I tried it on. "Ez lovely Ginee" It wasn't any better. I smiled and nodded in agreement, but out of politness. "Tomorrow, ze hairdressour arrivez at eight o'clock sharp."
"That great Fleure, really. And I'm so glad your going to be my sister in law. Bill couldn't have picked a better bride." I smilled angeiclly.
"Zat ez all Ginnee so you can go if you av plans" she smilled, obviously complimented by what I had said about her becoming my sister in law. "or we girls are to shop at Diagonalee, if you care to join us." She said in her perfect accent. I could see Gabrielle roll her eyes and sigh heavily as she sat in the chair in the corner of the room, quite clearly dissapointed at her sisters welcoming invitation she had given to me.
"Thanks for the invite but I've made plans with Harry this afternoon so I'll be unable to join you." I told Fleur while looking at Garbrielle and smilling. I opened the door and made my way to Rons room because I knew I'd find Harry there.
I know it short... sorry. They get longer soon :D
Comments Please....and sorry about the delay (I'm rather embarassed!)
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04-29-2010, 07:15 PM
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| Snidget
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
Bwhahaha! Gabrielle is hilarious! It's not your fault, I've had a ff go inactive! I was sooo scared! Well.. My brother is kicking me off. I loved the chappie btw.. Ginny's dress sounds funny!
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04-29-2010, 07:29 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
dont worry about the wait
I loved it!!
Bahaha Ginny is funny
More soon please at the beginning is there suppose to be a problem? "Hi Fleur. Gabrielle said, you were looking for me" Sorry got me a bit confused
Sorry not being rude AT ALL!
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04-29-2010, 07:59 PM
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| Snidget
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I loved this post Sophie!
I had no idea that would happen. lol :O
Evie, I think it should say:
'Hi Fleur. Gabrielle said that you were looking for me.'
I think. Just a little typing error.
Sophie, sorry for saying but I noticed it and thought I should mention it.
I really loved this post!!!!!!
(L) love this and you!!!
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04-29-2010, 08:00 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Ahhh right...thanks Katie
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04-29-2010, 08:09 PM
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| Snidget
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Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 Ahhh right...thanks Katie 
You are welcome Evie!!!!
Everyone makes mistakes with their fingers, right?
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04-29-2010, 08:30 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
PAMS PAMS PAMS Great chapter
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04-30-2010, 01:23 AM
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Originally Posted by Morag I am sooo sorry. I know I've not posted in DAYS and those of you whos fan fics I read, I'm sorry I've missed your posts. I'll try to get round them all tonight or the near future. I've had maths NABs, Chemisty tests, Macbeth character essays. Please forgive me :/ Haha, no worries  We all have lives outside of Snitchseeker Quote:
There's a competition in the next post so keep your eyes pealed!!!
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The dresses were a slight improvement, only slight. It was awfully low cut at the front, now strapless. I don't like strapless anything. But it was now too rufled at the bottom. It wasn't the disgusting gold/yellow colour anymore. It was lighter, a champagne colour.
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I could see Gabrielle roll her eyes and sigh heavily as she sat in the chair in the corner of the room, quite clearly dissapointed at her sisters welcoming invitation she had given to me.
Hahaha, I love Ginny!  She's hilarious, and Gabrielle needs to get over herself 
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04-30-2010, 02:47 PM
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| Graphorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Katie: Yeahh they do, i misspell things ALL the time!
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05-03-2010, 08:04 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Competition Post! Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Ok Competition time!!
First to post after reading this, please leave your comment, then your name name and you will be in the next post!!!!
Enjoy
Chapter 10
I knocked once and opened the door. I found a half naked Ron lying under a half naked Hermionie.
"Nice Ron. You shout at Harry and me for getting back together yet you think it ok for you and Hermionie to fool around but your not even a together. Very charming, Ronald." Hermionie was very embarassed and jumped up and pulled on Rons shirt to cover herself up.
"I'm sorry Ginny" she told me
"I'm not annoyed at you Hermionie, its just the fact that Ron has trouble with his sister and best friend getting together, but expects me to be fine with you two, which I am by the way but its just that Ron is a hypocrit. And on that note, do any of you know where Harry is?" I asked. They both shook their heads. "Well then, I'll let you continue doing what ever it was you were doing" I said with a smile as I walked out the room and closed the door then continued to find Harry.
As I was walking down from Ron's attic room, I found Harry walking up. "You don't want to go up there" I told him "Unless you want to be scarred for life"
"I thought you were away with the girls." He said
"No, I told them I'd made plans with you."
"And so what do you have in mind because," he said slinking his arms around my waist "your dad took the rest of the boys to a quiditch match, but Ron told him that we wouldn't want to go so..."
"Well Ron and Hermionie seem to be occupying there time so we could do something just the two of us, without any interuptions." I said, then kissed him lightly on the lips. My stomach interrupted with a loud rumble.
"First though lets sort out your stomach." He took my hand and lead me downstairs "What did you have for breakfast?"
"Umm... Coffee" I replied.
"That's terrible Miss Weasley a young growing woman like you needs food for energy."
"Harry, two words." I told him folding me arms across my chest, "Shut up!" He smiled while I stared up at him with a stern look on my face, "Plus, I'm too tired to eat in the morning and I could quite easily live on coffee."
"Well, we could go out for lunch if you like?"
"Well, I'd need to get changed quickly. I mean just look at the grass stains on this cardigan!" So as we made our way downstairs we stopped via my room so I could change quickly. I pulled a purple vest top out my wardrope along with a black skirt that had a flowery print. I turned to Harry who had absentmindedly pick up a muggle book I was reading and continued reading where I had put it down. He caught me watching him "Arn't you getting changed?" he asked
"Yeah, but I thought you were going leave the room first."
He gave me a funny look. "Ok, if you like but Gin, I know what you look like with no clothes on. Its nothing to be embarrased about." He told me.
"Ok, now I'm embarrased." I said blushing. Harry went back to reading the book and I turned my back to him and pulled on tan tights, then the top and skirt. "Harry," he looked up from the book "can you fasten this for me" I asked struggling with the catch on a necklace.
"Sure." He walked over and fastened the necklace. He put his arms around my waist and kissed my cheek "Your so beautiful Gin." I blushed "So where do you fancy going for lunch. We could go to Diagonally or I know this small restaurant place where I used to escape to when it was the holidays in Privet Drive."
"There's a good chance we would bump into mum and the Delacour girls if we go to Diagonally so could we go to the restaurant you know?" I told him looking at our reflection in my dressing table mirror. It looked perfect.
"Yeah. Its more of a pub sort of thing but its nice all the same. Plus theres no mums or Delacours."
"Sounds great. Lets go then"
Hope you liked it! Tell me what you think!
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05-03-2010, 08:13 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Great post
It was really sweet,
cant wait for more
What was up with Ron and Hermione??
Name:Evangeline
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05-03-2010, 08:22 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Congratulation Evangeline!
More Competitions soon!
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05-03-2010, 08:55 PM
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| Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Pams pams pams
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05-03-2010, 09:40 PM
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| Snidget
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Great post!!!
I loved it, I want Harry to call me beautiful!!!!!!
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