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Wizard POV's - Sa13+ Made by Jess of Sunset At The Beach Hello again!!! This is Jess and Lily! This is Jess's 4th Fanfiction and Lily's 2nd! Please read and review! Oh and check out our other stories too! From Chapter 8 - Chapter 10 Jess will be writing only. Disclamer: The characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling. Chapter 2 //Chapter 3 //Chapter 4//Chapter 5//Chapter 6//Chapter 7//Chapter 8//Chapter 9//Chapter 10 Chapter 1 I looked out my window into the dark clouds above. The dark mark is placed in between the two clouds that stand out the most. Those two clouds remind me of my mother and the one I love the most.... "Draco! Get down here now! We have caught another mudblood! It's your turn to torture the piece of filth!" Lucius Malfoy yelled. I sighed but grabbed my wand off of the old, rotten desk and prepared myself for a very long night. -------<3---------- "Harry! Have you seen Hermione?" I shouted panting like crazy. "No I haven't, calm down mate! Maybe she is with Ginny in Diagon Alley." Harry said. I nodded and sat down on the couch. "Look at this!" Harry said. "What is it Harry?" I asked looking at the newspaper. "Look there's the dark mark over the Malfoy Manor!" Harry said. "So? They usually always have it over there. It would be a suprise if I didn't see it over there anymore. Don't worry about it mate. They are probably just having a big deatheater meeting or something." I said eating some crackers I found on the side of the couch. Harry's eyes bulged and I dropped the old stale crackers. I finally understood that what I said could actually be happening, but who was the victim? -------<3---------- "Ron that's just... not right." I said with a look of discust. Ron's Chudley Canons door opened revealing a very worried looking Ginny Weasley. She looked around and when she saw us she tried to run. I caught her arm before she could though. "Gin, what's up?" I asked patting her on the shoulder. "Oh Harry, it's h-horrible!" she sobbed. I took her in my arms. I knew it was wrong, I mean, we're just friends, but I can't help thinking we could be more... "T-they took 'M-mione!" she sobbed into my shirt. "What?" Ron screamed. "W-we w-were i-in H-hogsmeade a-and d-dementors a-and d-deatheaters!" "What?!" screamed Ron again jumping up all of a sudden. Ginny looked down and saw the prophet. She wriggled out of my arms. Grabbed the prophet and it read: Quote:
"That's it if my best friend is going down I'm going down with her!" she bellowed running out of the portrait hole of Ron's bedroom. Her tear stained face now had a blazing look on it. |
Yay! It's up! :D :P |
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heya...Jess...another one yet again...cool...keep going honey...hello lily... |
hey to both you guys |
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Yeah another one! =DD Yes Lily will be working with me on this story! :) Jess |
Wow its great i cant wait for more.. aww you you and lilly are working together :O.. this should be great duudes.. ill try and check out your other stories to okay :) PAMS !!.. Rach :) |
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Great! We will be posting in about 4-5 days! |
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OMG!!!!!!!!! ANOTHER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I call dibs on Being your NUMBER 1 READER!!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEH PAMS!!!!!!! -Xavier:)- |
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*New Reader* I really like this story. PAMS *Sammy* |
Awesome story yet again Jess and Lily. Can't wait for more! :D ~Sarah |
PAMS I love it post more soon! Please let hermione be oK! |
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giiiirls. im uberly sooory ive missed posts and stuff. but im on a catching up spree. believe meee. :) i love it. PAMS. loveeyouuuu shannon x |
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OMG! They took Hermione?! That's who they caught and are going to torture?! OMG! They are simply ridiculous! Aw! Harry wants him and Ginny to be something more! How cute! Wonder who Draco likes, though! Ew! Ron ate the crackers someone left behind! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita PS: Yay! Jess and Lily are working together! This should be good! |
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Thanks Kita! P.S. Aww thanks! *hug* :) Jess |
Cool!!!!!!!!!! Poor Hermione. This story has such a great beginning. Post more soon. :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :twins2: :snitch: :albus2: :twins2: :snitch: :albus2: |
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Yeah I know!!! =( Aww thanks! *hug* We will! :) Jess |
good start, keep it coming |
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Cant wait :) Rachluff :D haha x |
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That would of been funny if you used it as your user name. :lol: :) Jess |
Okay, awesomeness! (is that a word) eh, it is now anyways. Keep it coming PAMS! hehe, can't get enough of that word..... |
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tehe. xDD :lol: :pfd: This dancing is awesomeness!!!! :pfd: :lol: :) Jess |
i love it so far! hope hermiones okay post soon!! :) -Chrissy |
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Can't say...:shifty: :whistle: :lol: We might! :) Jess |
Harry's POV Me and Ron looked at each other for a minute that scrambled to our feet. Panick scratched my insides. Ginny was not going to go! No! To many people have died because of me but I was not going to let her die! Me and Ron ran out of his room. And mind you, just in time to see her in the chimney with emerald flames wrapping around her but not burning her tender skin. "Shoot!" muttered Ron as Ginny spinned. Her face showing fear, braveness and confusion. "We've got to go after her!" My heart racing. Ginny's image still fresh in my mind. Draco's POV "Cruico!" I yelled shaking. Another scream pierced my ears. "Draco! Now clean her up while we go talk to the dark lord!" Lucius Malfoy called. Draco nodded and walked over to her. "Why? Why are you doing this?" She asked. "Because..because you are a filthy mudblood." He said wincing at the name. "I hate you Draco Malfoy. I don't think you have a single nice bone in your body! No one will love you! You are too mean." She said crying. Draco felt a tear fall down his cheek and he wiped it off quickly. "Don't talk to me in that way you piece of filth!" Draco said sternly. "How could you...Draco?" She said before falling into a sleep of unconciousness. I looked down at the person I loved. Miss Hermione Granger. Her body was full of bruises and cuts. She still looked beautiful as always. She had dry blood in her bushy hair and face. "Twinkles!" I called. The short elf bowed and said, "Yes master." "I need you to take Miss Granger to the Burrow. Do not tell anyone about this. I will handle my father." I said curtly. "Yes sir." The elf bowed again. Right before they could leave though the Weasley girl popped right in front of me. "Twinkles take Miss Weasley too." I said groaning. Before Weasley could say anything she apparated with Hermione and Twinkles back to the Burrow. |
first response, yay loved it, can't wait for more Amy |
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Hermione's very lucky... We were considering getting rid of her...:mwaha: KIDDING!:lol: |
Aww brilliant post.. i kind of feel sorry for draco :(.. Haha creased.. you made me laff then lilly talking bout getting rid of hermione :).. your joking right :( please say your joking lol.. nice post Girlies :).. cant wait for more :) Rach |
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Yeah kind of...:mellow: Oh well you see that's what Lily said, I didn't say anything, and I haven't talked to Lily about my plans for the future chapters yet, so anything can happen. xDD Thank youu!! :) Jess |
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Yeah I was! ;) I feel sorry for Draco too! Oh guys it's only fair if I tell you that I write as Harry and Jess writes as Draco and Ron! |
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this week I've killed 3. But I won't tell you which story or stories I kill people in so I don't give my whole plot away. :whistle: lol |
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Awww Amy, fine. :mellow: I have to go searching to see who get's killed! =( :lol: :) Jess |
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Jess likes her DRAMIONE lools. :) wubyou x |
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But I fancy a different ship! :shifty: |
is it a good oneeE? |
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Hi!!!!!!!!!!! Is Draco being nice:one_brow: Poor Hermione she shouldn't be tortured :( Post soon please. PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :techni: :twins2: :snitch: :albus2: :twins2: :snitch: :albus2: |
YOU HAVE TO TELL ME! lool, ill love you forever :D PAAAAAAMS |
Brilliant! Draco's being nice??? Oh well great post! *Sammy* |
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meeee tooo! PAAAAAAAAAAMS, in that moood lol. |
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P A M S ! Great Post! |
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i fancy a ron and hermione too haha.. gimme some ron and hermione :) haha Cant wait for more duudes :) ;)Rachluff |
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Aw! Draco loves Hermione! And he's being nice! Well, sort of! Poor Hermione! She doesn't deserve it! Wow! Ginny's got a lot of determination! Good on you Ginny! And Harry loves her a lot! I couldn't help saying "Aw!", even in the seriousness of the situation. Twinkles! Nice name for a house-elf! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
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I ship Ron/Hermione and Draco/Hermione nothing else. Soo it could go either way. =DD :) Jess Quote:
I know! Ginny and Harry are so cute! Hahaha yeah I thought of the name Twinkles. I just thought of it out of no where. tehe. xDD Thank you Kita!! <33 :) Jess |
I love it PAMS! I have grown to love!!!!!!!!!!! Dramiones to! |
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Glad you liked it! =) |
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But since reading your storyies im sooo warming to the idea of draco and hermione haha.. as long as my ronikins dont get his heart broken :( lol Cant wait till the update duudes.. Rach |
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 PAMS!!!!!!!!! -Xavier:)- |
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That was the exact same for me. I hated the fact that Hermione could be with Draco, but ever since I started reading Dramione fanfics I love them, but I also love Hermione and Ron...so it's soo weird. hahaha! xDD LOLOL!! =DD Thanks! :) Jess |
Awwww! Go Draco for being awesome and nice. :) ~Sarah |
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Ha the lucky girl got the pic of the two aint she haha.. I Would probs chose ron mind :lmao: i just got such love for the guy hes great haha.. But the again the bad boy is always an attraction haha :P Cant wait for more posts duudes :P Rachie:pfd: |
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I know, Ron is great, oh but Draco *faints* tehe. xDD I just love them both. We will work on the next chapter soon! Thanks Rachluffehh!!! <333 :glomp: Oh and now is my nickname Jessluffahh???? xDD :) Jess |
plezzzz, more posts lol PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Hmm Yeh it can be your new name haha.. :glomp: Hehe.. cant wait for more Jessluffahh :).. Love You lots liek jelly tots :) Rachluff |
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hahahaha! iwubyourachluff!! <33 maybe... :) Jess |
Thanks for the wonderful comments!! We really appreciate it! In the next 10 - 20 minutes the next chapter will be up. So keep a look out for it! We love you!!! :) Jess & Lily |
Harry's POV Just then there was a crack. Ginny and a very worn-out Hermione and a very bony, house-elf. Hermione fell to the floor her whole body shaking in pain. Ginny crawled over to her friend as the elf disapperated. "Are you okay 'Mione?" Ginny asked with a terrified expression. "I can't believe you came to me!" Hermione said with tears in her eyes. "What are friends for?" Ginny hugged her best-friend. I looked over at Ron and saw in his eyes right now he wished that he was Ginny. And I wished that I was Hermione... Ron's POV Hermione? Ginny? They are back! No!! Why does Hermione look like that? "What are friends for?" Ginny hugged her best friend. Oh how I wish I was Ginny at this moment. "Umm, hey Ginny mum wants you and Harry to go help clean up for dinner." Ron said. Harry gave me a confused face but went to my mother and so did Ginny. I walked over to Hermione and looked into her eyes. Those big chocolatey brown eyes. I picked her up and layed her down on the couch. "I missed you so much 'Mione." I said looking down. "I missed you too Ron. The only person I thought of was you..oh and of course Harry and Ginny." Hermione stuttered. I smiled and thought there might be hope telling her that I like her. I looked up and she smiled at me. "We better get ready for dinner 'Mione. I'll bring the food out to you." I said. She nodded and I walked into the kitchen. Mum was making her famous mashed potatoes and roast beef. I sniffed the air and hugged my mother. "What has gotten into you sweetie?" She asked. I chuckled and said, "I need some food for Hermione, she was trapped at Malfoy Manor but somehow she got back." Mum gasped but then nodded her head. I got the food for Hermione and left the kitchen. Oh shoot! I forgot to mention Ginny was there too, well maybe not, Mum will probably just panic even more. I set the food on the table in front of Hermione. She sniffed the air and smiled. "It smells good." Hermione said. "Can you move the table closer to me?" I nodded and pushed the table closer to her. She was moving into a sitting position but she yelped out in pain. I picked her up and put her into the sitting postion. She smiled at me and started to eat. I watched her eat and she looked at me like I was crazy or something. "Umm, Ron? Why aren't you eating? Your food is going to get cold." Hermione said. "Oh, yeah food...right..okay." I said. I was so distracted by how she was doing that I didn't even eat! Merlin's beard I must be going insane! I mean I don't love her...right? |
Aww so sweet!! I love Ron and Hermione! PAMS!! *Sammy* PS first to post!!! |
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I love them too!!!! :) Jess P.S. yea!! EDIT: PAGE 4!! |
aww, cute |
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loved it! Great chapter :) PAMS!! -Chrissy |
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Aww thanks!!! :) Jess |
PAMS! I love it please post more soon! |
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Yes you do Ron! You looooove her! Don't deny it! :music: Ron and Hermione sitting in a tree..... |
Aw! Poor Hermione! Hope she's ok! Aw! Ron is so sweet! He loves her! He's even forgetting to eat! He's so lovestruck! Aw! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Kita |
nice chapter girlies :).. im sooo glad they got back okay :).. i love having the boys points of view :) makes a change haha.. Ron and hermione are just too damm Cute !! cant wait for more ladies :) Rachluff.. Quote:
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New Reader and i love it awh Ron's in love and doesn't kno it :) PAMS Shell xxx |
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I can't say if he loves her...neither can Lily! tehe. xDD Glad you all liked the chappie!! :) Jess Quote:
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WELCOME TO THE WIZARD POV'S FAMILY!!!! =DD Maybe..... :whistle: :) Jess |
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Hmm Maby you doo.. NOTT !! i love you lots like dobbys sock :lol: soo please post moree my luvah :) |
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I can't post yet luffahh!!! I just posted and I just started school. Oh and Lily and I haven't even written the chapter together yet. =(( :) Jess |
That was harsh and sad poor hermione.:hermy: |
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Sorry, but that's the way we wrote the story. :) Jess |
Poor hermione!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Oooo post more soon!!!!!!! *Sammy* |
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Aww go Ron! Poor 'Mione :( Can't wait for more! ~Sarah |
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aw...sweet always loved Ron/Hermione hey want to know about Harry Pov...quick...lol...take your time but as usual waiting for more... |
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