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02-01-2007, 06:52 AM
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | Chapter Five
Hey guys, i've got it. I've got chapter five started and it's good i think. I hope you love it. Thank you oh so very much for reading. i won't keep you anylonger than i have too. SO here's the beinging of Chapter five.
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The Perfect Proposal
It had been four months since Lily and Max broke up and Lily got with Alex. She was happy, very happy. But there was still something bugging her about Max’s words when he left the castle that night. ‘This isn’t over Lillian! In the end you will be mine!’ But she knew that could never happen. Alex and her souls had been matted as one. There was no way to brake that bond between them now. And to tell you the truth Lily didn’t want to brake that bone. She had finally found what she had always been looking for. She had found her soul mate, her true love. The very person she could always turn to when things went horrible wrong. ‘But why the feeling of. . . .’ she didn’t even know what word to use for the feel she was having. She shock her head trying to clear it. But Max’s words still hunted her. ‘I have to shack this.’ She said told herself, as she sat in her sitting room. ‘Come on Lily. Don’t listen to his words. He lied to you. You hate being lied too. Think of your love for Alex. He’s your true love. Thank of that. And this will all go away.’ She closed her cat like eyes and took several deep breaths. When she re-opened her eyes she seemed to be fine. Yes, she was going to be fine. Everything was much better now.
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The room was dark except for the fire in the fire place. “Ah Max!” Said a voice from the chair that sat in front of the fire. “How may I help you?”
“My Lord, she has chosen to be with the part Werewolf Alexander Lupin.” Max answered in a disgusted voice to the man in the chair.
“Do not fear my dear son. You’ll have Princess Lillian as your own soon.” the man answered. “Once she is told the truth of him knowing you, then she’ll have to choose you.”
“But they have bonded their souls together. We can not brake that no matter what we do!” Max said.
“My dear Max. You are not thinking clearly.” the man said standing up from the chair. He was tall. And he had bleached blood hair, much like Max’s. He turned to Max. “We simply have to kill Alex. Then the bond they have will not matter.” he smiled, an evil smile. “And then our dear Princess Lillian will be yours to have.”
“Thank you father. I will get a team together for Lupin’s demise.” Max said bowing to the man then leaving the dark room, with his own evil smile.
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“Alex?” came a voice from the hall way.
“In here dad.” Alex called from the couch in front of the fire place. He looked up to see Remus walk into the living room.
“I thought you where going out with Lily tonight?” Remus asked.
“No we didn’t have plains for tonight.” Alex said, looking back at the fire in thought.
“So what’s on your mind?” Remus asked, seeing Alex thinking of something. Alex didn’t answer. So Remus took a shot in the dark. “Let me guess Lily?”
“Yeah.” Alex answered not looking at his father. Remus smiled and sat down beside his eldest son. “I’m thinking about asking her to marry me.”
“That’s good isn’t it?” Remus asked.
“Yes and then no.” Alex said. “Don’t get me wrong. I love Lily with my whole being but I’ve lied to her about something and I don’t know how to tell her the truth.”
“What did you lie about?” Remus asked.
“When Lily kicked Max out of the castle on Christmas Eve. She asked me to promise to never lie to her.” Alex said running a hand through his sandy-brown hair.
“So?” asked Remus.
“Uncle Harry never told me Max was the son of Draco Malfoy. I’m sure you caught that I called him Malfoy instead of Smith at the Ball.” Alex said.
“You knew who he was before the rest of us didn’t you?” Remus asked.
“Yes, and I had ever chance possible to tell you all he truth about him.” Alex said. “But I should have told Lily right off.”
“But you didn’t.” Remus said watching the fire now as well.
“I thought he had changed. I was giving him a chance to show me he had changed.” Alex confessed. “I don’t know what to do anymore. I know he’s going to try and get Lily back. And I’d do anything to make sure he doesn’t.”
“Alex calm down. None of the family likes Max anymore after we were all told what he is. We’re not going to let that happen. Especially Lily and Harry.” Remus said placing a hand on Alex’s shoulder. “But you need to tell Lily what you know of Max. then no more ling after that.”
“But how?” Alex asked looking at his father.
“Easy. Just tell her you need to tell her something important. She may think it’s a proposal at first but it’s you who has to tell her.” Remus said. “If she found out about you knowing before the rest of us knew, well you know how angry she can get. And by finding out from a different person that’s not you. She’ll feel betrayed.”
“Thanks dad.” Alex said standing up.
“Your welcome. If your going over to the castle say hi for me.” Remus said, Alex gave him a nod before he took floo powered and flooed away in the green flames.
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So what do you guys think? Who's that man Max was talking to? What's Max up to now? Will Alex tell Lily the truth? Will he ask her to marry him? Who know's, we'll find out in the next few postes!!!!! Love ya guys with all my heart. Keep posting replies and reading!!!!!
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02-01-2007, 07:43 AM
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| Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad Quote:
“Do not fear my dear son. You’ll have Princess Lillian as your own soon.” the man answered. “Once she is told the truth of him knowing you, then she’ll have to choose you.”
No she wont!  Quote:
“We simply have to kill Alex.
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Evil Evil Twitchy little ferret Draco Malfoy!! :hack:
The rest of the family should have Hexed him into a snail last time he was at the castle! then fed him to hedwig! 
That was an awesome post!!
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02-01-2007, 11:56 AM
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | Chapter five continued Quote:
Originally Posted by D.A Forever Evil Evil Twitchy little ferret Draco Malfoy!! :hack:
The rest of the family should have Hexed him into a snail last time he was at the castle! then fed him to hedwig!
That was an awesome post!! Very Funny!  Very awesome and yes i would love to hex Draco Malfoy as well as Max. But any way on to good a better things. Now my last post i had Alex talking with Remus about telling Lily the truth of what he knew of Max. So here's the next section of chapter five. Let's see what Lily has to say about it all shall we?
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“Lily!” came a voice from behind Lily as she sat on the stone bench in the middle of the garden watching the water fountain. She turned around to see Alex.
“Alex, we didn’t have anything plain for today did we?” Lily asked feeling like she forgot something, as she stood up to give him a hug and kiss.
“No, I just came by to see you.” Alex said. “And I also need to tell you something important.”
“What do you mean?” She asked as Alex sat her back down on the bench and sat with her.
“Merlin. . . .there is no easy way to say this.” Alex said running a hand through his hair.
“Alex just spit it out.” Lily said studying his face.
“I knew what Max was before you introduced him to all of us at you seventeenth birthday ball.” Alex said in a low whisper. Not looking Lily in the eye.
“Why didn’t you tell me before I found out the hard way?” Lily asked. Alex didn’t note any anger or any hint of being upset in her voice.
“I thought I’d should give him a chance to show me he’d changed or the best.” Alex answered. “Lily. . . .I. . . .I didn’t tell anyone because I saw how happy you where and I didn’t want to ruin your happiness.” Alex looked up at her. He looked into her emerald green cat like eyes. She showed no emotion of any kind in those eyes. This scared him a little.
“How did you know him before I introduced him to everyone else?” She asked looking him in his baby blue eyes. Studying, searching for the truth behind his words and she had found no lie in them.
“I meet him when dad signed me up for a Quidditch camp when we where about thirteen.” Alex answered. “After that we became something of best friends. We owled each other, met a few time during summer vacations. It wasn’t until two years ago that I told him I loved you. In return he told me who his real father was and what he did for a living. Max knew I was against everything Mr. Malfoy was teaching him. And we started to drift apart.” Alex said these words all the while looking Lily in the eye. “I thought that I was done with him until I saw him at your birthday ball. I guess after that I let my jealousy get control and you know the rest of it.” Lily didn’t say anything as Alex looked sheepishly down at his feet. “For the past three day’s I’ve been trying to find a way to tell you. I figured that I should keep secrets from you anymore. And when I asked dad what I should do he said to tell you myself and not let anyone else tell you first.”
“Thank you Alex.” she finally said causing Alex to look at her. “It means a lot to me that you don’t want to keep secrets. And I love the more because of it.” She reached up and creased his cheek with her hand.
“So you forgive me for not telling you right away?” Alex asked.
“Of course I do. I knew there was something on your mind of late. But I didn’t want to force you to tell me.” Lily answered with a smile and a soft laugh.
“You know you never told me why this is your favorite spot out of the whole garden.” Alex said looking around.
“Because this is where we first became best friends.” Lily answered shyly.
“What do you mean?” Alex looked at her with confusion.
“When we where five. I was crying on this very bench because James and Sirius where being mean to me. Kate and Ginger just wanted to play with their dolls. Art and Drew where doing Merlin knows what. And Susie was still a baby.” Lily said thinking back to that very day. “You found me here crying my eyes out because I felt so alone. Jane had gone somewhere with Aunt Hermione and Uncle Ron so I did have anyone I knew to play with, well until you showed up that is.”
“Yeah but we played together before that didn’t we?” Alex asked.
“Yeah but that was with my siblings and it was usually a group game. Not just the two or three of us.” Lily answered. “It was after that your parents let you keep coming back to the castle to play with me.”
“Just goes to show you how much I pay attention, doesn’t it?” Alex asked with amusement. As Lily giggled at him taking his hand in hers as they sat there talking.
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Well what do ya think? I think Lily took the news better than i thought she would. But that's what i wanted her to do so i knew it would happen that way. Anyway, i know it's short but that's all i have for right know. Hopfully i can get Alex to ask Harry for Lily's hand in marrage and have Max completly out of the picture by the end of the chapter but i highly dought that will happen i do need him for latter chapters. And yes i think i can have the family hex him in the future. Thank D.A.Forever for that sugguestion. I did not think about that. I'm sure Fred and George would just love to play a prank on him   Keep reading and reply please. I love ya all
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02-01-2007, 04:13 PM
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| Billywig
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| LOL. Hexing him sounds good... I'm glad Lily didn't get upset with Alex over his kept secret. But I suppose I'd probably react that way too, having him actually want to tell me he'd lied so we wouldn't have any secrets between us...it shows that he actually values and respects their relationship. That scene was very well written. *applaudes* Excellent work, my dear! Hope to see more soon! Shan XoXo
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third |
Thank you so much Shan. I was kind of worried about that scene for some reason. Thank you! Thank You! Thank you! Now i hope i'll have the next bit up before the end of the day. But you all know how things are with writer's block. I hate it. I sat for five hours or so trying to write the last two posts for cahpter five. But i'm hopeing that the next post will be even better and a bit longer. Wish me luck and Thnak you for you wonderful words Shan. Love ya.
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| Billywig
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| Good luck! I'm sure the next posts will be wonderful, no matter how long it takes to get over the Writer's Block!
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | Chapter Five continued
Alright here's the next little bit for chapter five. Hope it good or even excellent. But one can always hope can't they? Well enjoy!!!!
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“So when do you think Alex is going to ask?” Tonks asked Ginny. As they sat in the living room at ‘Potter Castle’ with Hermione.
“Don’t know. According to the Royal Family law, Alex needs to ask Harry for her hand in marriage before he can ask Lily.” Ginny said quoting the Family law.
“Why does the Royal Family have so many laws? They can’t live on their own until their married, they have to have the father’s permission before asking the girl! What else does other Laws does the family have?” Hermione asked.
“Well in Harry’s case, since he was the last living member before he married me, he was given the time frame of a year to court and marry. Since James isn’t our only Heir he didn’t have to marry between the age of seventeen and eighteen. But James will have to marry before he takes the throne after Harry. And he has to marry a red head.” Ginny said sipping her tea.
“Has James been seeing some one? I saw him the other day with a very beautiful red head that wasn’t one of his sisters.” Tonks said with a smile.
“If he has, he hasn’t brought her here to meet us.” Ginny said. “Lily went out with Max for a whole year before she introduced him to us. I think they want to make sure their boyfriend or girlfriends are able to handle meeting so many people before they bring them around.”
“Harry’s going to have a hard time when Susie brings her first boyfriend home.” Hermione said.
“Yeah Susie is the apply of Harry’s eye, just as Lily is.” Ginny said, smiling at how much the two sister’s looked so much like their grandmother Lily. While Kate and Ginger took after her. “I’m positive Harry will give Alex his blessing no matter what.”
“Why do you day that?” Hermione asked.
“Think about it ‘Mione. Alex is Harry’s Godson, for one thing. Alex is also the only other person that knows how to get Lily to calm down from one of her angry moments or when she’s upset.” Ginny said.
“And Harry also knows that Alex would do anything to make sure Lily is happy.” Tonks added. “And didn’t Lily say that Harry was pushing her to see Alex for who he really was?”
“Yeah she did, when they had their big fight in the hall.” Ginny said thinking back four month’s ago. “Wouldn’t it be great for Alex to ask her to marry him on her birthday?”
“Ginny I think we’re getting ahead of ourselves. He hasn’t even asked Harry yet has he?” Hermione said thinking logically for the three of them.
“If he did Harry hasn’t told me. And you both know I can tell when Harry keeps something away from me.” Ginny asked.
“Alex talked to Remus about it the other day. Remus said Alex didn’t to tell her a secret before he took the next step.” Tonks said.
“Hopefully he’ll ask soon. I want to have the best wedding for Lily.” Ginny said.
“I’m sure he will. Give it time and it will happen.” Hermione said.
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There was a knock on the door of Harry’s office. “Come in!” He said reading over some paper work for the Ministry. The door opened to revile Alex. “Ah Alex what can I do for you my dear boy?” Harry asked looking up from the paper work. He could tell Alex was a little nervous about something but couldn’t think of what he could be nervous about. Alex walked into the office and stood before Harry in front of his desk, and took a deep breath.
“Sir may I have an audience with you?” Alex asked, squaring his shoulders and looking Harry straight in his emerald green eyes. The very eyes that could burn a hole in anyone’s soul. Harry smiled at him and nodded his head. Now he knew the reason why Alex was here.
“Yes you may.” Harry answered with a smile. “What can I do for you young sir?”
“I here to ask you for your eldest draught’s hand in marriage sir?” Alex asked not breaking the eye connection with Harry. Alex had learn long ago that the best way for Harry to trust you was to look him dead in the eye and not break the connection at any coast. That and Remus had told him that when asking the father of the woman you love for her hand, that it was a good sign for the young mad to be brave enough to face her father is asking of his blessing.
“Do you love her?” Harry asked knowing that Alex did in fact love Lily.
“Yes sir.” Alex answered with out hesitation. He was still looking Harry in the eye.
“Will you support her and take care of her?” Harry asked, again knowing both would be true.
“Yes sir.” Alex answered again with out hesitation. Harry watched him. Thinking of the choice laid before him. He could say no and have Lily’s heart ripped in two, or she and Alex would elope and have her would be not be aloud to hold the title of ‘Crowned Princess of Wizards’ anymore. Or his other choice of giving his blessing and having Lily happier than anyone he ever knew. Alex truly loved Lily, Harry knew that. And no matter what he said their souls where already matted and could be broken. Harry had made sure that would happen through Lily’s crystal heart necklace. He had hated Max the very first time he met him and didn’t wont Lily to end up in a marriage ith him. Alex on the other hand was more perfect for Lily in everyone’s eyes.
“Well Alex. I see no other choice for me to give. I give you the blessing of the Royal Family to marry my eldest daughter.” Harry said standing up and holding out his hand. He saw relief flood Alex’s face.
“Thank you sir. Thank you very much.” Alex said with a wide smile.
“And Alex. . . .” Harry said. “Never call me sir again. It’s either Dad or Harry for now on.”
“Yes si. . . .Harry” Alex said. Than he turned away and walked out of the office with the biggest smile Harry ever saw on his Godson’s face. Harry sat back down in his seat behind his desk and leaned back in the chair. Lily was going to be the first of his eight kids that would marry. He had always thought that it would be either James or Sirius that would marry first. ‘Good things come to those who don’t ask for it.’ Harry thought to himself.
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So what did you guys think? Was it good? Now i just need to write a little bit more of what Max is plaining to do and Alex proposeing to Lily. And what's this about James see someone? I wounder if Sirius is seeing someone as well? Humm? Who's know's i'll tell you when it all comes up again. Tell me what you think and i love you all you wonderful readers. Till next time.
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02-02-2007, 09:46 AM
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | Chapter Five continued
Hey people. I'm finally over my Writer's block and have had a break though. YAYAYAYAYA!!!!!!! so i promised a post, this is not the last of chapter five but it is the second to last post of chapter five. I hope you like it. Enjoy!!!!
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He stormed into the dark room with anger racking through his body. He wanted to scream, case everyone to be in pain. “Maxwell calm down!” came the silky smooth voice of his father from his chair in front of the fire place.
“Calm down! CALM DOWN! Father that slim ball just asked for Lillian’s hand in marriage and the King has granted him his blessing of the whole Royal Family!” Max yelled. “YOU promised me that she would be mine!”
“And that is a promise I will be fulfilling. I have never gone back on my word and I’m not about to start now.” Draco said standing up and walking over to the mirror that hung over the fire place. “Now have you got your men together?”
“Yes sir.” Max answered in a calmer voice as he watched his father in the mirror.
“Ah your such a handsome man, my dear Max. I can see why your mother loved you so.” Draco said.
“I didn’t love me, she loved my step-father more.” Max said with disgust in his voice.
“Yes. And for that she paid the price. Now we know that young Mr. Lupin has asked for Princess Lillian’s hand in marriage. But he will never see the day of his wedding.” Draco said turning to face his only son.
“So we’re going to let him ask her. Then kill him before the wedding?” Max asked.
“Precisely. You’re my dear boy. Will most likely make a wonderful King some day.” Draco said. “And the only way to the throne of the Wizarding world is through Princess Lillian. Now go and gather more men. I’m sure this is going to be worthy to watch as we bring down the mighty King himself as will as everyone else.”
“Of course father.” Max said with a smile.
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“LILY! LILLIAN!” called a woman’s voice through out the whole of ‘Potter Castle’. “Oh come on Lily where are you? LILLIAN MOLLY POTTER!”
“What?” Came Lily’s voice from the top of the stairs in the Entrance Hall. Ginny looked up at hearing her eldest daughter’s voice.
“Oh there you are. Come we must get you ready.” Ginny said running up the stairs.
“Ready for what mom?” Lily asked in confusion, as Ginny pulled her to her bedroom suit.
“It’s a surprise dear. Now come on. Let’s get one of the dresses your Aunt’s made you.” Ginny said going over to Lily’s closet and started looking through every one of Lily’s dresses.
“Who’s the surprise from?” Lily asked as Ginny started handing her dresses to try on. Lily had a feeling her mother was in one the surprise and it was big.
“I’m only going to tell you who. Not what it’s about. Alright?” Ginny said turning to face Lily. Lily wore a look of question. “Alex is wanting to surprise you with something. I don’t exactly know what that is but it’s good.”
“So Alex wants me to dress up for this surprise?” Lily asked handing Ginny the dresses in her arms.
“Yes. Now what dress should you wear for tonight.” Ginny asked looking through the dresses she picked out, and one by one Lily was forced to try them all on before they could pick out the one that would work.
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“Alex don’t be so nervous.” Remus said, standing in the door way of Alex’s room and the Lupin’s house.
“What if she doesn’t want to get married yet and turns me down?” Alex asked as he paced the room.
“She loves you to much to turn you down Alex. Come on, we’ve been through this a thousand times already. You can do this. Ginny and everyone else has everything set up at the castle. Nothing is going to go wrong. I promise you that.” Remus said walking over to Alex and placing both hands on his shoulders to make him stop pacing and wearing a hole in the floor. “Now take a deep breath and get over there.”
“Thanks dad.” Alex said, taking a deep breath. Then walking out of his bedroom and down to the living room to use the fireplace to Floo over to ‘Potter Castle’.
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Alex had everything planed out. He stood in the middle of the castle garden. In the spot that Lily loved being the most. The very first spot that they had become best friends in. The water fountain was flowing with water. It had light’s on it so you could make out the detail of the statue in the middle of it, which was two dolphins spitting water out of their mouths. There was a bouquet of roses and lilies sitting on the stone bench in front of the fountain. Alex had put on his best dress robes and was now waiting for Lily to walk into the clearing. ‘Come on Alex, calm down man. She’s not going to say no. She loves you more than anything, and you love her just as much.’ Alex said to himself and he waited. ‘There’s nothing to worry about. You have the ring you have roses and lilies, her favorite flowers.’ Then he started to pace in worry.
Lily stood at the corner watching him pace in front of the stone bench and fountain. She wondered why he was pacing. He looked worried. But she knew this was not him breaking up with her since he had asked her mother to get her dressed up. He was also wearing his best dress robes. She took a deep breath before she walked around the corner and into the clearing. “Alex?”
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It's a cliffy I know. But come on you have to have some supence in what will happen next. I hope you like this bit because the next is the end of chapter five. Will Lily say yes? What is Draco and Max really up to? Many question's have formed and only a few will be answered but only one will be answered with the next post. Tell me what you thought. I really do hope you like this post. Love ya all oh so very much!!!!
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02-02-2007, 12:10 PM
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| Ooh! I loved it,Susan! *squee* Lily had better say yes... Draco and Max truly are evil...I don't want them to hurt Alex, but I'm curious to know what they've got planned. Aww...Alex is so sweet! Shan XoXo
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Like Fathe, like Son, is it not?
Wow, I leave for like two or three days and almost all of chappie 5 is over.
It's really good. pams!
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | Chapter Five Continued
Alright people. It's the moment we have all been waitting for!!  The Last bit of chapter five is finally here! YAYAYAYAYAYAYA!  So with out farther adue i give you one of your answered questions!!
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When he heard his name he stopped pacing a looked up to see Lily walking into the clearing. She looked good. She wore a simple black Muggle cocktail dress that feel just above the knee. It had a V neck. She looked more than just good in Alex’s eye. She looked like a Goddess with her flaming red hair falling down around her shoulders and back. “Hey Lily.” he finally said finding his voice. Then he picked up the bouquet of roses and lilies, as she walked closer. “Um. . . .these are for you.” he said. Lily could tell he was nervous about this whole thing. She took the flowers and smiled. He remembered her favorites.
“Thank you Alex.” She said in a sweet voice. Which seemed to put a big smile on Alex’s face. She leaned in and gave him a kiss on the lips trying not to ruin the flowers. “Are you going to tell me why we’re all dressed up?” She asked in a whisper after the kiss. Alex took a deep breath and looked her in the eye. Yes this was a perfect moment to ask her.
“Yes love I am. First I want you to set down.” Alex said squaring his shoulders and pushing all worry out of his mind. Lily sat down on the bench before them and Alex joined her. “Lily, I. . . .I. . . .I don’t want to lose you. I don’t want to go another day with out you by my side. I don’t want to think of what would happen if you weren’t in my life.” He started looking her in her beautiful emerald green cat like eyes and feel in love with her all over again. “We’ve been best friends for seventeen years or so. In that time we found that our better half was each other. And now I can’t think of a better person than you to spend the rest of my days with.” Alex paused and studied her eyes. He could see the love in them, and he could also see understanding starting to seep in as well. “Lily, I love you more than anything I have ever known. You’re my world, my life, you’re my everything. We’re soul mates, True lovers to each other.” He paused one last time and thought to himself ‘This is it Alex. You can do this. There’s no turning back now.’ he took another deep breath before going down on one knee in front of her. Lily brought a hand to her mouth as she realized what Alex was going to do. She had already had tears forming in her eyes, she was thinking of something like this was going to happen. But not in a million years did she think it would be now. She watched as Alex brought out a black velvet box from his pocket and hold it in front of her. “Lillian Molly Potter, the woman of my life, the woman who has stolen my heart and soul for no other may have, would you do me the honor of becoming my wife and making me the worlds happiest man that ever lived?” as he said the last few words Lily let out a cry as Alex opened the box to revile the most beautiful engagement ring Lily had ever seen. It was a simple gold band with a diamond that had two emerald’s on either side of it.
“Yes. Oh yes Alex.” Lily said after finding her voice. She held out her left hand so he could put the ring on her ring finger. Then he pulled her up as he stood up and pulled her into him and deeply kissed her. Yes life as they knew it was ten times better. After the kiss they both laughed. “Oh Alex. I love you so much.”
“And I you.” Alex answered, as they looked deeply into each other’s eyes. Baby blue meeting Emerald green. Life couldn’t get any better than this. “Come I’m sure the family is ding to know what your answer is.” and they both walked back to the castle. Lily had her flowers in one hand while the other was holding Alex’s hand. She was more than happy, she was more than pleased, there was no word for the way she was feeling at this specific time and space.
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Isn't it just so awesome. Their Fianlly getting married!!!! YAYAYAYAYA!!!!!! I so giddy i can't stand it. Tell me what you thought. I'm sure you all knew Lily was going to say yes. Well there was no dought about that. Who could possible replace ALex? I'll have Chapter six up as soon as i have it typed up. Love ya all oh so very much. Till next time.
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Love the posts.
Is allso excited about Lilly getting married
Can't wait for more.
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| Ooh, yay! *squee* Can't wait to see the family's reaction! Shan XoXo
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | CHapter Six
Hey guy's. Sorry about not posting for a day. I had to leave for Kanass on firday night, to go see my brother, who is being shipped out on monday. It's a five and a half hour drive there and a five and a half hour drive back. dude i'm tired and my butt hurts from sitting. Any way, during those long hours i was busy writting the being of chapter six. so here is the frist tid bit of the chapter. I hope you like!!!!
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A Dark, Deep Secret
Starts Comes To the Light
“I’ve got some of the best gossip!” said a random woman at the Leaky Cauldron.
“Oh and what’s that?” Asked another woman.
“Princess Lillian is getting married.” the first woman answered “I heard that it was that nice young Mr. Alexander Lupin.”
“She’s marring her best friend?” the second woman asked looking at the first woman with disbelief written on her face. “I thought she was going to marry that other young man. . . .oh what’s was his name again?”
“Maxwell Smith, a Wizard from the United States. I believe.” the first woman said. This was what the Witches and Wizards where talking about when Jane Weasley walked through Diagon Alley on the Monday after Lily and Alex got engaged that past Saturday. Jane smiled to herself as she walked the crowed street to get to ‘Weasley’s Wizarding Wheezes’ to use their Floo.
“Ah, Jane!” Fred said as she walked into the less crowed joke shop.
“Oh hi Uncle Fred.” Jane said walking over to him.
“What are you doing in Diagon Alley today?” her other twin Uncle asked walking over to where she and Fred stood.
“I just had to run over to Gringotts and get something for Lily. She would have come as well but you know how it is out there.” Jane said motioning to the street outside. “Any way. I was wondering if I could use your Floo to get home.”
“Yeah use the one in the office.” George answered nodding his head understanding why Lily didn’t want to show up in Diagon Alley after getting engaged. “And tell Lily we said hi will ya.”
“We should be over after we close up for the night.” Fred added as he lead Jane to the back office.
“Thank you Uncle Fred, Uncle George. I’ll say hi to the rest of the family for you.” Jane said as she threw Floo powder into the fire place “Potter Castle”
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“Oh thank you Jane you’re a life savor.” Lily said as she meet Jane in the entrance hall at ‘Potter Castle’.
“I hope this is what you wanted from Gringotts.” Jane said holding up a medium sized box in her hands.
“Yes it is thank you, thank you thank you!” Lily said hugging her favorite cousin.
“Your welcome. Oh and you wouldn’t believe the gossip going around the Alley today.” Jane said as they walked into the living room. “They all know your marring Alex but also think you should be marring Maxwell.”
“Yeah I know.” Lily said “But the only person that is going to publish that announcement is Aunt Luna. Not even Aunt Penny is going to publish it, but she understands why.”
“So I get to the interview right?” Jane asked.
“That’s up to Aunt Luna and you know it.” Lily said with a soft laugh at how Jane wanted to do the announcement for the Quibbler. Jane laughed along with her.
“So are you going to tell me what’s in that box you asked me to get.” Jane asked changing the subject to why she had to go to Gringotts to get it.
“I guess you’ll find out anyway. You know that there is a saying in the Muggle world for when a bride is getting married that she needs something old, something new, something barrowed, something blue.” Lily said.
“Yeah mom’s told me about that. Isn’t it a poem though?” Jane asked.
“Yes it is. Anyway, this is my great-great Aunt Mila’s Goblin gold terra. All the Weasley women have worn it at their weddings and it has brought them good luck.” Lily answered
“So this is something old or something barrowed?” Jane asked.
“This would qualify as both but just in case it’s something old. I’m going to barrow mom’s golden bracelet for the wedding.” Lily answered. “What to see it?”
“Yes.” Jane said, as Lily set the box down on he coffee table in front of them. Lily opened it and sitting on a purple pillow in the middle of the box sat a golden terra. It had diamonds and emeralds in bedded into it. “Oh Lily, it’s beautiful.”
“What’s beautiful?” asked a voice from behind them Lily closed the box as she and Jane stood up and turned to the voice.
“Nothing!” they said at the same time. As they saw that it was Harry asking the question.
“Come now.” Harry said with a smile know that the two of them where up to something. “You got your second great Aunt’s terra didn’t you?”
“How’d you know?” Lily asked.
“Because your mother told me Jane was going to get it for you.” Harry said with a sly smile.
“Well. . . .How’d did mom know?” Lily asked.
“You can’t hide anything from your mother Lily. You should already know this.” Harry said. “Anyway, the head Goblin flooed and asked if it was alright for Jane to take the terra out of the safe.”
“So that’s why it took so long.” Jane said. She had waited for almost an hour for the Goblin that was helping her to get to the vault and get the terra out of it.
“They knew you where family but it’s procedure for them to floo if you don’t have a note signed by either me or Ginny.” Harry said.
“I’ll keep that in mind for later. Thanks dad.” Lily said.
“Your welcome. And don’t let Alex see that terra before the wedding other wise it will bring bad luck.” Harry added as he left the two girls standing in the living room. Then they both broke into laughter.
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Tell me what you all think. I can say that i'm pleased with this little bit. I'll posted more either tomorrow night or the day after. Depending on how busy i am. Love ya all oh so very much!!!!!!
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02-04-2007, 02:14 PM
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| Billywig
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| Wow, a tiara! This wedding is going to be beautiful, I can tell!
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loved that post!! post more soon
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| Mackled Malaclaw
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Can't wait till the wedding.
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | Chapter Six Continued
Hey guys, sorry that it's taken longer than i thought to get this post up. Here's a little bit more on the front of 'Wedding Bell's A Ringing!' Enjoy!!!!
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Engaged To Her Best Friend?! Early this week it was announced that Lillian Molly Potter, Crowned Princess of the Wizarding Race is engaged to her best friend of seventeen years, Alexander Remus Lupin, who is a half Werewolf. Reader’s want to know what our dear Princess was thinking when she excepted his offer of marriage. Several months ago this loyal paper reported that there was a love triangle between our Princess, Mr. Lupin, and Lillian’s then boyfriend, Mr. Maxwell Smith. The rumor then was false as the Lillian and her family said, at that time, 'She did not have any romantic feelings for her best friend.' Now what are we to believe? Was the Royal family ling when they made those statements and hiding the truth of what we truly believe possible or where they really telling the truth? And what about Mr. Smith? Where did he go? What was his reaction to this whole thing? No one knows, and we are on the case as we speak searching for any clues as to what really was happening behind the scenes of ‘Potter Castle’.
“Has Lily seen this yet?” Harry asked at the breakfast table two weeks after Lily and Alex got engaged.
“No an pray that she doesn’t dear.” Ginny said taking a sip of her morning tea. “She’s to busy and worried about the wedding to know what the paper is saying about her and Alex.”
“Speaking of Lily where is she?” James asked noticing she wasn’t at the table.
“She’s in her suit trying to decide if she wants blue ribbon, red ribbon, or both for the flower arrangements.” Sirius said off hand.
“Mom is ther anything. . . .” Art started to say.
“. . . .you can do. . .” Drew followed in his brother’s thinking
“. . . .to get her mine. . . .” Art said.
“. . . .set straight?” Drew finished as he and Art looked at Ginny.
“Now boys that is a horrible thing to say about your sister.” Ginny said
“Even if it’s true.” Harry mumbled loud enough for the whole table of seven of his children and his wife to hear. All seven of his kids laughed while Ginny gave him a dirty look.
“Harry!” Ginny said looking at him “If I remember right, you where the one going crazy at our wedding.”
“Well we did have to do it the right way and if we didn’t we wouldn’t be sitting here. Now would we?” Harry asked looking up from the paper in his hand. “And I to remember how you where at the beginning of our engagement.”
“That has nothing to do with this.” Ginny protested
“Sure it does. It means that Lily is taking more after you than me.” Harry said with a sly smile “And to that I’m thankful of. You both are very beautiful and I wouldn’t have it any other way.”
“Now your just trying to get back on my good side.” Ginny said watching Harry’s emerald green eyes as the sparkled in the morning light that came through the widows. “I’ll go check on Lily. She really should eat something.”
“You do that dear.” Harry said smiling to himself.
“Dad What was that about?” James asked looking between his parents.
“That James is one of the many things you will learn when you get married.” Harry said. “Which reminds me. When are you going to bring that girl your seeing around?”
“I don’t know yet. I might bring her to Lily’s wedding.” James said with a smile.
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Wow! James has a girlfriend!!!! And he might bring her to the wedding!! Well i have to say that is awesome. For i sometimes don't know what will happen until i write it. Yes i do plan a few things out, like most authers would, but it's the power of creation of the immagination that really rules the mind. So what did you guys think? I hope you liked it. I'll post some more as soon as i have it typed up. But right now i'm really busy with work and other things. Hope to post again soon. Love ya all!!!!
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| Ooh...James has a girlfriend! Can't wait... Hope you post more soon...I've got to get back to work, so I can't comment more right now. But it was an excellent post! Shan XoXo
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| Mackled Malaclaw
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Wow, you post a lot. I love it!!! Haa. James has a girlfriend. How cute! pams!
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| Jarvey
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Susan Potter Third | Chapter six Continued
Hey Guys! I'm so sorry that i haven't posted in like a week but i've been really busy with work and family things. But i do have more of chapter six for you to read. So here it is. Hope you enjoy it. For it's just starting to get tense.
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“Alex who do you want as your Best Man and Groomsmen for the wedding?” Lily asked sitting down next to him on the living room couch at ‘Potter Castle’.
“I don’t know. Who’d you pick for your Maid of Honor and Bridesmaids?” Alex asked looking up from the Quidditch magazine he was reading.
“Well Jane’s my Maid of Honor naturally. Then I have my sisters and Crystal as my Bridesmaids.” Lily answered looking up from the list in her hand of this needed for the wedding.
“Since your including our sisters, why don’t I have our brothers as my Groomsmen.” Alex said.
“So which one is going to be you Best Man?” Lily asked, knowing that Alex wasn’t really close to James, Sirius, Art, Drew, and his little brother Derek. She also knew that he didn’t really have any male best friends. Which she always felt sorry about, when she had Jane.
“Good point. . . .Umm. . . .Let’s make it James as my Best Man.” Alex answered. Lily knew he was that close to James, but was closer to him than the other four men/boys. If this was something else he needed a Best Man for Lily knew he would have chosen his father, since Remus was the one Alex always went to for manly advice.
“Alright then. We’ll ask them tonight at dinner. Then me and the girls can finish the rest of the planning with our mothers.” Lily said putting a ‘BM’, for Best Man, next to James’s name on her list.
“So I don’t have to do anything else?” Alex asked hopefully.
“Don’t be silly. You have some things that need to be done as well. Like getting the rings and your Dress Robes. Which reminds me. Aunt Angelina and Aunt Alicia are designing the Wedding Party Dress Robes.” Lily answered giving him a kiss on the cheek.
“Of course. Who else in the world would you trust with you clothes besides them?” Alex asked sarcastically.
“Oh very funny.” Lily said. “I’ll see you later. I’ve got to go make sure mom ordered the flowers.” She gave him another kiss and left the living room. Leaving Alex sitting on the couch with his Quidditch magazine, looking amused.
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“My son is everything ready?” Draco asked sitting in his throne like chair in the dark room, it’s only light was from the fire place. Max was kneeling in front of his father with his head bent low.
“Yes father, everything is ready for you orders.” Max answered with a evil grin on his handsome face.
“Perfect. We’ll strike on Princess Lillian’s eighteenth birthday Ball.” Draco answered. “Take only twenty of your men.”
“Yes father.” Max said “They’ll never know what hit them.”
“Quite right!” Draco said as he let out a horrible curl laugh.
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Uh OH!!!! What's Max and Draco planing now? Tell me what ya think and i'll try a post the bit as soon as i can!!! I love ya all!!!!
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| No! Darn Malfoys... Hope you post again soon! This is wonderful!
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| Mackled Malaclaw
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Why are they like that?
Their goal in life is to get rid of anything good, isn't it? lol pams
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