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11-19-2004, 10:44 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Sep 2004
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|  Vampires
This is my first Fan Fic so if its not good, sorry. Disclaimer: I dont own nothing of Harry Potter only the made ups and the plot. This story is about if everyone at Hogwarts was a vampire. You know like Hary and all. I hve only like 3 or 4 made ups. Hogwarts is really Hogwarts School of Vampires and Vamparismm. Oh yeah and this is the trio's 7th year. Chapter 1 It was the first day the students came back. The first years were waiting to be led into the Great hall to be sorted. The older students were catching up and talking. The Great Hall was decorated in black and green, because Slytherin had won the past years house cup. The ceiling up above was of stars and moons. As a meteor sped across the celing's fake night sky. A young girl named Zamarit, stared up at it as a meteor sped across. "you see that, Tony?" Zee said to her twin brother Tony who was talking to the Quidditch Captain Draco Malfoy about practice. "what, oh yeah" he said not paying attention to Zee like usual. Zee was mostly by herselfonly when she found her friends or smething. She was shy and kept to herself. Zee had black brownish hair and honey brown eyes. She looked like your average girl, well apart from being a vampire and going to a school of vampires.Now her bro Tony was the opposite personality from her. He was the beater for the Slytherin team. His appearance is brown hair and eyes. He was muscular, because of practice, he was also good looking. He wasnt shy or anything he liked parties and going out. He would often say Zee was depressed but she wouldnt pay attention to him. Zee was in la la land when the first years came in to be sorted. It went by pretty fast, and then the food came on the tables. Zee looked around and saw the trio taling.. well actually Hermione and Ron in deep conversation. Harry looked irritated by them. Zee was still looking over there when Tye a guy she knew came over to the table he was in Slytherin. Ok theres the first Chapter I'll post Chap 2 on Wednesday. Hpe someone likes it 
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11-21-2004, 10:13 PM
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| | Firecrab
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If anyones reads this fic please leave reply's, Because i wanna know if its good enough or not
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11-23-2004, 05:49 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: hmmh. have no clue
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It was cool.
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11-24-2004, 08:59 PM
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| | Firecrab
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Chapter2
"so hermione what do you think? about what I asked you?" Ron asked Hermione while getting a drink of blood from his goblet. "alright" Hermione saidbut is it ok with you Harry?" she asked "yeah, mione its about you two went out?" Harry sai with a smile. He noticed that a Slytherin girl was looking at them, he recognised her from the past year she played Quidditch and her team had beat Gryffindor for the cup. Harry smiled at her to be polite and he started to eat. Zee noticed that Harry smiled at her and she smiled back. Tye, TRony, and Draco noticed it too and looked at Potter with discusted faces and then turned to Ze. "your not" tony asked his sister "eww gross!" Zee said " me and Potter no!" Zee said with a smirk. Tye and Draco at what Zee said "they wouldnt make a good couple anyways" Draco said and winkd at Zee. "Anyways if Ze was going out with him, Id hex him or something" Tony said with a smirk and cracked his knucles, Tye and Draco agreed and they all got some food. While they were eating Draco kept on glancing at Zee and smiling. Zee would smile back whenever he smiled at her.
Please post and tell me if the story is any good ^.^
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11-25-2004, 04:49 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: In the arms of my knight.
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I like it. It's interesting thinking of them drinking blood, lol.
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11-25-2004, 10:25 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Liverpool, England
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the trio, vampires, lol, gr8, im liking this at the moment post more soon!!!  | |
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12-01-2004, 09:14 PM
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| | Firecrab
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Chapter 3 "so Draco heard you and granger are Heads?" Zee asked "yeah cant wait to spend al my time with Granger" Draco said sarcastically "that means Im patroling the halls by myself then?"Zee said with a smile "nope your patrolling them with Tye?"Draco said and Tye turned around because he was talking to Tony. "yeah I'am" he said to them. "guess I wont be alone then" zee said with a smile The feast ended and Dumbledore quitted down the hall and said "all prefects take your first years to the your house common rooms" "oh great" Tye said "shouldnt say that" Zee said "you were a first year too." She said and her and Tye led the first years to the portrait. "pureblood" Tye said and the portrait opened. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> I'll ost more on wednesday hope you guys like it ^.^ Sorry its a short post I have a lot of homework 
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12-08-2004, 09:14 PM
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| | Firecrab
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Chapter 4
Draco entered the Slytherin common room and saw Zee, He walked over to her and said,"Zee, you want to go seethe Heads Common room?" Zee turned around, because she was showing the Slytherin girls where there dorm was."no I dont want to go somewhere Granger is at" she said jokingly. "just kidding, sure. Just wait one second"she said and finished her prefect duties. "ok Im ready" she said and folowed Draco out of the common room. Tye saw them walk out, and he got sort of jealous. Tony noticed and asked "you ok?" Tye stopped looking at the portrait exit and said "yeah" Tony raised his eyebrows and said "if you say so" and walked up to the boys dorm. Tye sat there loking at the fire and thinking.
"do you guys want to see the Heads common room?" Hermione asked Ron and Harry.
"sure" they both said. They were curious to see what it looked like.
"alright" Hermione said and they started to walk to the common room.
Zee and Draco walked to the Portrait and Draco said "ojos preciosos" They entered the common room and it didnt really look like the Slytherin common room, but it was like a combination of both the Gryffindor and Slytherin common rooms. Draco entered first and Zee followed him. The comon room had books from Dark Arts to how to knit. There was comterable couches and uncomterable ones like in the Slytherin common room. Zee went over to the books on Dark Arts and said "these are interesting books on dark arts" she said and picked one up. "yeah they are" Draco said and walked over to her. He turned Zee around and he wrapped his arms around her waist and smiled. "what was that for?" she asked with a smile. Draco smiled and said "for this" and he kissed her
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Hope you guys like this post its longer than the others and I have something really bad thats gonna change Zee's and Tony's lives for ever!
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12-09-2004, 04:53 AM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: In the arms of my knight.
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Loved it!
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12-10-2004, 09:07 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Liverpool, England
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wait a min, draco is kissing, i bet moine walkes in with harry an ron, an omg, i cant wait!!!!
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12-11-2004, 05:53 PM
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| | Firecrab
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Glad you guys liked it, but your gonna have to wait a bit because my spanish teacher thruw away what I had for the next post of the story and everything else because I wasnt paying attention and I was almost finished writing it But dont worry Im gonna wirte the rest during class on monday lol.
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12-14-2004, 11:38 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Liverpool, England
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awww, evil spanish teacher!!!! hope u can remember most of ur post!!
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12-15-2004, 09:46 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Sep 2004
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Chapter 5
"you wanna go see what Zee and Draco are up to?" Tony asked Tye as he sat down
"no not really" Tye said
"are you mad, because Zee is with Draco?" Tony asked
"no" Tye lied "fine lets go" he said and got up
Tony got up and said "bye" to Pansy, and left to go to the porttrait.
"you going out with her?" Tye asked
"what? oh Pansy?" Tony said "no...were just friends."
"ojos preciosos"Hermione said and the portrait opened
"What does that mean?" Ron asked
"It means precious eyes in spanish" Hermione answered as they entered, Tony and Tye were behind them. Hermione turned around and saw them she rolled her eyes at them.
"You know you like what you see" Tony said with a grin, but then he noticed Zee and Draco. Draco noticed them staring and he backed away from Zee they were still kissing. Harry was the first to break the silence
"How much you pay this one?" Tye holded Tony back from hitting Harry for what he said about his sister.
"Harry that was rude?" Hermione said
"For once Granger is right" Draco said. But then Snape came in "Mr. and Ms. Ortiz the Headmaster wants to see you" Zee followed him out. Tony glared at Harry "better watch your back, Potter" he snarled and walked out
"Good thing Tony left or he would of beat you up, if Tye hadnt holded him back" he said with a smirk and looked at Hermione, who was staring at Tony until he left and now she was in la la land. Ron elbowed Hermione "What?" she murmured
"Whatever Tye lets go" Draco said and they walked out of the common room. Harry sat down near the fire. Ron looked at Hermione and said "Why were you staring at Tony for?" he asked suspiciously "you know if you dont want to go out with me you can go with him!" he said and sat down in the couch infront of Harry. "I can understand he has money, looks, he use to be a deatheater! Why wouldnt you be more interested in him" he said now looking at the fire. Hermione thought to herself, "Ron's right I like Tony, but its not the money or the looks. I've talked to him when his alone his really nice,funny and smart. But the only thing I dont like is that when the Darklord was alive he was a Deatheater" she thought and said "I dont know" she said looking at her feet.
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Hope you guys like this post. I wont be able to post until January 3 because of Holiday and Exams. Happy Holidays!! ^.^
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12-20-2004, 02:00 AM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Oct 2004
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Morgan Dostoevsky
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PAMS really soon
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01-03-2005, 08:10 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: ♥reading
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Third Year | Keeper of Ginny's Cuteness ~ Flying Prefect ~ GOBBLE GOBBLE
its goodish, no offense but I think its just a lil confussing because of all of the made-ups.
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01-05-2005, 02:41 PM
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|  Secretly SlytherinFirecrab
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: through the looking
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I love it! Please post more soon!
-Tegan-
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01-05-2005, 08:23 PM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Liverpool, England
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fantastic, once again a gr8 post, here, have a air hug!!!lol
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01-11-2005, 12:48 AM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Barony of Graymatter
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It's good, but if their all vampires wouldn't they all be into dark arts? Keep it up!
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01-27-2005, 09:19 PM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Typing on the computer at Hogwarts (Is that possible?)
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This is interesting, but could you fix all of the typos in the future? It's a bit hard to read. Also, could you make a list of all the made up characters and their relation to each other? I can't figure out who is who (is Zamarit the same person as Zee?) Good idea, though | |
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01-28-2005, 12:48 AM
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| | Firecrab
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Cool, u guys like it :0 ok Zamarit and Zee are the same person and heres the list thing Hermione likes Tony,but isnt sure,she's going out with Ron Tye ? Draco likes Zee Zee you'll find out hope that helps Chapter 6 "what do you mean you dont know?" Ron said "you know what its over done" he said frustrated "fine!" Hermione said and walked off Harry just rolled his eyes and looked at his watch "I gotta go" he said and walked out "What am I doing here" Ron said and walked out to go to the gryffindor common room. "the headmaster doesnt want to see you, I do" Snape said to Zee and Tony "now I see you two were starting something up there dont do it!" he said "are you just going to talk to us of how we should act?"tony said "yes, and dont take that tone with me" snape said "if you two do anything to damage my image,there will be severe consequences" he said "right" Zee and tony said "good,now run along" he said and walked off "I hate him" Tony said anger rising he left Zee by herself. Hermione was walking so fast that she didnt know that she bumped into Tony. "oh..sorry" she said shyly "watch were your.."tony said but noticed it was Hermione "oh umm watch were your going you dont want to get hurt. He said "gosh I'd like some fresh blood" he said half to himself "pardon" Hermione asked "oh.. blood"Tony said "oh yeah it sucks that we dont get fresh blood" she said with a smile ><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>><><><> Hope you guys like this post is short because I have 2 go.
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02-04-2005, 01:17 AM
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| | Fire Slug
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ohh i did like it, im glad you have updated, so atm im like yayyyyy!!!!!
love the whole blood convo with hermonie and tony, lol
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02-04-2005, 11:29 PM
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| | Firecrab
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Glad you liked it Lizzie! Chapter 7 "yeah it does" Tony said and got a idea "you want to.." "get fresh blood?" Hermione said "yeah" Tony said with a grin "sure" hermione said with a smile "alright" Tony said lets go. He said and hermione and him walked out of Hogwarts without people noticing they were missing. They transformed into some bat like creatures with claws and everything and they flew to a small muggle town. They saw two young people about 25 or 30. "perfect" Tony said and they flew down about 30 feet from the muggles and they transformed back into there human like figures. Hermione grabbed hold of Tony's arm "you scared" Tony said with a smirk. "sprt of" she said "I havent hunted in a while" she was sort of jumpy. ><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>><> Sorry it's so short but I got to go!
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02-07-2005, 08:35 PM
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| | Fire Slug
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ohhh, the post may have been short but it was gr8, im now more excited than i was before so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post more soon, and i love the comment by hermonie, i havent hunted for a while, i loved it!!!keep up the brilliant writng:dragon:
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02-08-2005, 12:32 AM
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| | Firecrab
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AWW thanks Lizzie *feels special* "wonderful night, isnt it"Tony said to Hermione as they closed in on the humans. "yeah"Hermione said she was grabbing hold of Tony's hand as the closed in on them. Tony walked up from behind the humans and he got out a bottle and the stench made them pass out for a while. "come on"Tony said and slit a smaal slit in one of the humans throats "there" he said handind Hermione the human "ladies first" he said smiling his fangs were glinting with the moon light. Hermione bent down and sucked some of the humans blood. "that's good" Tony said "remember the rules"he said and spit on the humans neck to heal it up. Tony then drank from the other human and did the same. They then flew back to hogwarts and tony walked hermione to her commons "well bye" he said and kissed her on the cheek ><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>< Again it's really short but I appreciate the reviews
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02-08-2005, 04:35 AM
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| | Gnome
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Dude, that's nasty, lol. But I love it! Keep it up please!
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