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hey im a new reader liked it a lot..... keep typing im following you... |
and yes i forgot to mention its so sweet to have ron looking at Hermione like that you have a good sense to show romance Jess I like you... mm dnt think in the wrong way though..hehehe |
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Thanks a whole lot!! Well of course in this story I have the lovely Lily helping me out! =) Hahaha. Don't worry, thanks again! :) Jess |
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Please check out my (Jess's) new story Diary of the Desperate Vanessa Campbell. Chapter 4 The Next Day *knock* *knock* "Draco hun, wake up. You don't want to be late." Narcissa Malfoy said behind her son's door. "Five more minutes mum." I whined. "No get up this instant!" Narcissa yelled, but muttered a "hurry" and left. I couldn't get to sleep last night. I had got a beating from my father because Herm...I mean Granger "got away." I had dreams of her face as I tortured her. As she wanted to be set free from all of this hurt. I put my head in my hands and sighed. Today was the first day of my 6th bloody year at Hogwarts. I don't think I could see Granger on the train. It would probably just hurt. I grabbed my suitcase from the floor and with a flick of my wand it apparates directly to Hogwarts. At least I'm finally of age. It helps a lot actually. I just told Ron that I love Ginny! Yikes! "Well I can't say I like this! But you can go out with her!" Ron sighed. I ran out of the room. "Ginny, Ginny!" I called. There was a moan. I ran towards it. There it was again. This time it was louder. I continued running. I ran into the Chamber of Secrets. What am I doing here? I thought. Then I saw a eleven-year-old Ginny Weasley dying on the cold floor. I ran but could reach. I was moving but there was a force-field infront of me. She was dying! No! "Ginny! Live, c'mon, you gotta live!" I screamed but she couldn't hear me! Tears ran down my face, as the last piece of life left her... "Noooooo!!!" I screamed and shot-up out of my bed. I was covered in sweat. But all that matters was that it was just a dream... |
Woah! Poor Draco! Lucius: stop beating your son! Aw! Poor Harry! That dream was intense! Glad it was just a dream! I was just about to cry when i read the part of Harry getting up. Wow! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
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PAMS! I love it! Poor draco and poor poor poor harry! |
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But this is Lucius we're talking about here. You have to kind of expect it from him at least. :) Jess |
Lucius Malfoy is evil! Poor Draco! And that was a very scary dream Harry had. ~Sarah |
Woah great chappie Jess!!! I luvd it! Can't wait for more! PAMS *Sammy* |
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Awesome!!! i luved it!!!!! PAMS!!! THIS STORY IS AWESOME! I DONT REALLY LIKE RON/HERMIONE BUT THE FIRST PART OF THIS STORY IS AWESOME |
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aww poor harry i feel sorry for him, but its so cute because he is in love with ginny weasley |
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Thanks everyone for all the comments! We really appreciate it. :glomp: Credit to Lily and Jessica. ^ ^ _________ Ron's POV I woke up to knocks at my door and the smell of food coming from downstairs. "Errr...come in." I said. Hermione stepped in, closing the door behind her. I hurried and covered myself up with the blanket, self-concious of her seeing me in my Chudley Cannons pajamas. Hermione walked over to me and sat down on the chair next to my bed. She was being silent and It became very awkward with her just sitting there looking around my room. I saw her eyes gazing at the pictures on my nightstand. One was of Harry, her, and me on the last day of 5th Year last year. We were laughing. The next one was of my family and me in Egypt. Then the one dead center was of just Hermione and me. It was when Harry couldn't come to Hogsmeade one time with us. We had asked Madam Rosmerta to take the picture for us. We were hugging each other and laughing. I was about to say something, but she finally decided to talk. "I remember that day. One of the best days I've ever had in my life." She said smiling. Hermione picked up the one of just me and her and held it to get a better view of it I guess. I loved how her skin radiated from the light coming in from my window. She really has grown into a beautiful girl..err..woman. She set the picture back down and looked at me. "Your mother wanted you down so you can eat. We only have an hour left or so before we need to be at the station. So hurry." Hermione said walking out my bedroom door. "Tell her I'll be down in a few minutes." I called out. 30 Minutes Later "RON! GET DOWN HERE NOW! WE HAVE TO LEAVE!" Molly Weasley yelled. I rushed out of my room with my suitcase and met everyone in the living room. Hermione flicked her wand, pointing to my suitcase, and it disappeared. "It apparated directly too Hogwarts. I already have done Ginny's and Harrys'." She said simply. Draco's POV I grabbed some toast off of the table and took a bit of it. I met my mother and father at the door. "Let's go." My father simply stated walking out the door. My mother frowned at father and looked at me. She had smiled. "Don't worry about him Draco. Come on let's go, we don't want to be late to your first day of your 6th year now do we?" She asked. I rolled my eyes and shook my head. Harry's POV I shoved the bacon and eggs into my mouth. Only to let them slip back onto my plate, when I saw Ginny walk down the stairs. She wore a slim tank top. Smiling at me, she winked. "Ginerva! Put something proper!" Mrs. Weasley. Ginny rolled her eyes. "Harry seems to like it!" She pointed out making me turn a bright shade of red. I dropped the fork and said, "I don't know what your talking about..." |
Haha! Poor Harry! Thats cute! I love it please please please post more sooN! PAms! I love it! |
hehehehe...that Ginny girl has quite a nerve...lol... wonderful Jess...waiting for more... |
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aww harry lol, ron and hermione, and harry and ginny make good couples great post cant wait for more |
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Aw! Hermione remembering on sweet memories! Poor girl. Poor Draco as well. Lucius is just a very silly man. I love Ginny's top. It looks really nice. Haha! :lol: Harry is so embarrassed! It's just so funny! I'm really sorry for not replying in a long time! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
Poor Hermione, Poor Draco. Bad Ginny. Lol.. So here it is! Jess and Lilly doing one together! So far wonderful! |
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Ron's POV I stared at my sister in anger. "Ginny go upstairs now and change!" I yelled. I watched Ginny huff and walk upstairs in a hurry. I saw Hermione run up with her. I turned to Harry. "Do you like my sister?" I asked anger rising in me. "You better not." Before I could say anything I was interrupted by someone clearing their throat. It was Hermione. I didn't really take a close look at her and I was suprised that I missed looking at her. She had a fitting white shirt and tight blue green pants with a thin white belt. I stared at her in awe. "Ginny should be coming down any moment. Anyways let's get going boys. Don't want to be late." Hermione said walking out the door. I turned to Harry. "We'll discuss this later." I said following Hermione's retrieving footsteps. Neville's POV Walking onto the train my eye caught Ginny Weasley's. Blushing, I hopped on to the train. I soon saw a flaming, red light. My face lightening up as Ginny Weasley walked up to me. "Hey Nev!" she smiled, wrapping her arms around me making me want to melt. "H-hey Gin," I said, feeling my brain turn to mush when I picked up her scent. "Nev? You okay?" "Fine," I mumbled. She pulled away, bringing me back to order. "C'mon lets go find everyone else!" |
i think harry might have a problem on his hands, looks like someone likes ginny too. cant wait for more |
Sorry but No Nevielle and Ginny! Harry and ginny forever! haha! anyway it was an awesome chapter! |
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Sorry for not commenting for a long time, Jess! Uh-oh. Ron not like Harry/Ginny? Not good, not good. Hope he gets over the idea, though. Good on Hermione to distract Ron. Oh-no. Neville likes Ginny? Wow! That's new. Harry's going to have an even bigger problem, now. I feel so sorry for whoever doesn't get to be with Ginny. It'll be so sad on them! Sorry, once again. Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
Ron... You can't CAN'T take Harry & Ginny away from each other.. That would be like.. Letting Voldemort rule the wizarding world! |
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Bad Ron, Harry and Ginny are made for each other!!!! I loved it pleez post more soon! Anna |
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UPDATE TODAY && Thanks for the awesome comments! :glomp: |
Chapter 7 Dean's POV I pinned the Head Boy bag on my chest to make sure that everyone could see it. Grinning I glided down the train. My eyes flickered to everyone but no sign of her. A small V appeared on my forehead. Finally I saw an empty cabin except for only one slim, attractive red head lying on a seat. I smiled eargerly and slid open the door. "Hey beautiful." I said, lifting Ginny Weasley's head and placing it onto my lap. She sniggered and placed one finger over my lips. I knew then exactly what to do. I lifted her delicate head and leaned in toward her blood-red lips. Her lips were soft and perfectly designed for mine. After a few seconds she pulled away making me frown. "You have Head Boy duty, right?" "Oh yeah." I said dissapointed. "I'll be back." I said then added. "You can get more pretty while I'm gone." I chuckled but she raised an annoyed eyebrow. "No! I didn't mean it that way! Your beautiful!" "It's okay," she said through gritted teeth. "Go." I left the compartment. What the? You can get more pretty while I'm gone? Idiot! I thought and headed for the prefects compartment. Ron's POV I looked towards Hermione. "'Mione, can you apparate us there?" I asked. Hermione laughed and nodded her head. She grabbed my hand which I blushed at and with a loud POP we were standing in front of the train. I started to wobble a bit and Hermione's sweet laughter rang through my ears and she steadied me. "Alright, let's head to the Prefect's department Ron." Hermione said grabbing my hand and again I blushed. We stepped onto the train and walked down the aisleway. She opened up the slide door and walked through, as did I. I saw Dean and waved. "Hey mate." I said taking a seat next to Hermione. |
I love Harry and Ginny but I don't want them to fall apart! |
DRAMIONE FTW!!!!!!!!! :woot: This is another amazing story! i just love me a bit of draco/hermione hahah PAMS (i dont even know what pams means :lmao: ) |
DEAN HOW DARE YOU KISS GINNY! If Ron finds out your dead |
PAMS! I love it! Noo! She cant like dean! Ron and Hermione are awesome! Ron doesnt even know that dean had just been snogging his sister! |
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!! There are no words to describe how good this story is :O:D |
i agree i want them to be together, but its not my story......another great post cant wait for the next chapter |
NEW READER!!!!!!!!!!!!! i've read some of your other storys and i love them all!!!!!!!!! this one's great!!!! |
Haha! :lol: Dean made me laugh so much! That was hilarious! I can't believe he said that. Especially to Ginny. Aw! :loved: Ron's blushing! That's so cute! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
New reader! This Story is sooo cute! I love it heehee! |
Thank you for all the comments lovelies! :loved: I'm hoping that I will get the new post up this monday! Jess(: Having a bit of technical problems. Hope to get the post up soon. :)) |
Chapter 8 For now on me [Jess] will be writing this story. Lily has writer's block and can't finish the story. Sorry for the inconvienence! So I decided to continue this story to the end. ^_^ Draco's POV I bid my mother goodbye with a kiss and walked onto the train. Sneering at the little mudbloods and such, I headed down towards the beloved prefect's compartment. I smoothed my slick blonde hair back and opened the door. Of course, Weasley, Thomas, and...Granger, were there. I rolled my eyes at their faces. "Don't you have anything better to do, Weasel-Bee?" I asked taking a seat the farthest away from the three. Weasley's mouth dropped and I thought flies could come right into his mouth and.. never mind. "What? Shocked by my appearance?" I said raising an eyebrow. Weasley stuttered and shook his head. "Oh shut it, Malfoy." Granger said. It actually had hurt for her to say that but she would never realize that. "Ouch. That hurt Granger, have any more fantastic comebacks? Oh wait never mind, you probably learned those from Weasley." I said snickering. Weasley's face was red with anger now and I chuckled. Ron's POV I was angered. I was dreadfully angered at what Malfoy had said. How dare he say such a thing to me. I could see Hermione holding her wand in a death grip and I sighed. I put a hand on her shoulder and she looked up at me with those big brown eyes. "It's not wor-" *Screams* "DEATH EATERS!" My eyes widened at those words and I felt someone tug on my hand. Hermione. "Ron, come now, we need to hide!" Hermione yelled. I could see fear in her eyes and I ran in front of her as we tried to find a place to hide. |
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Chapter 9 Harry's POV I found Ginny as I was searching compartments. I grabbed her and we hid underneath the seats. I threw the invisibility cloak over us and told her to keep quiet. I could feel the coldness enveloping us and I didn't let go of Ginny. "Dementors as well." I whispered. I hoped Ron and Hermione were safe and well. I couldn't even help but smile to myself as I was there with Ginny. Dean was probably in the prefect's department. Ron's POV I grabbed Hermione and pulled her with me into one of the carts at the back of the train. Just then the screams had stopped and I thought it was very unusual. Hermione tugged on me to peek out for a second, just to see what was going on. I nodded and peeked out the curtain of the cart. Just then a blinding white light struck me. Draco's POV I heard the shouts and screams and shivered. It had probably been my father and a few death eaters. I felt the shiver of coldness and sighed. Dementors were here as well, those bloody things scare me luckily they won't hurt me since I'm on there side. I rubbed my head and walked down the aisleway, carelessly. I watched Weasley and "Draco. We have some important business to attend to with the Dark Lord. You must come with us now." Lucius said. I sighed and nodded seeing Crabbe, Goyle and Pansy behind the death eaters and dementors. I rolled my eyes and could see Weasley poke out of the cart. My father had seen me looking towards there and cast the Avada Kedavra curse. My eyes widened, Hermione...no. I shook my head and cleared my throat to hold myself together. "Father, I shall meet you outside of the train in a few minutes. I must gather up my belongings." I said. Lucius nodded and stalked off with the others. Once they were out of the sight and ran over to Weasley and Hermione. I tried to shake the two awake but they wouldn't. I felt a tear fall down my cheek. My love..was dead. |
OMG! Please tell me it missedd! PAMS |
what!Ron and Mione dead...no no ways...Jess you cant do this...pams... |
Interesting chapter Jess! |
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO POSSIBLE WAY! *stops fangirling Lucius* how could HE do that!? *starts fangirling again because she can't go long without* Oooooooh! Harry and Ginny :yes: :lmao: Poor Draco! Great chapter (even though Ron and Mione are "dead") Can hardly wait for more. Pams when you can Gabby |
Thank you for all the comments everybody! The next chapter should be up sometime this weekend. :D EDIT: Please give me one more week please. ^_^ |
Oooh! Yay, now I'm REALLY looking forward to this whole week :lol: |
By: Jess of Sunset At The Beach Chapter 10 10 Years Later... Harry's POV It's been 10 years since Ron and Hermione's death and many others. It was a miracle that Ginny and I had lived. Malfoy had saved us and now Malfoy is one of the Head Auror's in the Ministry. To think life would be so much different if Ron and Hermione were here. Flashback "And so these lovers, friends and much more were once dear to our hearts. Rest In Peace, Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley." McGonagall announced walking off the stage, crying with a tissue in her hand patting her face. She stopped in front of their graves and throwing a flower on both of them; she walked away and out of sight of everyone else. Ginny was crying on my shoulder, holding onto my hand tightly, burying her face into my shoulder. I sighed and wiped a tear away from my eye. "Come on, Ginny. Let's say our words." Harry said tugging on her hand and walking up towards the graves. While they planned to say something, just the seeing of the gravestones made them silent. Ginny's sobs could be heard a mile away. "We will get them, Ron and Hermione. They will suffer for what they did to you. We love you." Ginny managed to get out. Before Harry could say any words it seemed as if George accidentally let go of the hold on Mrs. Weasley, pushing him and Ginny out of the way as Mrs. Weasley came over to the graves kneeling down, crying. George gave them a sad look and kneeled beside Mrs. Weasley. "It will be okay, mum." George said and was joined by Fred. "My boy, Ronald. He's dead..and Hermione. No, this can't be true." Mrs. Weasley said, shaking her head in disbelief. "Come on, mum we'll come back later." Fred said pulling Molly up from the ground and George throwing a flower on both of the graves. Harry and Ginny watched as they walked over to Mr. Weasley who was dabbing his face with a tissue. They walked back to the car and drove off leaving Harry and Ginny there alone. "Let's go, Ginny." Harry said tugging on her hand. "You will never be forgotten." Ginny said giving one last glance at the tombstones and walking with Harry. However back behind the tree someone stood, dressed in black, as clean-cut could be. He walked out as everyone left and smoothed back his blonde hair. "Hermione, even though I never had gotten to tell you this, I love you. I always have and that's why I made fun of you. Your frizzy hair and smartness was perfect." Draco said then turning towards Ron's gravestone. "I know, Weasley, that you would be terribly mad for what I'm saying right now. However I guess it's best now to tell." -In the distance- "Wait, Harry. I forgot my coat." Ginny said running back and seeing Draco. She glanced at the tombstones then back at him. "You shouldn't have waited until this last moment, Malfoy. You held back your feelings for too long and now you can't tell her in person. You know she hears what you are saying and I know my friend would be utterly confused. However once she would get over that she would see how you really are. Just think about it, Malfoy." Ginny said grabbing her coat and running back to Harry. Draco was standing there thinking about what Ginny said he gave one last look at the gravestones and left. End Of Flashback Never hold back your feelings or ideas until the next day; the next day might never come. THE END. Thank you everybody for all the support, I know Lily and I appreciate it. Thank you so much! :glomp: Jess & Lily |
JESS and LILY! Brilliant!!! So sad Ron&Hermione are dead. Oh. That's life. Loved you story!!! :woot: |
It's over?!! :cry: Ohmigosh! They... Awwwwww it was so sweet! I think I'm gonna die of tears now! |
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