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08-07-2009, 02:51 PM
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| | Doxy
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 6,032
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Karly Lockwood
Third Year |  <('_'<) (>'_')>
ahh you cant go anywhere till you have finished lol. Wow Blaise didnt take the mick or anything, that cool.
I want to know what happens 
I love your writing 
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08-07-2009, 04:05 PM
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#52 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 7,786
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tommy Black
First Year | ♥ Slytherin Princess to the core ♥ / St. Trinian's Terror
OH i love it
i think the story is awsome
__________________ I love the number of children i meet who are captivated by all of it,
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08-07-2009, 04:45 PM
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| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: USSEnterprise/GMT -5
Posts: 1,082
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kiana Desiree Remora
Fifth Year | two sides of the same coin
I love it
write more please! i have to know the rest! 
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08-07-2009, 09:26 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In my head
Posts: 237
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Layla Amorina
Fifth Year |
It's almost over?! 
I lurved it, as always it would've been cute if they did that thing where they both tried to step around each other, but went the same direction. Lol, just thinking out loud
PAMS!!
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08-08-2009, 04:54 PM
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#55 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
That was great!!!!
Pams!!!
-Xavier-
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08-08-2009, 05:36 PM
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#56 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
Great chapter!
Oh no! Blaise has caught on!
I hope he doesn't say anything to anybody!
PAMS!!! Jess
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08-08-2009, 10:15 PM
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DIMCPuffskein
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Over the Rainbow.
Posts: 1,825
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Harvey Jarvis
Second Year | Horses Forever! l l Writer for Life l Yearbook alumnus
Wow thank you for all the comments, all of you!
All right, well, without any more rambling (I'll continue with that at the bottom of the post  ), here is the next and FINAL chapter!
---------------- Chapter 10 Hermione felt nervous, and she kept fiddling with the ring around her finger as she watched all the couples dancing. She felt overdressed and out of place, although this was probably because she was attracting a lot of male attention this night, which was something the Gryffindor bookworm was definitely not used to.
“’Mione, you look wonderful, stop fidgeting,” Ron said to her, catching her hands in his own. He and Harry rather incorrectly assumed she was worried about her appearance.
In reality, her mind was on a certain blond Slytherin who was currently having a rather animated conversation with Blaise Zabini on the other side of the Great Hall. She couldn’t help but admire the way he looked in his elegant black dress robes, how much she liked his hair naturally falling into his eyes. She tried to ignore the need to go and talk to him; this was neither the place nor time for that.
Not that there ever would be, she reprimanded herself mentally. She and Draco Malfoy could never be more than acquaintances… right?
Not even dancing with boy after boy could distract her thoughts, and finally she gave up, deciding that an early night might do her some good, perhaps bring her some peace of mind. Leaving Harry and Ron to their own devices, she made her way to the exit, and almost bumped into somebody by the Entrance Hall.
“Hi,” she said, when she recognized Draco, and suddenly felt a blush colour her cheeks. She prayed he wouldn’t notice, though she had a horrible suspicion he was prone to observing such details in a girl’s demeanor.
“Hi,” he said back, and then added, “You look lovely.”
She wondered if this was a sincere compliment, but why would he bother paying it if it wasn’t? Without even realizing it, Hermione smiled at him, feeling strangely light and happy all of a sudden.
He didn’t look as if he was going to say anything else, though, so she nodded to him.
“Well… goodnight, I guess,” she said, moving past him with another smile, towards the staircase.
She had barely made a step, however, when an invisible forced threw her back, right into Draco, who seemed to have the same problem.
“What’s going on?” she asked, looking around her and at the wizard in front of her, feeling rather unsettled. Why couldn’t she move away from him?
Draco shook his head and opened his mouth, she assumed to say that he had no idea either, when Professor Flitwick’s excited squeal drew their attention to the teacher. He was positively beaming at the pair when he looked at them, and then above them.
“Ah, yes, Albus does this every year. The enchanted mistletoe… there’s always somebody who gets caught,” he smiled. “Well, go on, kiss, or you’ll be stuck there for the rest of Christmas!”
His squealing had drawn the attention of a few other students, and as Hermione looked around them, she noticed that more and more people were gathering to watch what would happen.
“Bloody Headmaster, I always knew he was off his rocker,” Malfoy muttered. Then, he looked at her, and Hermione could swear she saw a hint of a smile play around his lips as he stepped closer.
“What are you doing?” she asked, feeling indescribably nervous.
“Well, I don’t know about you, but I want to get some sleep tonight, so how about we just kiss,” he told her, and she could definitely tell he was smiling now.
He leaned down, so close she could see all the fine eyelashes bordering his silvery gaze. So close she felt his breath on her own lips, and almost involuntarily, she moved closer to him to close the distance between them.
When his lips touched the softness of hers, a strange feeling passed through her body, and she stopped caring about the fact they were kissing in front of the whole school. Now, all that mattered was him.
Little did she know his thoughts mirrored her own as he deepened the kiss. --------------- FIN
So, how did you like that? Hope the ending makes you all happy
Anyway, that's the end of this fic, but I'm currently writing another, much longer, one, also Dramione. It's called "History Repeats Itself", and is in the Epic and Adventure Section. If you liked this, maybe you'd care enough to head over there too
I'll be posting a new one up by the end of August as well, so keep your eyes open!
Thanks to all who commented again! *hands out cookies. And milky, wonderful hot chocolate. And more cookies* 
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08-08-2009, 10:22 PM
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#58 (permalink)
| | Doxy
Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 6,032
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Karly Lockwood
Third Year | <('_'<) (>'_')>
AAAAHHHHHHHHHH you...you..you I luvs you 
how can you leave it there!!
ok im hyper now
OMG i can so see rons horrified face in my head, i cant imagine what harry would be like. Ginny would be grinning so much
ok i think im done now sooo gonna read you other stories
Kerry x
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08-08-2009, 10:23 PM
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#59 (permalink)
| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
Posts: 12,756
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
That was an amazing story!!
I loved it soo much!
It was adorable!
Can't wait for more stories from you! Jess
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08-08-2009, 10:24 PM
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#60 (permalink)
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DIMC Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Over the Rainbow.
Posts: 1,825
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Harvey Jarvis
Second Year | Horses Forever! l l Writer for Life l Yearbook alumnus
Kerry and Jess: Hehe thanks, and thanks
Kerry: Yep, Ginny's grinning in my mind, too
Glad you liked it, thanks so much for hanging around through the entire fic, I really, REALLY appreciate it!
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08-09-2009, 01:07 AM
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#61 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: USSEnterprise/GMT -5
Posts: 1,082
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kiana Desiree Remora
Fifth Year | two sides of the same coin
that was great!!
I would love to know what everyones reaction was!
Great story i will definitely read your new one
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08-09-2009, 02:01 AM
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#62 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In my head
Posts: 237
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Layla Amorina
Fifth Year |
*squeals at the kiss*
*cries that it's over*
*eagerly awaits sequel*
LURVED IT!! (as always)
Those cookies were delicious btw!
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08-09-2009, 06:24 AM
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|   SS 100 Triumphant!Ramora
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: PININ for the FJORDS
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Hadley Taylor
Fourth Year | Canon Niffler || Neville's Yorkshire Pudding | | Teddy's Biographer || P + R = ♥
Good Grief! What do you mean FIN? You can't leave it there!
Seriously though, that was brilliant!
*runs off to find more Paintbrush brilliance!*
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08-09-2009, 10:24 AM
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#64 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 7,786
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tommy Black
First Year | ♥ Slytherin Princess to the core ♥ / St. Trinian's Terror
omg how can you leave it there????
the story was Awsome
Jo
looking forward to your next story
__________________ I love the number of children i meet who are captivated by all of it,
all of whom think i am terrifying because i play Bellatrix!!!!
♥Tom's Treehouse♥
♥15th July 2011 The Final Chapter♥ | |
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08-10-2009, 10:04 AM
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#65 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: In Daniel's arms!
Posts: 888
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Michelle Wingmist
Fourth Year | Inquisitive
EEEEEP!!!! *squeals at the kiss*
Why did you end it there????? I can't wait to read the sequel!!!!!! That's wonderful, you're a great writer!!!!!!!! Awesome!!!
Love;
Tina
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08-16-2009, 10:50 AM
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#66 (permalink)
| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2009
Posts: 6,309
Hogwarts RPG Name:
isabella Macmillan
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aww...that was sweet...
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08-17-2009, 07:21 PM
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#67 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX
Posts: 1,393
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
I loved It..
**Cries Because It ended**
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09-10-2009, 06:19 AM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts India
Posts: 108
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Emma Radcliffe
First Year |
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Originally Posted by Paintbrush  Wow thank you for all the comments, all of you!
All right, well, without any more rambling (I'll continue with that at the bottom of the post ), here is the next and FINAL chapter!
---------------- Chapter 10 Hermione felt nervous, and she kept fiddling with the ring around her finger as she watched all the couples dancing. She felt overdressed and out of place, although this was probably because she was attracting a lot of male attention this night, which was something the Gryffindor bookworm was definitely not used to.
“’Mione, you look wonderful, stop fidgeting,” Ron said to her, catching her hands in his own. He and Harry rather incorrectly assumed she was worried about her appearance.
In reality, her mind was on a certain blond Slytherin who was currently having a rather animated conversation with Blaise Zabini on the other side of the Great Hall. She couldn’t help but admire the way he looked in his elegant black dress robes, how much she liked his hair naturally falling into his eyes. She tried to ignore the need to go and talk to him; this was neither the place nor time for that.
Not that there ever would be, she reprimanded herself mentally. She and Draco Malfoy could never be more than acquaintances… right?
Not even dancing with boy after boy could distract her thoughts, and finally she gave up, deciding that an early night might do her some good, perhaps bring her some peace of mind. Leaving Harry and Ron to their own devices, she made her way to the exit, and almost bumped into somebody by the Entrance Hall.
“Hi,” she said, when she recognized Draco, and suddenly felt a blush colour her cheeks. She prayed he wouldn’t notice, though she had a horrible suspicion he was prone to observing such details in a girl’s demeanor.
“Hi,” he said back, and then added, “You look lovely.”
She wondered if this was a sincere compliment, but why would he bother paying it if it wasn’t? Without even realizing it, Hermione smiled at him, feeling strangely light and happy all of a sudden.
He didn’t look as if he was going to say anything else, though, so she nodded to him.
“Well… goodnight, I guess,” she said, moving past him with another smile, towards the staircase.
She had barely made a step, however, when an invisible forced threw her back, right into Draco, who seemed to have the same problem.
“What’s going on?” she asked, looking around her and at the wizard in front of her, feeling rather unsettled. Why couldn’t she move away from him?
Draco shook his head and opened his mouth, she assumed to say that he had no idea either, when Professor Flitwick’s excited squeal drew their attention to the teacher. He was positively beaming at the pair when he looked at them, and then above them.
“Ah, yes, Albus does this every year. The enchanted mistletoe… there’s always somebody who gets caught,” he smiled. “Well, go on, kiss, or you’ll be stuck there for the rest of Christmas!”
His squealing had drawn the attention of a few other students, and as Hermione looked around them, she noticed that more and more people were gathering to watch what would happen.
“Bloody Headmaster, I always knew he was off his rocker,” Malfoy muttered. Then, he looked at her, and Hermione could swear she saw a hint of a smile play around his lips as he stepped closer.
“What are you doing?” she asked, feeling indescribably nervous.
“Well, I don’t know about you, but I want to get some sleep tonight, so how about we just kiss,” he told her, and she could definitely tell he was smiling now.
He leaned down, so close she could see all the fine eyelashes bordering his silvery gaze. So close she felt his breath on her own lips, and almost involuntarily, she moved closer to him to close the distance between them.
When his lips touched the softness of hers, a strange feeling passed through her body, and she stopped caring about the fact they were kissing in front of the whole school. Now, all that mattered was him.
Little did she know his thoughts mirrored her own as he deepened the kiss. --------------- FIN
So, how did you like that? Hope the ending makes you all happy
Anyway, that's the end of this fic, but I'm currently writing another, much longer, one, also Dramione. It's called "History Repeats Itself", and is in the Epic and Adventure Section. If you liked this, maybe you'd care enough to head over there too
I'll be posting a new one up by the end of August as well, so keep your eyes open!
Thanks to all who commented again! *hands out cookies. And milky, wonderful hot chocolate. And more cookies* HEY READ THE WHOLE OF IT AND IT WAS GR8
IM SURELY HEADING TO YOUR NEXT PART...
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