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Old 07-23-2010, 09:34 PM   #251 (permalink)
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"Well, look who we have here!" She beamed sarcastically.
"Lavender, what is your problem?" I asked her.
"Oh, I guess you didn't hear then?" She smirked at me.
"Lavender!" Dean said in a warning tone.
"About the baby?" She continued; I shook my head.
"Is everything ok with....with...it...I mean the baby." I was sure she was having us all on but I hoped for the sake of my niece or nephew if she was pregnant that everything was ok.
She huffed and rolled her eyes. "There was no baby!" I was correct.
"What!" I shouted. "You mean you...you lied about the whole thing."
"Well, not exactly."
"You better get your story straight!"
"Well, I assumed Dean would have told you?" She said, turning her head and looking up at Dean.
"Don't bring me into this!" He said backing away from us.
"Don't bring you into it? You were in it from the start. You started it!" She seemed angry at him. I didn't understand; how did this have anything to do with him?
"Can someone please tell me what’s going on?"
"You want to know something, back a few months ago, when you were with Dean, because you wouldn't let him do anymore than kiss you, he came to me, looking for some fun. We got drunk and woke up next to each other one night after a Quidditch match. So we met up in the room of requirement. We had regular meetings, every evening after dinner." She told me with a smirk.
"Is this true?" I looked to Dean who had a sorry expression on his face.
"I'm sorry Ginny. I was going to end it. I was so glad you did it first though. I'm so sorry."
"After all that grief you put me through once I broke up with you. I thought tonight we could maybe start over as friends, but now, I don't think that’s possible." I told him. I felt so betrayed. I could feel the anger boiling up inside me. One tear spilled out over my eye. This was too much to take in. "And what about Ron? All that about him being the father of a made up baby. You are so sick!" I spat the words at her. "You pretended that you had another life growing inside you. And even worse, my brother thinks he is the father of a child he knew he couldn't help conceive. You are a twisted, horrific little.... Grrrrr." Was all I managed to get out.
"Well, Ginny." She began. "I didn't know if anything happened between me and Dean and if we did, like do it, there was a possibility I could be preggers as I was due ...."
"Stop! Stop! Stop!" I said with my hands over my ears. But she continued. "However, as it goes, it turns out, I was just you know...late, and Madam Pomfrey confirmed for me, I am still pure." She smiled to herself, obviously pleased she clearly got her point across.
"So why would you blame Ron?" I asked as I thought it myself.
She nodded towards Dean and said, “Well, he’s not exactly a father figure is he? And then...”
"Wait and Ron is a father figure?" I butted in.
"If you'd let me finish..." Then she continued "... And there was also the possibility if Ron fell for the lie that he'd come back to me."
"Dream on Lavender. I'm out." And I turned on my heel and headed back towards my living quarters.



It's very short, but I promise to post again tomorrow.
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p.s I would like to thank Sydnie who looked over this chapter for me. Your a star-thanks soo much. And also to my bestie, Katie, who said she would be my Beta reader, because my spelling is atrocious-I think thats how you spell it So thank you

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"Is everything ok with....with...it...I mean the baby." I was sure she was having us all on but I hoped for the sake of my niece or nephew if she was pregnant that everything was ok.
It was a great piece of writing. Although Ginny was quite certain the pregnancy was a lie, she was still compassionate for the sake of baby baby if there was one. A very moral act of kindness.
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Ginny's on a roll! Get her Ginny!
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Sophie, I really love how you present your story. Very nicely written. I'll be watching for your next post.
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She huffed and rolled her eyes. "There was no baby!" I was correct.
Duh! You weren't fooling anyone, you idiot!
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What does he have to do with anything??
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Bimbo say what??
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Seriously? Dean sure did lower his standards... Sickening. *Glares at Dean* You disgust me, Dean!

Great post, Sophie! PLEASE PAMS!

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Lavender Brown.. I'm ashamed of you! ASHAMED I SAY ASHAMED!

Oookaay, Ginny you need some love! Go find Harry. HARRY!!! GET OVER HERE!

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I feel bad for almost everyone in your story! Waaaaa!

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OMG :O Lavander is pure EVIL!!!!!!!! Great post Loved it
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What does he have to do with anything??
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great post! Dean and Lavender disgust me! ugh!
Don't they! Grrrrr... theres more soon

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Post 28
I went straight to my room in total frustration. How dare she? I must remember to send my mum an owl in the morning explaining the events. Talking to myself was something I had started to do. It made me feel slightly more sociable, as I keep to myself most of the time. I pulled off my robes in frustration and slipped on my cosy pyjamas before jumping into bed. Although I felt tired, I couldn't sleep. It was times like these I wish I had Harry to snuggle up to. I missed his protective arms, his handsome face, his addictive smell and most of all his loving and caring nature. I tossed and turned for most of the night before getting out of bed and crossing the hall to Harry's room and climbing into his bed and curling up in his quilt and surrounding myself with his big fluffy pillows. I could smell him on the bed sheets and I breathed a sigh of relief. It reminded me that he was real and was coming back for me. It was only a few more days till the beginning of October. I would see him soon enough, that’s what kept me going.
I woke early the next morning. I made Harry's bed and trailed myself back through to my room. It was Saturday the 28th of September, three days until they come home. I had no classes today and felt like having an easy day. I decided to make my own breakfast in the small kitchen we have in the dorm and afterwards I cleaned the place from top to toe. I went to the library to return books and on my way back, I glanced at the door to the Gryffindor Common room. It had been so long since I had seen Luna and Neville so I took a step towards to door.
"Hello Miss Weasley, long time no see." The fat lady sang in her soprano voice.
"Crumple-Horned Snorkack."
"You may enter." She said and the door swung open.
I entered through the portrait hole and rounded the corner into the common room. I looked around to find Neville finishing homework and Luna with her nose in the latest edition of the Quibbler. Why was she in here? She's not a Gryffindor. She looked up and smiled. "Good morning Ginny. How nice to see you!" she beamed. Neville too looked up as I sat on the sofa across from them. "Ah, Ginny. It’s been too long, how are you?"
"Yeah, I'm good thanks. How are you guys?"
"Not bad, yeah I’m good.” Were their replies.
"So..Uh...When do Harry, Ron and Hermione get back?" Neville asked. His question startled me.
"How do you even...know about that?"
"McGonagall told all the Gryffindors. She said that we should all know."
"Oh, ok. They get back at the start of October."
"Ooo, that’s not long!" Luna said, stating the obvious. "We should have a party when they get back or something." I thought about that but I wanted them all to myself when they got back. Neville must have noticed my facial expression while thinking. "Maybe we should wait until they're settled in before we have a party."
Luna still wore a look of enthusiasm on her face. "I like parties with all the decorations and party food and pumpkin juice. We can have it whenever."
We sat and talked for a good while, catching up with each other. I had invited them around to the dorm for dinner tonight. Just as I was about to leave and start on dinner preparations someone shouted my name. "Ginny!" I turned around just as I was about to step out the portrait hole to see Dean with an apologetic smile on his face. "Ginny, I'm...I'm really, really sorry about everything. When we were together, I was a horrible idiot and about the whole Lavender thing. She made it out to be more than it was, honest." He said with great sorrow.
"Honest?" I quoted him. He nodded his head with great sincerity. "Because Dean you have never been remotely honest with me. You lied to me! Friends don't lie to each other! They just don't. And as for Lavender Brown, I don't want to hear another thing about that girl! She has caused havoc in my life, and I'm through with her."
"But Ginny, Lavender and I we didn't... you know have..." He said before I butted in. I closed my eyes and put my hands up in front of me.
"Ok Dean I get it. But really, too much information."
"I'm so sorry Ginny. Please forgive me. Can we please stay friends?"
"Dean... Don't you understand? Sure I forgive you because at the end of the day, what’s done is done. But we were never friends. It’s going to take a lot more than an apology and forgiveness for us to suddenly become friends." I walked away he shouted after me. "Well we can work at it then Ginny!" I kept me head down all the way back to our dorm. I had no time for Dean. I so desperately needed to clear my head and Dean being all in my face certainly was not helping. As I wandered back to the dorm I passed the Quidditch cabinet. On the middle of the shelf was the trophy with Gryffindor engraved into the metal several times - much more often than the other houses. There were many pictures surrounding the shiny silver trophy. I looked to last year’s team. Harry was standing in the middle. He looked so proud as he stood beside Ron and I. I looked back to a picture on the opposite side. It was 30 years earlier. But this time it was James Potter stood with his team surrounding him. It amazed me how much Harry was like him. I looked back at the other picture. I looked so happy in it. I seemed relaxed and at ease. I looked like I belonged as I celebrated with the rest of the team. Then I caught my reflection in the glass. I looked unhappy. Out of place. My face looked long and drawn. I looked tired but I wasn't, I felt perfectly awake. I hadn't been on my broom in such a long time. Maybe I had lost touch. I smiled to myself and headed back to the dorm, quickly grabbing my broom and heading for the Quidditch pitch.
It felt good to be back on my broom. I whizzed around the field twice at normal pace and once double speed and I kept going like that for a good while. I stopped to take in the view, up high you could see everything; the castle, the lake, the forest, Hagrid’s hut and the Whomping Willow whose leaves had changed from radiant greens to coppery oranges and reds. A cold wind felt comforting to me. I realised that I had been trapped inside for too long. It was like trying something for the first time. I had missed flying. At the sun began to set behind the mountains, I landed back on the ground. I had to get back for Neville and Luna coming around.

and of course

HARRY HUGS FOR EVERYONE!


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DRACO HUG FOR GABBEH!


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Great post!! I'm so glad, I'm at an advantage so I know what's going to happen!!!! WOOHOO, HAHA!!!

I loved it the first time I read it, and the second time

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OHMYWORD DEAN! SERIOUSLY! I feel like killing you and hanging out with Zacharias Smith! SHUT UP! YOUR A GIT AND A PRAT! She wants absolutely nothing to do with you, your soooo dumb!

Ginny.. I feel bad for you!

Wonderful job with the story! I'm loving every part of it, well... Maybe not the Dean parts j/k, those are funny sometimes!

Awesome job!

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Great post, Sophie! Dean is an idiot and I don't think they're going to be friends anytime soon. I'm glad the trio will be back soon. They will be back soon, right? Or is that what they just told Ginny? Can I have a George and Fred hug? I the twins!
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Great Sophie I think Dean is really stupid too think Ginny will forgive him just like that. She shouldn't fogive him at all.
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Great post, Sophie! Dean is an idiot and I don't think they're going to be friends anytime soon.
I'm sure we'll find out in the next post!

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I'm glad the trio will be back soon. They will be back soon, right? Or is that what they just told Ginny?
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[QUOTE=SarahLestrange;9587078]I agree with Katie the twins are almost as amazing as this new post! which is spectacular of course![.QUOTE]
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Neville and Luna came round for dinner around six thirty and didn't leave until late that night. I was so tired that when I woke up I couldn't remember much from the previous night. I had fallen asleep on top of Harry's quilt wearing my pyjama bottoms and my t-shirt from yesterday. I trudged into the bathroom like every other morning, washed and then went to breakfast. I pulled a piece of parchment, ink and quill out of my bag and started scribbling a letter to mum. Once I had finished writing and signed my name with a few kisses beneath, I walked briskly out of the great hall and to the Owlery. It was a blustery day outside and the leaves had turned the most brilliant shade of orange. The coppery tones matched the colour of my hair as the fallen leaves danced around my face in the wind. As I climbed the steps and made my way inside to all the tweeting Owls, I remembered that mum had not yet replied to my last letter. That meant that Errol was still at the Burrow. I stood desperate and frustrated. As I was about to leave, a small snow white owl swooped in carrying a rather large mouse. Hedwig. I approached her as she swallowed the remains of the animal. I petted her soft feathers. "So did you enjoy that mouse for breakfast?" I said as she looked at me, remembering the face. "Could you do me a favour? Take this to the Burrow?" At that she snatched the parchment out of my hand and took of flying at rapid speeds. I watched her until I could see her no more and decided it was time to go back to the dorm and study. As I went to leave for a second time Dean was blocking my exit from the door. "Excuse me." I said politely keeping my head down attempting not to engage in conversation. "Oh, hi Ginny." He seemed too happy to see me. "How are you? Look...I just wanted to say about yesterday, I really meant it when I said we could work on our friendship together."
"Ok Dean but sorry I'm really busy just now, can we talk later or something?
"Sure Ginny!" he beamed. "Do you want to come round to the common room or do you want me to come round to your dorm?" He asked.
"Umm... I...didn't..." I began but he butted in.
"I’m free anytime after dinner."
"Emmmm... I wasn't..." I couldn't think how to tell him no.
"I'll come over around seven and we can have some fun." he smiled.
"Fun?" I spat the word at him.
"Yeah some fun." He said cheery and excited. He punched my arm playfully. "Then we can go out patrolling afterwards." He must have seen the look of uncertainty on my face. "Come on Ginny. We can only try to help this sorry relationship. I'd rather be your friend than your boyfriend or nothing at all. I'll see you later." He moved around me and I continued down the steps.
They rest of the day passed by far too slowly for my liking. After my encounter with Dean, I felt completely helpless about tonight I was buzzing for Harry, Ron and Hermione to come home. It was only a few days. After dinner I walked miserably back to the dorm. I was surprised to see Hedwig perched on the window ledge in the living room. I put my wand along with my other belongings down on the coffee table and opened the window. I noticed the handwrighting on the envelopes as my mums. There were two letters enclosed. The first was the reply to the letter I sent her last week. The second however was shorter.

Oh Ginny Dear, Sorry I didn't reply sooner. But there's been a bit of bad news. Eroll died a few nights ago. He was delivering your reply to my letter from last week and once again he flew into the window. I'm so sorry love but it seems that this time it was one crash too many.
It’s so nice of Harry to let you use Hedwig. I made sure I fed her before replying. Tell him thank you. Are they back!? Send them all my love and Give Ron a big Hug from his Mummy.
I love you Ginny. Take care.
Mum x


Eroll died. Oh no. He was my hand-me-down Owl that has been with the family since Bill started at Hogwarts. Once all me brothers got fed up of him, I made it my job to look after and care for him. And mum brought the thoughts of Harry, Ron and Hermione back. Then there was three familiar loud knocks at the door. Thinking quickly I wrapped my duvet around my body and put a fake tired look on my face and went open the door. "Hey Ginny!" Dean smiled. "He took one look at me and asked "Oh Ginny are you ok? You don't look to well."
"Well Dean." I said in a quiet and hoarse voice. "I can't say I'm too good. I feel terrible. I think I may be coming down with something." He placed his palm to my forehead. I flinched at his touch. I hate people getting too close or touching me without permission. The only person aloud to do that is Harry. "But unfortunately he's not here" I thought to myself. He pushed me in the door and let himself in."Don't worry, I'll look after you. Now let’s get you to bed Ginny." He said and smiled and laughed to himself. I didn't get the joke and I didn't like the way he barged in.


Post 30

"Dean really I think you should leave." I said getting angry. There was something about his company that made me feel unsafe.
He walked into up the steps that led to Harry's and my room and barged into my room gripping my wrists tightly and pulling me along. He threw me onto the bed. "Well if you’re not well you should rest up Ginny." He spat at me.
"Umm I sleep in the other room across the hall." I told him just trying to hurt him. It didn't hurt him. It mad him mad. "Oh right with Perfect Potter. You must think I'm stupid! I know that you don't like me! But if I need to I'll make you like me. Ginny we were so good together. I want you and I will have you." He demanded.
"Don't you dare tell me what I can and cannot do" I screamed as he whispered in my ear. I tried do hard to wriggle free of his grasp. He fiercely pressed his lips to mine. I turned my head but he continued to kiss fiercely down my neck and pull my blouse open. I began to cry. His lips were hard and cold. He was too strong. He wouldn't move.
"I miss you Ginny and isn't it so convenient that your Perfect Potter isn't here. He's out saving the rest of the world. Pity he's not here to save you. And you want to know something; I'm fed up trying to get your attention. Fed up being nice to you." He touched me roughly and I sobbed louder begging him to stop. He pulled back to look at me. I spat in his face and kicked him in the stomach winding him and causing him to roll over onto his side and freeing me from his strong grasp. I started screaming. I searched my pockets for my wand as I ran into the living room. "Accio Wand!" I shouted in a clear but frantic voice. It flew into my hand from the coffee table as I walked backwards to the door. "Get back here!" He shouted. I could here his footsteps and he come into the living room clutching his stomach. "Stupefy!" I shouted pointing my wand at him as the tears were streaming down my face. The door of the dorm opened. I gasped scared at everything that was happening. "Gin." His soft velvet voice said.


HARRY HUGS FOR EVERYONE

DRACO HUGS FOR GABBEH

FRED and GEORGE HUGS FOR EMILY AND LAUREN


See you soon

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Old 07-27-2010, 11:23 AM   #270 (permalink)
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ok woaw dean is messed up :O Is it harry ? Great chapter PAMS
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Dean is a maniac!!!!!!:@

Oh Ginny, its OK. Be brave!!

Harry??? Have you come to the rescue??
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Dean is completely mental! Too bad she didn't use the Bat-bogey Hex...
*Huggles Ginny*
IS IT HARRY!?!?! I think it is! And it's kind of mean to leave it there, especially if you're going on vacation! Hurry up and PAMS!!! Please?
Great post by the way And thanks for my George and Fred hug
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Hello Sophie. My goodness! I can't believe how well your story is coming along! Well, I shouldn't be surprised, you are a very good writer. Loved this line.
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Talking to myself was something I had started to do. It made me feel slightly more sociable, as I keep to myself most of the time.
I wonder if she finds herself good company?
And here's another great line:
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"Dean... Don't you understand? Sure I forgive you because at the end of the day, what’s done is done.
Sophie, this next part is brilliant! I love how she noticed herself in the reflextion of the trophie case.
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I looked back at the other picture. I looked so happy in it. I seemed relaxed and at ease. I looked like I belonged as I celebrated with the rest of the team. Then I caught my reflection in the glass. I looked unhappy. Out of place. My face looked long and drawn. I looked tired but I wasn't, I felt perfectly awake. I hadn't been on my broom in such a long time. Maybe I had lost touch. I smiled to myself and headed back to the dorm, quickly grabbing my broom and heading for the Quidditch pitch.
It felt good to be back on my broom. I whizzed around the field twice at normal pace and once double speed and I kept going like that for a good while. I stopped to take in the view, up high you could see everything; the castle, the lake, the forest, Hagrid’s hut and the Whomping Willow whose leaves had changed from radiant greens to coppery oranges and reds. A cold wind felt comforting to me. I realised that I had been trapped inside for too long. It was like trying something for the first time. I had missed flying. At the sun began to set behind the mountains, I landed back on the ground. I had to get back for Neville and Luna coming around.
I loved it Sophie. You did great getting Ginny back on her broom, and in the air. I felt refreshed as I read along with her.
I don't like Dean trying to force his friendship on Ginny. This doesn't look good.
Great post Sophie!

OK, now so I don't double post I'll get on with the next post, right here on this one.

Sophie this is another tremendous post! Loved this part. It was so beautiful.
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It was a blustery day outside and the leaves had turned the most brilliant shade of orange. The coppery tones matched the colour of my hair as the fallen leaves danced around my face in the wind.
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Eroll died. Oh no.
Poor Eroll. he did have a long life of service to the family didn't he. He deserves this rest now.
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Then there was three familiar loud knocks at the door.
Don't answer it Ginny! It's that Dean! And he's doing a paridy of Dr. Jeckell, and Mr Hyde!
My goodness! What is wrong with Dean?!?!?! I always somewhat liked him in
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I spat in his face and kicked him in the stomach winding him and causing him to roll over onto his side and freeing me from his strong grasp.
He deserves to be kicked someplace else. But, Ginny did good to kick hard and I hope she gets away!
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The door of the dorm opened. I gasped scared at everything that was happening. "Gin." His soft velvet voice said.
Oh, good! I hope it's Harry, but even if it's Neville it's help.
Great posts Sophie. I'm so sorry, I didn't get to comment before you left. I hope you have a great time. I'll miss you. And I'll be wathing for you to get back, and post another chapter.
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Hey sophie I LOVE LOVE LOVE the post!!! Yay! Fred and George hugs!! Thanks Sophie hope you have a great time on your trip! Much love sent your way XD
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Girl.. I'm FREAKING OUT! I want that to be Harry so badly, ohmyword I WILL MURDER YOU DEAN! I WILL GET DEAN WINCHESTER TO HUNT YOU DOWN! Gosh.. Ugh, he's a disturbing, disgusting, immature, messed up.... *continues on her long rant* oh I wanna murder him!

Ginny! Ginny! THAT IS HARRY! I SAY IT IS!

Oh my word.. ERROL DIED!?!?!!? Waaaaaaaaaaa! That's sooo sad!

I really hope that's Harry

(and a Draco hug! Yippee)

LOVE IT LOADS! It's amazing Sophie!
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