Hahaha Sirius of course you're hot. PAMS!
Amie

love the post! sso sweet I really don't like Larissa *slaps her*

loved that post...siri si aways HOT!!! pams pams pams

POST! I haven't posted in almost a month!!! 0_0 The next few posts are kinda sad...


“Um…Emmy, you might not want to go in there,” Sirius said stopping Emmy before she could go into the common room.
“Why not?” Emmy asked raising an eyebrow.
“Because Lily and James are making out,” Sirius answered. What’s he hiding, Emmy wanted to know. She knew that Sirius was keeping her out of the common room for a better reason than Lily and James making out.
“Sirius, I don’t care if Lily and James are making out. What’s really going on in there and why can’t I go in?” Emmy questioned.
“Oh no reason. I just felt like driving you nuts,” Sirius replied with a cheesy smile.
“Sirius!” Emmy shouted, exasperated.
“Emmy!” Sirius cried passionately and started kissing her. Emmy shoved him away and walked into the common room determined to find out what was really going on. Lily, Alivia, James, and Remus stood in the middle of the common room and James quickly his something behind his back.
“Hi Emmy!” Alivia said cheerfully. Emmy looked at them suspiciously, wondering what they could possibly be hiding.
“James? What’s behind your back?” Emmy asked. James looked at her as if he had no idea what she could possibly be talking about.
“Nothing,” James lied. Emmy looked at Lily, who she knew would never lie to her.
“Lily? What’s going on?” Emmy asked sweetly. Lily bit her lip, hard, but then broke down.
“Okay okay! Larissa put up nasty things about you like you’re a fat h*** and that you’re cheating on Sirius all over the common room. We didn’t want you to see them, even though they were cheesy, so we asked Sirius to keep you out of the common room so we could clean it up,” Lily said, “but he did a rather poor job.”
“I tried! I even tried kissing her, but she was onto me!” Sirius said surrendering.
“I’m going to murder Larissa!” Emmy exclaimed and started swearing in Spanish.
“You know Spanish?” James asked, surprised.
“Yeah, since I was five,” Emmy replied blankly. She thought it was pretty obvious she knew how to speak she had just lived in Spain for a year.
“You didn’t know that Prongs?” Sirius asked. James shook his head.
“Am I the only one who didn’t know that?” James asked and they all nodded.
“I can’t believe you didn’t know that! I mean she just lived in Spain for goodness sake!” Lily exclaimed.
“Well phooey on all of you for not telling me,” James said crossing his arms over his chest and they all laughed.

~ <3 ~

Peter met Regulus by the lake once everyone had gone to bed. Peter was shaking from head to toe.
“Master gave you a tough task Pettigrew. Do it right or I’ll murder you,” Regulus threatened.
“Don’t worry, I will,” Peter replied.

~ <3 ~

“Sirius! Sirius Hey! SIRIUS!” Sirius turned around to see Gryffindor Chaser, Angie Camsole running toward him.
“Hi Angie! What’s up?” Sirius replied.
“When are you going to hold Beater try-outs since Chris graduated?” Angie asked.
“Next week on Wednesday. Want to help me spread the word?” Sirius asked.
“Sure. See you next Wednesday!” Angie replied and took off. Up the corridor Larissa’s friend Monica stood alone. Where’s her gang? Sirius wondered. He smiled and walked toward her, fun calling to him.

~ <3 ~

Emmy was sitting on her bed in the girls’ dorm about ready to throw her Potions homework out the window. She was so frustrated at it!
“Lily, the main ingredient in the Aging Potion is octopus tentacles right?” Emmy asked. Lily sighed and shook her head.
“No, it’s octopus ink,” Lily replied.
“Well, I was close,” Emmy said,
“LILY! EMMY! GET DOWN HERE!” Sirius bellowed obviously mad about something. Emmy and Lily jumped off their beds and ran down to the common room. Sirius’s face was red with fury and he was pacing the floor. A few second years backed away, scared of him.
“Siriness! What’s wrong?” Emmy asked.
“Your boyfriend gave me a detention!” Sirius shouted in Lily’s face that turned a little pale.
“Why?” Lily asked as calmly as she could.
“Because I turned Monica’s ‘precious’ black hair blue,” Sirius snapped and Lily took a step backwards for safety.
“Well, he was just doing his job as Head Boy and it’s not like it’s your first detention…” Emmy said which was a bad move on her part.
“But he’s my best friend! Mooney never gave me a detention and neither did Lily!” Sirius yelled. Lily got silent, leaving Emmy and Sirius to go at it.
“Well, they never saw you do anything worthy of a detention!” Emmy replied feeling her blood start to boil.
“Oh yes they did! You weren’t here at all last year so just SHUT UP!” Sirius screamed pushing Emmy over the edge. A couple of third year students “ooo”ed.
“Fine,” Emmy snapped quietly and stormed up the girls’ dorm.

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ooo sirius is mad @ her. bring up last year ()
Jess

*shake head* Sirius Sirius don't make Emmy mad! you love her! maybe it wasn't really James...........and what is Peter doing anyway? does it have something too do with Siri's DETINTION?!?! just noticed *glares at James who prob. not the real James* hmmmmmm well yeah *sighs* great post!!

Em

Rp Buddy!!!!!!!!!
Great post! why did James give him detention? I have a feeling it wasnt James...Cant wait for more!!!!!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*laughs* Ooo...I'm evil...I'll post ASAP. =P

omg loveeeeeeeeeeeee the posty lol....yep eeeeevil...still love the post..pmas..pams..pams

~Ria~

Alivia sat in the library with Emmy, tired of everyone being mad of everyone being mad at each other. She and Remus were the only ones not mad or had someone mad at them. Sirius was mad at James for giving him a detention, Emmy for defending James and Lily for being mad at him and Emmy for being mad at each other for stupid reasons. Lily was also mad at James for the same reasons as Sirius. Emmy was mad at Sirius for yelling at her and telling her to shut-up, James for the same reasons as everyone else, and Lily because she was mad at her. James was mad at Sirius, Emmy, and Lily because they were all mad at him when he was only doing his job.
“Are you ever going to talk to Sirius again?” Alivia asked, tearing Emmy from her book.
“Maybe, maybe not,” Emmy replied. Alivia rolled her eyes.
“Well, I’m going back to the common room,” Alivia said doubting Emmy even cared.
“Okay,” Emmy responded blankly not looking up from her book. Alivia left the library as Ravenclaw Seeker, Chase Mackey sat down by Emmy and started talking to her.
“Nifflers,” Alivia told the fat Lady and she let her in. Sirius was talking to Remus, Lily wasn’t in the room, and neither was James, but Alivia figured that he was out doing Head Boy duties. Alivia sighed and climbed the stairs to her dorm to go to bed.

~ <3 ~

James yawned as he walked through the corridors tired as tired got. He really was sorry for making everyone mad, but he had his priorities and keeping his position as Head Boy was one of them on the stairs James came face to face with Emmy. If her looks could kill, man would he be dead meat. She brushed past him, hitting his shoulder with hers...hard. James touched his shoulder wishing he could change things and the damage he did wasn’t that bad. Emmy and Sirius were still together, just wouldn’t go within ten feet of each other. Same with him and Lily. James had to admit it, Lily being mad at him was hurting him, but he wasn’t going to apologize until she apologized to him. She may be stubborn, but she could be just as stubborn.

~ <3 ~

Emmy entered the common room after meeting James on the stairs. At her entry Sirius stared at her. His face showed anger, but his eyes showed love and sympathy. Emmy ran up the stairs and into the bathroom where she burst into tears.

~ <3 ~

Lily stared at the ceiling wondering if she was ever going to go to sleep. A tear rolled down her cheek as she wondered if James would be mad at her forever. Alivia was the lucky one. No one was mad at her and she wasn’t mad at anyone. Lily rolled over to stare at the red curtain surrounding her bed. She closed her eyes and wiped her wet cheeks. Somewhere in her heart she knew that everything would be okay. Eventually…

~ <3 ~

Emmy’s worst nightmare had come true. Sirius and Larissa were walking side by side. Larissa had a huge smiled of satisfaction on her face making Emmy want to strangle her. Luckily, Sirius didn’t seem as pleased, but Emmy still had to blink back tears. Emmy clutched her books closer to her chest watching Larissa kiss his cheek. Get off him you…Emmy thought, not even able to think what she wanted to think.
“Hey Emmy!” someone called. Emmy whipped around to see Ravenclaw Seeker, Chase Mackey running toward her.
“Hey Chase! Where are you headed to?” Emmy asked planting a fake smile on her face.
“Potions,” Chase replied walking beside Emmy.
“Same here,” Emmy said as they reached the stairs to the dungeons.
“Will you be my partner?” Chase asked and Emmy nodded. They sat down together at a table as the bell rang. Across the room Sirius and Larissa were sitting together. Emmy slid closer to Chase, hoping to make Sirius jealous. Larissa threw Emmy a note and she caught it. I told you he’d be mine.

~ <3 ~

James ran up to Remus, panicking. He had seen Sirius and Larissa together at lunch and Emmy and Chase holding hands between classes.
“Mooney! Did I break up Padfoot and Emmy?” James asked, terror in his voice. He had a strange feeling that he did, and he felt horrible. Everyone knew that Sirius and Emmy were madly in love.
“It appears that way,” Remus replied sadly. James swore under his breath, angry with himself.
“Well, I’ll get them back together, even if they do hate me right now,” James promised.

~ <3 ~

Alivia woke up suddenly in the middle of the night. Lily was asleep, but Emmy wasn’t in the room. Assuming she was down in the common room, Alivia walked down. Sure enough Emmy was sitting on the couch clinging to a stuffed bear Sirius had given her, tears streaming down her cheeks as she stared into the orange fire. Alivia sat down next to her and gently hugged her best friend.
“I want him back Liv. I want him back and I want him now,” Emmy said quietly with a sniff. Alivia hugged Emmy tighter and rubbed her back comfortingly.
“I know Emmy. I know,” Alivia whispered.


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Sad...*sniffs*

Oh *sad face*
Poor Emmy. She needs her Sirius. I hope they stop fighting soon.
The begining where everybody was mad at each other made me laugh.
It was so confusing it made sense. I know that made no sense, but I still got it.
I cant wait for more. Post more soon!!! PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LoL...yeah, it took me a while to figure out how to write it. =P Good job for getting it!

omg..i havevt read this ff inlike ages...im soo sorru but i have exams next week and i have been studyingmy bum off........i thought i'd have a break and i checked ur ff out...man it rocks..whooo....larrisa is evvvvvvviil me no likey her.......aww plz let emmy and siri get back to gether again....they make such a cute couple.....and they both live eack other anyway....anywyz have to go back to rivising(darn i hate that word)
luv salee
xoxoxoxoxo

Omg i love that post...its soooo sweeety

~Ria~

hey dan crazy anything else i can call u? Add me k i love the story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!!!!!:techni: !!!!!:!!!!!:!! lol! so many

Nice story, hun. It would be even better if you spaced your paras and took a little more care with your grammar and punctuation, though. Like, instead of:

Quote:

With Mike’s arm firmly around her shoulders, Emmy signed autographs of various fans at the party. When the last one left Mike steered her over away from the people.
“Wanna escape this mess?” Mike shouted over the music.
“Sure!” Emmy yelled back. He took her hand and pulled her outside onto the porch. Emmy knew that she was giving Mike that wrong idea, pretending to be in love with him, but what damage could it do? Mike was hot, she was a single rock star, and maybe if they shared a few kisses, Emmy would forget Sirius. After her “mini-concert” Mike had asked her out and she said yes. Mike looked over at Emmy and smiled. Emmy smiled back and watched Mike’s face slowly inch toward hers. Before she knew it she was kissing Mike. She slid her arms around his neck slowly, enjoying the passion.

How about:

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With Mike’s arm firmly around her shoulders, Emmy signed autographs of for various fans at the party. When the last one left, Mike steered her over away from the people.

“Wanna escape this mess?” Mike he shouted over the music.

“Sure!” Emmy yelled back. He Mike took her hand and pulled her outside onto the porch.

Emmy knew that she was giving Mike him that the wrong idea, pretending to be in love with him, but what damage could it do? Mike was hot, she was a single rock star, and maybe if they shared a few kisses, Emmy would forget Sirius.

After her “mini-concert” Mike had asked her out and she said yes. Mike He looked over at Emmy and smiled. Smiling back, Emmy she watched Mike’s his face slowly inch toward hers. Before she knew it, she was kissing Mike. She slowly slid her arms around his neck slowly, enjoying the passion.

[[ Corrections underlined ^^ ]]

It's mainly pronouns, and similar stuff, but you're doing a great job, nevertheless. You have a strong plot, and I'm luffin' it. <3

dangrlforever- You can call me Lili and thanks, glad you like it.

Senorita Maxie- Thanks for the tips. I do space and paragraph and stuff in Word, but when I copy and paste it onto here it doesn't do that. I'll make sure I do next time. Again, thanks!

WIll you be posting soon?
Jess

I would post, but I'm on my mom's computer. It took be FOREVER to get SS to load, and I'm not going to risk getting off. I'll post soon, like tomorrow or Wednesday. I was away over the weekend. If I wasn't I would've posted then.

Cant wait for your post Lili!!!
You have fun with your family over the weekend?

OMG! I think I hear my cat opening and closing the door!



PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here's a postie! That was weird. Anyway...hope you like it!

Emmy was walking with Remus when a rumble was heard from the Great Hall. The sound of china being smashed together and people shouting were clearly heard, even from down the corridor. Emmy and Remus glanced at each other then took off running for the Great Hall where there was a circle of bunched of students were crowded around.
“Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight!” the students shouted. Emmy worked her way to the front of the circle and was shocked to se Sirius and Chase punching each other.

“You can’t tell me to lay off your girlfriend, ‘cause guess what? She’s not yours anymore!” Chase yelled.

“You git!” was all Sirius could say, and punched Chase again. McGonagall ran into the hall screaming.

“Boys! Break it up!” she shouted pulling Chase and Sirius off of each other. Sirius had a bloody lip, and Chase a black eye and a bloody nose.

“Forty points from Gryffindor and Ravenclaw. I don’t want anymore out of either one of you or you’ll end up with a month’s worth of detention,” McGonagall warned and left. Emmy thought McGonagall was being rather generous for only taking forty points off. Without thinking, she ran to Sirius and started moping up his bloody lip with her sleeve.

“What was the fight for?” Emmy asked grabbing an ice cube from the Hufflepuff table and pressing it to his lip.

“Mackey was bragging about how you were his and I got mad so I socked him. Emmy, I’m sorry for getting mad at you, and I really don’t love Larissa, I love you. I was only around her to make you jealous,” Sirius confessed.

“Oh Sirius,” Emmy cooed and kissed him. The students who were still gathered around whistled and giggled.

“Mr. Black! Miss Benson, we would appreciate it if you would keep displays of affection private,” McGonagall yelled from across the room. Emmy and Sirius quickly broke apart to see Chase and Larissa shooting daggers at them. Emmy had the urge to stick her tongue out at Larissa, but she didn’t.

“Oh well, it kinda hurt anyway,” Sirius said shrugging.

“Oh my God! I’m so sorry!” Emmy cried. Sirius hugged her tightly, determined not to let her go.

“It’s okay baby,” Sirius replied.

“By the way, I’m sorry for getting mad at you,” Emmy said still hugging Sirius.

“You’re forgiven,” Sirius replied. Emmy took his hand and led him up to the hospital wing so Madame Pomfrey could fix his lip.

~ <3 ~

“Emmy and Sirius are back together,” Remus announced to James in the boys’ dorm.

“That’s good! Do they still hate me?” James questioned.

“I’m afraid so. They’re still mad at Lily too, well as far as I know anyway,” Remus replied. James threw his books down, furious and stormed down to the common room. Sirius and Emmy were down there snogging each other’s faces off, but Lily wasn’t around.

“LILY EVANS! Get down here! NOW!” James screamed up the girls’ dorm. Lily ran down the stairs frantically, but then glared at James when she realized it was him who called her.

“What?” Lily snapped. James had never seen Lily’s beautiful emerald eyes hold such anger in them. Hatred he’s seen before, but this anger thing was new.

“I really don’t want to beat up some guy to get you to forgive me, but I will if I have to. Lily, I’m sorry,” James said. Anger vanished from Lily’s eyes immediately.

“James, I’m sorry too,” Lily replied hugging him. James took her hand and led her over to Emmy and Sirius, who were still glued together. He cleared his throat and they quickly broke apart.

“I’m sorry,” James said to them.

“You’re forgiven,” they responded, and turned back to each other to kiss again, but James held up his hand giving them the “I’m-not-done-yet” glare.

“Now you three…you’re all best friends, so hug and make up,” James commanded. Lily hugged Emmy, then Sirius.

“I’m sorry,” they all said in unison. James smiled, pleased with himself, then left so Emmy and Sirius could make out again, and he could finish him homework.

♥

Fight!Fight!Fight!

Oh sorry it was catching

That was great!! Everybody made up so quickly
And James is the reason why they are friends again

Anywayz Cant wait for your next post!!!
PAMS!!!!!

awwwww thats was soooo tweeeeeet......now thats wat i call reall true friends...loved the post....pams
salee
xoxoxoxo

Thanks for the comments guys!!!! :techni: Here's another post.


Sirius sat down beside Emmy quietly as she finished up her homework. She looked up at him, then went back to her writing her Potions essay.

“You’re hair looks nice today, but not like it doesn’t always,” Sirius said fingering Emmy’s blonde hair.

“Hmm,” Emmy mumbled not looking up from her papers.

“Our first Quidditch game is tomorrow,” Sirius said as Emmy wrote another sentence.

“Mmm hmm,” Emmy replied flipping through her Potions book, looking for
something.

“The weather’s supposed to be really nice,” Sirius added.

“Okay Sirius. What do you want? To make out or my homework to copy or what?” Emmy asked finally looking up.

“Nothing! I was just wondering if you were coming to the match tomorrow,” Sirius answered throwing his hands up in a mock surrender, an innocent look on his face.

“Of course I am. I wouldn’t miss it if the world was coming to an end,” Emmy replied.

“Cool! Now, if you want to make out with me that can be arranged,” Sirius said with a sly grin and Emmy rolled her eyes.

“Oh shut up,” she said.

~<3~

“Here come the Gryffindor players! I hope they win! Sorry Professor. There’s their amazing captain Sirius Black leading them onto the field. There they go! Black, Potter, Camsole, Camsole, Zerkah, Amaba, and Sigler! And here comes the Ravenclaw team, lead by Captain Holly Houser. They shoot off into the air…Houser, Baxter, Buchwalter, Mackey, Waters, Prarro, and Scarts! Madame Hooch releases the balls and Gryffindor Chaser, Angie Camsole has the Quaffle!” commentator Sarah Jordan bellowed over the field. Emmy, Alivia, Lily, and Remus sat in the stands to watch Sirius and James play.

“Do you think they’ll win?” Alivia asked.

“Of course,” Lily and Emmy replied in unison.

“Sirius’s been bragging about how good the new Beater Chad Sigler is. He’s skinny and fast, but wickedly strong,” Emmy said.

“Like Sirius and James really,” Lily added.

“Yeah! Sirius and James have muscles man! Have you seen Sirius’s abs?” Alivia asked her eyes wide with excitement.

“Yes I’ve seen his abs. Why have you seen his abs?” Emmy wanted to know raising an eyebrow.

“Pool party at my house before fifth year,” Alivia replied.

“Oh,” Emmy said in relief.

“Does this mean I don’t have muscles?” Remus asked poking out his lower lip and crossing his arms over his chest.

“Of course not! I mean, check out those biceps,” Alivia covered quickly making Remus, Lily, and Emmy laugh.

“Potter passes to Camsole who passes to Black. I think he’s going to shoot. He aims and…he passes it to Potter. Ooo…tricky! Potter scores!” Jordan yelled and Lily screamed as everyone cheered, “That gives Gryffindor a lead, twenty to zilch.”

“They scored twice already?” Emmy asked amazed. The others shrugged and continued to watch the game.

“Now Ravenclaw’s in position. Chelsea passes it to Amanda. Will she score? No! Kelsey Zerkah blocked it! Good job Kels! Oh my gosh! Ross Camsole seems the Snitch! Already? Wow. Mackey seems to be floating there clueless. There goes Ross. Oh look! Black’s just scored! Thirty-zilch to Gryffindor!” Jordan announced, but everyone was watching Ross go after the Snitch.

“Ross and Angie aren’t twins are they?” Emmy asked and Remus shook his head, his eyes still glued to the game.

“No, Ross is a year older than Angie,” Lily answered watching as Ross dived and caught the Snitch. The Gryffindors jumped up, screaming in delight as the Ravenclaws had sulky looks on their faces.

“Camsole’s done it! He’s caught the Snitch! 180-nada. Gryffindor wins!” Jordan screamed. Lily and Emmy ran out onto the field to congratulate Sirius and James for winning the game. Emmy ran to Sirius and threw her arms around him before he even dismounted his broom.

“You guys were so great! The game hardly lasted ten minutes!” Emmy exclaimed. Sirius swung off his broom and hugged Emmy back.

“I know! I’m so proud of Ross! Let’s go congratulate him!” Sirius said walking with Emmy to where Ross was standing on the field.

“You were amazing!” Emmy cried beaming at the two boys.

“Yeah! That was the best we’ve ever played,” Sirius said patting Ross on the back. Across the field Holly was yelling at Chase who was looking at the ground, sheepishly.

“That’s because we have an amazing Captain this year!” Ross replied with a grin.

“Well, maybe, but having a great team helps a lot,” Sirius replied as Emmy clung to his left arm, beaming up at him.

“We’re all proud of you and the team Sirius,” Emmy said Sirius smiled down at her.
~<3~

Lily quietly snuck over to Emmy’s dresser in the girls’ dormitory. Outside snow was slowly drifting to the ground, causing a white blanket to cover the green grass. Lily sighed thinking about how quickly the year was flying by. Before they knew it they would finish their final year and leave Hogwarts forever to start their lives. Lily quickly got the information she needed and ran back down to the common room to where Sirius was patiently waiting.

“Five,” Lily told him and he smiled. If anyone else heard this, they would have no idea what it meant, but Sirius knew. He knew perfectly well what the simple number of “five” meant.

“Thanks Flower! I owe you so much!” Sirius said and left. Lily walked over to James who was sitting on the couch, staring into space.

“Howdy,” she greeted sitting down beside him and kissing his cheek.

“Hey babe. I’m bored,” James replied pulling Lily up against him.

“I can fix that,” Lily said and kissed him. He kissed her back, wrapping his arms around her waist, enjoying the way her soft warm lips felt against his. A couple of second years looked away disgusted, but for some reason Lily and James just didn’t care.

♥

Ah that was great! I loved the quidditch match
What does 5 mean? I wonder...
Cant wait for your next post Lili!!!

*Stephie*