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TeganWR · 02-08-2005, 11:20 PM

Pams!

-Tegan-

Sk8er girl · 02-09-2005, 03:04 AM

"aww wittle Tony is seeing a Griffy" Draco said he appeared from a corner.
"and....atleast I"Tony said but Draco cut him off.
"tut tut Tony better be nice wouldnt want anything happening to Zee"he said menasingly
"What? You better not or I'll..."Tony said but once more Draco cut him off
"you'll what get a Gryffi on me" Draco said there was a menasing Glint in his eye.
"whatever"Tony said and started walking towards the common room
"I'd be nicer if I were you" Draco said "you dont know what I'm capable of"
"oh Im so scared" Tony said mimckingly and entered the Common room. "I wouldnt be so confident in what your saying" tony said
"Why? I do have Zee wrapped arpund my finger" he said sitting down on a couch.
"Actually you dont"Tony said with a smirk.
"What do you mean?"Draco asked
"I dont know ask Tye's twin bro?"Tony said
"whatever?"Draco said "wait what do you?...."he said but Tony walked back up to the dorms.

Zee was walking to the common room and someone grabbed her arm and spun her around.
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Hope you guys like this post, its short thogh cause i have to go to my other fic and update on thet one too And I apprecite you guy's reviews and if you have ideas or comments of how i could make it interesting that would be greatly appreciated

TeganWR · 02-09-2005, 03:36 AM

I loved it, can't wait for more!
-Tegan-

lizzie mc · 02-09-2005, 07:32 PM

OHHH, WHO SPUN HER ROUND!!!, sos, im all excited, and the post before last was brill too, the fact they av to spit on humans necks to hea them!!, lol

brilliant wirting from a brilliant writer, lol, pams:dragon:

SnfflesLuvr · 02-10-2005, 03:08 AM

Gar! I hate cliffies! PAMS!

Sk8er girl · 02-10-2005, 11:40 PM

"what the..."Zee said "what do you want Draco?" she asked
"I heard you have something with Tye's brother?"he asked mancingly
"why do you care?"Zee said her arm was beggining to hurt
"Tony told me"Draco said
"well maybe I'am? Maybe Im not? who knows?"Zee said
Draco was getting mad when Zee said "ohh...my arm"
Draco arm started burning too that only ment that the darklord was back. Zee lifted up her sleeve to reveal the darkmark,she pulled it down and started to look for Tony.
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Sorry its short but I gotta go :0 and thanks for the reviews

TeganWR · 02-10-2005, 11:51 PM

Pams!!!
-Tegan-

SnfflesLuvr · 02-11-2005, 03:14 AM

Arrr, Death Eaters! PAMS!

lizzie mc · 02-13-2005, 03:23 PM

ohhh, riddle is back, omg, again excited so PAMS!! oh an in case i dont post again any time soon

have a luvly valantines day!!

Sk8er girl · 02-16-2005, 12:34 AM

thanks for the Happy Valentines but I didnt have a good one,lol

Tony was up in the dorms he was talking to Billy Tye's twin brother. When suddenly he felt pain on his arm like a burning sensation. "Does you arm hurt?" he asked Billy
"Yeah" he said looking at his arm
"Darklord"They both whispered and started looking for Zee
When Zee saw them her face was pale she didnt want to go see Voldemort, she didnt want to because of the secret that she couldnt tell anyone for the secret that her and Tony had been keeping all these years. If she went back she'd be scared that the secret would leak out and from her mouth.She was afraid for the safety of the ones she loved like Billy and Tony. "I cant go"she said tear coming in her eyes "Im scared"
Tony knew exactly what she was feeling since they were twns they had this special bond and Tony could feel Zee's emotions.
Billy loooked at Zee he was worried "It's ok"he said looking at her "I wont let anything happen, neither will Tony" he said looking at Zee with his eyeliner written eyes.
"ok"Zee said she was so scared then Snape came out from the Shadows "come on" he said "we dont have that much time we dont want to keep him waiting" he said and Zee and Billy followed him, Tony on the other hand snuck to the Gryffindor corridor.

Thats all for now I'll post more later and I appreciate all the reviews guys

SnfflesLuvr · 02-16-2005, 05:18 AM

I'm sorry you had a bad Valentine's Day. The post was awesome though! I'm on the edge of my seat, wondering what the secret is. PAMS!

Sk8er girl · 02-16-2005, 11:05 PM

Tony snook to the Gryffindor Tower,but he heard voices so he decided to stay in the shadows to hear who it was, it was Hermione and Ron they were arguing.
"No, why him?" Ron said angrily "his a deatheater"
"You dont know him RON!" Hermione said "his really nice and sweet"
"Yeah well if your seeing a Slytherin its over between us"He said and walked into the Common room
Hermione was about to leave when Tony came out of the shadows. "Hermione" he said in a soft voice
"ony"Hermione said and hugged him, when she hugged him Tony winced "what's wrong?" she asked and looked at him "Nothing" Tony said and grabbed his shoulder. "Yes there is"Hermione said "let me see?"
"Fine, I cant lie to you Hermione" he said and lifted up his arm showing the Darkmark.
"it's the mark" she said with her mouth open and backing away from him "I thought he was gone" she said gasping
"he came back" Tony said and walked towards her "Hermione" he said seriously. Hermione noticed that he was serious "This might be the last time you see me" ony said looking at her in the eye
"why?" she said her eyes getting teary eyed
"Something's going to happen I can feel it" Tony said
"No" Hermione said now crying "I'm going with you then" she said her voice firm and strong
"I cant let you" Tony said "it's too dangerous" he said fear in his eyes
"theres fear in your eyes" Hermione said cupping his chin in her hand "I've never seen ou like this....but Im going with you"
"alright I can tell you wont stay" but you have to promise me if anything happens you'll run and never look back?" he said
"I promise" she said and kissed him a tear went down her face because that might have been the last time she'd be with Tony. As they left what tey didnt know was that someone had heard them.

Hope you guys like it and thanks SnfflesLuvr I didnt have a good Valentines cause my crush broke my heart but atleast I have Billy! lol

SnfflesLuvr · 02-17-2005, 02:34 AM

I'm sorry your Valentine's Day was so bad. Guys suck.

Anyways, great post, but I still don't know the secret! lol, PAMS!

Sk8er girl · 02-18-2005, 12:18 AM

Thats true guys can suck sometimes lol But atleast I got Billy from GV lol

Chapter ? ( I forgot lol)

Zee and Billy followed Snape into his office when they got in Snape asked "wheres Tony?" he said fear in his eyes.
"I dont know"Zee said
"God he knows the consequences well we cant worry now" he said grabbing out a pependant that was maroon. Billy and Zee already knew what to do Billy garbbed hold of the pendant and Zee grabbed hold og Billy's hand, They closed there eyes and when they opened them they were in a Deserted cemetry in the middle of no where. Zee looked down at her clothes and she already had on the robes she pulled up the mask and walked over to the meeting.

Tony and Hermione walked into a empty classroom. Tony had the same pendant that Snape had brought out but his was black. "Grab hold of this and close your eyes" Tony said "when we get there I want you to hide, no exceptions" he said seriously. Hermione nodded and grabbed hold of the pendant not knowing that Harry and Ron just walked in when they were about to leave. "Hermione no!" Harry said but it was too late they had already left.
"His gonna turn her into a deatheater" Ron said "we need to get Dumbledore or do something" Ron said
"no I know what to do"Harry said he had seen Zee's pendant fall out of her pocket and he had picked it up when it fell out. He got the pendant out of his pocket and showed it to Ron. "whered you get that from?.....your not a deatheater?" he said scared.
"No, remember the feast"Harry aske and Ron nodded yeah well I saw her get up and it felll out of her pocket so I picked it up. Tony has one just like this...all we need to do is close our eyes" he said and him and Ron grabbed hold of the Pendant. They closed there eyes and opened them again and the appereard at the deserted cemetery. They saw Hermione sneak off and hide near a R.I.P. stone and they followed her as they walked they could smell the smell of Decay coming from the deserted cemetery.

Hope you guys like this post I really appreciate the reviews

slipstick · 02-18-2005, 12:44 AM

OOoo! Spooky.

lizzie mc · 02-19-2005, 01:14 PM

awww hunni, im sorry ur crush broke ur heart, men are evil, as me mum says, the only man you can trust is ur daddy, but, i would never trust him so i never take any notice, lol, chin up, ur a star!!!

ohhh, and pams, hermonie went along, y, i can see it now, shes gonna get caught or someyhin, ohhh excited!!

SnfflesLuvr · 02-21-2005, 02:34 AM

Ah, creepy! I love that they all went. Someone will get caught! PAMS!

BreezenBy · 02-21-2005, 03:05 AM

OOOoooo...... Scary Scary... I LIKE IT! lol[I]

BreezenBy · 02-22-2005, 06:56 PM

If you like this fic about vampires, I sugjest you read, "The Taste of Blood" It's really good so far. It is also about vampires. Check it out under the Hogs Head in the Restricted Section.

Sk8er girl · 02-23-2005, 12:41 AM

Thanks guys for the reviews Im enjoying this story a lot! lol And thanks Lizzie *huggles*

Next Chapter.....

Ron and Harry got to Hermione and Ron whispered "what are you doing here?" he whispered Hermione was about to answer but she saw that a figure had taken Zee aside from the meeting, "shh" Harmione said "get down" she said and Ron and Harry knealed down with her.

"So I see you decided to come?" a cold voice from Lucius Malfoy said from behind his mask.
"yeah and..."Zee said in a cold voice you couldnt tell she was scared but she was.
"dont talk to me like that you little..."Lucius said
"no Lucius...my daughter probably has a reason for using that tone" a cold voice said from the shadows
Zee didnt answer
"well do you?" Lucius questioned
"No" Zee said hatred in her eyes mixed with pain from years past.
"now now well have to show you how to respect"the voice said once more. Now the deatheaters had heard, they were all crowding around. "we should Master" Bellatrix said from behind the Dark Lord. "Father no..."Tony said to his dad, but Voldemorts wand was too fast, he had hit Zee with a unforgibable curse. Zee fell to the ground in Pain. "father? why did he call you that?" a deatheater said. "that's why I called you guys here to tell you that I have two more children apart from Gabe. He said motioning to a tall Dark figure, he was as tall as Tony but more muscular. "what?" some deatheters said. "how can that be?" Zee was up from the ground now "he killed our mother" Zee said and Voldemort hit her again with the spell. "your mother was a traitor!" he said "your a discrace to this family" he said looking at Ze. Zee got up and backed away next to Billy. Draco saw that and got mad. "running to your little boyfriend" Voldemort said once more. "you shouldnt treat her like that" Billy said. "What is this I hear" Voldemort said his red eyes looking at Billy he turned to Tony and said "why dont you show Mr. Shadows some to respect" Tony obeyed his father and said to Zee "sorry" so only she could hear him and hit Billy with the same spell Voldemort had hit Zee with. Tears started coming down Zee's face like a waterfall as she heard Billy suffer with all that pain and screaming.

Hope you guys like it this story is sort of coming to a end....but dont worry cause i'm working on the sequel lol I appreacite the reviews

SnfflesLuvr · 02-23-2005, 05:46 AM

Ah! Where do I begin? Voldemorte's their father?!?!?! That's insane!!! I just can't get past that. I love it! I'll definitely read the sequal. PAMS!

lizzie mc · 02-24-2005, 02:17 PM

first of all, no worries hunni, huggles to you to!!! dont let the b******s get you down!!

second of all, omg
so good old tom is da daddy
who would have thought!!, lol
pams!!!!!!!
:dragon:

Sk8er girl · 02-24-2005, 08:08 PM

Thanks guys

"oh my..."Hermione said her face was pale..well paler than it usually was.

"No!"Zee said to Voldemort "Im tired of this I dont want to be your daughter, I dont want to see the one's I love in pain." Voldemort just looked at her with a reall angry face. "you dont want to be part of all this" he said Billy got back up. "well just show you what happens when you talk like that" he said and looked at Billy who was hlsing his side because of all the pain. "no" Zee said and went next to Billy. "you cant" she said crying. "Tony would you like to the honers of using the Abra Kedabra curse on this young man here?" he said motiong to Billy. "since your lovely sister refuses to be the dark princess." Tony was about to do the spell when Hermione came out of the shadows with Harry,Ron and Lucius grabbing them by there collars. "look what I found" he said with a smirk. "Tony dont do it" Hermione said "sorry,but I have to" Tony said and pointed his wand at Billy and started to say the spell when Zee got inbetween Billy and the wand. But right when Tony finished the spell hit Zee and she fell to the ground. "No" Billy said kneeling down beside Zee's body. "what I do" Tony said "I killed my own flesh and blood" he said feeling discusted. "she was a waist of a riddle anyways" Gabe said it was the first thing he had said thruw out the whole night. Draco just looked at Zee's body and he felt like cring but he didnt "well my lord you should know that Tony is seeing a mudblood" Draco said, he didnt know why he said that. Voldemort turned to Tony and said "is this true?" and Tony looked at Hermione and then Hermione went and said "yes he is but I'm willing to be a deatheter" she said Harry and Ron just looked at Her. Lucius was dumstrucked Harry let go of his grip and went over to Voldemort. Voldemort looked at him and said "i should finish you off here and now" he said and he was about to say Avra Kedavra when Ron came and said Avra Kedavra with Harry and they hit Voldemort. "come on lets go" Ron said and Harry and him got the pendant and left. When they got to Hogwarts ron said "I cant beleive her" he said talking about Hermione. "is he dead" a deatheter said and Gabe went over to see "yes he is" he said. "you know what that means" Lucius said "your the new Dark lord" he said "so what are you going to do about your brother" he said "well if this mudblood wants to be a deatheater she can" he said glint in his eyes "but she has to promise never ever to tell about the meetings or else you'll get what my dear sister got" he said his fangs glinting with the moon light. "you dont have to do this" Tony said "i dont have to but i want to" Hermione said. "what do we do with the body?" Draco asked "we leave it" Gabe said he did a spell on Hermione and she had the mark. "ok you all canleave" Gabe said and Billy and all them left.

The next morning was the End of the Year feast. Billy wasnt going to go but Tony had convinced him "come on Zee wouldnt of wanted to see you like this" he said trying to comfort him. "she should be here" he said. Now Tony knew that Billy was all about the rocker look you know eyeliner and all that, but today he wasnt wearing any. "whats with the look?" Tony asked "It's called mourning" Billy said his eyes didnt have that glint they use to have they were cold and dim. "oh" Tony said he ws sad but Billy was depressed. They went to the feast and the Great Hall was all in black and the sky was stars, they had the stars because those were Zee's favorite. Dumbledore went up to speak and said "you all know about Zee, or should we say Zamarit" he said "she was a great student and we will miss her dearly."he said. Tony had told the headmaster that Zee had been attacked in the forest and they couldnt find the body. "so lets raise our glases for this lost of a great soul" Dumbledore said and they all raised there glasses that were full of blood to Zee. Billy didnt drink from his cup he skipped dinner and went to bed. The next morning Billy and Tony were in there compartment on the train, the graduation ceremony was short. When they got to platform 9 3/4 Tony said "see you at Auror training?" "yeah" Billy said "hold in there" Tony said "yeah but Zee is out there somewhere" Billy said "I can feel it" he said and they both went there seperate ways.

THE END

Hope you guys liked this fic Im working on the sequel it's gonna be called Ghost of You hope you guys read the sequel.

lizzie mc · 02-25-2005, 02:25 AM

ohhh
the end
but i will look for the sequal
that was fantastic
unfortnatley, my mum is getting rid of my internet, today
and i wont get it back for months, so plz email me when you post, my email can be found in my profile
thanx for the great post
chin up!!
c u in a couple of months

Sk8er girl · 02-25-2005, 02:28 AM

Aww ok I'll e-mail you the post its already posted though..but who cares see you in a few months!

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