Why, why would you do that to me??!D:
OMG!I want to know, I swear to you Alice, ima kick your butt!
Aww and stupid Harry!hahaha I want more

Way to keep us hanging!!
Good work!
Pams
Jamers

AHHHH!!!!!! No you can't just stop it!! Noooo )):
It was a really good post though!

That was too great! :OOOOOOOO Jackie is Harry's WHAT, now?!?!
Totally awesome post, my friend!

...By the way, I'm gonna die if you dont post the next Chapter soon.

*clutches heart*

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to be cruel
Haha!...Okay maybe just a little...Heehee

I will post Chapter 4 soon!

Nooo! *Runs and hides* No butt kicking!
I will post soon! And yes Harry is very stupid for what he did haha

I'm sorry! Haha I just thought it would be a good way to end the chapter! It was almost one in the morning! I was tired so I decided to be a little evil heehee

Thank you!
I will post soon I promise

Don't you dare die! I can't be responsible for such a terrible action!
Haha please stay alive! Hmmmm...Ah! I got it! How about...I post a preview?

Well I just want to let you all know that I will be starting college soon once again. So it might take me a little longer to post chapters. But I promise you all that I will do my best. I will keep this story going!

Okay so now a quick preview of Chapter 4! I have to keep you all alive here I don't want anyone dying!

Chapter 4 Preview:

"Harry?" Hermione said as she knocked on Ron's door.

She had seen everyone else at the table besides Harry. It was not like him to isolate himself at the Weasley's house.

"Not now Hermione" Harry could be heard saying from inside.

"Harry I need to talk to you though" Hermione pleaded. She was upset with him. Why did he want to go out with Jacqueline? Why her? She has known him for 6 years and all of a sudden Jackie comes into the picture and he's head over heels for her.

"No...not now" Harry snapped. "What are you doing!"

Hermione was confused. "Harry I'm just standing outside the door. What are you...?"

Just then the door opened. However it was not Harry who was standing in front of Hermione.

Bwahaha!

Much Love,
Emma

You are mean!!
PAMS!!
Jamers

Ahhh, you're even crueler than I thought! You opened the door? Who is in there with Harry? Is it Jacqueline? Please Post Soooonnnn!!!

OMG!why did I read that?!
Ahhh Alice, you are truely cruel!

Great Post!!

What is Harry to Jacqueline?

PAMS PAMS

....Argg!! The suspence!! Who was itt?? I'm going to die if you don't post soonnnn!! (:

So Emma I finally got to be on to read the rest of your story! You do understand how evil and mean you are, right? Leaving us at such a cliff hanger, shameful, totally shameful. I read the full first page after Chapter three and I assumed, since there was a page two, that Chapter four was going to be on it and I'd have no problem knowing what happened next. Psh, you totally got me. I want to know exactly who Jackie is now. And aw, you took into account what I said. No standout typos or grammar errors! I feel special. Anyways, I wrote a novel again. Sorry. I'll just let you get back to your writing...

Oh come on! Don't hurt my feelings! Then I'll be to upset to write!
Haha no just kidding. I will post the rest of chapter four probably before thursday, because thats when classes start!

I try not to be cruel but hey sometimes I can't help myself
I will post soon I promise! I just need to get settled in here at school. I moved in yesterday!

Oh hush cousin you know you love me Haha

Thank you my dear!
I will post soon I promise

Hey! Don't pull that trick on me haha
I promise I will post soon!

Haha Don't worry about it love, I enjoy reading my readers comments and thoughts on my story. Which means I love your novels haha
And yes, I'm trying my hardest I take my readers opinions and suggestions very seriously.
I will post soon I promise

Much Love,
Emma

P.S. *gasp* My roommate moves in today! I'm kind of nervous but very excited

NEW READER!!!
This story is really great!! I love it so far!! ♥
Post more soon please
Love Sara♥

Welcome Sara I am so glad that you are enjoying my story so far

Well today is everyone's lucky day haha Here is the complete version of Chapter Four!

Chapter Four: Shocking Discovery

"Harry?" Hermione said as she knocked on Ron's door.

She had seen everyone else at the table besides Harry. It was not like him to isolate himself at the Weasley's house.

"Not now Hermione" Harry could be heard saying from inside.

"Harry I need to talk to you though" Hermione pleaded. She was upset with him. Why did he want to go out with Jacqueline? Why her? She has known him for six years and all of a sudden Jackie comes into the picture and he's head over heels for her.

"No...not now" Harry snapped. "What are you doing!"

Hermione was confused. "Harry I'm just standing outside the door. What are you...?"

Just then the door opened. However it was not Harry who was standing in front of Hermione.

“Jackie?” Hermione said as she looked into the face of her younger sister.

“Hello Hermione, come on in” Jacqueline said stepping aside to let Hermione in.

Hermione walked in. She was about to ask why they were in Ron’s bedroom alone when she saw the kind face of Albus Dumbledore sitting on Harry’s bed. Harry was sitting on the floor against the wall, he looked furious.

“Why does she have to know?” Harry asked.

“Harry shut up. Now’s not the time to be rude” Jacqueline said as she closed the door and sat down on Ron’s bed. She motioned for Hermione to sit next to her and after a second’s hesitation Hermione sat down.

“Hello Hermione” Dumbledore said with a smile. “How are you doing?”

“I thought I was doing okay. I just got use to the fact that Jacqueline is my sister…but now I feel that I am going to find out something that’s going to bug me.”

“I don’t see why she has to know” Harry snapped.

“Harry, Jacqueline is Hermione’s sister. If Hermione’s life was in danger I’m sure Jacqueline would want to know” Dumbledore said.

Hermione laughed. “You’ve missed that past five years Jackie. My life has always had some sort of danger to it.”

“What a rebel” Jacqueline laughed.

The two girls were giggling when it hit Hermione.

“Wait…why is Jacqueline in danger?” Hermione asked. “She barely got here, how could she be in any trouble?”

“Jacqueline has always been in trouble. Well a simpler way to put this is that Jacqueline has somewhat of the same fate as Harry. However, she will not be facing Voldemort unless she chooses too.”

Hermione was confused, “I thought Harry was the chosen one?”

“He is. And Jacqueline is the…”

“She’s the bait okay!” Harry yelled as he stood up. “Jacqueline is the one who will either give up her life to save mine or she will help me defeat Voldemort. She is the one who is going to keep Voldemort away from me while I figure out a way to kill him!”

“That’s a nice way to put it” Jacqueline frowned. “Bait? I would have preferred babysitter.”

Hermione stood up. “No! Absolutely not! How in the world could it be her? Out of millions of other people, how is it her?”

“Harry calm down” Jacqueline said as Harry kicked Ron’s dresser. “It’s a good thing the Weasley’s knew we would be coming. You’re making too much noise.”

“Hermione for years Harry has been known to be the only individual to survive the killing curse. And it is true. Voldemort has never tried to kill Jacqueline, but only because he hasn’t found her. Voldemort attacked you’re aunt Rosalie’s house years ago when Jacqueline was only a few months old. There was a rumor going around that your aunt’s husband knew information that was very valuable to Voldemort.”

“But…my aunt Rosalie is a muggle” Hermione said. “How could my uncle know anything? He wasn't a wizard is he?”

Dumbledore smiled, “No Hermione he is not a wizard but he does work for the muggle Minister, and you know that the Minister of Magic is in charge of informing the muggle Minister about any issues that might harm the muggle world.”

“How many times can you use the word muggle in one sentence” Harry mumbled.

“Anyways” Dumbledore continued, ignoring Harry’s comment, “Voldemort hunted down your uncle. Your uncle knew his family was in danger thanks to the Aurors who were working to bring Voldemort to an end. He sent Jacqueline and your aunt to France where they stayed after they discovered your uncle was dead. Voldemort tortured your uncle until he died, for he would not give up the information. Voldemort then attacked the Ministry itself and discovered that the little girl your uncle was protecting, his niece Jacqueline, was someone very important. That she would one day grow up to have extraordinary magical capability, such magic that would exceed his own. And with “the chosen one” He Who Must Not Be Named would be destroyed forever. ”

Hermione was in shock. How did she not know any of this? How did her parents not know their daughter was in danger, and it wasn’t even by choice. Hermione understood that she herself was choosing to risk her life for her best friend, but Jacqueline had no choice. Hermione turned to Jacqueline and burst into tears.

“Hermione it’s all right!” Jacqueline said hugging her sister. “I’m sure once we have a good plan Harry and I will both survive.”

“Is that a possibility?” Hermione asked Dumbledore.

“I’m afraid I cannot guarantee anything. I myself do not know what it going to happen. But one thing is certain, we need a good plan. Something Voldemort wouldn’t think of” Dumbledore replied.

“We’re doomed” Harry sighed.

“Harry please…” Jacqueline said. “You’re so pessimistic. We’ll be fine. I’m going to use the restroom.”

Jacqueline got up and left the room. Dumbledore turned to Hermione and said, “Hermione I need you to not get in the way of your sister. She must not become attached to you in any way do you understand me? I took her away from your house after her one night arrival so she wouldn’t get so comfortable there. If she becomes attached to anyone or anything she will hold back when we all need her the most.”

“So you expect me to just sit here and watch her risk her life for all of us?” Hermione snapped.

Dumbledore ignored Hermione and turned to Harry, “Harry I need you to watch Jacqueline from afar. She was sorted into Slytherin because of her magical capability. I need you to make sure she does not get involved with Draco.”

Hermione couldn’t believe what she was hearing. Dumbledore was telling her to stay away from her own sister and yet he was telling Harry to stay close by. Hermione couldn’t take this anymore. She stood up and stormed out of the room and into Ginny’s.

Harry wanted to go after Hermione but he couldn’t find it in himself to follow. He turned to look out the window and asked Dumbledore the questions that were burning inside of him.

“What are Jacqueline's chances of living?”

“Very slim I’m afraid” Dumbledore replied.

"And mine?"

"It's not your fault that you will most likely live Harry" Dumbledore said putting a hand on Harry's shoulder.

"Why did you lie to Hermione? You told her you didn't know the outcome of this whole situation."

"So she wouldn't get in the way and risk her own life. You out of all people should be happy that I am trying to keep her safe."

"I am" Harry said. "Does Jacqueline know she's going to die?"

"No" was the only answer Harry received when he heard a faint pop.

Harry turned around and saw that he was now alone.

I hope you all enjoyed Chapter Four!

Much Love,
Emma

Oh my!
Totally knew it was going to be her, but I wasn't expecting Dumbledore too!
Oh boy, I was not expecting this twist.
This made me laugh. Leave it to Harry to be funny without trying
But they're sisters... How can they NOT get attached to each other?
Would Draco really TRY to even get involved with her, since she's still a Muggle Born, or are they not going to tell that part?
Fantastic Chapter! Please PAMS! I'm dying to know what happens next!

YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (: I loved itt!!!!! Woot woot!!

YEA!! ♥

Quote:

“How many times can you use the word muggle in one sentence” Harry mumbled.

Hahah! This made my day!

Quote:

“She’s the bait okay!” Harry yelled as he stood up. “Jacqueline is the one who will either give up her life to save mine or she will help me defeat Voldemort. She is the one who is going to keep Voldemort away from me while I figure out a way to kill him!”

Ahh, what a nice way yo put it Harry

Quote:

"It's not your fault that you will most likely live Harry" Dumbledore said putting a hand on Harry's shoulder.

Dumbledor lied to Mione!! Aww that suckkss Mean old man :p

Quote:

Dumbledore ignored Hermione and turned to Harry, “Harry I need you to watch Jacqueline from afar. She was sorted into Slytherin because of her magical capability. I need you to make sure she does not get involved with Draco.”

Poor Draco gets the blame on being the bad guy Oh well!! Hahaha

I loved this post! Post more ASAP k hon

New Reader.

I like where this story is going. Can't wait to see more.

Classic line!! That would be something Harry would so totally say.

Very good! Cant wait for more!!!
PAMS!!
Jamers

OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!

The babysitter bit was funny, lightened the mood

I can't imagine what Hermione feels just now - I'd be furious and hurt and awww*eyes are watering*

I hope everything goes great but I just know it won't.

awww how sad!
i love it!

Nice last few chapters! I was expecting more than her just being bait but maybe thats because the real drama hasn't happened yet.

The drama is yet to come actually Haha

What's so sad about it? Lol Just kidding. Hey Jacqueline isn't upset about it...or is she?

I'm glad you enjoyed the post I will try and post more soon. The chapters might be smaller though Or I might just post tiny previews of the chapters until I have time to write the whole chapter. College is super hectic right now

Thank you Jamers More to come!

Welcome I'm so glad you are enjoyigng the story More to come!

I will post more as soon as I can I promise I am so glad you are all loving the story so far though

Thank you More to come soon! I know I keep saying that but I just want to let you all know that I am trying my hardest

Haha you know Draco He'll get involved one way or another

Much Love,
Emma

Hey everyone Well I am overwhelmed with homework at the moment and it really is a bad thing that I am on SS but I really wanted to post at least a part of Chapter Five for you guys.
I may end up doing it like this from now on, posting each chapter in parts. It's easier for me and it doesn't take a lot of time. I hope you all don't mind

Well here's Chapter 5: Part I

Chapter 5 (Part I): Not My Intentions

The next few days consisted of Harry being locked up in Ron's room. The only times he would come out were to use the restroom and check on Jacqueline: where she was, what she was doing, and so on. He hardly ate or slept according to Ron. But everyone let Harry be, they all knew he was going through a hard time. Harry, since the beginning, never wanted anyone to sacrifice their life in order to save his.

Hermione, although she was told not to, kept close to Jacqueline. Whenever Harry wasn't around her she would be her shadow. And throughout those few days Hermione and Jacqueline became close; it was as if they had not been separated fifteen sixteen years of their lives. Hermione had not spoken a word to Harry since Dumbledore told her what was going on. She had developed a dislike for him. How could he take her sister away? She barely met Jacqueline and she now had to share her with Harry. She also hated the fact that all Harry would do is ask for Jacqueline. She hated it so much that one day she told Harry Jacqueline had returned to France over night. Discovering that Jackie was in the bathroom led to a huge argument between Harry and Hermione.

Ron was stuck in the middle. He was trying to get his two best friends to like one another again. But no matter how hard he tried, Harry and Hermione would not speak a single word to each other unless it was about Jacqueline.

Jacqueline, when she wasn't being followed by her sister or being watched by Harry, spent her time crying in the bathroom. Her life in France had been so peaceful, and to discover that she was in danger and her life was a stake was nerve wracking. She had expected that being united with her sister and parents and meeting new friends would be a wonderful experience. However all she felt when she was around everyone was that she was the reason everything was going wrong. She was the reason Harry and Hermione weren’t talking. She was the reason Harry was giving up on Hermione ever liking him. She was the reason the Ron spent all his time in the backyard alone. She was the reason everything was falling apart and she couldn't do anything about it.

Finally it was time to return to Hogwarts. Everyone seemed happy that day, and Jacqueline wondered if it was because they wouldn't have to be in the same household as her. They would be at Hogwarts, minding their own business. In no time at all they were all on the train. Hermione, Harry, Ron, and Jacqueline were all in one compartment. Everyone else went their own ways. About an hour into the ride Jacqueline stood up and reached for the door. Harry automatically stood up and was about to follow her out the door when Jacqueline turned around and held him back.

“I can go to the bathroom on my own Harry” Jacqueline said. “I won’t get killed on the way there or on the way back I promise.”

And with that Jacqueline shut the door and left.

“A fight would be way better than the silence in there” Jacqueline thought as she made her way down the aisle. Her intentions were not to go to the bathroom, she just wanted to walk around and think.

As she walked all people would do is stare at her. And she realized that once she was out of sight they would all start talking about her: wondering who she was, why she was there, how pretty she was, and so on. Jacqueline couldn’t take it anymore. She wasn’t even at Hogwarts yet and all she wanted to do was go home, to France. She didn’t even think about leaving however, for she knew she’d be disappointing so many people who are depending on her and Harry, both of them, not just Harry.

Jacqueline found an empty compartment near the end of the train. She opened the door and sat inside, by herself, just what she wanted. However, only five minutes passed when she heard the door open again. She looked away from the window and met the gaze of a tall, very handsome, blonde guy.

“So I hear a new Granger is joining us at Hogwarts this year?”

Hope you all enjoyed Part I

Much Love,
Emma

It's fine with me Just post what and whenever you want
That's exactly how it used to be, except with Harry in the middle and Ron and Hermione not talking.
Awe, I hope he doesn't give up on that and I hope they can get together.
Ah, Malfoy, must you?
Fantastic post! Please PAMS!