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Old 12-05-2010, 07:22 AM   #401 (permalink)
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Hello Sophie. Tremendous writing. I'm so glad you can keep your train of thought with all the studying I'm sure you're doing. Here's me hoping you do well on your exams. I'll keep you in my prayers.
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As I was putting the remainder of my of my belongings into the bag, two arms formed there way around my waist and a chin rested on my shoulder. "Afternoon Gin." Said Harry. He kissed my cheek and sat down on the side of the bed.
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"Well until it is, there is no more this." He seemed bewildered as I went back to clearing out the little cupboard where I kept a spare pair of pyjamas and slippers.
Sometimes a girl has to go to drastic measures to keep a guy on task.
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Then he held out a bunch of flowers.21,67,42
I'm so sorry Sophie, but, I don't understand what the numbers mean.
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"Harry, why don't you ask Madam Pomfrey for a vase to put these flowers in?" I handed him the bunch as he grunted and tore the curtain away from his path and continued to her office. It was a tad awkward.
A brush off if ever I seen one. It's a good thing Harry trusts her with his feelings. I love how mature they are. Did Ginny think Harry being present was intimidating Craig and wanted to make the situation lighter for him?
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"Well you did well at the trials, so you should go and see who you'll be playing alongside." I put my hand to my mouth and pretended to whisper. "And if it has anything to do with me, you'll make the team." I smiled, Craig laughed, and to my surprise, Harry joined in.
Very good writing Sophie! I love how you showed tension, a little edginess, some gentleness, and some light hearted humor to end the visit with Craig. Nice work. And besides that, Harry is just above such childishness as jealousy. What with more important things on his mind, from the past, and his pending future.
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"I've got a surprise for you." He said excitedly.
"Really? And what is that?" I was excited too.
"Well you know this thing Dumbledore wants me to do?"
"Yeah this whole task thing that you can't tell me about."
"Yeah well, on the way back from Quidditch this morning, Proffessor McGonagall said he wanted a word with me and Ron came with me and stuff, but he said he wants us to stay at school. He doesn't want us doing it anymore and said that he feared he was depriving us of our education. Plus he said that we could go on to do pretty much anything as long as we got good exam results this year."
"So you don't need to be away doing these ridiculous tasks?" He nodded. "Thats great Harry." I threw my arms around him. "So now what happens with the task? Will Dumbledore take care of it? Or will you do it?"
"Yeah something like that."
I'm sure this is way more ominous than it sounds. Harry really was kind of vague at the end.
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I was totally overwhelmed. I was so glad he was going to be safe and no harm was to come to him. I hugged him back with all my might knowing everything was going to be alright. He was with me. He was safe.
Brilliant cliffhanger Sophie. Leaving us with Ginny thinking that, when things said prior makes us know things aren't always what they seem.
Great post Sophie. I'll be watching for your next. Take care of those studies first though.
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Hello Sophie. Tremendous writing. I'm so glad you can keep your train of thought with all the studying I'm sure you're doing. Here's me hoping you do well on your exams. I'll keep you in my prayers. Sweet.
Thank you Connie. I have my whole family praying for me too. I'm soo nervous. I don't seem to do enough studying!

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I'm so sorry Sophie, but, I don't understand what the numbers mean.
Yeah thanks for pointing that out. I have no idea either

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A brush off if ever I seen one. It's a good thing Harry trusts her with his feelings. I love how mature they are. Did Ginny think Harry being present was intimidating Craig and wanted to make the situation lighter for him?
Well we know what Harry thinks of Craig at the start of the post when they are talking. I think Harry may not have liked him there.

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Very good writing Sophie! I love how you showed tension, a little edginess, some gentleness, and some light hearted humor to end the visit with Craig. Nice work. And besides that, Harry is just above such childishness as jealousy. What with more important things on his mind, from the past, and his pending future.
Aww thanks I think Harry eased up towards the end. Ginny made it all better.

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I'm sure this is way more ominous than it sounds. Harry really was kind of vague at the end.
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Brilliant cliffhanger Sophie. Leaving us with Ginny thinking that, when things said prior makes us know things aren't always what they seem.
Great post Sophie. I'll be watching for your next. Take care of those studies first though.
Thankyou for your kind comments Connie. I actually forgot about the Halloween ball, so I'm going to do that very quickly and then we'll have Christmas. And we are back at the Burrow!
I'll be studing first though
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Ron, Hermione and of course, Harry came to "collect" me from the hospital wing. Ron kept on saying that is was only right for him to come and get me. He insisted on carrying my bag for me, even though I am more than capable. When I got back to the dorm there was a three letters for me. I picked up the first and I could see from the neat calligraphy that it was mums writing. I opened it to reveal a manuscript asking "Are you ok?" and "I've warned you about playing quidditch" and "How is Ron?" and "Have you got you dress for the Halloween ball yet?" then at the end "Tell Harry he's more that welcome to come home for Christmas. I've already told Ron, but you know what he's like. Keep safe my Dear. Love Mum xxx"

Then the second, I could easily recognise as Charlie. His messy writing was scribbled all over the page. You had to look hard to read the different words. It read "Gin, Are you aright? Mum said you landed yourself in the hospital wing...again. Stay out of trouble or Ron and Harry will have me to answer to! I told them to look out for you.
Love you lots like jelly tots, Charlie x"
I smiled to myself. That is so Charlie. I was looking forward to seeing everyone at Christmas.

I didn't recognise the third. It was very neat curly, loopy writing. I hesitated before opening it. The seal on the envelope was a light blue and said something in French- Fleur, was the first person that came into my head. And I was correct. I squinted at the signature at the end, just to make sure I was right. "Dear Ginny, Your mum said you hurt yourself at Quidditch. I hope you are feeling well soon.
I never got the chance to say thank you for being my bridesmaid properly but ,Ginny you helped make the day very special and I hope you had just as much fun as I did.
See you soon,
Fleur"
There was a small box too that I opened. A little piece of parchment attached to the box read : Hope you like it! Bill and Fleur. Inside the box was a beautiful pearl bracelet and there was a second smaller box with a tiny "G" charm inside.

"Well that was nice of her." said Ron who had been looking over my shoulder. "I didn't get anything for being a...a...a grooms brother.""Yeah," I agreed. "It was." I attached the charm to the bracelet and slid it onto my wrist. It was really beautiful and Fleur did well picking it out. So I grabbed three pieces of Parchment and started my response to the three letters.

Harry came out of the small kitchen and leaded against the door frame with a glass of water in hand, staring past me in a daydream. "You've been invited home for Christmas. Not that you wouldn't be invited anyway." I told him.
"Tell your mum thank you and I can't wait." He said plopping down beside me and putting his arm around my shoulders.
"Too polite. But I will."

"Ginny, I need to go and set up the Great Hall tonight after dinner. If you want you could come along because Ron isn't that much of a hand." Hermione asked, her nose deep in a book. I glanced quickly at Harry. We've barely had anytime together, but Harry whispered, "I'll still see you later. I'll come too in fact. We'll make an excuse to leave." I smiled and kissed his cheek.
"Sounds like plan Hermione.""That's good, we'll just start after dinner I suppose. And we'll need to get going soon."I put down my quill on the table and turned to Harry with a pleading look. "What?" he asked squeezing my hand?
"Can I borrow Hedwig....Please?"
"Sure, come on. She'll be in the Owlery just now. I'll take you."
As I pulled my coat on Ron came running out his room.
"Look at this! Uniforms for the rest of the year!" Said Ron holding up a familiar grey jumper with the red and gold line around the v-neck.
"Well looks like its back to work for you lot tomorrow." I laughed. "Come on Harry. We'll meet you guys in the Hall."

It was cold outside and the dark winter nights were becoming more noticeable. It wasn't even six o'clock yet and the sun had disappeared behind the mountains.
As we walked up the steps, Harry took my good hand for support. He hadn't stopped smiling all day since he had found out that he would be staying in school the rest of the year. Though, I couldn't help but notice the look of wonder deep in his eyes. That scared me. I kept his hand in mine and squeezed it tight. I didn't say anything to him, but I jumped into his arms and hugged him tight. He lifted me off the ground and spun me around. Oh how I love bear hugs. Once on my feet, he cupped my cheek and smiled at me lovingly. I could have stayed there forever, gazing up into his sweet smiling eyes.

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The great hall had cleared of the last of the hundreds of students, Hermione stood up, clapped her hands and said, "Right then, lets get to work!" She hauled along a great black bag full of decorations and pulled out her wand then began leviating long silky orange ribbon and placing them in an orderly fashion around the hall. She shortened the tables to half there normal size and placed a dancefloor in front of Dumbledore's podium. The enchanted ceiling was transformed into the scene of a blustery night sky. The stars were not visible and the moon was creeping out from behind the stormy black clouds. The place settings too had been changed. The normal silverware had taken on a more nasty appearance. They were a rustic copper colour with the faded Hogwarts emblem on the handle. The usual cups became matching goblets to the cutlery with the same rusty look and Hogwarts Emblem.
"Why not just use the house badge?" I asked
"Sorry, what's that?" Hermione replied concentrating hard on plates she was making transform.
"On the cutlery and goblets." I asked. "And now plates. Hermione." I paused "Where do you learn this from?"
""Well to answer your first question, I have purposely not used the house badges because I think that they can sometimes lead to separation and I think that by using the Hogwarts badge that it shows unity and equality. I shows that we are one, working together for our best possible education here at Hogwarts. I understand that a bit of healthy competition is good but, sometimes it becomes to much. It doesn't matter how well we do in a potions paper or what type of blood runs through out veins, its the fact that we are all witches and wizards together, and as head girl, I will do my best to promote that. I'm hoping that more in-school events like this will bring our houses together."
By the end of her speech she was in deep, deep thought and she hadn't answered my second question. I casually replied.
"Well, good luck with that. What else do you need a hand with?"
"Well there is the Halloween cake, you could go and pick that up from the kitchens, but see Dobby about it. He's the one that will know what you mean. And tell him Hermione says, thank you."
"Ok...why can't I just call him?"
"Because you know how I feel about the welfare of House Elves, Ginny."
"Yeah, don't get her started Ginny!"
Ron shouted over. Hermione threw him an icy glare and he abruptly shut up and turned back around to Harry who was smirking.
"Now chop, chop Ginny, we have much to do."
"Yes Sir!"
I saluted her, turned on my heel and marched out the hall.

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"Hello Dobby." I said waving as I came into the kitchen.
"Miss Ginny." He beamed dropping the ladle he had in hand and half-running over to meet me.
"Hermione has sent me to pick up the Halloween cake or something."
"Oh yes, I have it right here."
He lifted up his small dirty hands and made summoning motions. A cake flew in from the next room in the huge kitchen and boxed itself. It then landed in my hands.
"Hermione sends her thanks." I told him.
"Oh she is more than welcome. The pleasure is mine." He said in his wheezy voice.

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"Here is your cake, Hermione." I said placing the huge thing as gently as I could onto the table.
"Oh thanks, now could you do me another favour, in that box over there is party favours, mostly for the girls, but could you place them out on the table."
"What have you put in them?"
I asked as I shook the box and it rattled.
"Fred and George sent me a massive supply of sweets. They turn your fingers green but, you go back to normal after a few hours."
"Nice..."
I said dropping the box a tad dramatically.

***


The ball was a huge success. I danced all night long! Which of course resulted in sore feet. The party was a hit with everyone. Hundreds of pictures were taken and for days after, were being exchanged between friends. I had my own collection. Luna in my opinion, was the prettiest girl in the hall. Professor McGonagall stepped in at the end and said a few word about Ron and mostly Hermiones great efforts in the preparations. "This will go down in history!" She proclaimed from the podium. She awarded them fifteen house points each. Hermione was very proud. But before I knew it. We were back on the train to the Burrow and I couldn't wait to see mum and dad. Oh, and I made the quidditch team too!



This is perhaps the most, not rushed but speedy chapter. I'm sorry that it is long and boring but it had to be done because it is almost Christmas and we were stuck at Halloween so I hope its not too bad...
I also apologise for the spelling in this on, I didn't wait for Katie to Beta it....sorry

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Hello Sophie. I wish you wouldn't put down your writing. It is really very good. It's obvious you are very talented!

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"Gin, Are you aright? Mum said you landed yourself in the hospital wing...again. Stay out of trouble or Ron and Harry will have me to answer to! I told them to look out for you.
Love you lots like jelly tots, Charlie x"
Just in case I haven't mentioned it before, I love Charlie. I especially like the last line he wrote. How cute!

Fleurs gift was very sweet! And so was the letter. I guess she really can be a sweet person when she's not stuck on herself like she always was in my opinion.
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"Ginny, I need to go and set up the Great Hall tonight after dinner. If you want you could come along because Ron isn't that much of a hand."
It's good to see them friends again. I wonder if they'll ever be able to be as close as they were before.
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"Oh thanks, now could you do me another favour, in that box over there is party favours, mostly for the girls, but could you place them out on the table."
"What have you put in them?" I asked as I shook the box and it rattled.
"Fred and George sent me a massive supply of sweets. They turn your fingers green but, you go back to normal after a few hours."
Love the party favors! Very creative. And I assume that Hermione tested them to make sure that's all they did.
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Luna in my opinion, was the prettiest girl in the hall.
I think she has the most gorgeous hair I've ever seen! Loved it in the 5th movie.
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I'm sorry that it is long and boring but it had to be done because it is almost Christmas and we were stuck at Halloween so I hope its not too bad...
It's not too long, and certainly not boring at all! And being stuck somewhere is generally a term used for a bad occurrence, which this ff is not.

I'll be watching for my next notice. Great post Sophie.
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great post! Now i am completely freaking out over the Exams :| You haven't started yet have they ? I think my brain is frazzelled haha
Aw Hon, I don't think anyone has done as little studying as me. Chemisrty and Biology are the ones getting me! The exa,s this week got cancelled and we've to go in tomorrow but just for a normal school day, not and exam. I'm not even supposed to have an exam!




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Hello Sophie. I wish you wouldn't put down your writing. It is really very good. It's obvious you are very talented!
Aww thank you. I was beginning to wonder where everyone had gone!

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Fleurs gift was very sweet! And so was the letter. I guess she really can be a sweet person when she's not stuck on herself like she always was in my opinion.
I think she redeemed herself in the last book. Obviously being married to a Weasley has changed her!

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It's good to see them friends again. I wonder if they'll ever be able to be as close as they were before.
We will see them getting closer, but not for a little while yet.

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Love the party favors! Very creative. And I assume that Hermione tested them to make sure that's all they did.
It kinda just came to me while I was writing the chapter. Usually I have a plan of a post in my head and what I want to include but it sort-of just popped in

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I think she has the most gorgeous hair I've ever seen! Loved it in the 5th movie.
SAME! Its soo pretty! Though I couldn't believe it when she dyed it brown!

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It's not too long, and certainly not boring at all! And being stuck somewhere is generally a term used for a bad occurrence, which this ff is not. Great post Sophie.
Aww thank you I'll post more not this week but next weekend. How does that sound?

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Great post, Sophie! It wasn't long and it wasn't boring! I promise
Sorry my comments short, I have to go take my art final... like now
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Sorry my comments short, I have to go take my art final... like now
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Thanks I finished art and math and now I have Geology left... the dreaded subject. And I felt bad for not leaving a longer review, since it's the second time in a row So, I'm going to do another review.
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Hope you like it! Bill and Fleur. Inside the box was a beautiful pearl bracelet and there was a second smaller box with a tiny "G" charm inside.
Naw, that was sweet of them
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"Ginny, I need to go and set up the Great Hall tonight after dinner. If you want you could come along because Ron isn't that much of a hand." Hermione asked, her nose deep in a book.
I'm with Connie's wave length... Will they ever get back to the way things were before? It just seems so...formal and what not.
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"Yeah, don't get her started Ginny!"[/COLOR] Ron shouted over. Hermione threw him an icy glare and he abruptly shut up and turned back around to Harry who was smirking.
That made me chuckle; Sounds like something they would do.
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[COLOR="seagreen"]"Fred and George sent me a massive supply of sweets. They turn your fingers green but, you go back to normal after a few hours."
What else did they put in them??
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I love how you tacked that on at the end
Great post, again, Sophie
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Thanks I finished art and math and now I have Geology left... the dreaded subject. And I felt bad for not leaving a longer review, since it's the second time in a row So, I'm going to do another review.
I'm glad you only have geology left. All mines got cancelled and have been resceduleld for Tuesday...yuck

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Well I only have a brother and he is a nasty wee begger. So I wish he was more like Chalrie. I always say to my mum. Why could I have Rupert Grint as my big brother?


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Naw, that was sweet of them
I think that Fleur really redems herself in the last book and I like to bring out her kinder side. She may play a more important part in future posts.

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I'm with Connie's wave length... Will they ever get back to the way things were before? It just seems so...formal and what not.
Well I'm glad you've noticed because thats the way I hoped it would come across. They seem to be walking on eggshells-is that how you say it? Don't want to say anything in case it offends the other.


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What else did they put in them??
It would be funny but I wouldn't want to get the twins into much trouble. I'm sure Proffessor McGonngall would have had something to say about that.

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I love how you tacked that on at the end
Great post, again, Sophie
Funny you should mention that. It was only when I was reading over it once I had posted that I noticed I hadn't put it in. So I personally thought it was rubbish

Thanks for commenting again Emilly. I understand you've been busy and I know its not usually like you to put a wee quick comment but I don't mind. I'm just glad you read it! So thanks again
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I am extremely sorry Forgive me??? I started Beta-ing then my mum came upstairs shouting 'You OK? Hope you're studying!' and I was like SHUT INTERNET EXPLORER in rushed panic!!

Your spelling actually was pretty good

I loved this, Luna is lovely, glad Gin is in the Quidditch team (because we didn't know already)

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I am extremely sorry Forgive me??? I started Beta-ing then my mum came upstairs shouting 'You OK? Hope you're studying!' and I was like SHUT INTERNET EXPLORER in rushed panic!!

Your spelling actually was pretty good

I loved this, Luna is lovely, glad Gin is in the Quidditch team (because we didn't know already)

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Hmm..I'll have to think about that j/k
I never thought I'd say this but, you study way too much! Exams are starting over on Tuesday!
Only pretty good- your too nice, its awfull

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HEY LILLY!

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Aww, thank you, but it is nowhere near is good as yours-
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"Mum!" I yelled dropping my trunk and running into her arms.

"Oh Ginny. How are you Dear?" She said pulling away and holding my face in her hands.

"I'm good. Glad to be home." I smiled hugging her again as Ron-Ron struggled to get a hug off his mummy.

"You seem to have grown. Both of you!" She said stepping back for a good look at us. "Oh I've missed you terribly. And Harry," she pushed past us to get to Harry and gave him a hug too. "How are you?"

"I'm fine thank you Mrs.Weasley. Thank you for having me."

"Oft, Harry. This is your home. You're welcome here. And I thought you'd have learned that after, what five, six years, that it's Molly. No need to be so formal pet." she rubbed his cheek.

Harry smiled politely.

"Fred and George are coming around later. They are bringing a friend. Emily, I think the girl's name is."

"Oh I think I know who you're talking about, mum. She's in Fred and George's year. I see her in the common room from time to time. She seems nice."

"And Charlie is coming home for Christmas tomorrow."
Mum said continuing from where she left off with a big smile on her face.

"Nice, though I don't imagine he'll be brinning anyone." Ron mumbled with a mouth full of food already. "All he cares about are those bloody dragons."

"And all you care about is bloody cake!" I said in a matter of fact tone!

Mum tutted, "Behave." I sighed to myself. If only she knew half of the antics the we get up to!

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We unpacked and mum cooked a lovely meal. We sat around the table and made polite conversation, but we were all tired so decided an early night would be best.

However I couldn't contain my excitment for the holidays and I tossed and turned for a good hour or so before I decided I needed a glass of water.

As I made my way down the long and windy staircase, I noticed lights were still on in the sitting room and kitchen. As I reached the kitchen door, I noticed my mum sitting at the table with her back to the door.

"Mum," I whispered not wanting to startle her or take her from her thoughts.

"Oh, Ginny. Are you ok? Why are you up?"

"I'm just down for a drink I said pointing to the tap and reaching into the cupboard for a glass."
I sat on the worktop with the glass and took small sipps. I jumped as the kettle made a popping sound.

"Would you not rather have some tea?" Mum asked.

"It will keep you warm."

"Yeah, ok."
I emptied the water down the sink then joined mum at the table.
"So how've you been, mum.?"

"Oh you know. Not much has happened. These are dark days, Ginny. I worry about you and your brothers constantly. It's all I think about. I fear for your dad, everyday when he goes to work. I have... everything here,"
she said with a sigh, looking around the room with her hands in the air, "I just don't have my beautiful children." She patted my cheek and smiled. Her eyes twinkled in the dim light.

"You shouldn't worry about us mum. Hogwarts is the safest place for me and Ron, and Bill and Charlie are all grown up. They know what they are doing. Fred and George; well for them, business is booming, so don't worry."

"And Percy," she said in a small whisper. She had been concentrating on the table and I noticed a lonely tear fall onto the wood. I reached across the table and took her hand, giving it a squeeze.

"Mum," I said in barely a whisper as my voice broke. "He's out there somewhere. He'll come back when he's ready."

"You know,"
she said looking up forcing a smile, "I've kept his room the same since the day he left. I occasionally go in with a duster and clean the windowsills or change the bedsheets or curtains. I continue like he'd never gone.""And you," she said pointing her finger into my hand she was holding, "You are most definitely my second worry."

"Me?"
I was flabbergasted, why did she worry about me?

"You, I just worry because, if you're not playing quidditch, you're in the hospital wing." She smiled her familiar mummsy smile."And every holiday, when you're home, you seem to have grown up much more than the time before. And do you know where I've seen it most?" She paused and I shook my head. "With you and Harry." She paused again "Ginny, I just worry that this has become more than a silly little teenage infactuation. You know that I love Harry, but this is so different. It's amazing the difference that three months makes. You both are very grown up about this whole relationship. Back in the summer, you were both just... oh I don't know, you both just rushed things. Suddenly everything was all better now that Harry was there. You were inseperable and spent all your time together. But now you have this connection, you have built up this strange, trust...no trust is the wrong word, its like at summer you would hold hands and he'd have his arm around you but I don't see that now. That reminded me it was only a little teenage crush, but now I don't have that reminder. I only wonder how close you have got. I don't want you rushing things. You're still my baby. I just remember how upset you were when he told you it was over before the summer. I just worry that there will be more damage if he does it again. I'll be here for you though. I'm a mum, its part of the job description. You can tell me anything, dear."

"Mum, Harry is not going to leave me anytime soon." I laughed shaking my head.

"Thats not what I mean Ginny." I stopped laughing and gave her a quizzically look."Please just remember how old you are. Your going to be sixteen in March Ginny and Harry is older."

"So? He's older by what, nine ten months. Look, I think we should leave this conversation where it is before it becomes something I don't feel like discussing."
I stood up. "Please don't worry about me mum." I walked round to her and kissed her curls before heading upstairs to my room and pulling the covers snuggly around me.

I closed my eyes and began to think "Did she really expect me to understand that? I'm a teenager for goodness sake. I live to learn from my mistakes." And in total frustration, I fell asleep.



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What ever are you talking about?!??!?!?!?!?!??! This is a beautiful post! Absolutely beautiful! There's not a single part I can highlight on and say I really liked this, or that was my favorite, or this and that. I can't because it was perfect word for word. I think you have Molly down to a T and I love how reserved and polite Harry is to Molly. You're right in writing what you had her say, because he has always treated her that way.
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See, writing things like this just makes it even better. I can SO MUCH see her smiling like that. Brilliant Sophie.
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"Ginny, I just worry that this has become more than a silly little teenage infactuation. You know that I love Harry, but this is so different. It's amazing the difference that three months makes. You both are very grown up about this whole relationship. Back in the summer, you were both just... oh I don't know, you both just rushed things. Suddenly everything was all better now that Harry was there. You were inseperable and spent all your time together. But now you have this connection, you have built up this strange, trust...no trust is the wrong word, its like at summer you would hold hands and he'd have his arm around you but I don't see that now. That reminded me it was only a little teenage crush, but now I don't have that reminder. I only wonder how close you have got.
Sophie, this part I do believe is my favorite part. I just don't understand how you wrote it so eloquently and,... well, like from experience. But, this is well beyond your age. How could you possibly know to write this? Brilliant Sophie. You are certainly a rare talent. I'll be watching for your next post. And A very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too.


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Hey Connie...Was this intentional, cause I'm Soph, or is it because I write in first person? Sorry, I'm a bit slow tonight. I'm just after a sugar rush. I ate way too much chocolate at the German Market

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This is a beautiful post! Absolutely beautiful! There's not a single part I can highlight on and say I really liked this, or that was my favorite, or this and that. I can't because it was perfect word for word.
Thank you Connie I just kinda decided that maybe we should see what Molly has to say about Harry and Ginny. I do think she has grown up quite alot and I feel we don't really enough of her in the books and I don't thinl she is portrayed very well in the films.

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LOL I didn't really know what other word I could use to describe her smile and it is mummsy

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Believe me, I actually did! I don't really know but it just depends on how I feel when I write. Sometimes when I feel like I haven't done enough and I'm due to post, I force myself to write but it's never good. I need to get into the write mood and when I got the idea for this chapter, I knew I had to put it in because we'll see Molly's attitudes change slightly towards them.

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Fantastic post, Sophie! Please PAMS!
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“Ginny. Ginny, dear Merry Christmas. It’s time to get up.” I could hear my mum’s voice from the side of my bed
“Merry Christmas mum!” I yawned, stretched then pulled her into a hug and held her longer than she expected. I whispered to her, “It’s not only Harry that gets m hugs.” She squeezed me tighter but it got to the point where she had been in my bubble long enough and I wanted my space back!
“Ok mum, I love you too but did I hear you say Charlie’s home?” She smiled and nodded and I could feel a grin creep upon my face. I jumped out of bed and ran as fast as I could into the kitchen where I heard Charlie’s familiar laugh.
“CHARLIE!” I screamed making sure everyone recognised my presence and then jumped into his arms for as big brother bone crushing hug.
“Hey, Ginny!” He said spinning me round and round. He eventually set me on my feet and laughed.
“Ginny, you have bed hair.” He told me as he continued laughing. My hands went automatically to my head and felt the messy lump. Embarrassed, I folded my arms across my chest and pouted. I heard more laughing and turned around to all the family who were laughing except Harry who just smiled a smile that lit up the whole room and he held his arms open for me. I fell into his embrace and wrapped myself around his body. “Merry Christmas Harry.” I whispered into his chest. “Merry Christmas Gin.” He kissed the top of my head and wrapped his arms around my shoulders. “I love you Harry.” I stretched up on my tippy toes to reach his face. He knew what I was asking for but only bent down and gave me the shortest of pecks on the side of my lips. I huffed loudly, expecting he would give in to me but he whispered in my ear, “Really Ginny, not in company. We can spend some time alone later.”

I went upstairs and changed into my Christmas frock. It was gold and sparkly so it complimented the colour of my hair which had been tamed and put into loose curls. The cold winter sun outside made the snow covered ground glitter. It made my dress sparkle too like a great golden Christmas bauble. Smells from the kitchen had crept their way upstairs and had made my nose tingle. My hungry stomach growled. It would just have to be a few hours more patient.

After playing countless games of charades and going back for third and fourth helpings of pudding, the house was silent. We were all in a food coma. We had been joined by Remus and Tonks after dinner who announced they had got married. It was a private service with no guests. They did it their own way I suppose.

I could feel myself nodding off against Harry's shoulder. I felt his hand snake into mine and I felt him pull me to my feet. I lead him upstairs to my room. Mum came out of the bathroom and glanced at our intertwined hands. She had watched harry kiss me up against the wall. I don't know how that made her feel, but I was extremely embarrassed and I quickly pulled Harry into my room as he hadn't noticed she was watching.

"Uh, I'm just so over being a witch. I wish I was a muggle. They have an easy life. I bet they don't need to worry about mums spying on them.” I complained as I shut the room door.

“Wait. What? Why are you saying that? What brought this on?” Harry asked confused

“It's just that I was talking to mum the other night and all she has done since we've gone back to school is worry. And that worries me that it's all she does. She has lost her life. She doesn't do anything anymore. She used to have friends she would have round for tea, but not anymore. And she has been watching us like a hawk Harry.” I said worried running a hand through my hair

“Well I think we can arrange a Muggle experience for you.” Harry said wiggling his eyebrows. I wrapped my arms around him from behind.

“Oh yeah! Like what?” I asked
He turned around and places his hands on my hips and brought me closer to him. He bent his head down and I stared into his eyes. His tongue traced over his lower lip teasing me. Ever so slowly without breaking eye contact he pressed his lips to mine. I could feel the blood beneath my skin boil as his hands ran over my body. I jumped up and wrapped my legs around his waist and I felt a smile form on his lips. He moved over to my bed and sat on the edge but was surprised when I pushed him back. I broke away smiling.

“Well that was nice.” He said

“Harry, I'm not finished.” And I kissed him softly working up to a hot and fiery kiss.
“Oh but I am. Merry Christmas Ginny!” He looked over at the window.
I turned to him and smiled. “I thought we agreed no presents.”

So there you go. Sorry it kinda just ends. You might be able to guess. I have bits and pieces of the next chapter, its just trying to put them all together... I hope you all had a good Christmas and all the best to all of you for the New Year,
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