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01-05-2004, 11:35 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
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- RULES
- 1. No Scamming Plz
- 2. No one Shall insult Poems(as in Thats terrible ect,,,)
- 3.Show of your poetry!
- 4.Have FUN!
 Thankyou for following these Rules! | 
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01-05-2004, 11:39 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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Heres a poem its not that good....
When all has failed Dont Give up
Think of the rain that holds you in your place
Also Think of your good times and forget the past
listen to these words of Truth and Love,
to find the faith inside..
:heart: Please Tell me How you like it and 1-10
Example: Good Poem But Add a little more and it will be perfect! i give it a 7!
Of couse i wont rate mine i will rate YOURS!
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01-05-2004, 11:41 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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Quote: Originally posted by BubblyChika44@Jan 5 2004, 06:15 PM - RULES
- 1. No Scamming Plz
- 2. No one Shall insult Poems(as in Thats terrible ect,,,)
- 3.Show of your poetry!
- 4.Have FUN!
Thankyou for following these Rules! Reminder For all you people !!! Read The Quote and you wont face consaquces! U may chat here just mainly Poems Plz.And Rating
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01-05-2004, 11:42 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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:unsure: Is anyone here to umm say poems rate poems? or is it just me  | |
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01-05-2004, 11:46 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
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Quote: Originally posted by BubblyChika44@Jan 5 2004, 05:19 PM
Heres a poem its not that good....
When all has failed Dont Give up
Think of the rain that holds you in your place
Also Think of your good times and forget the past
listen to these words of Truth and Love,
to find the faith inside.. i think it's cute! i wouldn't change anything! give it a perfect 10! :wub:
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01-05-2004, 11:47 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
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Thankies~
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01-05-2004, 11:48 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
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so, can we post are own poetry in here, as well as rate others? 
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01-05-2004, 11:49 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
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Yes Thats the whole Point here~~
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01-05-2004, 11:50 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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Do you want to be my friend???
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01-05-2004, 11:51 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
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who? me? i'd love to be your friend! :wub:
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01-05-2004, 11:52 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
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So anyone else? | |
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01-05-2004, 11:52 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
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Quote: Originally posted by Blair Avatar@Jan 5 2004, 06:31 PM who? me? i'd love to be your friend! :wub: yuppers i meant you Yay!
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01-05-2004, 11:53 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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Yay im getting more friends ! I have like 3 Lol! | |
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01-05-2004, 11:55 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
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i like your avatar! it's so cute! i love kitties! :wub:
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01-05-2004, 11:56 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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:cat: Thanks I love them too~ Any more Poems Out there if not Oh well! lol! Brb Dinner Time Be back in like 7 minutes at the max 2 at the min!
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01-05-2004, 11:59 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
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i have a poem that i found from about a year ago, but i guess it is still alright. lightening to the mind from the hand,
lit by your enemies command,
a flash of green light,
a mothers prayer,
a promise to be kept,
something that must be fair.
so what do you think?
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01-06-2004, 12:01 AM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
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OOOOH! :wub: thats BEUTIFUL! i give it a 10~ dont change a thinga! :wub:
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01-06-2004, 12:03 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
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thank you. :flowersmile: i have some others that are posted in a different topic. it's called 'Blair's Poetry' original isn't it?
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01-06-2004, 12:04 AM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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Here are my fav animals
:cat: CATS  COWS  YOSHI RULES lol
:boucepea: Hehehe
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01-06-2004, 12:07 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In a castle far far away...
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That's good!
Please check out my poetry titled HP_Gem54' Poetry.The link is in my signature.
Here is one of mine...Hope ya like
You are a gift
A gift to me
That brightens all the dark in me
When I am down
You come to me with your smile
And I am no longer in denial
For you are a gift to me
A gift of light
A gift of joy
A gift
That changed my life
What do you all think? :ermsmile: :flowersmile:
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01-06-2004, 12:08 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In my head way too much!
Posts: 381
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aww! that's really pretty! i deffinately like it! :sorcerer:
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01-06-2004, 12:10 AM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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Love It!
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01-06-2004, 12:10 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In a castle far far away...
Posts: 724
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Thanks!
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01-06-2004, 12:11 AM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 25
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i gotta Go do homework :sigh: well BYE!
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01-06-2004, 12:19 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: I am surfin in the U.S of A.
Posts: 255
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Heres a poem that i wrote the other day
The wind whips through
my body.
It scrapes along and my
heart bleeds.
The snow settles over me,
like a cold, frozen blanket.
A shell.
Silence.
Then they come.
They tap on my shell,
Try to peer into my
soul,
But they can't get past.
Then they leave.
I cry.
The tears trickle down
into my heart and I come alive.
I bleed.
I will live,
For another day.
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