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07-10-2006, 10:45 PM
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#226 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| What's with Jake?? He's being an idiot, I don't like him right now. Can't wait for the next post, PAMS!
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07-19-2006, 01:50 AM
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#227 (permalink)
| Augurey
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When Ian finished the task with flying colors Dana wondered how Isabella and Kimmie were going to take the task. Ian had received three 8s and one 9. That was a good score! Next Isabella stepped into the rink and Dana let out a loud cheer for her. Isabella took out her wand as a Demiguise was let out of a metal crate. As soon as it saw Isabella it disappeared. She tapped her own head with her wand and closed her eyes. As if she was shaken awake or scared her eyes popped open and Isabella muttered some spell and the Demiguise appeared and was obviously knocked out. Isabella walked over to it and pulled off one silver hair. The crowd cheered, Dana and Juliette the loudest. The clock on the west side of the rink showed that it had only taken her three minutes to retrieve the hair. It had taken Ian five. Dana switched her gaze to the judges. Professor Maxime shot up a 10. Dana wasn’t surprised since Isabella was a Beauxbatons student. The Drumstang proffesor, who Dana did not know, gave Isabella a nine. Hermione, who was looking very pleased at her niece, gave out a 10. The guy from the Ministry of Magic gave Isabella an encouraging look, along with a third 10! Isabella looked radiant and pumped her fist into the air and screamed a “yes!”. Dana smiled as along with others as Isabella returned to the Champions tent and Kimmie came out. The process was the same, she came out, the dudes let the Demiguise out, and she started to trick it. After six minutes Kimmie had plucked out a sliver hair and she had received a nine, two eights, and a seven. At the seven, given by Madame Maxime Jake stood up.
“What do you mean a seven? She did great!” Jake yelled. Ali pulled the sleeve of Jake’s robe, forcing him back into his seat.
“Jake take a chill pill. It’s just a score. It’ll be okay,” his sister said and Jake rolled his eyes.
“This first task has left Isabella Weasley in first with thirty-nine points. In second place is Ian Ianevski with thirty-three points, and in third place in Kimmie Shaner with thirty-two points. Now you have been given your clue to figure out what the second task is so please take time to figure it out because it will help you greatly,” Professor McGonagall said. Everyone was dismissed and Dana ran to congratulate Isabella as Jake and Ali tagged along to talk to Kimmie. When she reached the Champions Tent she ran inside and hugged Isabella tightly.
“You were awesome!” Dana squealed and Isabella giggled.
“Thanks. It was harder then expected,” Isabella replied.
“You made it look so easy!” Dana said hugging her cousin again as Juliette ran into the tent and threw herself into Isabella’s arms.
“You were awesome sis!” Juliette said and Isabella and Juliette started talking in French. Dana felt left out and cleared her throat. Isabella and Juliette looked at her and giggled.
“We forgot you don’t speak French Dana. Sorry,” Isabella apologized.
“It’s okay,” Dana replied. Dana glanced over to see Jake and Ali talking to Kimmie. A bright light filled the tent as a boy, maybe sixteen walked in and over to Isabella. He was tall, had black hair and Dana noticed was pretty good looking. He flung his arms around her and kissed her. Dana raised an eyebrow and looked at Juliette hoping for an explanation.
“Her boyfriend,” Juliette explained and Dana nodded. When Isabella and the guy broke apart she turned to Dana.
“Dana this is my boyfriend Pierre,” Isabella explained and she turned to Pierre and said something in French. He nodded, kissed her quickly, and left the tent. When Pierre was gone Dana turned to Isabella again.
“So what’s the clue?” Dana asked and Isabella pulled a small piece of paper from her pocket as she and Juliette crowded around to read the clue.
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07-19-2006, 02:26 AM
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#228 (permalink)
| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
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I need to know what the clue is!!!!!! PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
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07-19-2006, 12:59 PM
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#229 (permalink)
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aanya Agrawal First Year | Wonky Knee OWESOME! that was great!!! PAMS!!!! |
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07-20-2006, 08:51 AM
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#230 (permalink)
| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Good posts! I wonder what the next task will be like...
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07-21-2006, 05:17 PM
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#231 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Belfast
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wow great post!
pierre is a hott name!
wonder wot th 2nd task is!
PAMS!
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07-21-2006, 05:37 PM
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#232 (permalink)
| Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Jackson, Kentucky, USA
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ohhhhh! this is so cool!
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07-22-2006, 12:48 AM
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#233 (permalink)
| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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OK I'm leaving for vacation in the morning and I'll be gone a week. I'll post as soon as I get back I promise!!!!!
~Lili
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07-22-2006, 03:00 AM
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#234 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| I can't believe Madame Maxime gave a seven! But oh well. PAMS!
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07-25-2006, 01:42 PM
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#235 (permalink)
| Triwizard Champion DA's ROR Keeper
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aanya Agrawal First Year | Wonky Knee You haven't posted in a long time!!!! PAMS!!! |
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07-26-2006, 03:08 PM
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#236 (permalink)
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Hi New Reader Here!!!!! I love your story. Jake needs to calm down. Oh and what's wrong with being kissed at age 11? I was and the guy that kissed me just happens to be my boyfriend now so hahahaha. lol.
Sorry I've been drinking way to many soda pops. Please post more soon.
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07-28-2006, 11:43 PM
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#237 (permalink)
| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
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It's been 10 days! Please post *gets down on knees and begs*!
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07-30-2006, 10:03 PM
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#238 (permalink)
| Augurey
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LoL, well, I have to type the post. I just got back from vacation yesterday. I'll post later I promise!!!!!!!!!
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07-31-2006, 08:31 PM
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#239 (permalink)
| Augurey
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OK here's a post! Hope you like it!!
Dana peered over Isabella’s shoulder to read the clue. With our large round eyes and batty ears,
We have served you throughout the years.
Now it’s your turn to help us,
You owe us something, do not fuss.
Darkness will be all around you,
Some things may try to distract you too.
So help us please, from the creatures,
The points will help you through these features.
“What the heck is that supposed to mean?” Juliette asked.
“Well, ‘with our large round eyes and batty ears, we have served you throughout the years’ must mean they’re talking about house elves. Don’t you think?” Dana replied.
“Yes! That makes perfect sense! House elves have huge eyes and batty ears. Plus they serve their master until they are set free or die,” Isabella said as she looked at the paper.
“The next line is obvious. You have to help them,” Juliette pointed out as she gazed at the paper over Isabella’s shoulder.
“Yes, but help them from what?” Dana asked, skimming the next line of the clue.
“It will be dark. What’s dark? The forest and the dungeons. Then there are creatures that will try to distract you? From maybe helping them. What do you have to help them with?” Isabella asked trying to solve the clues.
“It says help them from the creatures. Maybe the creatures of some sort have them in captivity,” Dana suggested.
“Yes! That’s it! We have to rescue a house elf from some creature in some place dark. Since there’s creatures it’s probably in the forest, since the dungeons don’t have creatures. Unless you count spider, flies, and potions ingredients,” Isabella said.
“So that’s the task? You have to rescue a house elf from a creature, or creatures, in the forest?” Juliette asked and Isabella nodded.
“Yes. I believe so,” Isabella replied.
“That wasn’t too hard to solve,” Dana said looking at the clues.
“Not as easy as you think. I still don’t know what the creatures are. I don’t know what spells I should have in mind to arm myself. I have to be ready for anything,” Isabella replied.
“Well, at least you know what you have to do,” Juliette said.
“Yes, well I’m going to go tell Pierre. He’ll want to know,” Isabella said and she left the tent. Juliette and Dana soon followed.
“So how long has Isabella been dating Pierre?” Dana asked Juliette and she smiled.
“About six months. They’re joined at the hip. I don’t talk to him much. Sometimes I overhear them talking. The only thing about him is that he doesn’t know English. Just French. Isabella is trying to teach him some though. The only thing he can say is ‘I love you Bella’. Sad isn’t it?” Juliette replied and Dana giggled.
“Well, it’s a nice start,” Dana replied.
“Well, I should run. Catch ya later!” Juliette said and she joined a group of Beauxbatons girls that Dana assumed were Juliette’s friends. Dana broke out in a run to join Nikah by the carriages.
“Hey Dana! We’re going up to the Dining Hall for lunch. You coming?” Riley asked.
“Sure,” Dana replied. She scanned the group to see that Jake was still in the tent with Kimmie and Ali.
“Is Jake still with Kimmie?” Megha asked and Dana nodded.
“Lunch is calling! And so is my stomach,” Damon said and the girls laughed and they trotted into the Dining Hall. Jake came into the hall and sat down next to Will, across from Dana, looking sulky.
“Why the long face?” Violet asked. Jake stared at her.
“Nothing,” Jake snapped. Dana gazed around at the group, counting them all. She raised an eyebrow and recounted.
“Hey guys, I think we have a problem,” Dana said counting again for the third time.
“What’s the problem?” Libby asked looking at Dana.
“There’s ten of us. Not nine,” Dana replied. They all looked around and counted.
“Ha. You’re right. There, me, Dana, Megha, Charlie, Riley, Libby, Violet, Damon, Will, and Jake,” Halie said counting off on her fingers.
“I guess we’ll have to be Tikah instead,” Riley said. Everyone laughed. Damon raised his goblet of pumpkin juice.
“Cheers to the new named, old group, Tikah!” Damon said and everyone lifted glasses and clinked them.
“I have things I need to do. See you all later,” Jake said as he stood up to leave. He left the hall and Dana chased after him. She caught him in the hall and pulled on his arm to stop him.
“What is wrong with you?” Dana asked irritated.
“What do you mean what’s wrong with me?” Jake replied looking at Dana, obviously still sulky.
“You’ve been treating everyone in Nikah, I mean Tikah, like dirt. You don’t talk to anyone and you’re being an anti-social jerk!” Dana replied fiercly.
“So I’m being a jerk? You’re the one being a jerk Miss Sunshine full of optimistic thoughts!” Jake snapped back.
“There is nothing wrong with being optimistic Jake! Ever since I broke up with you you’ve been a real pain to everyone. You’re mean to everyone who doesn’t think Kimmie will win the Cup and you never talk to me! You treat me as if I don’t exist!” Dana replied as anger washed over her.
“Well maybe I’m not over you!” Jake replied. His remark shot shock in Dana’s face.
“Well grow up and get over it!” Dana replied. Her anger wasn’t as strong, but she was still ticked at Jake for being a sulky jerk.
“Well, I’m sorry. I’ll try to be a pleasant person from now on,” Jake said sarcastically and he walked away leaving Dana to stand in the empty corridor. She took a deep breath a leaned against a wall. So Jake wasn’t over her. Dana began having second thoughts. Was she really over him? Did she really not like him?
“Cut it out Dana! You’re eleven! Not the time to fall for a guy,” Dana told herself.
“Oh, come on Dana. He’s not that bad is he?” came Isabella’s voice. Dana spun around to find her cousin standing by a doorway to a classroom.
“Isabella! How long have you been standing there?” Dana asked, her eyes wide.
“Long enough. I heard the whole fight, at least I think. Unless it started before you started telling him he was being a jerk,” Isabella replied. Dana sighed.
“You heard the whole thing,” Dana said looking down at her shoes suddenly feeling embarrassed.
“So you liked him?” Isabella asked and Dana felt her cheeks grow red.
“Yes,” Dana replied quietly. Isabella smiled in satisfaction and touched Dana’s shoulder gently.
“You should give him a second chance. I can’t really judge because I don’t know him, but if you liked him he must’ve been a pretty decent guy,” Isabella said and Dana looked up at her. Her blue eyes sparkled with mischief and Dana wondered if she was right.
“Well, maybe I was wrong,” Dana said and crossed her arms over her chest.
“Maybe you were. Maybe you weren’t. Just think about it. If you don’t give him a second chance you might wish you had in the future,” Isabella said and she turned and left. This time Dana was sure she was alone. She walked back into the Dining Hall and sat with her friends. Maybe Isabella was right. Then again, maybe she wasn’t. Should she give Jake Shaner a second chance?
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07-31-2006, 10:55 PM
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#240 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| Jake is being really annoying. Stop being not over Dana! Great post, Lilikins, PAMS!
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08-01-2006, 02:57 AM
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#241 (permalink)
| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Mooncalf
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry:
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Evil Jake.  I hope he turns for the good soon. PAMS!
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08-01-2006, 11:47 AM
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#242 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Belfast
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*gasps* they nyt get bac 2gether?!?!?
yay!! i think jake wud stop bein a jerk if they were 2gether again!!
great post!
PAMS!
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08-02-2006, 04:12 PM
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#243 (permalink)
| Patil's Club Promoter Imp
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Airwana aka Air Second |
He still likes her so she probably should give him a second chance. Isabella is right she might wish in the future that she had given him that second chance.
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08-06-2006, 06:23 PM
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#244 (permalink)
| Red-head Ginny Fan James' Pranks K.o. Lupin's Loyalty Firecrab
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel.
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Yahoo! You posted! I think she should give Jake a second chance! PAMSOID!!!!!!
__________________ ~Katie and Nathan (The Current Weasley Twins)~ "Families are like fudge... mostly sweet with a few nuts." - unknown. "Piper, this is completely illegal!" -Leo Wyatt, Charmed
"Yeah? Well, so is marrying a dead guy, okay? [She holds up his death certificate] Let's not get technical now!" -Piper Halliwell, Charmed. |
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08-06-2006, 10:40 PM
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#245 (permalink)
| Augurey
Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: left SS for good
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okie dokie, here's a postie!!! LOL. OK, that's lame, but I feel like being lame, cuz i can!!! Hahaha! OK here ya go, enjoy!
Dana sat with all the other students from all the schools with Tikah. Madame Maxime and Professor McGonagall stood at the from of the Dining Hall.
“It is tradition that every time ze Trivizard Tournament is held, zere is to be a Yule Ball. All student are allowed to attend,” Madame Maxime announced and a rumble went through the hall.
“It is a new rule that all students can attend so please don’t blow it. First years are to return to…wherever you sleep at eleven. Second and third years can stay until eleven-thirty and fourth years and up can stay the full time until four in the morning since it their age span that was allowed until now,” Professor McGonagall added and Dana felt a jolt of excitement. She was allowed to go!
“Ze School Champions must ‘ave dates. Others don’t but zey may ‘ave one if zey vish,” Madame Maxime said. Dana knew Isabella and Pierre would go together. McGonagall dismissed them and Tikah left the hall. Out of the corner of her eye, Dana saw Will ask Charlie to go. She nodded and hugged him. Riley and Halie were deep in conversation probably about the Yule Ball. Libby and Megha were picking out guys that walked buy. Voting on whether they were good-looking, cute, or hot. Violet was talking to Damon and Jake was walking behind Dana.
“Hey Dana?” Jake asked. Dana turned around to face him.
“Yeah?” Dana replied.
“I’m sorry about this morning. I was…well, I really don’t know, but I’m sorry. I want to be friends. So what do you say? Friends?” Jake asked and Dana smiled.
“Yeah. Friends,” Dana agreed. Jake grinned.
“So will you go to the Yule Ball with me? As friends?” Jake asked and Dana laughed.
“Sure. As friends,” Dana agreed. Jake smiled again. Dana turned back around, tired of walking backwards and Jake jogged up to walk by her side.
“So did you and Isabella work out the clues?” Jake asked. Dana nodded.
“Yeah. Did you and Kimmie?” Dana replied. Jake nodded as Tikah approached the carriages.
“Yup. Ali thought it was too easy,” Jake replied and Dana nodded.
“I know! Isabella said that it isn’t as easy as we think because she doesn’t know what the creature is,” Dana said. Jake ran a hand through his hair.
“Yeah, Kimmie’s freaking out. So let’s not let this tournament get between our friendship okay? No matter if Kimmie wins, if Isabella wins, or if that Ian dude wins,” Jake said and Dana smiled.
“No matter what!” Dana promised.
“Hey, we need a secret handshake or something,” Jake said. Dana giggled.
“Okay, just as long as it’s not the thing when you spit in your hand and shake hands. That’s gross,” Dana replied. Jake laughed and studied Dana.
“’Kay. Spit shakes are out,” Jake agreed, “how about this?”
Jake took Dana’s hand and spun her around. Broke free and they high-fived then low-fived. They gently punched each other’s fists and Dana burst out laughing.
“Okay that one’s a keeper,” Dana said and Jake grinned.
“Cool! You’re awesome Dana!” Jake said and they climbed into the carriages.
“Ditto. Gotta go! Catch ya later!” Dana said cheerfully and she entered the room she shared with the rest of the Tikah girls, pleased with the day. So maybe Jake wasn’t her boyfriend, but he was her friend and that was better.
“So you and Jake back together or what?” Megha asked when Dana entered the room. Dana shook her head.
“Nah. Just friends. Friends are better in my opinion. They last longer,” Dana said with a smile.
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08-07-2006, 01:02 AM
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#246 (permalink)
| Triwizard Champion DA's ROR Keeper
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aanya Agrawal First Year | Wonky Knee Loved it!!!!! PAMS! |
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08-07-2006, 03:24 AM
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#247 (permalink)
| Dog Star Owner Billywig
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| Yay, they're friends. PAMS!
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08-07-2006, 03:26 AM
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#248 (permalink)
| Patil's Club Promoter Imp
Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Well DUH I'm at Godrics hollow with Harry so don't bother me.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Airwana aka Air Second |
Awwwww I love it they are finally friends agian. Jake is so sweet. Wonder what will happen at the Yule Ball? PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-07-2006, 01:25 PM
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#249 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Belfast
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yay they r friends!
i wonder wat wil happen at th yule ball!!
great post!
PAMS!
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08-08-2006, 07:40 PM
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#250 (permalink)
| Bundimun
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Why would I tell you?Is it of any importance to you?Well even if it is, I'm not telling you!
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Wow!*sighs in aww* that was beautiful!!!you know, I have been thinkin about your siggy, and if you and a friend are swimming and you both go under water at the same time and your friend waves at you or something then everything/everyone is not gone cause your friend is there.So my point is that your siggy is not accurate.
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