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LyonLover417 06-29-2007 02:05 PM

Watching From a Distance - Sa13+
 
Hey! this is my second one-shot on SS! It's Hermione/Draco! Enjoy!

Hermione climbed onto the train by herself. Her heart was broken once more. First by Draco, then Ron, then Draco again. She felt weary and sad. She watched Draco and his new girlfriend pass her compartment, laughing and kissing. She saw him glance in her direction, and she saw his face melt. But he recovered and went on.

Hermione knew why he broke up with her. But she still thought he was cruel for doing it the way he did. In public, in front of practically the whole school...in front of Harry. Hermione knew Harry and her were ready for a relationship. But Draco ruined that by announcing thier relationship to the world. She put on her Ipod and shffled through the songs on it. This called for drastic music. She flipped on Evanescense and sat back, letting the music wash over her.

Feels like the weight of the world,
Like God in heaven gave me a turn.
Don't cling to me, I swear I can't fix you.
Still in the dark, can you fix me?

Freefall, freefall, all through life.

If you love me, then let go of me.
I won't be held down by who I used to be.
She's nothing to me.

Feels like the weight of the world,
Like all my screaming has gone unheard.
And oh, I know you don't believe in me.
Safe in the dark, how can you see?

Freefall, freefall, all through life.

If you love me, then let go of me.
I won't be held down by who I used to be.

If you love me, then let go of me
I won't be held down by who I was

If you love me, then let go of me
I won't be held down by who I used to be


"Hermione?" Hermione brushed at the tears that still clung to her cheeks.

"I'm here." Draco came through the door and closed it. "What do you want?"

"To get an apology. And...to tell you that Harry still wants to give t a try."

"How...how did you-"

"I talked to him for you. He said he'll try." Hermione ran into Draco's arms.

"Draco....thank you."


Katie

Moxie 06-30-2007 08:02 PM

Hey!

I liked it, but I'm a little confused...let me see if I get it:

Hermione was with Draco, but she started to like Harry, and Draco found out and broke up with Hermione because of it, but Harry was mad because Hermione was with Draco, so he didn't want to go out with her, and she was sad, but Draco apologized and got back together with her?

Hmm...

WELL!

Nevertheless, it was LOVELY, and I liked the song a lot =D

Love
.:Adrienne:.

LyonLover417 07-01-2007 03:50 PM

Almost. Hermione and Draco were dating. Then they broke up. Hermione began to date Ron, but broke it off to get back together with Draco. They started having problems again, and Hermionebegan to get close with Harry. Harry had no idea that Hermione and Draco were dating. Then, Harry was about to ask Hermione out, when Draco made their break-up public, and Harry was so disgusted that he dropped Hermione like a bad habit. Draco felt bad, and persuaded Harry to give Hermione another chance....

hmm...maybe I should turn this into a real fic..

Katie

emma_rlz 07-01-2007 03:54 PM

You should, Katie. It's really good. It's a good plot line.

Nicky.

LyonLover417 07-02-2007 01:46 PM

Thanks Nicky! Maybe I will!

Katie

Fallon Chanel 07-02-2007 01:51 PM

great Katie! loved it

Moxie 07-02-2007 01:54 PM

AHH, I AM ENLIGHTENED!

Nice job, I get it now =D And yes, it should definitely be a fic

And TARA YOU NEED TO POST IN DRACO'S DILEMMA! YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!

LOL

HOPEendures 07-03-2007 02:22 PM

Yeah i think you should turn it into a fanfic to because that would make a good story line.I loved though.
~Heather

harrypotterbabe 07-04-2007 05:49 PM

oooh i see now ahhh i love it
yeah please make it a fanfic, i love it too much ahah
it would be so good.
eekkk good job haha

-annaaa<333


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