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Orla 09-11-2011 09:09 AM

Hogwarts Second Generation - Sa13+
 
Hello there i'm Órla hopfully this is alright *Crosses fingures*

Copy rights: Of course the wizarding world belongs to J.K.R and any other authors I might have copied of you all RULE :lol:

Setting: Lilly potter going into her first year at Hogwarts

Chapter 1

Ughhhh when am I getting my letter already.... It can't be lost can't it NO no i'm sure it's coming soon yes! But maybe ''NO emm possitive thinking!'' Lilly was walking up and down her bedroom as if she was on protest

''Crying about your letter again?'' she looked up to see her brother James in front of her messed up hair and brown eyes just like her mother she inhabitated them aswell ''No!'' she replied coldy ''Poor Lilly the only one thats not going to Hogwarts'' he shook his head sadly and then sniggered she went red and then he laughed his plan was working

''Why are you here anyways?'' Lilly asked really tring to forget about that

''Am I annoying you?''

''No no no James I just love when you come in here and tease me'' said Lilly sarcastically

''Oh come on i'm just having a bit of fun!''

''Well go somwhere else i'm... Thinking things threw!''

''Oh so Hogwarts''

Lilly lost it ''WHY DO YOU RUIN EVERYTHING!'' she picked up a pillow ''Not everything just things that are importent to you!'' he laughed
she threw the pillow at him but he ducked and it hit her mother instead

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Her mother was kind hearted and sweet but her brother was a trouble maker and teased her alot but got away she watched as her mother picked up the pillow and walked into her room ''So what are you two fighting about this time?'' she fake yawned ''Mother I came in because poor Lilly was upset about somthing'' Ginny raised an eyebrow it wasn't quite sold yet ''I asked if she alright but she told me to leave'' Going once going twice ''But I wouldn't cause as I said before she was upset and then she threw the pillow at me and i'm so deeply sorry it hit you instead of me'' SOLD! ''Aww'' Ginny hugged him and squeezed him tight

I'm in for a long long night ughhh

Fred is awesome 09-11-2011 09:24 AM

:lol: Aw, I can imagine Ginny being like that, but not to James I think... :xd:

PAMS!

P.S. James sounds like a git. Didn't like his grandad, James Sr either.

Orla 09-11-2011 09:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fred is awesome (Post 10637191)
:lol: Aw, I can imagine Ginny being like that, but not to James I think... :xd:

PAMS!

P.S. James sounds like a git. Didn't like his grandad, James Sr either.

Oooh already a comment already :lol:

Yeah I suppose but I defently couldn't put Albus as the bad guy :D Besides i'm probably gonna change James in the story and make a new bad guy I have it all planed :lol:

HPFan1 09-11-2011 09:31 AM

Oooooh I love it poor Lilly an older brother I should probably invite her to the club :D PAMS!

Orla 09-11-2011 09:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HPFan1 (Post 10637198)
Oooooh I love it poor Lilly an older brother I should probably invite her to the club :D PAMS!

WOW how do people find a story so quick it's freaky :lol:

Thanks :D Yea always wished I had a brother then I go to my friends house ALL BETTER! :lol:

hermione23 09-11-2011 01:56 PM

This is hilarious so far!

James is a jerk, but Lily sure seems like a good protagonist for a story.

Orla 09-11-2011 01:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hermione23 (Post 10637553)
This is hilarious so far!

James is a jerk, but Lily sure seems like a good protagonist for a story.

:hello: YAY new reader

Thanks :)

XenoLongbottom 09-11-2011 09:21 PM

LOL! That's adorable. Poor Lily! I love how Ginny is so leniant with her wittle Jimmy! Can't wait to read more!

Orla 09-12-2011 07:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by XenoLongbottom (Post 10638930)
LOL! That's adorable. Poor Lily! I love how Ginny is so leniant with her wittle Jimmy! Can't wait to read more!

:lol: Thanks :)

Orla 09-12-2011 04:12 PM

Chapter 2

After punishment from the day before yeah thats right punishment... Oh how she wished James wasn't such a sulk up to their mother she lay in bed tossing and turning thinking over things ''Lilly darling breakfast'' Lilly half winced and got up andwent downstairs and took a piece of toast. ''Why the glum face?'' her mother asked ''Oh no reason'' she replied staring into space

*TAP* she looked around
Just mail! she sighed
''Anything interesting?'' she asked even though she couldn't have cared less her mother was gazing at the mail ''I suppose'' she replied a grin on her pale face anything interesting from her mothers wasn't ever interesting! She handed Albus and James letters and then left another on the table Lilly gazed at it ''MY- my my LETTER!'' she screamed
Ginny's grin widened and she hugged Lilly
While Lilly's grin was so big her mouth was like a clowns big wide smile
''Eeep!''
Albus smiled at her maybe because she did when he opened his
James rolled his eyes and looked threw his new list
This was her BEST day ever!!!!!!

LeiaSadieAnnabeth 09-12-2011 04:40 PM

Thats amazing, PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!111

Orla 09-13-2011 07:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LeiaSadieAnnabeth (Post 10640976)
Thats amazing, PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!111

Thanks :glomp:

Fred is awesome 09-13-2011 08:09 PM

:lol: Awesome! ;)

XenoLongbottom 09-13-2011 09:27 PM

Nice. Hope you post more soon! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!

LillyJames 09-13-2011 11:28 PM

Hey! I love it! Keep it up!!

Orla 09-14-2011 07:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fred is awesome (Post 10644010)
:lol: Awesome! ;)

:x3:

Quote:

Originally Posted by XenoLongbottom (Post 10644196)
Nice. Hope you post more soon! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks :xd:

Quote:

Originally Posted by LillyJames (Post 10644418)
Hey! I love it! Keep it up!!

Oooh new reader glad you like it :glomp:

Droo 09-17-2011 01:58 PM

Ooo I like this so far! Keep writing.

Orla 09-23-2011 07:45 AM

Thanks :)

New chapter soon...

Orla 10-12-2011 08:06 AM

WOW long time no write
 
Chapter 3

Lilly couldn't sleep the whole night she was awake reading over the letter again and again it was the best thing that could have possibly happened! Hogwarts FINALLY after all those years watching her brothers go onto the platform she was finally going to!!!!! She grinned got out of bed and got dressed in her favourite clothes. Well they looked quite dissturbing actully a lumoness jumper ripped white jeans and a yellow top with a weird looking tiger on it! But what made it dissturbing was the she had red hair very red hair!!!!

''Morning!'' said Ginny cheerfully

''Morning!!!!'' Lilly replied with a loud of excitment in her voice ''Mum? Are we going to diagon alley today?'' she smilied

Ginny stared at her ''Why?''

''No... no reason,'' she sighed

Ughhhh! another thing to bother me!!!

Droo 10-13-2011 05:29 PM

Well that was a tease! LOL! I want moooore.

XenoLongbottom 10-18-2011 10:27 PM

More! Please! We need more, like Droo said!

Orla 10-19-2011 07:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Droo (Post 10709328)
Well that was a tease! LOL! I want moooore.

:D Yea s'ppose

Quote:

Originally Posted by XenoLongbottom (Post 10718970)
More! Please! We need more, like Droo said!

:lol:

Orla 12-09-2011 03:36 PM

Thankss

hermione23 12-21-2011 01:14 AM

This is awesome! So sorry I can't come up with a better comment... PAMS!

Annabeth 01-17-2012 04:45 PM

I am so very sorry, i haven't posted on your story! I am so sorry, but I am glad I did!!!

Its amazing, please update soon!!!!!


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