I'm working on chapter four. For some reason what is written is much more detailed when I type so with that I'll post another chapter soon.

AMAZING! I was really nervous for the sorting - I can't wait for more!! :D

WOW, that was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was sooooooooooooo nervous for the sorting, but it all worked out fine!!!!!!!

*new reader joins in the circle*

You're talented. Nobody could have think a plot like this!
It's awesome and brilliant. I like it very much.
:woot:

New reader! OMGosh! Me and my brother have just read this! He's only just realised that Justin was a Muggle. This is AMAZING!

PLEASE PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS! PLEASE!:) We're hooked!

I have been a bad reader! I keep forgetting to comment!

Yay for him, getting into Ravenclaw! Can't wait for Chapter Four

- new reader -
Great posts so far. I love the story! Don't worry about computer problems, just post when you can. PAMS :)

I like it a lot. Dont worry at all about your computer probs.
Ican be am very patient. Not really but I try :)
Pams when you can

Hello to all my fabulous readers. Sorry for the wait I've been out of work for a few weeks, but I'm back and ready to post Chapter four today. Thank you all so much for your kind words.

Chapter Four
 

Justin had gone to sit with his new housemates in the Great Hall when he

approached the table a skinny brown haired boy slid over on the bench and

motioned for him to sit down next to him. Justin gave a smile and a nod

towards the boy as he sat and the boy began his introduction.


" Hello there. My name is Joshua Micheals. I'm a first year too! So, who do


you think our mystery student is? I heard that there was a muggle admitted


into Hogwarts. Do you suppose that's true? " asked Joshua as he looked

intently at Justin.

As Justin listened to Josh's questions he became extremely guarded as to

what his response would be. after thinking about it for a moment he had

decided that the best way to answer his new classmate would be to lie

about it. As far as everyone knew he had been sorted into Ravenclaw and

appeared to be like everyone else at the table. And with that thought he

answered, " Hi, nice to meet you. Justin Wellheart." As he shoved out his

hand towards Josh and shook hands with Josh. " I heard something similar as

I was on the train. Any ideas as to who it might be? "

" Well, some of the others kids thought that the Sorting Hat would have

let the secret slip out, but nothing out of the ordinary happened during

sorting. Who knows, it was probably just a rumor anyways. " said Joshua.

" Probably" , said Justin. " Thank goodness! " Justin said to himself. As

Justin settled into his house he turned his attention to the Headmaster's last

minute reminds for the first year students.

ohhh I love it. nice quick thinking there Justin. :glomp:
he seems like such a sweety :x3:
I am sooooo excited for more....keep up the amazing work
:faint: I was afraid when the guy asked Justin who he thought the Muggle was

PAMS


***Sarah***

Eep! :x3: I LOVE this story!

PAMS!

Kira
x_x

Chapter Four Continued
 

A few moments later Justin found himself making room for Bertie to sit

down next to him. She had also been placed into Ravenclaw and judging by

her expression on her face she wasn't very happy about it.

" My parents are going to freak out on me! " , yowled Bertie, " What am I

supposed to tell them about this. I even tried swaying that bloody hat and it

didn't listen to me. What am I going to do now?"

" Don't worry so much about it. I'm sure that your parents will understand

that it wasn't your fault that you were placed in Ravenclaw. Besides, think of

all the fun that we're gonna have together. You could have been placed in a

house where you don't know anyone, right?" Justin said as her tried

comforting her. " I'd like you to meet a new friend of mine. " He said as he

motioned his hand towards Josh. " His name is Josh Micheals and from what I

gather he's quite a talker." joked Justin with a small giggle.

" Shut up Wellheart and let me talk to the girl" quipped Josh with a nudge

into Justin's ribs. " The name is Josh. It's a pleasure to meet you" said Josh

as he extended his hand towards Bertie.

" Well, you're quite a charmer aren't you Josh? Hi, I'm Roberta Thornhust,

but you can call me Bertie" she said with a grin.

With that said Josh took her hand in his and gave her light kiss on the top of

her hand. Bertie turned red instantly while Josh just gave her a wink. As

Justin soon learned, Josh possessed a gift with girls and that bit with Bertie

was bothering him . Justin knew that he was too shy to interact with a girl

like Bertie. Just then he realized that he had a bit of crush on Bertie and he

himself began to blush.

" What the matter with you, Justin ?" asked Bertie.

" Oh, umm I was just thinking" answered Justin as he began to enjoy the

welcome feast along with his new friends and classmates.

Aww......... :blush: Sooooo sweet! PAMS!

Chapter Four : The Final Portion
 

After having finished stuffing themselves with roast beef, mashed

potatoes, corn, pudding and everything else that appeared before them Josh,

Justin and Bertie followed the House boy up to the entrance of the

Ravenclaw commonroom. One word spoken and the entrance would present

itself to the students allowing them to enter. " Opora vida ! "

The three friends watched in amazement as the doorway opened in front

of them revealing the beautifully decorated commonroom. A crushed tan

velvet couch sat in front of an enormous fireplace. To the left of the couch

was a small library with a longish table where Justin would find in the coming

days was perfect for working on homework and studying with his classmates.

Across the commonroom was another table that was mainly used by the older

students.The one time Justin tried to sit there to study he was quickly

removed by an older boy who levitated Justin back to where he belonged and

sat him right on Bertie's lap. Justin turned a dark shade of red and threw a

glare towards the boy.

Just as he had thrown the look at the older boy the boy looked as though

he had been thrown across the table and cleared the table of all his

schoolwork. As he got up he looked bewilderedly at Justin and Justin's eyes

widened with fear. ' What have I done' , he thought, ' I've never been able

to cast a spell and now I can without even speaking a word.' With that Justin

quickly went up to his bedroom and wrote a letter to his mother explaining

what had happened and asked for advice.

!!!!!!!!!! Does he know he's a Muggle!? :cry: Oh no! Don't beat him up!

Justin knows he's muggle. That's why he bugged out after he threw the older boy. And the plot thickens !!! :)

No, I mean does the older boy know he's a Muggle?

so exciting. just realized you added quite a bit more since i last read this. can't wait to find out what happens :)

ah I just read all your chapters! great job! can't wait for more!

I cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter Five : Part One
 

It had been a few weeks since Justin had sent that letter to his mother

hoping that she might know how to handle his new - found talent and have

some advice to offer him. Justin, Bertie, and Josh were all sitting at their

usual table in the Great Hall eating dinner when the owls started to pour in

from every direction delivering the mail to the students. Justin sat there

waiting somewhat patiently for a response from his mother. All of the owls

had delivered their parcels and post and lef the Great Hall and Justin slumped

down in his seat disappointed. Bertie noticed Justin's disappointment and put

her hand on his shoulder and said " Don't worry about it. Your Mum will write

back and we'll all figure this out. " Of course, neither Bertie or any other

student knew what had been troubling Justin. In fact the other students in

Ravenclaw thought it was pretty cool that Justin could cast spells without

speaking, especially seeing as how he was a first year.

Just as Justin had given up hope to recieve an answer to his letter a lone

owl flew into the Great Hall and straight to him. Justin quickly tore open the

envelope and began to read.

" My Dearest Justin,

I'm sorry to have taken so long to answer your letter.

I've done a bit of research since recieving it. As it turns out

your ability to cast spells without having any type of training

is extremely rare. Only few witches and wizards have ever been

able to do what you are able to do. What's more puzzling is that

you are so young. You must be very careful not to get upset

with people. You are more likely to cause someone great harm

if you do not start to control it. Do ask Proffessor Dumbledore

for help with this matter. I have also sent him an owl explaining

the situation.


All my Love,
Mummy "

oooh!
 

You're too smart! :hermy2: LOL! I don't know you'll have to read more when I post it later. Anything is possible before it is written! HAhaha :)