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| Dusty Cellar (Incomplete Fanfiction) The cellar holds unfinished confections of storytelling, giving readers a glimpse into creative ideas that may one day be revived. |
06-26-2011, 09:28 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Megara Kostas First Year | Great chapter! I was so nervous about the sorting! Very curious to see what happens next
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06-27-2011, 11:35 AM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
Posts: 5,253
Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me!
I'm working on chapter four. For some reason what is written is much more detailed when I type so with that I'll post another chapter soon.
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06-27-2011, 12:05 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Denmark, GMT +1
Posts: 334
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sean Hanning Fourth Year | Taking over the world with Laura! | Doing everything Danish style.♥
AMAZING! I was really nervous for the sorting - I can't wait for more!! |
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06-28-2011, 03:45 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: England, Wirral
Posts: 565
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rachel Elizabeth Annabeth Chase Third Year |
WOW, that was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was sooooooooooooo nervous for the sorting, but it all worked out fine!!!!!!!
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06-30-2011, 04:59 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Jakarta, Indonesia
Posts: 2,222
Hogwarts RPG Name: Natalie O'Hara First Year |
*new reader joins in the circle*
You're talented. Nobody could have think a plot like this!
It's awesome and brilliant. I like it very much.
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07-03-2011, 10:27 AM
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| Knarl
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Pigfarts. Mars.
Posts: 9,510
Hogwarts RPG Name: Harland Chadwick Lewin Sixth Year | Did you just lose something? The GAME? Sorry... 'Justin Bieber, he is the man!' U mad, Felton!?
New reader! OMGosh! Me and my brother have just read this! He's only just realised that Justin was a Muggle. This is AMAZING!
PLEASE PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS! PLEASE!  We're hooked!
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07-03-2011, 05:37 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: A planet.
Posts: 480
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lillian Strap First Year |
I have been a bad reader! I keep forgetting to comment!
Yay for him, getting into Ravenclaw! Can't wait for Chapter Four
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07-04-2011, 06:13 PM
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| Streeler
Join Date: May 2010 Location: In the sky & I see u
Posts: 239
Hogwarts RPG Name: Brielle Hart Fifth Year |
- new reader -
Great posts so far. I love the story! Don't worry about computer problems, just post when you can. PAMS |
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07-06-2011, 02:20 AM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
| ♥ Slytherpuff ♥ dancer ♥ totally awesome :: Starkid lover
I like it a lot. Dont worry at all about your computer probs.
I can be am very patient. Not really but I try 
Pams when you can
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07-15-2011, 01:41 PM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
Posts: 5,253
Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me!
Hello to all my fabulous readers. Sorry for the wait I've been out of work for a few weeks, but I'm back and ready to post Chapter four today. Thank you all so much for your kind words.
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07-15-2011, 02:22 PM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | Chapter Four 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me!
Justin had gone to sit with his new housemates in the Great Hall when he
approached the table a skinny brown haired boy slid over on the bench and
motioned for him to sit down next to him. Justin gave a smile and a nod
towards the boy as he sat and the boy began his introduction.
" Hello there. My name is Joshua Micheals. I'm a first year too! So, who do
you think our mystery student is? I heard that there was a muggle admitted
into Hogwarts. Do you suppose that's true? " asked Joshua as he looked
intently at Justin.
As Justin listened to Josh's questions he became extremely guarded as to
what his response would be. after thinking about it for a moment he had
decided that the best way to answer his new classmate would be to lie
about it. As far as everyone knew he had been sorted into Ravenclaw and
appeared to be like everyone else at the table. And with that thought he
answered, " Hi, nice to meet you. Justin Wellheart." As he shoved out his
hand towards Josh and shook hands with Josh. " I heard something similar as
I was on the train. Any ideas as to who it might be? "
" Well, some of the others kids thought that the Sorting Hat would have
let the secret slip out, but nothing out of the ordinary happened during
sorting. Who knows, it was probably just a rumor anyways. " said Joshua.
" Probably" , said Justin. " Thank goodness! " Justin said to himself. As
Justin settled into his house he turned his attention to the Headmaster's last
minute reminds for the first year students.
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07-15-2011, 02:31 PM
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| Jobberknoll
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Up in the Stars
Posts: 3,857
Hogwarts RPG Name: Kennedy Stark Fifth Year x2
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ohhh I love it. nice quick thinking there Justin. 
he seems like such a sweety 
I am sooooo excited for more....keep up the amazing work  I was afraid when the guy asked Justin who he thought the Muggle was
PAMS
***Sarah***
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07-16-2011, 09:52 AM
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| Knarl
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Pigfarts. Mars.
Posts: 9,510
Hogwarts RPG Name: Harland Chadwick Lewin Sixth Year | Did you just lose something? The GAME? Sorry... 'Justin Bieber, he is the man!' U mad, Felton!?
Eep!  I LOVE this story!
PAMS!
Kira
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07-16-2011, 05:56 PM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | Chapter Four Continued 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me!
A few moments later Justin found himself making room for Bertie to sit
down next to him. She had also been placed into Ravenclaw and judging by
her expression on her face she wasn't very happy about it.
" My parents are going to freak out on me! " , yowled Bertie, " What am I
supposed to tell them about this. I even tried swaying that bloody hat and it
didn't listen to me. What am I going to do now?"
" Don't worry so much about it. I'm sure that your parents will understand
that it wasn't your fault that you were placed in Ravenclaw. Besides, think of
all the fun that we're gonna have together. You could have been placed in a
house where you don't know anyone, right?" Justin said as her tried
comforting her. " I'd like you to meet a new friend of mine. " He said as he
motioned his hand towards Josh. " His name is Josh Micheals and from what I
gather he's quite a talker." joked Justin with a small giggle.
" Shut up Wellheart and let me talk to the girl" quipped Josh with a nudge
into Justin's ribs. " The name is Josh. It's a pleasure to meet you" said Josh
as he extended his hand towards Bertie.
" Well, you're quite a charmer aren't you Josh? Hi, I'm Roberta Thornhust,
but you can call me Bertie" she said with a grin.
With that said Josh took her hand in his and gave her light kiss on the top of
her hand. Bertie turned red instantly while Josh just gave her a wink. As
Justin soon learned, Josh possessed a gift with girls and that bit with Bertie
was bothering him . Justin knew that he was too shy to interact with a girl
like Bertie. Just then he realized that he had a bit of crush on Bertie and he
himself began to blush.
" What the matter with you, Justin ?" asked Bertie.
" Oh, umm I was just thinking" answered Justin as he began to enjoy the
welcome feast along with his new friends and classmates.
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07-16-2011, 09:29 PM
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| Knarl
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Pigfarts. Mars.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Harland Chadwick Lewin Sixth Year | Did you just lose something? The GAME? Sorry... 'Justin Bieber, he is the man!' U mad, Felton!?
Aww.........  Sooooo sweet! PAMS!
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07-17-2011, 01:44 PM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | Chapter Four : The Final Portion 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me!
After having finished stuffing themselves with roast beef, mashed
potatoes, corn, pudding and everything else that appeared before them Josh,
Justin and Bertie followed the House boy up to the entrance of the
Ravenclaw commonroom. One word spoken and the entrance would present
itself to the students allowing them to enter. " Opora vida ! "
The three friends watched in amazement as the doorway opened in front
of them revealing the beautifully decorated commonroom. A crushed tan
velvet couch sat in front of an enormous fireplace. To the left of the couch
was a small library with a longish table where Justin would find in the coming
days was perfect for working on homework and studying with his classmates.
Across the commonroom was another table that was mainly used by the older
students.The one time Justin tried to sit there to study he was quickly
removed by an older boy who levitated Justin back to where he belonged and
sat him right on Bertie's lap. Justin turned a dark shade of red and threw a
glare towards the boy.
Just as he had thrown the look at the older boy the boy looked as though
he had been thrown across the table and cleared the table of all his
schoolwork. As he got up he looked bewilderedly at Justin and Justin's eyes
widened with fear. ' What have I done' , he thought, ' I've never been able
to cast a spell and now I can without even speaking a word.' With that Justin
quickly went up to his bedroom and wrote a letter to his mother explaining
what had happened and asked for advice.
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07-17-2011, 01:52 PM
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| Knarl
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Pigfarts. Mars.
Posts: 9,510
Hogwarts RPG Name: Harland Chadwick Lewin Sixth Year | Did you just lose something? The GAME? Sorry... 'Justin Bieber, he is the man!' U mad, Felton!?
!!!!!!!!!! Does he know he's a Muggle!?  Oh no! Don't beat him up!
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07-17-2011, 02:08 PM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me! Quote:
Originally Posted by Fred is awesome !!!!!!!!!! Does he know he's a Muggle!?  Oh no! Don't beat him up! Justin knows he's muggle. That's why he bugged out after he threw the older boy. And the plot thickens !!! |
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07-18-2011, 07:44 PM
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| Knarl
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Pigfarts. Mars.
Posts: 9,510
Hogwarts RPG Name: Harland Chadwick Lewin Sixth Year | Did you just lose something? The GAME? Sorry... 'Justin Bieber, he is the man!' U mad, Felton!? Quote:
Originally Posted by Devina Wellheart Justin knows he's muggle. That's why he bugged out after he threw the older boy. And the plot thickens !!!  No, I mean does the older boy know he's a Muggle?
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07-18-2011, 11:13 PM
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| Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: In the clouds
Posts: 723
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cora Clearwater Fourth Year |
so exciting. just realized you added quite a bit more since i last read this. can't wait to find out what happens |
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07-19-2011, 04:20 AM
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| Granian
Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Bikini Bottom
Posts: 21,185
Hogwarts RPG Name: Roman Gellar Slytherin First Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Arden Toros Gryffindor Sixth Year x4 x1
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ah I just read all your chapters! great job! can't wait for more!
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07-23-2011, 09:51 AM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: England, Wirral
Posts: 565
Hogwarts RPG Name: Rachel Elizabeth Annabeth Chase Third Year |
I cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-24-2011, 03:18 PM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | Chapter Five : Part One 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me!
It had been a few weeks since Justin had sent that letter to his mother
hoping that she might know how to handle his new - found talent and have
some advice to offer him. Justin, Bertie, and Josh were all sitting at their
usual table in the Great Hall eating dinner when the owls started to pour in
from every direction delivering the mail to the students. Justin sat there
waiting somewhat patiently for a response from his mother. All of the owls
had delivered their parcels and post and lef the Great Hall and Justin slumped
down in his seat disappointed. Bertie noticed Justin's disappointment and put
her hand on his shoulder and said " Don't worry about it. Your Mum will write
back and we'll all figure this out. " Of course, neither Bertie or any other
student knew what had been troubling Justin. In fact the other students in
Ravenclaw thought it was pretty cool that Justin could cast spells without
speaking, especially seeing as how he was a first year.
Just as Justin had given up hope to recieve an answer to his letter a lone
owl flew into the Great Hall and straight to him. Justin quickly tore open the
envelope and began to read.
" My Dearest Justin,
I'm sorry to have taken so long to answer your letter.
I've done a bit of research since recieving it. As it turns out
your ability to cast spells without having any type of training
is extremely rare. Only few witches and wizards have ever been
able to do what you are able to do. What's more puzzling is that
you are so young. You must be very careful not to get upset
with people. You are more likely to cause someone great harm
if you do not start to control it. Do ask Proffessor Dumbledore
for help with this matter. I have also sent him an owl explaining
the situation.
All my Love,
Mummy "
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07-24-2011, 03:31 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: England
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Megara Kostas First Year | Oooooh it's getting even more interesting! So does this mean he isn't a Muggle after all...? Hmmmm. Pams!
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07-24-2011, 03:36 PM
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|  DMGS Ramora
Join Date: May 2011 Location: Adirondacks
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Silas Rainier Montesh Jr First Year | oooh! 1 of 4 Amigos Don't underestimate me! Quote:
Originally Posted by ThePureBloodPrincess Oooooh it's getting even more interesting! So does this mean he isn't a Muggle after all...? Hmmmm. Pams! You're too smart!  LOL! I don't know you'll have to read more when I post it later. Anything is possible before it is written! HAhaha |
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