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| Dusty Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) The cellar holds unfinished confections of storytelling, giving readers a glimpse into creative ideas that may one day be revived. |
07-14-2010, 11:19 PM
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| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Your welcome
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07-15-2010, 02:46 AM
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#227 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Loved it
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07-15-2010, 10:45 AM
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#228 (permalink)
|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by SarahLestrange yea sorry i meant charlie and yes ron cried after he got off the phone with LAVender Oh yeah..sorry about that. I forgot  Sorry.
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07-15-2010, 11:43 AM
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#229 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Fabulous location Soph!!!
I do know what you mean
Thanks for the hug Harry
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07-15-2010, 08:34 PM
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#230 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Sophie. Another great post! Quote:
"Poppy! We've got oursel's a fainter. Oh 'iya Mrs.Weasley an' theres yer' Charlie. How you gettin' on wif them dragons? And hows you gettin' on Ginny? Feelin' bett'r" Hagrid came in carrying Lavender in his big chunky arms and placed her gently on a bed.
What's up with Lavender? Ginny getting to much attention for her likes? Did she fake afaint so she could get in the hospital wing to drop the bomb on Mrs. Weasley. Quote:
"Hold on now, don't diss a Weasley and you especsially can't since you slept with one and if the baby your carrying is our niece or nephew." Charlie stood up for me
Good for Charlie. But, I wish he would have said, 'if' instead of since. Quote:
He's, The Chosen One" I smiled with complete adoration.
Ah, Sophie, I loved that line! Quote:
"Send Daddy my love. Love you guys."
"Love you too, Ginny." They said in unison before giving me a hug and a kiss on the forehead. I didn't wake up that night or have any dreams or nightmares. All I felt was the worry I had for my best friend, my brother, and the love of my life.
What a wonderful way to end your post! Great job Sophie! I'll be watching for your next.
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07-15-2010, 09:37 PM
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|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Fabulous location Soph!!!  I know right! Don't you just love it! I'm so glad Teddy's back Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP Thanks for the hug Harry  Form now on Everyone gets Harry Hugs! Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Hello Sophie. Another great post! Hey Connie! Why thank you Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Did she fake afaint so she could get in the hospital wing to drop the bomb on Mrs. Weasley. It does seem like that doesn't it? Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Good for Charlie. But, I wish he would have said, 'if' instead of since. I don't think poor Charlie knows what to believe! Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie What a wonderful way to end your post! Great job Sophie! I'll be watching for your next. Thanks Connie!
and as promised HARRY HUGS FOR EVERYONE!!! |
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07-15-2010, 10:35 PM
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#232 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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| ♥ 2G FC| Narnian!| Fremione|Full Sail Girl ♥| Dramione| Shadowhunter!| Jesse ♥ Quote:
Originally Posted by Morag But time is of the essance and you must be on your way". That so totally sounds like something that Dumbledore would say Quote:
Then he disappeared along with Hermione and Ron. I broke down into tears screaming his name. "HARRY! HARRY! COME BACK HARRY! DON'T LEAVE ME! HARRY!" but he was gone. There was nothing I could do but wait untill he came back.
So sad; it makes me want to hug her Quote:
She spotted me with my mother and Charlie then smirked and began to yell, "The baby, Someone help! The baby!"
Can you kill her off? It would make me happy Quote:
"Mrs.Weasley, I assume Ron told you the news? Where is he? Someone should go and find him?"
I hate her. And I usually don't hate people... But I guess since she's fictional, it's okay... Quote:
"Hold on now, don't diss a Weasley and you especially can't since you slept with one and if the baby your carrying is our niece or nephew." Charlie stood up for me.
Hehe, I love Charlie
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07-16-2010, 06:35 PM
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#233 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black Quote:
Hey Gabbeh I see your finally talking sense Dear. Lavender really needs to get a grip.
Lol! She does..
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think we all need Harry Huggs. This could be a new thing *gets idea*
We do? *backs away* BLAISE SAVE ME! Awww! That's reeeally sweet of you! Quote:
and OHMIGOSH...I realised I've been spelling your name wrong, Super sorry. Please forgive me
You has? It's spelled the same way as in High School Musical?
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07-17-2010, 08:57 PM
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#234 (permalink)
|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Can you kill her off? It would make me happy  Hmmm...now there's an idea! Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy We do? *backs away* BLAISE SAVE ME!  Ok, if you don't want a Harry Huggle, I'll see what I can do... New Post
Ok this is a shortish post but, I'll post sooner this time 
Post 26
The next week followed in the same routine Wake up, go to class, go to dinner, study, shower, sleep. I was a bit of a recluse, though Madame Pompfry had suggested that I take it easy and was only to work in classes periods three and four. My days were full of long emptiness I continued to stay in the heads dorm and only ever came out to go to class or in the evening when she went patrolling. Luna and Nevile would occasionally drop by. They were always welcome.
The clock above the fire in the sitting room of the empty dorm chimmed. I looked up noticing it was nine o'clock. It was time for me to start patrolling. As I grabbed my robe and wand from the coffee table. There were three loud long knocks at the door. I jumped out of my skin rather startled at the noise as I had grow acustom to complete silence. I hestaintly walked over to the door and cautiously opened it.
"Hi Ginny. How are you feeling?" Said a figure whos face was covered by a large bouquet of colourful flowers. A head peeped around the bright bunch of greenery.
"Oh, Hi Dean. You gave me a fright. I'm fine, thanks. Yourself?"
"Not to bad Ginny. These are for you, They're from all the Gryffindors. We're all very worried about you staying here all on your own. Your always welcome to come back."
"Aww, thanks. They're lovely. Tell everyone thank you for me but I think I might just stay here. I enjoy the peace a quiet too much, though I'll be sure to pop in soon."
"Are you ready to go?" He asked.
"Sorry?" I was puzzled. I thought he thought we were going on a date or something!
"Patrolling!" He looked back at me wondering what I thought. He had never come around to get me before going patrolling
"Oh Yeah, that." Its always so ackward with Dean. "Well lets go then." I told him after putting the flowers in the sink in the small kitchen in our dorm.
"So how've you been Ginny. I'm so glad things aren't awkward between us or anything. I was worried if you though they would be." He said as we rounded a corner, passing the Great Hall.
"No, not at all Dean. I'm glad we stayed friends. Things just didn't work for us when we were together. I've been fine thanks. How are you? Did you have a nice summer?" I asked him making polite conversation.
"Yeah it was good. Spend most of it Seamus. We just hung about doing nothing. The days seemed to merge into one another." We turned another corner.
"DEAN!" she yelled. I sooo could not be bothered with her. Please tell me what you think... Things are about to get interesting 
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and HARRY HUGGS FOR EVERYONE!
except you Gabbeh you can get a DRACO HUG!
Last edited by Morag; 07-18-2010 at 02:27 PM.
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07-17-2010, 09:07 PM
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#235 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
Posts: 2,232
Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Loved it  !! Hmmm I have a funny feeling i know who shouted on Dean
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07-17-2010, 09:32 PM
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#236 (permalink)
| I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf
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Great post! I have a feeling I know who shouted Dean's name too...  PLEASE PAMS! |
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07-17-2010, 10:06 PM
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#237 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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GREAT JOB HONEY BUNCH!!!!
Thanks Harry
I think I know who is shouting on him- let me check with the author  Yip, I'm right
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07-18-2010, 12:26 AM
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#238 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New England
Posts: 2,704
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaylee Strap First Year | Dragon..Dragon..Draco.. | | Sirius Lee Black
A Draco hug, for me?! *gasp*  I luff you loads! Hehe
Yea.. If that's the person whom I'm the only fan.. I'm going to make her get a life! Right NOW!
Aaanyways. I want to slap Dean so hard that he exits the galaxy and never EVER comes back! Looove teh update Soph!
Gabbeh
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07-18-2010, 11:25 AM
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#239 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
O_o wonder where this is going *thinks*
Good chapter! Cant wait for more
PAMS!
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥  ___________________Look Who's Back.
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07-18-2010, 11:03 PM
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#240 (permalink)
|  MO Erkling
Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: [GMT-7]
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Anna Keller | Sardines ♥ // Nomsy, yo
Great post  I bet I know who it was that called his name... 
Can't wait for more!!
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07-19-2010, 03:33 PM
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#241 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hello Sophie, Great chapter! Quote:
The next week followed in the same routine Wake up, go to class, go to dinner, study, shower, sleep.
She should hop on her broom and get her head in the clouds so she can have some good thoughts. I think flying would cheer me up from the dulldrums. I'm glad Nevvile and Luna drop by now and then. Quote:
There were three loud long knocks at the door. I jumped out of my skin rather startled at the noise as I had grow acustom to complete silence.
This made me laugh. It's what happens to me when the house is quiet, and I'm reading or something and the phone rings. Quote:
"Yeah it was good. Spend most of it Seamus. We just hung about doing nothing. The days seemed to merge into one another."
This made me think of OtterySt.Catchpole. I miss him so much! Quote:
"DEAN!" she yelled. I sooo could not be bothered with her.
Oh no! Who is it? Quote:
Things are about to get interesting
I think things are already interesting!
Great post Sophie. I'll be watching for your next post.
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07-19-2010, 05:44 PM
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#242 (permalink)
|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Loved it  !! Thanks Kerri Quote:
Originally Posted by Ron&Hermione(L) Hmmm I have a funny feeling i know who shouted on Dean I'm glad you have your thinking cap on Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack Great post! Thanks Emily Quote:
Originally Posted by emilyblack I have a feeling I know who shouted Dean's name too...  PLEASE PAMS!  Well, we'll find out soon enough Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP GREAT JOB HONEY BUNCH!!!!  Thanks Deary Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP I think I know who is shouting on him- let me check with the author  Yip, I'm right   I feel bad now that you know and no-one else. The next chapter will be up soon though so you'll find out in time. Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy A Draco hug, for me?! *gasp*  I luff you loads! Hehe I loff you loads too Gabbeh! Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Yea.. If that's the person whom I'm the only fan.. I'm going to make her get a life! Right NOW! Bit the real question is, is it her??? :whistles: Quote:
Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy Aaanyways. I want to slap Dean so hard that he exits the galaxy and never EVER comes back! Looove teh update Soph! Your comments make me laugh so much Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 O_o wonder where this is going *thinks* I'm glad your thinking Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Evi3e <3 Good chapter! Cant wait for more
PAMS! Thanks Evangeline Quote:
Originally Posted by -Bambi- Great post  I bet I know who it was that called his name... 
Can't wait for more!!  Thanks Sydnie! I'll post soon Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Hello Sophie, Great chapter! She should hop on her broom and get her head in the clouds so she can have some good thoughts. Hey Connie  Thanks for the suggestion , though I don't think I'll be able to fit it in my next Chapter. I love putting all your idea's into my story. I'll see what I can do cause it's getting to a crucial point in the story and I don't know, I'll see though Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie This made me laugh. It's what happens to me when the house is quiet, and I'm reading or something and the phone rings. Oh I'm terrible when I'm in the house mself. It might be the telly or the heating or even something outside but my imagination runs wild and I end up scaring myself Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie This made me think of OtterySt.Catchpole. I miss him so much! Did he leave the site or something? I read one of his fan fics. A very talented writer Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Great post Sophie. I'll be watching for your next post. Thanks Connie. I promise to post soon.
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07-19-2010, 06:27 PM
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#243 (permalink)
| Graphorn
Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University.
Posts: 17,325
Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year | Workaholic || HOGwart | iloveyou. || SnowQueenEviee.
Haha, I Love Thinking 
Your Welcome Hun
__________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥  ___________________Look Who's Back.
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07-20-2010, 03:54 AM
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#244 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janet Lynn Gordon Fifth Year | Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions
Hey Sophie, Quote:
Thanks for the suggestion , though I don't think I'll be able to fit it in my next Chapter.
It wasn't a suggestion, it was only a statement really. Quote:
Did he leave the site or something? I read one of his fan fics. A very talented writer
He says he hasn't. But, he doesn't hardly ever get to get on anymore. And, yes, he is VERY talented!. He's a pal too.
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07-20-2010, 10:16 AM
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#245 (permalink)
|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by Connie Hey Sophie, He says he hasn't. But, he doesn't hardly ever get to get on anymore. And, yes, he is VERY talented!. He's a pal too. You'll never guess who left me a visitor message??? The very man Ottery.StCatchpole. Remember a wee while back you put up a link for one of his fan fics, on your story (which you should all check out at this link-It's awsome http://www.snitchseeker.com/other-st...ls-sa13-69547/) Well I told him I really enjoyed reading it and I had said how you recomended it and I trusted your taste in stories and I'd like to read more of them. He must have been on yesterday as he said I've to say hello for him so Hi
Oh and as for your statment , I might just have a surprise for you in not my next chapter but the next chapter
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07-20-2010, 05:29 PM
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#246 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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PAMS PAMS!!!!!
I'm so desperate for a new post of this Soph
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07-20-2010, 06:46 PM
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#247 (permalink)
|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships Quote:
Originally Posted by KatielovesHP PAMS PAMS!!!!!
I'm so desperate for a new post of this Soph Seriously Katie, but the next chapter isn't something to be excited about. Mabey not the next one but the next one.
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07-22-2010, 06:25 PM
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#248 (permalink)
|  X-treme Horcrux Slayer! Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sophie Potter First Year | Ruadh gu brath! | | Friendships are better than normal Ships
Hiya Girls. I was supposed to post today butsomething came up. I'll try to get it up asap.
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07-22-2010, 06:59 PM
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#249 (permalink)
| Snidget
Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :)
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Originally Posted by Morag Hiya Girls. I was supposed to post today butsomething came up. I'll try to get it up asap.
S x
No worries sweetie, take your time
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07-22-2010, 09:10 PM
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#250 (permalink)
| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla "LaLa" Williams Second Year | Three whole words, Eight letters late(8)
Take your time  we'll be waiting
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