~That is really good :flowersmile: ~

wow, it's beautiful. very moving, i think. :wub:

funny limerick!-

there was garden with too long grass,
along came a gard'ner no charm or class,
when went to mow,
he fell too low,
and nearly cut his bottom.

that's funny! i like it.

Iv'e got another one. Hope ya'll like it.

I want to
be loved.
I want to
be held.
I want to
look around and
see you standing there.
Next to me.
If I stumble,
Start to fall,
I want to land,
In your arms.
If I cry, scream,
With anger or sorrow,
I want your
Arms around me.
I want to
be loved.

that's really good! I like your poem best deatheatter. It's really funny.
Here is one of my poems. I kind of like this one....

A hole in my heart,
A big gaping mass.
It shattered to pieces,
Like fine thin glass.
This could not be right,
This could not be true.
My throat was tight,
That December day, 2002.
As I stared into the casket,
Memories flashed by.
She had once put eggs in my basket,
But that was before she had to die.
But the memory that stood out,
Was just the past day.
I had screamed, cried, and shouted,
Like a horse stuck in clay.
Six bullets in her body,
Two in her chest.
My step-dad was naughty,
The doctors tried their best.
If I could hold her one more time,
That would be enough for me.
She was beautiful, sweet, and kind,
I'll miss you, mommy....

What do you think?

this is from my novel I'm writing
Lost in the dark no one around
What she says no one shall hear
She wears not a smile but a frown
Face is covered by so many tears

She hasn’t laughed in decades
She can barely even survive
The glint in her eye continues to fade
As she waits for the end of her life

Where she goes no one cares
They all talk behind her back
Friends? There is none there
Happiness she continues to lack

No one notices her waste away
She hopes for at least one joyful day

I like it.

HPfreak I like yours! Heres one of mine tell me what you think!

World of Pretend
Remeber those days
You'd sit in you room
Pretending to be
Something you not

The world of pretend
A majical place
It lets the mind wander
And the imagination flow

As we grow older
That world disappears
We no longer pretend
We stay in reality

I don't want to grow up
I want to pretend
In that magical land
Where my thought's run free

ooh Awesome! lol yeah my poetry is kinda well mostly depressingy lol

Okay, a couple things.

1) You say "no scamming" (although you PROBABLY meant "spamming") yet in the beginning posts you ask someone to be your friend. WTF. Maybe YOU should read your own rules.

2) You spelled "board" wrong. And it's not a board, it's a thread or topic.

3) No, you may NOT chat here. The only chat thread is in the Inappropriate Nonsense forum.

4) I think you should add this rule: "NO MACHING-GUN POSTING." Like what you just did earlier. I think I saw about five or six of your posts IN A ROW. This is against the board rules on SS.

5) Why do you people need a thread to get your poetry rated? This is why you have your own portfolio so people can rate you INDIVIDUALLY. None of this "OMG duz dis sound gud?" stuff.

Verdict: LOCKED.