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08-19-2003, 09:13 PM
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| Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
Posts: 494
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QUOTE]Grow old along with me
the best is yet to be.
I love you not only for what you are,
but for what I am when I am with you
As we grow older together,
As we continue to change with age,
There is one thing that will never change...
I will always keep falling in love with you.
For, you see, each day I love you more,
Today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
As I stand here today with the world as my witness,
I pledge to you my undying and everlasting love.
I will stand beside you as your partner,
I will stand before you as your protector,
And I will stand behind you as your solace.
Please spend and end your life with me.
There’s nothing in the world
I wouldn’t do for you...
For you are the world to me
About You
Your touch is with me always,
It’s burnt into my skin,
As soft and warm as sun rays
When a summer day sets in.
Your soft voice never silent,
It’s forever in my ears,
Serenading every moment
And calming all my fears.
Your arms always enfold me,
The strength of Angels wings,
They support and protect me wholly
With the safety a true love brings.
While I can never repay you,
For the wonder you bring to my life,
I can forever be true,
And forever be a true Wife.
A Special World
A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.
She's Walking Down The Aisle
She's walking down the aisle
With a smile as pure as honey
A gust of wind as smooth as silk
A glimmer of hope
A ray of light.
She's walking down the aisle
With lovely clothes of crimson red
A look of a saintly figure
A voice of an angel
A silent whisper.
She's walking down the aisle
With eyes as deep as the sea
A song of the morning bird
A divine vision
A picture of paradise.
She's walking down the aisle
Like clouds floating in the sky
Like an angel ascending from heaven
Like a drop of rain in the desert
Like a promise never broken.
She walks down the aisle.
She asks me a question.
I have no words to answer.
And time stands still...
The love we have, sets my heart on fire.
Your love and caring, I do desire.
When I am with you, I feel no pain,
You shine with sunlight, on a day of rain.
I know our love, will always last.
I love you more, with each day past.
Without you here, I cannot be.
For you my love, are part of me.
The love we have, sets my heart on fire.
Your love and caring, I do desire.
When I am with you, I feel no pain,
You shine with sunlight, on a day of rain.
I know our love, will always last.
I love you more, with each day past.
Without you here, I cannot be.
For you my love, are part of me.
My love,
give me the color to paint the night
and I will show you a dream.
When She Walks By
Eyes so dark
Heart so pure
I could never love another
The way I love her
Gleam in her eyes
Like a candles flame
I love when I hear her
Call out my name
When she walks by
Birds stop their flight
The dead come to life
And the blind regain their sight
I could never love another
The way I love her
Eyes so dark
Heart so pure
Skin so soft
Soul on fire
She fills me with
Complete desire
The way she moves
The way she looks
One glance at her
Was all it took
When she walks by
People stare
At her radiant face
And her ebony hair
She fills me with
Complete desire
Skin so soft
Soul on fire
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08-19-2003, 09:14 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: falmouth, cornwall,england
Posts: 664
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there all seperate
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08-19-2003, 09:17 PM
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#3 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
Posts: 494
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tom u write so good there awesome
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08-19-2003, 09:19 PM
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#4 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: falmouth, cornwall,england
Posts: 664
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thanx
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08-19-2003, 09:31 PM
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| Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: falmouth, cornwall,england
Posts: 664
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if anyones reading this i would like some feed back
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08-19-2003, 09:33 PM
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#6 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
Posts: 494
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im reading
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08-19-2003, 09:34 PM
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#7 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: falmouth, cornwall,england
Posts: 664
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obviously u posted them for me
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08-19-2003, 09:36 PM
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#8 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Myrtle Beach, S.C.
Posts: 220
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These are great Tom I really enjoy them. They show a lot of emotion, I love reading them.
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08-19-2003, 09:36 PM
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#9 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: falmouth, cornwall,england
Posts: 664
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thanx u dont no how much that means to me |
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08-31-2003, 06:29 PM
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#10 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: falmouth, cornwall,england
Posts: 664
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YOU LIED
As the grass is green
And skies blue,
Love is real
And ours so true.
You took my hand
In a state of love
And said that it
Was sent from above.
You placed a ring
Upon my ring finger
And that it
Was not to linger.
You said we'd have
A baby born
And that our love,
Could never be torn
You said we'd live
In peace and quiet
Out of harm
And out of riot
Well guess what Boo
I've tried and tried
To keep out the thought that
YOU LIED!!!
A Friendly Goodbye
We've come to the end
Of a long and beautiful relationship
And right now, I just want you to know
The fact that it is ending
Takes nothing away from its beauty
And its very special meaning to me.
I've loved you rightly or wrongly
For so many reasons,
And those reasons haven't changed
No matter how things worked out.
I've loved you for who you are
Even if some of those same qualities
That drew us to each other,
Were the very things
That ended up tearing us apart.
I'll always remember you – and us –
The way we were at the beginning.
And I will always treasure the things
We've shared, deep in my heart, tucked away
In a secret special place with my
Memories of this beautiful time……and you.
hey guys sorry i aint posted for a while someone plzz tell me wot they fink |
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08-31-2003, 07:55 PM
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#11 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
Posts: 494
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there awesome
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08-31-2003, 08:05 PM
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#12 (permalink)
| Jarvey
Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: falmouth, cornwall,england
Posts: 664
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thanx gab
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08-31-2003, 08:11 PM
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#13 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
Posts: 494
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ne time
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09-05-2003, 12:53 PM
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| Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Hong Kong
Posts: 334
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Yay, I'm back. Just for tonight. My poem is true. I can't stay away. God, help me. I love you're poem's Tom. They're really good. If you read mine. I dont know what you'll think.....
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09-05-2003, 01:28 PM
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#15 (permalink)
| Streeler
Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Everywhere
Posts: 229
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WOOH LOVE EM!
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09-05-2003, 01:51 PM
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#16 (permalink)
| Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 7,218
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If you read the pinned topic "Poetry Rules", you would know that you are only to create ONE, and we mean ONE topic per person for them to put ALL his/her poetry in it. If you want to save this, move it quickly into your portfolio beause I will delete it on September 9.
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09-06-2003, 07:21 PM
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#17 (permalink)
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sorry this is walkalonetom but i had to make a new account because my other one got buggered and went stupid yeh sorry people i had to make new thread as the other one got locked because i asked someone to post them for my while my comp was broken they never understand welll heree u go again
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Grow old along with me
the best is yet to be.
*************************************
I love you not only for what you are,
but for what I am when I am with you
***********************************8
As we grow older together,
As we continue to change with age,
There is one thing that will never change...
I will always keep falling in love with you.
8************************************
For, you see, each day I love you more,
Today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
***********************************88
As I stand here today with the world as my witness,
I pledge to you my undying and everlasting love.
I will stand beside you as your partner,
I will stand before you as your protector,
And I will stand behind you as your solace.
Please spend and end your life with me.
*****************************************8
There’s nothing in the world
I wouldn’t do for you...
For you are the world to me
8*********************************888
About You
Your touch is with me always,
It’s burnt into my skin,
As soft and warm as sun rays
When a summer day sets in.
Your soft voice never silent,
It’s forever in my ears,
Serenading every moment
And calming all my fears.
Your arms always enfold me,
The strength of Angels wings,
They support and protect me wholly
With the safety a true love brings.
While I can never repay you,
For the wonder you bring to my life,
I can forever be true,
And forever be a true Wife.
*******************************************8
A Special World
A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.
*****************************8
She's Walking Down The Aisle
She's walking down the aisle
With a smile as pure as honey
A gust of wind as smooth as silk
A glimmer of hope
A ray of light.
She's walking down the aisle
With lovely clothes of crimson red
A look of a saintly figure
A voice of an angel
A silent whisper.
She's walking down the aisle
With eyes as deep as the sea
A song of the morning bird
A divine vision
A picture of paradise.
She's walking down the aisle
Like clouds floating in the sky
Like an angel ascending from heaven
Like a drop of rain in the desert
Like a promise never broken.
She walks down the aisle.
She asks me a question.
I have no words to answer.
And time stands still...
************************************
The love we have, sets my heart on fire.
Your love and caring, I do desire.
When I am with you, I feel no pain,
You shine with sunlight, on a day of rain.
I know our love, will always last.
I love you more, with each day past.
Without you here, I cannot be.
For you my love, are part of me.
The love we have, sets my heart on fire.
Your love and caring, I do desire.
When I am with you, I feel no pain,
You shine with sunlight, on a day of rain.
I know our love, will always last.
I love you more, with each day past.
Without you here, I cannot be.
For you my love, are part of me.
My love,
give me the color to paint the night
and I will show you a dream.
**********************************8
When She Walks By
Eyes so dark
Heart so pure
I could never love another
The way I love her
Gleam in her eyes
Like a candles flame
I love when I hear her
Call out my name
When she walks by
Birds stop their flight
The dead come to life
And the blind regain their sight
I could never love another
The way I love her
Eyes so dark
Heart so pure
Skin so soft
Soul on fire
She fills me with
Complete desire
The way she moves
The way she looks
One glance at her
Was all it took
When she walks by
People stare
At her radiant face
And her ebony hair
She fills me with
Complete desire
Skin so soft
Soul on fire
new one on the way its 50 lines long so i will have it tomoz its called night of the scorpion ttyl
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09-06-2003, 07:47 PM
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#18 (permalink)
| Firecrab
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MIDDLE TN
Posts: 898
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I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!!
Exspecially 'A Special World'
It reminds me of a show I watch.
I love that show.
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09-06-2003, 07:48 PM
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| Guest |
hehe one person likes my poems yay
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09-06-2003, 07:50 PM
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#20 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
Posts: 494
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2 people
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11-27-2003, 11:22 PM
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#22 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: neverland
Posts: 494
| Quote: Originally posted by itsme@Sep 6 2003, 01:01 PM
The love we have, sets my heart on fire.
Your love and caring, I do desire.
When I am with you, I feel no pain,
You shine with sunlight, on a day of rain.
I know our love, will always last.
I love you more, with each day past.
Without you here, I cannot be.
For you my love, are part of me.
The love we have, sets my heart on fire.
Your love and caring, I do desire.
When I am with you, I feel no pain,
You shine with sunlight, on a day of rain.
I know our love, will always last.
I love you more, with each day past.
Without you here, I cannot be.
For you my love, are part of me.
My love,
give me the color to paint the night
and I will show you a dream.
**********************************8 i love this poem its beautiful
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11-27-2003, 11:45 PM
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#23 (permalink)
| Imp
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: At your neck!
Posts: 489
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really good stuff! im likin it - keep writing!
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