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hermione19 01-19-2010 03:24 AM

WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!!! the suspense is killing me and its only been 10 seconds. pams!!!!!!!!!!!

Winter Dreams 01-19-2010 03:28 AM

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Originally Posted by hermione19 (Post 9042594)
WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!!! the suspense is killing me and its only been 10 seconds. pams!!!!!!!!!!!

Welcome to CS. ^_^ :glomp:

:rotfl: I think that I should stop the suspense now, and give everyone and update, no?

Winter Dreams 01-19-2010 04:04 AM

Smoke started to seep into the Great Hall, long enough for everyone to be surprised, before it was everywhere, and all that everyone could see was the smoke.

It was not your ordinary smoke. Clearly it had been created. It was pink, purple, and, somehow, sparkly. It smelled of sweet scents like strawberries and roses, and other pleasant things.

It was strange.

Slowly but surely, it began to fade. It was still there, but it was light, now everyone could see, and that was something shocking, indeed.

Everything, everything was pink and purple. The walls, the tables, the plates, the windows, the decorations, even the night sky above them was tinted pink. Everything sparkled.

The only thing not affected was the students and teachers, and the food. Most of everyone just stared. Was this planned?

But the teachers had not the same reaction. No one knew what had happened, and they were confused, but looked at Dumbledore for a sign to do something.

All of the exchange students simply grinned, under the impression that this was on purpose. It looked so very cool, everything was so colourful.

Dumbledore looked pleasantly surprised, but he knew. He was not confused, bewildered, annoyed or in awe. Wise as he was, he knew what it was, and the cause. He had a feeling they were planning something, and quite enjoyed what the troublemakers came up with.

He was sure there was more to come, as he looked towards the doors of the Great Hall to see James Potter and Sirius Black standing there.

All the teachers seemed to comprehend, and most looked a bit annoyed and exasperated. It dawned on everyone else, too. It was them, who else would it be?

Dumbledore waved, with a small wink to the two boys.

“How nice that you could make an appearance, Mr. Potter, Mr. Black.” He smiled. “Do carry on.” He clasped his hands together, watching the boys.

Everyone watched the two boys.

Remus chuckled, amused. It was not as bad as it could’ve been, and it was actually quite amusing. Most people thought it funny but did not yet laugh; there was anticipation for what would come next. Nobody knew.

At the Slytherin table, everyone didn’t like it; mostly they looked annoyed, or glared. Regulus, however, cackled, gleeful. Everyone looked at him.

“What? This is Potter and Black.” Lucius said. He couldn’t understand what could make Regulus have this reaction.

“I know. I’ll have to tell mother this, she’ll send him a howler, for sure.” He laughed with the group of Slytherin’s around him. He couldn’t wait. Regulus just hoped that Sirius would do some more stupid things.

Connie 01-19-2010 04:30 AM

Hello, I'm, not a new reader. I've been following this story since the first day it came out. I haven't posted on it for various reasons, but I can't help it. I want to post on this.
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Dumbledore looked pleasantly surprised, but he knew. He was not confused, bewildered, annoyed or in awe. Wise as he was, he knew what it was, and the cause. He had a feeling they were planning something, and quite enjoyed what the troublemakers came up with.

He was sure there was more to come, as he looked towards the doors of the Great Hall to see James Potter and Sirius Black standing there.

All the teachers seemed to comprehend, and most looked a bit annoyed and exasperated. It dawned on everyone else, too. It was them, who else would it be?

Dumbledore waved, with a small wink to the two boys.

“How nice that you could make an appearance, Mr. Potter, Mr. Black.” He smiled. “Do carry on.” He clasped his hands together, watching the boys
Please excuse me for quoting so much here, but I had to, because brilliance deserves attention. I love Dumbledore, and you wrote him expertly. OK, I'll be quiet now, and continue to read when you post.

VRSCIKA 01-19-2010 05:08 AM

:lmao: I loveeeeeeeee this one sweets both of them :rotfl: It is awesome :xd: Well worth the wait :xd: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :loved:

and I lufs your :evil: :mwaha: ooc :rotfl: :mwaha:

harita 01-19-2010 05:24 AM

cool...waiting for more...

Winter Dreams 01-19-2010 05:47 AM

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Originally Posted by Connie (Post 9042824)
Hello, I'm, not a new reader. I've been following this story since the first day it came out. I haven't posted on it for various reasons, but I can't help it. I want to post on this. Please excuse me for quoting so much here, but I had to, because brilliance deserves attention. I love Dumbledore, and you wrote him expertly. OK, I'll be quiet now, and continue to read when you post.

I've seen you looking at the thread, so I'm glad you've commented. :glomp: And I would really love it if you carried on to comment because I love to hear from my readers.

It's not too much, I quote quite a bit sometimes, too.
I tried my hardest to make it as much like Dumbledore as I can, and I'm quite happy with that part. I'm glad you like it, too. xD

There's no need to be quiet at all. ^_^

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Originally Posted by VRSCIKA (Post 9042945)
:lmao: I loveeeeeeeee this one sweets both of them :rotfl: It is awesome :xd: Well worth the wait :xd: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :loved:

and I lufs your :evil: :mwaha: ooc :rotfl: :mwaha:

Hahahahaha! Thanks Toniluffee. xDD I'm glad I amused you.. ^_^

Yesh, I like the evilness. :whip:

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Originally Posted by harita (Post 9042975)
cool...waiting for more...

Thanks harita. More tomorrow, probably.

Cassiopia Malfoy 01-19-2010 03:34 PM

REGULUS!!!! :loved: That was wicked awesome!!! :faint:

Maxilocks 01-20-2010 10:29 AM

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Originally Posted by Annavanna (Post 9042735)
It smelled of sweet scents like strawberries and roses, and other pleasant things.

It was SO CUUTTE!

I know. =pp

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Everything, everything was pink and purple. The walls, the tables, the plates, the windows, the decorations, even the night sky above them was tinted pink. Everything sparkled.
Ooooh. :eyebrows: *dances in nice smokiee*

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The only thing not affected was the students and teachers, and the food.
You mean me shan't get purpliee? *eyes*

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Regulus just hoped that Sirius would do some more stupid things.
Mean. >__< But I forgive him.

MORRREE!


Winter Dreams 01-20-2010 10:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9043715)
REGULUS!!!! :loved: That was wicked awesome!!! :faint:

:lol: I thought you'd like it.

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 9046657)
I know. =pp

:lmao: I LOVE when you do that, it always makes me laugh.

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Ooooh. :eyebrows: *dances in nice smokiee*
Teheee. :)

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You mean me shan't get purpliee? *eyes*
You get to be purpliee 'cause you rock.

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Mean. >__< But I forgive him.

MORRREE!


'Tis Regulus. xD

:glomp: Luff you. <3

Winter Dreams 01-20-2010 11:35 AM

Here's your update you asked for. ^__^

EDIT: Eep! I just realized. This is the TWENTIETH UPDATE!! I love you guys. <3


I smirked, looking around at everyone who had their eyes on Prongs and me. This was so good. It was a way to make an entrance, in a fun way.

“Do carry on.” I grinned at Dumbledore’s words. By far, he was the best Headmaster.

“Thank you, thank you.” James said, looked at me, and we bowed to our audience.

“Welcome to all our guests,” I said, there was no spell, but everyone could here me. “If you need any help at all you can ask my friend here, James Potter, or myself, Sirius Black. Girls, you can just come see us anytime.” I chuckled.

“I hope that you enjoy our re-decoration, I rather like it myself.” I carried on, grinning. “James would like to say something about a certain Gryffindor, while we have you attention.”

“Lily Evans,” James said, smirking too. “You want go to the ball with me, and I want you to go to the ball with me, so you don’t not to deny yourself any longer.” He smirked. “So just come with me.”

I spotted Lily at the Gryffindor table, her cheeks going red, not out of embarrassment, though she was embarrassed, but of fury. She glared at James. He had to do this, in front of the whole school?

“Is that all?” Dumbledore asked us. He knew that James and I liked to make an entrance, and he was prepared for what we might come up with next.

“Another thing,” I said to the Headmaster. “She already knows it. She should, anyway, she’s smart.” I smirked. “But Adriana Taylor, I’m taking you to the ball.”

“That’s everything, Sir.” James saluted to Dumbledore. “Severus Snape really ought to have a shower though, y’know. Just saying.”

The hall went into laughter. Most of it, anyway. With satisfaction, I walked over to the Gryffindor table, and sat down beside Remus. James sat on my other side.

Lily was still mad, and she began to lecture James on how she’d never go to the ball with him and about what she’d do if he ever did anything like this again.

I turned from them and found, to my surprise, an annoyed looking Adriana standing beside where I sat. I couldn’t understand. She was not like Lily.

She loved the spotlight, attention and what I’d done was nothing that would bother her. Why was she annoyed at me, then? What had I done?

“Hello Adriana.” I said with a smooth smile. “Anything wrong?” I let my hair fall over my face, giving her a charming smile that usually always worked. Girls fell for it so easy and they went from mad to adoring me.

I loved my good looks.

Adriana was a persuasive one herself, however, and she didn’t change. “Yes, there is.”

Cassiopia Malfoy 01-20-2010 04:53 PM

What's da problem girl? It's Sirius! You can't get much better then him... Well then maybe his brother.. maybe not.. James your awesome!!

hermione19 01-20-2010 11:07 PM

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! what's wrong with adriana?

Winter Dreams 01-21-2010 12:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Cassiopia Malfoy (Post 9047036)
What's da problem girl? It's Sirius! You can't get much better then him... Well then maybe his brother.. maybe not.. James your awesome!!

:lol: You'll find out soon. :P
Teheee.

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Originally Posted by hermione19 (Post 9048336)
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! what's wrong with adriana?

Thank you. :D

VRSCIKA 01-21-2010 12:48 AM

Uh ohhhhh what did he do now........

:p Hehe :glomp: Keep it up :xd: :glomp: :woot:

Winter Dreams 01-21-2010 12:57 AM

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Originally Posted by VRSCIKA (Post 9048689)
Uh ohhhhh what did he do now........

:whistle:

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:p Hehe :glomp: Keep it up :xd: :glomp: :woot:
Thank you. More today sometime. :D

princess of*hp* 01-21-2010 02:02 AM

What's wrong, Adriana?!?!?!?!?
Another cliffy?! :faint:

Winter Dreams 01-21-2010 02:08 AM

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Originally Posted by princess of*hp* (Post 9048908)
What's wrong, Adriana?!?!?!?!?

Adriana: Hmph.

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Another cliffy?! :faint:
I'm evil like that. :shifty:

Maxilocks 01-21-2010 07:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Annavanna (Post 9046671)
You get to be purpliee 'cause you rock.

:loved:

Thankies, myAna. *huggg*


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Originally Posted by HERRRRR (Post 9046744)
“Thank you, thank you.” James said, looked at me, and we bowed to our audience.

Teehee. These two, they're awesome!

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"Kyla, you can just come see me anytime. You know I love you.
What? I didn't do anything. =pp

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“Lily Evans,” James said, smirking too. “You want go to the ball with me, and I want you to go to the ball with me, so you don’t not to deny yourself any longer.” He smirked. “So just come with me.”
Is this the part where she chucks a shoe at him? =pp

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“But Adriana Taylor, I’m taking you to the ball.”
Come ON, Sirius! Be ... more gentlemanly. Ask her if she WANTS to go, you know, boy. >__<

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“Severus Snape really ought to have a shower though, y’know. Just saying.”
*poke*

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I loved his good looks.
-blink-

WHOOSSEE? =O


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Adriana was a persuasive one herself, however, and she didn’t change. “Yes, there is.”
*eyes cliffie*


Gimme MOAR, Annavanna, gimme MOAR.
-waits-


Winter Dreams 01-21-2010 07:48 AM

If only my charm worked more effectively on Adriana. All it did was make me look handsome, and though that was good, it didn’t help her being annoyed.

“What did I do, then? It can’t have possibly been this?”

“No, not this. What you did is fine, you just should’ve done it sooner.” Adriana said, flicking her hair over her shoulder and looking at me.

Wha? Sooner? “What do you mean? So you’re happy that I said I was taking you but it wasn’t fast enough?” I didn’t know. Girls.

“Yes. There’s not that much time until the ball. I haven’t got a dress yet.” Adriana was looking at me with a frown because she hadn’t got a dress yet? What did I have to do with that?

“Why didn’t you get a dress already?” Jeez, there was heaps of time until the ball. “You’re going to go whether it’s with me or not.” I pointed out.

She rolled her eyes. “Come on. You can’t seriously think—?” Adry stopped, shaking her head at me for some apparent reason. “I can’t just do that. I need to have the dress to match my date. I couldn't get a dress if I decided I wanted to go with someone other than you because it'd have to be the right dress.”

Girls really are nuts.

I started laughing. This was really ridiculous. I’d thought Adriana quite like me, now I realised there was an exception. James had turned to listen to our conversation and he joined in with my laughter.

“Are you kidding? Do girls actually do that?” We started laughing again.

“Are you going with someone else, then?” I asked after finally calming down my laughter.

“No. You’re still escorting me.” Adriana gave me a gorgeous, innocent smile, before walking back to her seat.

I grinned. She was crazy, but so pretty.

“Ugh, what do you see in her?” That was the last thing I expected to hear, watching Adry walk off. It was KylieKylers. I laughed.

“We’re not dating or anything, but what every guy sees in her. She’s attractive, popular and good company.” I smirked at the disgusted look on her face.

“That’s so superficial.”

That. That made me laugh. “You say that’s superficial? Kylie, you say that all you want, but you’re dating a rich, snobby, pureblood who cares more about himself then anything. Everyone dates him for looks and his titles alone.” I said, because it was true. “At least I’m more charming, chivalrous, hot, and I’m not a completely idiot.”

Kyla gave me a death glare. I laughed, smirking at her. “You’ve nothing to say ‘cause it’s true.” I said. That did it. Before I could say or do anything else, I felt her hand on my cheek, and no, it wasn’t a caress like I was used to. She slapped me.

Ouch.

I carried on grinning, unfazed. I’d been slapped before, not by Kyla, but it just meant that I’d annoyed her so much.

“The truth hurt, Kylie?” I asked.

I was surprised. She didn’t storm off or give me a cold look. She actually looked quite cheerful. “Remind me to do that more often.” She said, sounding very much like she was enjoying herself. “See you later, Black.” With a grin, she stood up, and walked over to the Ravenclaw table.

Kyla was never happy when talking to me. She didn’t even seem to bother with me calling her Kylie. All it took was her slapping me.

Shrugging, I turned back to James.

Winter Dreams 01-21-2010 07:54 AM

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 9049771)
:loved:

Thankies, myAna. *huggg*

Aww. :glomp:

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Teehee. These two, they're awesome!
:woot: You like 'em!

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What? I didn't do anything. =pp
Oh, of course you didn't. :P

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Is this the part where she chucks a shoe at him? =pp
She really should.

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Come ON, Sirius! Be ... more gentlemanly. Ask her if she WANTS to go, you know, boy. >__<
Him get turned down? No waaaaay. =P

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-blink-

WHOOSSEE? =O

Eep, thankies for pointing that out. It's supposed to be:

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I love my good looks.
I just missed that typo when I was checking it. xD

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*eyes cliffie*


Gimme MOAR, Annavanna, gimme MOAR.
-waits-


Morrrre above, Maxshie. :glomp:

Maxilocks 01-21-2010 08:00 AM

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Originally Posted by myAna (Post 9049812)
“No, not this. What you did is fine, you just should’ve done it sooner.” Adriana said, flicking her hair over her shoulder and looking at me.

BWAHA!

Talk about attitude. =DD


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Adriana was looking at me with a frown because she hadn’t got a dress yet? What did I have to do with that?
I was thinking the very same thing! Sirius and I must be twins! xDD

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“I can’t just do that. I need to have the dress to match my date. I couldn't get a dress if I decided I wanted to go with someone other than you because it'd have to be the right dress.”

Girls really are nuts.
Correction: ADRIANA really is nuts.

She cracks me up, though, so it's all good. =pp


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It was KylieBearie.
GOOOD boy, Sirius. -petpet-

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I carried on grinning, unfazed.
In Urdu, a person like that is called "dheet." You know... someone who doesn't care if other people just slap them and walk away, or something like that. They'll still do their thing. =pp

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“Remind me to do that more often.” She said, sounding very much like she was enjoying herself. “See you later, Black.” With a grin, she stood up, and walked over to the Ravenclaw table.
Talk about class. =pp

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Originally Posted by myAna (Post 9049822)
I just missed that typo when I was checking it. xD

Sokay! I do that all the time!

^^


Winter Dreams 01-21-2010 08:22 AM

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 9049830)
BWAHA!

Talk about attitude. =DD

:lol: I know.

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I was thinking the very same thing! Sirius and I must be twins! xDD
-blink- You never told meeeeeeee!

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Correction: ADRIANA really is nuts.

She cracks me up, though, so it's all good. =pp

That is SO true.

I loved writing that bit. =D

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GOOOD boy, Sirius. -petpet-
You never fail to make me laugh. ^^

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In Urdu, a person like that is called "dheet." You know... someone who doesn't care if other people just slap them and walk away, or something like that. They'll still do their thing. =pp
Ooh, really? That's cool and interesting. I laik learning new things. *hugs*

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Talk about class. =pp
Hehe. =p

harita 01-21-2010 02:19 PM

OMG!!!awesome posts....i just couldnt stop grinning!:D...really lovely...waiting for more...but i am actually confused with Kyla's behavior...and what about Lily and James
Harita: oh Jamesies...i am now seriously doubting she would say yes...*shaking head*
;)
waiting for more...

Cassiopia Malfoy 01-21-2010 02:29 PM

HAHA! I think that Adriana is mental.. I'm not like that! But then again I'm a tom-boy... lol... Awessssoooooommeeee!


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