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*~_Hellblink_~* 08-22-2005 10:47 PM

Typical poetry of a 14yr old poser.
 
I made a mark on my arm today.
With a razor blade, sharpened by hate.
Only to make the pain go away.
This seems to be my fate

I watched the blood flow down my arm.
That left a trail of pain and tears.
I see their faces, etched with alarm.
How horrible their fears.

I can hear the panic in their voices.
And the desolation that followed.
Take your time on making choices.
Don’t see the words I’ve swallowed.

I need you…..

*~_Hellblink_~* 08-26-2005 05:44 PM

Is everything as it seems?
The people we cherish,
The people we look up to
Are they REALLY gone?
Are they really lost?
So far away from what they used to be?
Do they ever leave?
Do they ever truly leave us?

*~_Hellblink_~* 08-26-2005 05:49 PM

He looked so strong,
So amazing, so invincible.
Unbreakable…..
As he struggles,
I look upon with horror.
This illusion has been shattered.
I no longer can see the wise
Unbreakable man I used to.
As I look upon with horror,
This amazing man.
Looks so broken.

avril_fan 08-26-2005 09:24 PM

omg your poems are good..

*~_Hellblink_~* 08-26-2005 11:40 PM

Thanks!

*~_Hellblink_~* 09-06-2005 10:59 PM

My heart,
still pounding beneath my breast,
broken so many times,
has no visible scars.

My eyes,
Darting back and forth,
Blinded by tears,
Still see through the pain.

My soul,
Lost beyond the veil of my heart,
Tainted, and impure,
Prays for salvation.

My thoughts,
Racing inside my mind,
Unsure, and imperfect,
Are my greatest weapon.

Are you ready for the final battle?

Angel8807 09-10-2005 10:40 PM

Great job on the poetry. It's really nice and written well. Keep posting and adding!
- Angel

PBLOVER 09-11-2005 03:48 AM

wow. i really like your poems. there's so....sad....but kinda beautiful....

~*Afia*~

Fortune_Cookie 10-24-2005 11:42 PM

Wow, you're poems are really deep and intense. I can really see the emotion in them. They're great :)

*~_Hellblink_~* 11-09-2005 09:52 PM

Thanks for the comments everyone. I haven't been on in awhile, but, thanks all the same.

ShadowThestral 12-03-2005 12:52 AM

wow, It think your poetry is amazing.


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