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Thank you guys so much for your feedback. I love you all. To answer your question Jessica of why the Malfoy's are the way they are? Well it just suits the story better this way. I'll post the next bit is a day or two. I'm having trouble with a very important part of the story. so just hold in there and i'll get it up as soon as i can. LOve ya so much. And happy late Valentine's day.
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Alright here's a little bit more. Right before Lily's birthday ball. Hope you like some questions may be answered and there's a secret that starts comeing to the serface. ooooh!

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It was the day of her birthday. Her eighteenth to be exact. It had been a full year since she introduced her family to her ex-boyfriend Maxwell Smith, or should she say Malfoy. As he had lied to her at the time. She was having another birthday ball. The truth still hunted her dreams as she once again revisited Max’s last words to her last Christmas Eve, ‘This isn’t over Lillian! In the end you will be mine!’ Oh how she hated those words. But that’s not the only thing that bugged her. Yes, she now knew what kind of person Max truly was but there was also a secret that she held from most of her family. One that would change everyone’s opinion of her and the way she held herself. It was because of this secret that her father had changed some of the Royal Family laws and traditions. But she never once regretted what happened and has considered it one of the best memories she has. For it had happened on her fifteenth birthday exactly three years before. And soon she’d be telling the world once her and Alex where married. Only a hand full of people knew of it. Her parents, Godparents, Grandparents, Poppy Pomfrey, Dumbledore, McGonagall, and her two best friends all knew of the secret, for she couldn’t hide it from them. She took a deep breath. Soon, very soon she’d tell the world itself of her past actions.

“Lily you ready?” Came Jane’s voice, shaking Lily out of her thoughts.

“Yes I’m ready. Is everyone here?” Lily asked her best friend. As she watched Lily take one last look at her self in the mirror.

“Yes and as usual there’s no press.” Jane answered with a smile.

“Well we hope not. They always seem to be able to get into all most every ball mom and dad throw.” Lily said walking over to the door.

“Don’t worry about it. It’s your birthday and you are getting married in a month. You should be happy.” Jane said walking with her down to the entrance hall.

“But I am happy. I’ve never been happier.” Lily said stopping in front of the Ball room doors.

“Go on. Their waiting for the Guest of Honor.” Jane said with a smile. “I’ll go in through the side door.”

“Thank you Jane.” Lily said with a beautiful smile. Jane gave her a hug and then left her standing there at the door. The house elves waiting for the signal to open the doors to let her into the ball room.

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“We shall attack in the middle of the ball.” said a tall man in a white mask. “Two of you hold Alexander Lupin in the middle of the ball room. The rest of you hold the guest back from interrupting.” he then glared at all of the men in front of him. “None of you are to touch Princess Lillian in anyway. Or you will face my wrath. Understood?”

“Yes Sir.” The men answered with a slight bow.

“Good. Now get ready.” the tall man said.

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I know it's kindof short. But the next post will be so much longer. I'm very sure you'll love it. So who are these men that are going to bust into Lily's Ball? Any one care to guess? Post soon I promise!!!!!!
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Alright i have the last bit of chapter six done and it's ready to be read by you wonderful people. YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!! Jessica i'm sorry to say that it is not one of Malfoy's sidekicks Crabb or Goyle's kids. The answer to the question is in this bit. But i'm not going to tell you before you read it. So here's the last bit of chapter six. Enjoy!!!!!!

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The ball was a hit. Everyone was enjoying themselves as they always did. Lily was happy to see so many of the people she loved in one place. Yes, she was very happy. Nothing, she thought, could ruin this day for her. She noticed that James had brought his girlfriend to the ball and was introducing her to the rest of the family. Her name was Sarah Ann Winter. She had red hair, not as light red as the Weasley side of the family, and not as dark as Lily’s or Susie’s hair. She also had bright blue eyes. That, Lily knew, James just fell in love with. One reason for that was because blue was James’s favorite color, besides Gryffindor red and gold. Sarah was a nice girl. Lily thought that James and Sarah would be the next to marry. For James looked very serious about Sarah. Lily could see the love he had for her in his bright emerald green eyes. She never thought it possible for some one to take the heart of one of her older brothers. But here was her proof of that, proving her logic wrong. If only they could find a nice girl for Sirius, who swore to be single for the rest of his life at the young age of twenty.

As the ball raged on Lily started to get a feeling of uneasiness. But she cleared her mind of it and rejoined her guest as they celebrated her eighteenth birthday. As the ball was in the middle of it’s celebration there was an explosion at the doors to the ball room. Everyone froze, some took out their wands, other’s just stood there scared to death. Death Eaters entered the Ball room. They forced the guest to give them their wands. Then Lily saw something she never would have imaged would happen. Alex was being held in the middle of the ball room floor by two of the Death Eaters. Their leader stood in front of him. Lily could see the smirk on his face as he yelled in a loud voice. “Come Out Lillian! I know you’re here.” Lily knew that voice. That was the voice of Maxwell. She squared her shoulders and stepped out of the crowed. Her head held high, for she knew what Max wanted. “Ah there you are.” He said turning towards her “You see how much easier things are when people obey the orders given.”

“Why are you doing this Max?” Lily asked looking him dead in his brownish-gray eyes.

“Why am I doing this? Well I thought that was obvious Lillian.” Max answered taking a step toward her. Her emerald green eyes flashed in anger and he stopped. “I see your not happy to see me.”

“Your right I’m not happy to see you. As a matter of fact I told you, you were no longer welcomed here during Christmas.” Lily snapped, everyone could hear the anger in her voice now, even though she showed no signs of her being angry at all.

“Ah yes I do remember you saying something like that. But alas, I do not follow your orders. This isn’t your castle!” Max said with a smirk, that reminded her of Professor Severius Snap, her old Potion’s Master at Hogwarts.

“Not my castle? Maxwell it’s my castle until the day I leave.” Lily said.

“Well then that’s good. Because your coming with me.” Max said.

“Like **** I would. You have no control over me.” Lily said.

“Then who does? Your father, Mother? Alex? Your family? Who Lillian?” Max asked spreading his arms out to signal that they where being watched by the very people she cared for.

“No one has control over me but myself.” Lily answered in a low voice not quite her own. “And you have no right to be here!”

“Oh I have every right to be here. I’m here to clam what’s mine once and for all.” Max said eyeing her in her short emerald green dress. “And no one can stop me from getting what I want.”

“Oh really. Your more self absorbed than I thought. Thinking you can come
arching in here and demanding we hand over what you want. I’m sorry Maxwell that’s not how it’s done around here.” Lily said.

“It will be.” he said “I’ll give you a choice Lillian. You come with me or your dear loving Alex here will be killed by my hand.”

“You wouldn’t!” Lily said taken a back. Never would she believe Max would sink that low just because he didn’t get what he wanted.

“Oh but I would.” Max said, Lily saw the revenge in his eyes. A wanting that made her blood run cold. Then she saw something else. She saw jealousy in it’s worst case.

In a soft voice, yet loud enough for everyone to hear she said, “Your jealous!”

“I am not JEALOUS!” Max practically yelled the word Jealous to the on watchers.

“Oh please I can see it in your eyes Maxwell. Your jealous because Alex is with me. Your jealous because he owns my heart and you don’t.” Lily said, not in anger, but arrogance. “You’ve always been jealous of Alex, haven’t you?”

“Why would I be jealous of a half Werewolf?” Max asked “He has nothing he can offer you. He’s nothing and he’s worth nothing!”

“Oh that’s where you’d be wrong Maxwell. Alex is worth everything.” Lily snapped in a very angry cold voice, that made everyone, including Max and his Death Eaters freeze where they stood in the ball room. “Tell me Max. Did you ever love me for me or did you love me for my titles and power?” Max didn’t answer her as he watched her walk slowly around the small circle that formed around them, Alex and the two Death Eaters holding him to make sure he didn’t do anything. “You can’t answer can you? Because you never did love me for me. You only loved the power I process and the title of Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race.” She stopped.

“That has nothing to do with this.” Max said.

“OH but it has every bit to do with this Maxwell!” Lily yelled, and as she did all but two men took a step back, as everyone felt a rush of anger energy run off of Lily. “You can’t even handle the power I process. That’s clear from you action just now.”

“I can handle the power you hold.” Max said.

“Right!” she said sarcastically, studying his body movement like she was judging him on Judgment day. “Your weak and not worthy of me Maxwell Malfoy. But I will spare your life and the lives of these twenty Death Eater’s, you leave, and leave right now!” They could hear the anger in her voice and they could feel it running off of her body. They could see that her bright cat like emerald green eyes where glowing even brighter.

“I AM NOT WEAK!” Max yelled his face turning red.

“Then why take a step back when you feel my power rolling off me?” Lily asked “You can’t even come near me because you know what will happen if you do!”

“I’ll come near you if I want”

“No you can’t because you’ll just be thrown across the room and most likely be killed if the throw is strong enough.” Lily answered. “Only two people can get close to me with out casing harm to themselves.”

“Ah yes. Alexander and your father.” Max said knowing perfectly who she was talking about. Those where the two men that didn’t take a step back but stood in the same spot they where in the whole time. “Tell me Lillian why is that? Why can they come near you when your this angry or upset?”

“That’s something I can not tell you.” Lily answered as she watched him. For many years she had wondered that same question. And for those many years she could not for the life of her come up with an answer. Not even Dumbledore or her Aunt Hermione could solve that question.

“Oh I think you can!” Max said taking a step towards her. Slowly he stepped closer. And the closer he got the more power he felt rolling off of her skinny, well built body. “I think it’s your choice to have who ever you want close to you when your angry or upset.”

“Then why can’t my mother or siblings get as close as my father and Alex?” Lily asked him in a some what calm voice. “Thought so. You don’t have an answer for that do you? No of course not. For my Aunt Hermione and Albus Dumbledore can’t even answer the very question of why only my father and Alex can get close to me.”

“Then it’s that their more powerful than you!” Max said.

"Wrong. As it turns out. I’m the most powerful Witch in the world.” Lily answered in pride. She could since the pride of her family and friends around her.

“That’s not possible. Your father is known to be the most powerful being in the world.” Max dumbly pointed out.

“I’m sure you’ve heard about the women born into the Royal blood line.” Lily asked. She saw Max nod his head in answer, as well the rest of the room. “I’m the first female to be born of the Royal blood line in six generations. With that comes power, that only the first born daughter can have.” Lily watched Max, but something caught her eye that was behind him. She saw her father moving closer to the small circle. But she made shore to keep her eyes on Max. “The last Princess to be born into the Royal family before me was my Sixth Great Grandmother Queen Nimue Gryffindor-Potter. Before her was her cousin Rowena Scamander-Dee, who died in child birth. Before her was her sister Jessica Scamander but she never saw the light of day because she died when she was born. And before Jessica it was their mother Samantha May Gryffindor Scamander. Godric Gryffindor’s only daughter. But the first Royal Princess was Mary Ann Merlin-Gryffindor. The Great Granddaughter of Merlin himself!” Lily could see by the looks on the guest’s faces that they had never known that there where so few Royal Princesses of the Royal family. “With there being so little of Princesses with in my family, comes great power for the one that is the first born. Oh you might think it’s un-fair for my three younger sisters but they have their own power that should start showing by the time they reach their seventeenth birthdays.”

“I never knew, you knew your family history so well Lillian. Very impressive if I may say so myself.” Max said sarcastically.

“Once I was named Crowned Princess, it was my duty to know about all the Princesses of the Royal family.” Lily said. “But we’re getting off topic.”

“Yes we are. I’ll agree to that.” Max answered. “Matter of fact. You have yet to make your choice. Come with me quietly and I’ll let Alex here live.” He watched Lily with a glare that would have given his father a run for his money. Lily matched that glare with her own. “Ah I see the temper of Weasley, Potter, and Evan’s starting to show.”

“And I see the blood of Malfoy coming to the light.” Lily answered with a smirk, feeling her anger grow, and the soft golden light surround her body as it grew brighter. She noticed everyone but her father and Alex take another step back away from her. She saw the Max was trying his hardest to not take that step back but failed to do so. “And I also see that you still can’t handle my power Maxwell.”

“Are you going to make your choice?” Max asked his anger also rising. Lily didn’t answer, but just watched him. “Fine then. Watch your beloved Alex die.” He turned to face Alex with his wand drown. Alex squared his shoulders ready to do what no other expected of him. He would do anything to see that Lily wasn’t wedded to Max.

“You wont kill Alex.” Lily said in a soft voice. It was so soft that it didn’t even seem like she had said anything, but everyone in the ball room heard her. “You wont do it because you know what would happen if you did.” She saw Max hesitated in his action. “You also know that you could never have me.” She watched as his wand lowered a little as she spoke. “You’ve known for three years haven’t you?” She asked. That question made him look back at her. “Oh Alex told me all about your history together. You both use to be best friends before he found out who you truly where. Right after he told you his deepest darkest secret. Right?” Max just looked at her. “He thought he could trust you with it. I thought I could trust you. But look how well that turned out.” Her bright cat like emerald green eyes where glowing now.

“Yes I do know his secret. The same one that you keep.” Max said.

“So you worked it out of him. For what? So you could get to me? So you could blackmail us both?” Lily asked

“Caught on have you? Yes, I knew your family wouldn’t like the news of what really happened on your fifteenth birthday. So I hatched a plan. I warned Alex that some secrets could be used against him. But he never believed me. So here we stand in the resolute of his and your attractions.” Max said with a sly smile. Lily laughed, not a giggle, not a small laugh, she laughed hard and the harder she laughed the more confused Max looked at her.

“You think we didn’t have a plain for this? Maxwell my parents know, Alex’s parents know. **** my grandparents know along with Jane, Albus Dumbledore, Poppy Pomfrey, and Minerva McGonagall.” Lily said catching her breath and holding her sides. “No one but us twelve know besides you. We, meaning Alex and I, were going to tell the rest of my family and the world of that secret. But if you to black mail us with it, it’s a little to late to do anything about it.” The room was shocked “There’s nothing you can do Max. You can never have me, because I’ve already been had by Alex.”

“That’s not true. There is a law of the Royal family that says you can’t sleep with anyone until your married!” Max said. Lily just smiled at him.

“Did you check the date that the law was made Maxwell?” Lily asked

“No I figured it was installed for many generations before your time.” Max answered.

“If you had you would have realized that that law had been changed.” Lily said putting her hands behind her back. “You would have realized that my father could change those laws anytime he wishes and that’s exactly what he did when he learned of my actions. So in all honesty I didn’t break the laws that the Royal family is bond to follow to set an example to those of our race.” Lily said slowly drawing her wand from it’s hiding place on the back of her dress. Max looked at her like she had just grown two more heads on her shoulders. “What’s wrong Maxwell? Did I just ruin your big plains of becoming my husband?”

“No because you just made it easier for killing him.” Max said turning back to Alex. When Lily was sure that Max wasn’t going to turn back around she went up to him a put her wand at the back of his neck.

“I wouldn’t do that it I where you.” she said. “Now lower your wand and give it here.” Max did as she said. “Now tell your men to drop their wands as well.”

“Why would I do that?” Max asked.

“Because it you don’t you’ll be responsible for what happens to them.” Lily whispered into his ear so no one else could hear her. “I’m very sure that your father would not approve of your actions.”

“Put your wands down.” Max told the twenty or so Death Eaters that had formed the circle around them and the two Death Eaters that held Alex in place.

“Now tell those two to release Alex and I’ll be kind to you.” Lily said and Max told the last two Death Eaters to let Alex go. Lily let Max go and made him face her. “Good boy. Now the last time I told you there would be a price to pay if you ever returned to this castle.”

“That you did.” Max said remembering last Christmas clearly now.

“Good you remembered. Father?” Lily said. Harry walked calmly into the circle. Lily’s eyes never left Max.

“Yes Lily?” Harry asked watching the scene with amusement.

“What is the worst punishment I can give dear old Max here?” Lily asked studying Max’s face as it went from regret to scared out of his wits.

“I believe it would call for a trial for working for and with known Death Eaters and a life time in Azkaban.” Harry answered.

“Good I think it’s an excellent punishment for what his done. As well for the rest of them.” Lily said as she watched several Auror’s show up and arrest the twenty or so Death Eaters in the room and Max. Before they could take Max away for good she walked up to him. “You know you told me when this was all over I would be yours. Well I guess that’s another thing you lied about, because I will never be yours.” Max just glared at her as the Auror’s took him away. Lily smiled to herself for finally getting Max Malfoy out of her life for good. Now she could rest with out another thought about him. Alex came up to her a put his arms around her and pulled her close to him. Lily buried her face into his shoulder as he comforted her.

“It’s going to be fine Lily. Nothing can happen know.” Alex whispered into her ear. And she nodded her head understanding what he meant. Soon very soon they would be able to tell the world their secret. Their deepest and darkest secret that had been living away from them for three whole years now.

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Where you surprised? I hope so. Jessica sorry i had to fool you like that, you got it in one and i didn't want to tell you right off. I thought it would ruin this last bit if you knew who it was before hand. But i'm happy you got it right off.

I realized as i was writing this chapter that the title didn't even go with what i was writing about, so i changed it. The wedding between Alex and Lily will be in the next chapter with an answer to what is their deepest darkest secret that only ten other's know about? You'll soon find out. I promise!!!! Till my next post. Love ya all oh so very much!!!!!!
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Thank you guys so much. I didn't think i could surprise people with out giving away any kind of hints. Thank you for reading. At the moment i'm working on the being of chapter seven. We finally get to read about the wedding. Hope it's as good as the rest of the story. I also hint more about that deep dark secret that Alex and Lily share, but that wont come out untell chapter eight atleast. I'll ost more very very soon. Maybe tomorrow if i have time. Love ya all.
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That's totally not what i meant!!!! Sometimes i have a hard time coming up with hints that make sense to other's as well as myself. For example; in one post i said that there was a picture of Max with a known Death Eater. To me that's a hint. I've also wrote that Max and Draco where paining to Kill Alex. so the little bit right after Lily is getting ready for her birthday ball, i also believe is a hint that this is Max talking to his men that he gathered to attack at Lily's b-day ball. I'm not saying you have to wait for a great writer, thank you for that compliment by the way Jessica, to fine out what might happen next. But i do see what you might have understood from my last post. So I’m not mad you might have misunderstood me, and i hope you guys aren't mad at me for being self centered in a kind of way from my last post. I love ya all so very much. And your replies and thought's about my story are very important to me in many ways.

I'll have the next post of the story up very soon. The wedding is on it's way. I'm thinking about posting the whole chapter at once. Should i or should i post it in bits like i have been doing? Love ya.
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Alright forget my last two post. I'm sorry if i made anyone mad or angry. That was not my intent. On happier news i'm now done with chapter Seven. YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!! I hope you like the wedding. but i have found that the chapter is too long to post all of it at once. So i'm going to post it in bits. so here's the first little bit. Enjoy!!!!!

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Chapter Seven
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The wedding of the century was only a few days away. That’s what the word on the street was about. Everyone in the Wizarding world was talking about Lillian Molly Potter, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race’s wedding to Alexander Remus Lupin. Everyone wanted to be there. Everyone wanted details about the wedding. Lily wanted to scream with all the chaos that the wedding was causing. “Alex why don’t we just elope?” she asked one late night before the wedding. They where sitting in the quite study of ‘Potter Castle’ going over last minute details for the wedding. Alex looked up from the pill of parchment in front of him on the coffee table.

“Why?” He asked.

“Well one it’s a lot easer than planning a big one.” She answered then leaned back into the couch she was sitting on cross legged and ran a hand over her tired face. “I don’t know. Sometimes I think we should just throw caution to the wind and take a leap of faith.”

“I know what you mean Lily, but you know we can’t do that.” Alex answered standing up and walking over to her. He moved the parchment around her and set it all on the coffee table in front of the couch. He took a set and gathered her in his arms. “Think about how important this wedding is for our mothers. They’d kill us if we went and eloped. And what would your dad think as well as mine?”

“They’d both say right on. Well maybe not dad but yours would.” Lily said leaning into him. “But your right I have to follow the Royal family laws and traditions. If I don’t I might have to be de-crowned as Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race.”

“We will get through this and then we’ll be able to tell the world our secret.” Alex said. “I can’t wait till we can tell the truth about her.”

“Nor I. I’ve been waiting for this for a long time.” Lily said. “I can’t believe we where that stupid.”

“But you don’t regret it, do you?” Alex asked looking down at her. She looked up at him with a smile.

“No I don’t. I just regret dating all of those stupid boy’s thinking they loved me for me and not my place in the world we live in.” Lily answered as she kissed him. “Come on. We need to go to bed. I’ll see you tomorrow to finish this up.” She added as she looked at the coffee table with all the parchment on it. They where opening the replies from the invitations they had sent out two weeks before. And making a setting lay out for the reception. They where thankfully almost done with it all, for the wedding was only four days away.

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There came a knock at the office door. “Come in” Harry said, sitting in front of the fireplace in his favorite chair. He had some news for Lily that needed to be told. He knew this news would be welcomed and knew that it would make it easer for her when she would be getting ready for her wedding tomorrow. Yes, this would be one less thing for Lily to worry about on her wedding day. The door opened and Lily walked in.

“You wanted to see me dad?” Lily asked coming in and taking a set in the chair next to her father. Who was watching the fire before them.

“Yes. I’ve got news for you.” Harry said as he picked up a file that sat on the end table by his chair.

“What kind of news?” she asked as Harry handed her the file. She looked at the name on the file. “Is this. . . .?”

“Yes it is.” Harry answered with out her finishing the question. “He has been sentence to life with no parole. He wont be able to harm you or any of our family and friends. We have also found his father as well.”

“So they wont be coming after me or Alex again?” Lily asked looking through the file. Reading the result of the trail.

“Yes. They wont be able to lay a hand on anyone that is considered to be family or friend. They are locked away for good.” Lily put the file down and hugged Harry. “Very soon you will be able to she her with the world and the rest of the family.” Harry whispered into her ear. Lily let out a small sob. Harry knew it was a happy sob. One that he knew would be stashed in her memory for years to come.

“Thank you daddy. I love you very much.” Lily said pulling back.

“I know. Now, I believe you have something’s to finish up before the Wedding tomorrow.” Harry said.

“Yes I have something’s to finish up on.” Lily said. “I’ll talk to you later dad.” Then she left the office. Harry smiled, finally peace would come to his eldest daughters heart after so many years of hiding her secret from the world.
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Eight men sat in the small room behind the alter at the church. Seven of the men where watching the eighth pace back and forth in front of them. He had sandy-brown hair that lay neatly on his head. His dress robes had been cleaned and pressed and he was wearing them. They were royal blue robes with gold trim. They made his baby blue eyes stand out a little more than they normally did. The seven men where wearing something similar. The four Groomsmen, which where Sirius, Art, Drew, and Derek, wore black dress robes with royal blue trim. The Best Man, which was James, wore black dress robes and gold trim, to set him apart from the other Groomsmen. Alex’s father, Remus, was wearing royal blue dress robes with black trim, while Harry wore black dress robes with emerald green trim, to signify that they where the father’s of the couple getting married. They all watched Alex pace back and forth worried that something would go wrong with the wedding.

“Alex! You need to calm down!” Remus said stopping his eldest son in his pacing.

“What if something goes wrong? What if she doesn’t want to marry me anymore? What if. . . .” Alex began trying not to run a hand through his neat hair.

“Alex stop. Lily loves you more than anything in the world. Nothing is going to go wrong with the wedding. Your mother and Ginny have made sure that Fred and George didn’t have any tricks up their sleeves or in their pockets.” Remus said. Looking at Harry for some help.

“Your father’s right Alex. Nothing is going to go wrong with the wedding. And Lily loves you from the bottom of her heart and soul.” Harry said, then he laughed a little remembering what he went through before his wedding. And How Remus acted before his.

“Dad what are you laughing at?” Sirius asked looking at his father with a confused look.

“Oh I’m just remembering how Remus here acted before he married Tonks. He was a complete reek.” Harry answered with a smile.

“I wasn’t as bad as you where though.” Remus said then turning back to Alex. “He was so nervous that he couldn’t even tie his own shoes right.” And they all laughed at that. Alex started to calm down a little with the laughter.

“Yeah at least I didn’t faint when it was almost time to walk out to the alter.” Harry said and they all laughed some more. They where still laughing when the door opened and Arthur Weasley stood there.

“What’s so funny?” he asked. Looking at the eight men with a confused look.

“Their talking about how Dad and Uncle Remus where like when they got married to our moms.” Derek said with a smile. He was the youngest in this little group of men.

“Oh. Why’s that?” Arthur asked looking over at Harry and Remus.

“We where trying to calm down Alex. It seems to be working.” Remus answered.

“That’s good.” Arthur said. “Well I just came to tell you that everyone is ready to go. We just need you at the alter Alex and we can start.”

“Thank you Arthur.” Harry said with a smile. “Well I better get to the back of the church. Lily will be wondering where I’ve got to. Good luck Alex. You’re a good man and I trust you with my eldest daughter. Take good care of her.”

“I will Harry.” Alex answered with a warm smile. Then all of the men left the small room. Harry, James, Sirius, Art, Drew, and Derek went to the back of the church. Remus and Arthur went to set by their loving wives in the pews and Alex took his spot at the alter with the priest, Father David.

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Meanwhile, Lily was going through something similar to what Alex was going through. She wasn’t pacing the room with her Maid of Honor and Brides maids watching her with her mother and Tonks. She stood in front of the mirror and was wring her hands as she voiced what was bothering her. “I can’t do this! What if he doesn’t love me? What if I’m not good enough for him? How could he love me after all I’ve done to try and forget my love for him? What if. . . .”

“Lily stop. Your driving us crazy here.” Jane said stepping in front of her. “Alex loves you. He loves you so much that he can’t go a day with out touching or kissing you. Or think about you. You’re his world, besides Quidditch. You’re the one he wants what he’s always wanted.” Jane was wearing a beautiful gold dress robes with black trim. Her hair was up in an elegant bun with two strains of curls framing her face. Kate, Ginger, Crystal, and Susie where wearing the same gold dress robes but with royal blue trim, with their hair up like Jane‘s hair. Tonks was wearing a beautiful navy blue dress robes with gold trim, while Ginny wore emerald green dress robes with royal blue trim.

“But. . . .” Lily began.

“No Lily Jane is right. There’s nothing to be worried about. Everything is going to turn out wonderful. And there’s nothing that can make anything go wrong.” Ginny said. Coming up behind Lily, giving her a hug from behind.

“Well if we’ve got Lily calmed down. It’s show time.” Tonks said also giving Lily a hug. “Good luck Lily. And take care of my boy.”

“I will Aunt Tonks.” Lily answered, with a small smile. Tonks and Ginny left the small room at the back of the church, just as the Groomsmen, Best man, and Harry showed up at the back of the church. Ginny kissed Harry on the cheek before she left to go take her set.
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As everyone Got lined up in the correct order in front of the two large oak doors that lead into the main part of the church. Lily finally came out of the small back room of the church. “You look beautiful Lillian.” Harry said, with a smile on his face as he saw his eldest daughter for the first time all day. She wore a pure white wedding dress. It was sleeveless, perfect for July weather. It hugged her small but fit body in the right places and fleered out ward at the waste, and falling down to the floor. Her face was covered by the vile, but Harry could see that her long flaming red hair was up in the most elegant bun he had ever laid eyes on. She had two small curls framing her beautiful face. Her cat like emerald green eyes stood out through the vile, and her lips where painted with rose red lipstick. She had heart shaped earring’s in, and around her neck she wore the crystal heart necklace that still glowed the deepest color of red.

“Thank you daddy.” Lily said with a warm smile. “You think I can do this right?”

“Of course I can. I wouldn’t trust anyone but Alex with you.” Harry said, taking her arm and wrapping it under his, as they got ready to walk down the ail. The doors opened and Derek and Susie went first. A few seconds later went Art and Ginger, then Drew and Kate, then Sirius and Crystal, and then James and Jane. They walked down the ail to classical Muggle music. Then as James and Jane reached the alter, they both gave Alex a confident smile. James stood by Alex and padded his shoulder as he took his place by him. Jane stood on the other side of the alter with a smile, as they heard the music change to the wedding march. The large oak doors opened for the last time and everyone saw Lily and Harry standing there. Alex’s breath caught in his throat as he saw Lily.

This was the woman he loved, the woman that would bear his children, the woman he would worship and care for, for the rest of his life. This was the one woman that owned his heart, body, mind, and soul. She was the one that made his world turn. She was his sunshine on a sunny day. His shelter when it stormed. She was his world, his life, his everything. Harry walked Lily up to the alter, both had smiles on their faces as they saw the guest. Lily wasn’t looking at everyone else though. She was watching the dazed look on Alex’s face as he watched her walk to him. She smiled at the reaction she saw in his baby blue eyes. She saw all the fear run out and be replaced by the love he felt for her and for her alone. He was her one true love. He was her world. He was the one that owned her heart from the day she was born. He was her one and only. They finally reached the alter. And tood be for Father David.

“Ladies and Gentlemen, family and friends, I welcome you here today, to bear witness to the marriage of Alexander Remus Lupin and Lillian Molly Potter, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race. But first I must ask, who brings this woman to marry this man?” Father David asked

“I do,” Harry said with a smile. He took both Alex’s and Lily’s hand and put them together. “Take care of each other., Be good to one another Be happy. Be healthy. And love each other forever.” Then he lifted Lily’s veil a little and gave her a quick kiss before taking his seat next to Ginny. Father David then motioned for Jane and James to step up to the podium to read the passage from the Holy Bible. Jane stepped up first, her fingers entwined with the red satin ribbon that marked the place the Bible passage. She took a breath, standing tall and proud at the lector in front of the Church. Her eyes fell onto the sacred pages before her.

“A reading from the letter of St. Paul to the Corinthians,” Jane read aloud “Though I speak with the tongues of men and of angles, but have not love, I have become sounding brass or a clanging cymbal. And though I have the gift of prophecy, and understand all mysteries and all knowledge, and though I have all faith, so that I could remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. And though I bestow all my goods to feed the poor, and though I give my body to be burned, but have not love, it profits me nothing. Love suffers long and is kind; love does not envy; love does not parade itself, is not puffed up; does not behave rudely, does not seek its own, is not provoked, thinks no evil; does not rejoice in iniquity, but rejoices in truth; bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things.” Jane finished reading and stepped aside for James to finish the reading of the passage.

“Love never fails. But whether there are prophecies, they will fail; whether there are tongues, they will cease; whether there is knowledge, it will vanish away. For we know in part and we prophesy in part. But when that which is perfect has come, then that which is in part will be done away. When I was a child, I spoke as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child; but when I became a man, I put away childish things. For now we see in a mirror, dimly, but then face to face. Now I know in part, but then I shall know just as I also am known. And now abide faith, hope, love, these three; but the greatest of these is love.” James finished the passage. He smiled down at Lily and Alex. Then he and Jane walked back to their places next to them. And Father David began to speak.

“This is the time you have chosen to become husband and wife. We are here, not only to witness your commitment to each other, but also to wish you both every happiness in your future life together. Within its framework of commitment and loyalty marriage enables the establishment of a home, where through trust, patience, and respect, the love and affection which you have for each other may develop into a deep and lasting relationship. We, who are witnessing your marriage, hope that despite the stresses inevitable in any life, your love, respect for each other, and your trust and understanding of each other will increase your contentment and heighten your joy in living. Marriage is founded on sincerity and understanding which leads to tolerance, confidence, and trust. We believe that those qualities, which have attracted you both to each other, can be best developed during a life spent together. A happy marriage will enable you to establish a home with love and stability where your family and friends will always be welcome. At this time I would like to read you a passage by Walter Pinder;

Everyday you live, learn how to receive love with as much understanding as you give it. Find things within yourself, then you can share them with each other. Do not fear this love. Have an open heart and a sincere mind. Be sincerely interested in each other's happiness. Be constant and consistent in your love. From this comes security and strength. All that we love deeply becomes a part of us on this day of your marriage. Try to commit yourselves fully and freely to each other.

Before you, Alexander and Lillian, are joined in marriage in my presence and that of your family, friends, and witnesses, I would like to remind you of the serious and binding nature of the relationship you are now about to enter,” he paused for a moment to allow them contemplation. “Before we progress into the traditional vows,” Father David exclaimed jovially. “I understand that you both have written personal vows to one another. This is encouraged. If the Lillian would like to commence, we shall start. Lillian.” The priest stepped back, giving them that moment alone. Though they had numerous lights shining down on them, lights she expected were not of this world, even though Father David stood mere feet away from them, though dozens of pairs of eyes stared fondly up at them, they knew, at that moment, they were the only two people in the entire world.

Lily cleared her throat nervously. She shifted her eyes downward, suddenly embarrassed. She felt his warm hands in hers squeeze gently, urging her to look at him. She took a breath, said a silent prayer, and met his baby blue gaze. “Alex,” she said quietly, tightening her grasp on her hands. “It’s taken us eighteen years to get here. And standing here with you now guarantees lifelong happiness and security. I know you’re mine.” She smiled at him before continuing. “But it wasn’t always like this. We could have never told each other how we truly felt until a big fight happened. It took me a year and a half to realize that you where my one and only.” She paused and thought what she would say next. She saw the love he had for her in his baby blue eyes. Those eyes made her go weak at the knees. “But one thing is curtain you have always been there when I have fallen from some sort of height. You’ve personally picked up the peaces of my broken heart and glued it back together. Making it whole once again. But every time you did. You put a little bit more of yourself into it. You put peaces of your own heart into mine making us one.” She paused again as tears formed in her cat like emerald green eyes. “I have loved you for so long that I tried my hardest to forget that love. The very love you put into my heart by putting it back together. There’s nothing in this world that makes me happier that you. You are my one and only. You make my world go round. You are the one I will always and forever love. For you have owned my heart since the very first day we meet, eighteen years ago to the day. And you that I pledge my self to you and no one else.” She paused one last time and looked even deeper into his eyes. “Alex, I love you and only you.”

There was a united sigh among the guests sitting in the pews, but Alex only knew her. He felt like weeping. He could not truly comprehend the actual words, but getting lost in her eyes, swimming in those emerald green pools of love, interpreted everything through those eyes, and not necessarily the words. He began to tremble as he lifted her hand to his lips, caressing her palm with his thumb. His breathing came in short spurts. He could feel his face heating up. “Alexander?” Father David’s soft voice came. “Alex, would you like to say something to Lillian now?”

“Yes,” Alex croaked. He cleared his throat nervously, eyeing the audience with embarrassment. He looked up at Lily who smiled kindly at him. Her radiance and angelic beam seemed to give him strength. She knew he had prayed for her. Maybe that was why he felt so complete. “I’m not really good at expressing my thoughts in to words. I know no other words that can describe my feelings for you but I love you.” Alex began. He looked into her cat like emerald green eyes and seeing the love she had for him. “Lily you once told me that the key thing to finding your true love was observation. Your father told you to observe your surroundings. Take in everything you saw and how it felt. And if it felt right then it belonged in your life. To tell you the truth I’ve been observing you my whole life and I have always felt that you belonged in it. I admit I wasn’t happy when you started dating other guys. But I saw that you where happy to some leave and I never wanted to mess with anything you where happy with. To me your happiness comes first and always will.” He paused and squeezed her hand in his. “You’re my world, my everything. You’re my sunshine on a sunny day. My shelter when it storms. As you have said you make my world go round. You are everything I have ever dreamed of. The very first time I saw you I fell in love. I never knew how much love could hurt though. And every time I saw you cry or angry I always wanted to take the pain that the crying and anger caused. Besides your father I was the only one that could get close enough to calm you down. I was the one you went looking for first when something horrible happened. Or you just wanted to talk. I have always cherished every minute we have spent together. And now. . . .” he reached up with his hand under her veil and brushed some of her tears away. “Now I’m happy to be standing here with you. And I am more than happy to say I love you forever and always.” He smiled at her.

Father David approached them with subtle presence. “Dearly beloved. We are gathered here in the presence of God to unite this man and this woman in Holy Matrimony. They will be one forever. Alexander, please take Lillian’s hand and repeat after me. I, Alexander Remus Lupin. . . .”

Alex took a breath. “I, Alexander Remus Lupin. . . .”

“Take you, Lillian Molly Potter, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race. . . .”

“Take you, Lillian Molly Potter, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race. . . .”

“As my lawful wedded wife.”

“As my lawful wedded wife.”

“To have and to hold."

“To have and to hold.”

“From this day forward.”

“From this day forward.”

“For better or for worse.”

“For better or for worse.”

“For richer or for poorer.”

“For richer or for poorer.”

“In sickness and in health.”

“In sickness and in health.”

“To love and to cherish.”

“To love and to cherish.”

“Until death do us part.”

“Until death do us part.” Lily’s emerald green eyes finally consented and two large tears of joy fell down her pink cheeks. She smiled at her husband-to-be in ecstacy, his words and vows ringing in her ears like an angelic choir. She was about to make the same promise as Father David turned to her.

“I, Lillian Molly Potter, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race. . . .” He said softly, his red leather Bible open in his hands.

Lily sniffed, beaming, staring into the soul of Alex with all of her strength. “I, Lillian Molly Potter, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race. . .”

“Take you, Alexander Remus Lupin.”

“Take you, Alexander Remus Lupin.”

“As my lawful wedded husband.”

“As my lawful wedded husband.”

“To have and to hold.”

“To have and to hold.”

“From this day forward.”

“From this day forward.”

“For better or for worse.”

“For better or for worse.”

“For richer or for poorer.”

“For richer or for poorer.”

“In sickness and in health.”

“In sickness and in health.”

“To love and to cherish.”

“To love and to cherish.”

“Until death do us part.”

“Until death do us part.”

Father David instructed them further, his voice like a hazy song in the background of the world the two had created gazing at each other. “The rings?” James and Jane both stepped forward from where they were standing. James Stood between Alex and Father David, while Jane stood between Lily and Father David across from him, both of the velvet ring cases open in their palms. Father David smiled warmly. “Alexander, please take Lillian’s hand.” Alex obeyed with pleasure, his fingers taking the gold wedding band that was studded with diamonds and emeralds. “And repeat after me. I take this ring as a sign of my love and faithfulness in the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit.”

Alex guided the ring smoothly onto Lily’s perfect ring finger, providing a companion for her sparkling diamond and emerald engagement ring and repeated the words. “I take this ring as a sign of my love and faithfulness in the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit.” Once the ring was in place, he squeezed her hand tightly.

“Lillian,” Father David smiled, motioning for Jane to hand the bride the simple wedding band meant for the groom. “If you would take Alexander’s hand and repeat after me. I take this ring as a sign of my love and faithfulness in the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit.”

Lily swallowed, almost choking on her tears of joy. Once she said those words, she would become Mrs. Alexander Remus Lupin, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race. Her fingers quivered in anticipation as it slipped easily onto those beloved fingers. “I take this. . . .this ring,” she breathed. “As a sign of my love and faithfulness. . . .” She looked up to see Alex meeting her gaze. This was it. “In the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit.”

Father David beamed, lightly pushing the couple together. James and Jane had tears in their eyes as they watched the newlyweds gaze at each other longingly. The priest’s joyful voice rang through the Church and to the Heavens, to James Potter, Lily Evans-Potter, and Sirius Black. . . .all the faithful departed; to the saints and up to God Himself: “I now pronounce you husband and wife. Alex, you may now kiss your bride.” The delighted guests cheered in approval, their hands thundering tremendously as the choir and orchestra filled the air with song and ecstacy. All the while, Lily only saw Alex. He only saw her. Their bodies moved closer together until he picked her up in his arms and kissed her softly on her full, pink lips. This caused another roar of support from the audience, Molly Weasley’s sobs of joy and the twin’s obnoxious hollers ringing above all. After their kiss Father David told them to face their family and friends. “I am delighted to present to you all Mr. and Mrs. Alexander Remus Lupin,” Father David finally said. For the first time Alex and Lily turned to face their gests as husband and wife.

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I used to read your story Forgive and Forget when you were still writing that. I decided to check if you had anything else and I found this. I must say this is brilliant. I love the story.

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Wow...that was one amazing wedding chapter! Everything they said was so beautiful...it makes me want to get married! I just need to find someone first...LOL
Hope you can post more soon! You've kept us in suspense over this big secret for so long now I'm bursting with curiosity.
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Well I finally have the first part of chapter eight done. Tell me if you have any guesses at what this big deep dark secret is. I'm curiose of what you all think it is. But right now i wont hold you up any longer. I'm sure you want to read the beinning of chapter eight. So here it is.

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Chapter Eight
Mystery Behind
A Deep Dark Secret


Lily sat on the balcony of her Royal Suite room at a very private Hotel resort in Hawaii. She watched the sky change color’s as the sun rose over the horizon over the deep, dark blue ocean. She listened as the waves crashed into the shore below her. The sun rise was a sight to behold. As she watched the color's change from black to deep blue to purple, to a deep red and so on. She was happy, very happy. She had been Mrs. Lillian Molly Lupin, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race, for a little over a week now. She took a deep breath as she thought back to the speeches made that the wedding reception. James had given his first, as he had been the Best Man.

“Where do I begin? As Best Man I’m suppose to give a speech. I’m really not one to give speeches, but I’ll try any way, just to make my sister Lily happy.” James had started at that time everyone had laughed at the small joke. “Really though. Lily and Alex are the best people in the world. They both care very much about everyone around them. If I had to have my sister marry someone in this world, I couldn’t choice anyone better than Alex. He has always been there for her in ways that no one else can understand or try to. He knows Lily better than I think anyone here does. And the same goes to Lily.” He stopped and looked at them with a smile of knowing. “But there are times when Lily does get angry and no one but dad and Alex can get her to calm down. But that really dependences on where she’s at, at the time she angry. Oh don’t give me that look Lily.” James said as Lily glared at him. “You know it’s true. Anyway I’m happy you both have each other. So I pose a toast to the Newly Weds.” He said as he raised his glass of wine. “May your lives be healthy. May your day’s be filled with love. May your marriage be a blessing from above. And may your love for each other live on in the great beyond. To Alex and Lily!” and everyone had cheered and drank from their glasses.

Lily smiled at her eldest brother’s speech it was short kind of, but not to long. She love James very much. And she couldn’t think of anyone better to have as a Best Man. The second speech of the night was from Jane. Their best friend of eighteen years. The one that probably knew them better than the rest of the family did.

“As the Maid of Honor, I’m also have to give a speech. Alex, Lily, and I have been best friends for the past eighteen years. The best eighteen years of my life if I may say so. From day one I could tell that there was more than just being best friends between Alex and Lily, but I never fully understood what was happening between them until we got old enough to understand what love truly meant. I saw the longing looks between the two of them and I also saw the love they had for each other. You could say that I knew they where one day going to end up here. But I never let on to that I knew their secret that they loved each other.” Everyone laughed at this. “No, I may have sat back and watched them both from a distance. But I did have a helping hand in them staying together as friends first lovers second. Of course it wasn’t until last Christmas that they finally got their acts together and told each other how they truly felt. Which I am very happy that they did, other wise we wouldn’t be here today, now would we?” once again everyone laughed. “Alex, Lily, you both are my best friends. And I approve of your marriage even if most unknown people would not. Some actually think that I would be mad and upset because of this but I guess they don’t know me very well. Not like you two do at least. But enough of this mushy fussy stuff. We’re here to celebrate the two of you. And as your best friend and Maid of Honor, I saw I told you so. For I was the very first one to see this day come. And I’m proud to say I am more than happy about it. So congrats, and the best of luck in your marriage, and As James has said may your love for each other live on in the great beyond, To Alex and Lily!” as with James’s speech everyone cheered and drank from their glasses.

Yes, Jane did know them better than the rest of the world did. She knew everything that went on between Alex and Lily. Jane had been the quite, observant one of their little ‘Golden Trio’ group. She had never given anything away unless it was appsolutly the right time to give something away. She kept their secrets of each other under lock and key. Yes, Jane was defiantly the one Alex and Lily could trust the most out of everyone they knew. Lily took a sep of her morning tea and smiled. Alex and her would be returning to England today. But they wouldn’t be going alone. They had chosen Hawaii for a very good reason. Not like what most newly weds would have. There where two reason’s why they where here. One was of course for their Honeymoon. The second was to bring home the one thing that they had hidden for the past three years. They would be sharing it with the rest of their family and friends as soon as they portkey into ‘Potter Castle’. But Lily also knew once they got home there would be a whole lot of questions that would need to be answered and she hoped to Merlin, himself, that everyone would take the news of the secret as well as their parents, Jane, Dumbledore, McGonagall, Pomfrey, and Lily’s grandparents did. But no one really knew how everyone else would react to that kind of news, not until they told the truth that is.

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ooo good post

I think they have a kid together. It seems to sorta fit except for the fact that they were only fifteen three years ago and I doubt anyone would take that kind of a news well.

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That's what I've been thinking too, since the post where Lily mentioned that the rule about sex before marriage had been changed. But if Lily and Alex have a child together, that kind of defeats the whole idea of the two of them not expressing those kinds of feelings for each other before they did at Christmas. Unless they were extremely drunk or put under a spell that made them fall into bed together...LOL

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same here i think they have a child!! post more soon
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Back in England Ginny sat in the living room of ‘Potter Castle’ reading ‘Witch Weekly’. The magazine had countless article’s about Alex and Lily’s wedding, from how it was decorated down to the very last detail of the candle stick holders and the candles. Ginny gave a sigh and closed the magazine before setting it on the coffee table in front of her. She looked around the living room. Very soon people would be sitting in the chairs and on the couches. Standing by the windows talking to each other. She had everything ready for the return of Alex and Lily and their surprise. There wasn’t much to do. All Lily and Alex told her and the other’s that knew their secret was to have the family there when they arrived from Hawaii. Yes, with this surprise all their lives would change.

For the past three years thirteen people had to keep quite about Alex and Lily’s secret. For three years Alex and Lily had their memories of the incident hidden from their own minds. Of course Harry, Dumbledore, and Remus made sure that when the time was right for Alex and Lily to realize the effect of the whole thing they would be truly in love with each other. Only then would they be able to remember their secret. “Mom?” came a soft voice from the door way of the living room, braking Ginny out of her thoughts.

“Yeah Susie?” Ginny asked turning around to see Susie walk over to her. She looked kind of out of place with the way she looked just now. Susie was never this shy, but here she was shy. “Susie?”

“Do you remember what Lily said at her Birthday ball?” Susie asked not looking up at her mother.

“What part?” Ginny asked not understanding where she was going with her question.

“The part about Kate, Ginger, and my powers?” Susie said.

“Yes, I remember. She said that they should be starting to show. Why do you ask?” Ginny said thinking now.

“I think mine are starting to show up.” Susie said in almost a whisper, like she was afraid to tell Ginny or let anyone else hear her, when there was no one but Ginny in the living room.

“Are you sure?” Ginny asked studying her youngest daughter. Susie nodded her head and looked up at Ginny. “What makes you think your power’s are starting to show?”

“I had some sort of vision last night. It was about Lily and Alex and they had two people with them.” Susie said. “But it was to fuzzy. I could only make out Lily and Alex but not the other two.” Ginny just looked at her for a bit. Susie could tell she knew something about what would happen when Alex and Lily got home from their trip to Hawaii.

“Susie I don’t want you to tell anyone about your vision until we talk to your father.” Ginny finally said.

“It’s about their secret isn’t it?” Susie asked

“I believe so. But no one is to know until Alex and Lily can tell everyone themselves.” Ginny said.

“Why can’t anyone know till they tell us?” Susie asked studying her mother now.

“Many reason’s Susie. One of them was the Royal family laws and traditions.” Ginny answered. “Alex and Lily made the decision on their own. Your father and I supported them in that decision and promise not to tell anyone.”

“You and dad aren’t the only ones that know are you?” Susie asked starting to get a guess on what the secret was about.

“In all there are thirteen of us that know. But I’m not going to tell you who everyone else is.” Ginny said.

“Why didn’t they tell the rest of the family before?”

“Susie at the time you where to young to know. As for everyone else, it was up to Lily and Alex.” Ginny said. “Now, we, as in you and I, have to go talk to your father about you new power.” They then stood up and left the living room in search of Harry. Ginny knew that something like this would happen before Alex and Lily got home with their surprise. But then it also had just been an uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach for the past week and a half.

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Of course Harry wouldn't be worried! He'd enjoy watching Max sqwirm.

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Her? I must know what that secrect is!!!
For a minute I was thinking they have a child.. But Umm How would they keep that a secret?
I mean come on, How would you hide a baby? .

Loved all those chapters!!
I missed soo much but I'm caught up and ready to find out the secret!!
I've been thinking of everything possible that could be the secret but nothing I've thought of adds up.. Anyways Cant wait for the next chapter!! and Secret!! Must... now.. that... secret!!!

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omg, it was not in their memory until now?
this is so good
need to kno secret now
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Ooh...all I can say is PAMS! I don't say it often, because I prefer not to use it and say something a little more substantial, but I honestly can't help it...I'm desperately curious to find out this secret!
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