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amadshade 09-06-2013 10:49 PM

Well... here goes! Sa 13+
 
No i'm not a poet. But I am a writer.

Translation: I need to practice poetry and this seems like a good place to do so!

Other notes: My general theme (other than HP world) is writing poems about spells and charms and potions and just NOT characters. (now watch this devolve into all character based poems...) Also sorry if any are short. This poem thing is new to me.
If you happen to be reading this and wish to request/ give me a spell/charm/potion/non-character to write about
PLEASE DO NOT BE SHY. COMMENT. CRITIQUE. or something.


*sigh*


well... here goes!


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Cheering Charm

If you're sitting in class and you're feeling depressed
and you're watched far too closely to make a good jest
Then the spell that you need is not far away
A Cheering Charm's in order for a much better day



Droo 09-10-2013 01:02 AM

I love it, I LOOOOOVE it! Welcome to the Script Cript, I hope you'll post lots of poems! I can't wait to read them. Don't forget to follow the rules and have fun!!!

amadshade 09-10-2013 08:48 PM

Bluebell Flame

To make the flames for which we are all so fond
Just say the word and with a flick of a wand
Some heat and warmth may be felt
Where only cold and darkness dwelt
However words of caution are at hand
There are few things this flame cannot withstand
With that in mind use this spell well
To make a Cold Fire flame call Bluebell


Just a comment here: This poem was originally written for another thread

Droo 09-11-2013 12:54 AM

I love it! Keep it up!

aaetha 09-11-2013 02:38 AM

Aaah, these both sound lovely! The rhyming is great! Um, if you're looking for requests, how about a talking mirror (like the ones at the Weasleys') or a Pepperup Potion? :)

amadshade 09-11-2013 05:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aaetha (Post 11433604)
Aaah, these both sound lovely! The rhyming is great! Um, if you're looking for requests, how about a talking mirror (like the ones at the Weasleys') or a Pepperup Potion? :)

Will do! :woot: (requests!)

Thanks :glomp:

amadshade 09-11-2013 08:11 PM

Commentary

It’s a great day here for a match
One that will end with the Snitch being snatched
Puffers and Claws are on for the day,
Let’s get the game started, wouldn’t you say?

It began with Ravenclaw and a goal
Before Badger Beaters decided to bowl
Two Chasers had to give pause to their flight
Avoiding that Bludger with all of their might

Wait, wait, what’s this? The whistle is blown
It appears bad sportsmanship was shown
A pause in the game and a player is out
Oh common, it’s your fault, there’s no need to pout

The game continued, Hufflepuff takes the lead
With brooms whizzing by all at a top speed
Whoa! That was a shot the Keeper just blocked
I bet you that Chaser was a little bit shocked

We’ve had a sighting of the elusive Snitch
Just now above the Quidditch Pitch
The Seekers race, speedy and lean,
To where the golden flash last was seen

If you ever had doubts in Team Hufflepuff
It’s obvious now that they aren’t full of fluff
It looks like they’re up by a hundred and fifty
Unless Ravenclaw gets some points in a jiffy

The spectators roared, even Gryffindor came
To watch the conclusion of this epic game
The Eagle- eyed Seeker really fought
To Ravenclaw, the Snitch was caught

This means it has finished in a dead heat
A comeback like this is hard to beat
The players were great and the commentary fine
But for now I must go, I’ll see you next time.


amadshade 09-14-2013 06:46 PM

Pepperup Potion

Achoo! Goes the Professor
Achoo! Goes the Nurse
Achoo! Goes the Student
The cold's getting worse

The mandrakes are ready
So's the bicorn horn
Heed Hipworth's recipe
And a potion is born

Please drink up the potion
Else the cold will spread
Steam may pour from the ears
But none are sick in bed

Casey O 09-14-2013 06:56 PM

I like this! Good job!

amadshade 09-28-2013 12:51 AM

Before a Sorting

Fingers twitching
Nervous ticks
How can such a thing
cause such tension?

amadshade 09-28-2013 03:08 AM

Billywig Sting

A man with the surname of Figg
Flew with a sting of billywig
Though he thought it nice
He wanted down in a trice
But alas he was caught on a twig!

Droo 09-29-2013 12:52 AM

Very VERY good!!! I'm loving these!

amadshade 10-22-2013 12:08 PM

Bewarewolf Tunnel

Moonlight shines on the lake below
Something's happening at the old willow
Just tap the knot, don't bother with please
Now the tree is frozen, despite the breeze

At the base of the motionless trunk
Into the floor a trapdoor sunk
Revealing a tunnel with a dirt floor
And a ceiling so low it makes walking a chore

Quick! Step into the tunnel, the tree is alive
but the whipping branches are soon put out of mind
For far in the distance a howl is heard
Was it made by something wolfish and furred?

At the end of the tunnel lies the Shrieking Shack
It looks like a werewolf now has a good snack!

amadshade 10-22-2013 09:06 PM

Tora's Wand

With a core of Pheonix
she can perform spells of all kinds

At eleven inches long
a good medium of extravagance and refined

With a wood of Ebony
her imagination can't be chained

And a Slightly Springy bounce
her aspirations are not too strained

Haley Arida 12-01-2013 01:03 AM

^ I love your poem. That's the first wand poem that I've read. :)


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