Good ole' Hagrid. He's my favorite. :) I'm glad you didn't leave him out! I wonder what houses they will be in...

That rude girl is a bloody brat if you ask me. Don't worry about the length of each chapter. Just make sure you're happy with it before posting. Besides do you know how many times my stories change while I'm typing them out? You don't even want to know. If you have any questions feel free to drop me a line. Well done chapter:)

Yeah, I was like, I can't miss Hagrid out, 'cause Hagrid's epic! ;)
YAY! NEW READER! :x3: Well, thankyou... You'll have to see! :evil:
Yeah, I tried to make her a brat, you wait and see what else she does...

Alrighty, then, if I have any questions I'll ask! :yes:

Ohh great post its ok about it being short, the same thing happens to me. My new story on here I typed on word but it was double spaced or something so it seemed short when it came up on SS.
But dont worry even small chapters are amazing chapters like that one.
Keep up the great work. PAMS

°°Sarah

:D Good to know I'm not the only one to get the whole 'Agh! It's to short!' problem! Thank you... I feel really well, you know when someone compliments you, and you're like 'nah...' I feel like that! :yes:

Thanks Guys! Next one coming up, when I persuade my brother to get of the computer upstairs, which has my story on... :whaa:

Little brother let me on! :woot:

Chapter 5
‘Ooh!’ Lindsey and Holly cheered.
‘Yes!’ Ben said, punching the air and losing his balance, only to be pushed back on by a… Squid?
‘What was that!?’ Holly said, scared as her hair turned dangerously red.
‘WOAH!’ Ben shouted.
‘Metamorsinthas’ Lindsey said matter-of-factly.
‘Metamorphagus!’ Holly laughed at Lindsey’s failed attempt to pronounce it, then her hair changed back to blond as she laughed.
‘OK….?’ Ben laughed. ‘And that means you can change your appearance by will, right?’
‘Right!‘ Holly laughed
Lindsey laughed too, happy to have found some friends.
The boat touched the shore and the trio were about to jump off, but the rude girl pushed them aside and Lindsey nearly fell in, only to be grabbed by Ben, whose face had gone dangerously red, while Holly leapt off and ran to confront the girl. ‘Oi! You! You just pushed her!’ Holly fumed
‘So? It’s only a Mudblood!’ the girl laughed cruelly, as she walked off.
‘Don’t listen to her, Lindsey!’ Ben told her. 'You're twice what she is!' Ben said, going pink in the face.
They jumped onto the shore and headed to Hogwarts, Lindsey not feeling assured that it was just because she was a Muggleborn that amde the girl angry.

Great chapter that girls a mean ole nincompoop :lol:
Does she have a name???
Pams

°°Sarah

awww cute 3. reminds me a bit of Harry, Ron, and Hermione. except they werent all completely friends at the beginning lol. PAMS

Yup, you find out her name in the later chapters... I think in two chapters...? Thank you!
Yeah, I was sort of thinking that, except I wanted two girls, as the girls seem to be a bit undermined, as you see a lot of Seamus, Neville etc, but not a lot of the girls! :lol:

It's back to regular sized ones for now... :D

Chapter 6
Lindsey’s first impression of Hogwarts was ‘It’s going to crumble down at any moment!’ which she said out loud.
‘Lindsey? Of course it does, a battle literally just happened, like a year ago!’, when Lindsey looked confused, Holly expanded. ‘Back then, there was a man or part man, called… Well, we call him You-Know-Who… He killed a lot of people, but one day, he went to kill a little boy after killing his parents, but the killing curse backfired, destroying some of him… He was very weak for many years after trying to kill Harry Potter… Harry defeated him many times, but You-Know-Who came back, and started his reign of terror again… He came to Hogwarts after learning Harry had returned, and during what we call the ‘Battle of Hogwarts’ Harry killed You-Know-Who… They’ve only just finished repairs on the castle…’
‘Whoa…’ Lindsey said.
Inside, though, Hogwarts was decorative as a Cathedral! Probably more! She saw something flying around, and when one flew through her, and she experienced a shivering feeling, Holly told her they were Ghosts!
‘Hello, first years!’ a strict-looking lady walked towards them. ‘My name is Minerva McGonagall, and I am your Headmistress! What we are about to do is get you all Sorted! I will call your name and you will walk out and place the Sorting Hat on your head, and it will tell you which House you are to be in… Do I make myself clear?’ The first years nodded in agreement. ‘Right, I will see you out there, then!’ and she walked into the next room.
A moments silence passed and a sudden load of muttering rang through the room. ‘OMGosh! Here we go!’ Lindsey said excitedly. ‘Holly, you’ll be first out of us!’ Lindsey grinned.
‘I know! I’m terrified!’
Just then a voice rang out from the next room… ‘Anasi, Kate!’ Professor McGonagall called out. A short girl with long blonde hair walked out, looking terrified. ‘HUFFLEPUFF!’ a strange voice shouted out. ‘I wonder who that was?’ Lindsey asked. After a few minutes, McGonagall called out, ‘Barker, Holly!’
‘Wish me luck!’ Holly said nervously.
‘Good luck!’ Lindsey and Ben said together. Holly walked out and they heard the call of…
‘GRYFFINDOR!’ Lindsey and Ben looked at each other, and jumped up and down, holding hands. They suddenly let go, and both went pink in the face. 'Aw, I hope we’re in Gryffindor!' Lindsey hoped.
‘Jenkins, Lindsey!’ Lindsey walked out and sat on the stool placing the… Hat? Hat!? HAT!? A hat that talks!? Ah, well, we are wizards! Lindsey thought as she placed the hat on her head. The hat… Spoke to her? Inside her head? ‘You’d do well in Ravenclaw! You have a great mind here!’ the hat whispered. Then it called out……….

cliffie, I am mad I want to find out what house she is going to be in, but great chapter anyways. Keep up the good work and post more soon :P

Sarah

ahhh the suspense is killing me! usually people just use 3 periods to signify some sort of cliffhanger. the extra 7 really add more suspense :P PAMS

Yup, 'cause I'm evil like that! :evil: Thank you!
:lol: Yeah, 7 make it all worth while! :xd:

THANKS GUYS, FOR THE SUPPORT! ^_^

:evillaugh: Mwahahahaha! I'm being evil! :evil:

Super suspense !! Grrrr !! You're really enjoying these thrills ..
But oh, I'd like her to be in Ravenclaw and at the same time, Gryffindor !

:evillaugh Yep, I'll post the next chapter, when my mum fixes the computer... Grrr... Won't let us on, and I'm on the one that doesn't have it on! :(

Sorry guys! My upstairs PC has broken down... My mum's gonna try and get the data from there, but it might take a while... I hope to post more chapters soon! ^_^

Those last chapters were very well written. As I read I'm able to play it like a movie in my head! :)

:woot: MOVIES! Awesome! :D

Wow! Another trio!! :woot:
Hmm, can't get the better of this.... waiting for more!
Come on Kira! :D

Will do! Thanks! :D

Right, I'm just gonna write another one, right now, from the top of my head... My mum'll probably never get round to saving the data...

Changed my mind... I read it back, and it sounds terrible...

Take your time with it. You'll get it just be patient. :)